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JeshieRAWR · 06-07-2009, 11:31 PM

*UPDATE* CHAPTER 13 IS GOING TO BE UP ON WEDNESDAY JUNE 10, 2009 OR FRIDAY JUNE 12, 2009! *UPDATE*

~Jess

P.S. Please give me ideas for Chapter 13! I need more ideas about Harry/Ginny/and Cho, also how to go on with Ron and Hermione and Draco.

Queen.Infinity · 06-10-2009, 04:40 PM

WowwwwwwwThis is by far my fave story. I'm not kidding.....i really like the cliff hangers in the story and the plot is just great.
Keep on writing.

~Sienna

:read!:

Lollipop! · 06-10-2009, 07:10 PM

Please Post soon!

JeshieRAWR · 06-10-2009, 09:50 PM

I felt like I needed to give my readers a sneak preview of Chapter 13. BTW I might not post it on Friday since this is all I have because of exams. But I'm thinking it will be posted soon after Friday since Friday is my last day of school! Also for my new readers; PotterGirl714 and Queen.Infinity I would like to know if you want me to message you about every post of this story that comes up. If not that's fine, I just won't message you. I will also like to know what is your favorite ships. Ex. Harry/Ginny, Hermione/Draco, Hermione/Ron, Draco/Pansy, Blaise/Pansy, Neville/Luna, Hermione/Neville etc. Hope everyone enjoys!

~Jess

Chapter 13 Preview

I walked over to Ron nervously and felt a sudden rush of a blush coming on my cheeks. He smiled at me and took my hand. "Erm...Hello Hermione." Ron said. "Hello Ronald." I said. He smiled and blushed scarlet. "Erm... I was wondering if you erm.... wanted to be....ummm my girl..erm...friend?" He asked looking down. They turned a little in a circle until the door was right behind Ron about 10 feet away. Hermione looked into his eyes and before she could say something she gasped. Draco was standing right behind Ron looking furious. Ron finally saw and heard Hermione gasp and turned around.

"So Granger, I'm guessing your going to pick him, eh?" Draco asked glaring at me. "Erm... I'm not sure." I said. "Well you need to make up your decision Granger because I can't wait so long for you." Draco said smirking at her. Oh how I hated that smirk of his. Then there was a crash outside of the door.
Death Eaters she thought. "Attack" She heard. Ron and Draco grabbed her and they huddled together in a broom closet that the Astronomy Tower had. Ron on her right and Draco on her left closet to the door. They had heard another crash, right outside of the broom closet. They furthered into the broom closet and looked for an exit. The door bursted open to find... Lucius Malfoy.

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Please tell me what you think of it! Also I need some ideas for the shipping of Harry/Ginny/and Cho. Also give me some ideas from how to go on from that. Thanks! ~Jess

scarlet5890 · 06-11-2009, 12:19 AM

new reader. I love your story!! i really like Dramione. i never would have wanted them together in the books, but for some reason i have always loved dramione fan fics!! anyway, whether she ends up with Ron or Draco its a great story!!

Maxilocks · 06-11-2009, 02:23 AM

Whoa, LOTS of action, there.

The Draco vs Ronald saga rages on.

Lollipop! · 06-11-2009, 06:18 AM

I can't believe whats going on here!

AMAZING!

I will send you some ideas for Harry/Ginny/Cho.

I am loving this chapter so far!

harita · 06-11-2009, 04:55 PM

wow Lucius Malfoy...couldnt have got worse for draco...what is Malfoy Sr planning to do? abduct Mione or torcher Malfoy Jr. for sort of falling for the so called mudblood they so hate...waiting for more...MIOne say yes to ROn plz.....plz....

Lollipop! · 06-11-2009, 05:50 PM

Draco called her GRANGER!

POTTER128 · 06-11-2009, 07:31 PM

ok that was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!

ill give you my ideas as soon as possible

PotterGirl714 · 06-12-2009, 02:22 AM

I would love updates to tell me when you update haha. I am a huge harry/ginny shipper and ron/hermione.

driveunit1 · 06-12-2009, 07:19 AM

this getting intresting!!!!
why is malfoy there?? maybe he knows abt draco and hermione or he has asked draco to join the dark side!!!
i am shipper of Hr/R .with all my heart i hope hermione says yes to RON!!!
waiting for ur next post!!!!!
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!

Lollipop! · 06-13-2009, 01:41 PM

Please POST soon!
I Can't wait!

Lollipop! · 06-14-2009, 07:43 AM

Please Post soon!:hermy2:
I'm dying!

JackW092 · 06-14-2009, 08:24 PM

Ooooooohh! It's getting exciting!!! I am a huge Harry/Ginny shipper so I want to know what happens to them aswell!!! Post next chapter soon please!!!

JeshieRAWR · 06-14-2009, 11:14 PM

Hey everyone! Thank you all for the wonderful comments! Thanks for reading my story and reviewing on it! I love you all! ~Jess

P.S. I hope you enjoy Chapter 13!!! Yes I finally got it finished! Also thanks for the wonderful ideas from my reviewers! They helped a lot! Also thanks to the new readers/reviewers! I love to have new reviewers/readers! So please review after you read! Oh and if you have any ideas for Chapter 14 please PM me! It helps me out so much! Thanks!

JeshieRAWR · 06-14-2009, 11:24 PM

Chapter 13

I walked over to Ron nervously and felt a sudden rush of a blush coming on my cheeks. He smiled at me and took my hand. "Erm...Hello Hermione." Ron said. "Hello Ronald." I said. He smiled and blushed scarlet. "Erm... I was wondering if you erm.... wanted to be....ummm my girl..erm...friend?He asked looking down.

They turned a little in a circle until the door was right behind Ron about 10 feet away. Hermione looked into his eyes and before she could say something she gasped. Draco was standing right behind Ron looking furious. Ron finally saw and heard Hermione gasp and turned around.

"So Granger, I'm guessing your going to pick him, eh?" Draco asked glaring at me. "Erm... I'm not sure." I said. "Well you need to make up your decision Granger because I can't wait so long for you." Draco said smirking at her. Oh how I hated that smirk of his. Then there was a crash outside of the door.

Death Eaters she thought. "Attack" She heard. Ron and Draco grabbed her and they huddled together in a broom closet that the Astronomy Tower had. Ron on her right and Draco on her left closet to the door. They had heard another crash, right outside of the broom closet. They furthered into the brrom closet and looked for an exit. The door bursted open to find... Lucius Malfoy.

Lucius's eyes were beaming at Draco in a horrible way. Ron and Draco tightened their grip on Hermione as they knew what was coming. Lucius grabbed Draco's arm and dragged them out of the broom closet. Lucius muttered a spell and they were all tied up with invisible ropes. "Looky here, I found the poor blood traitor, the filthy mudblood, and my ex son." Lucius said looking at each one of them. "Let us go father!" Draco said. "Ahh, Hello Draco, I'm sorry but I can not do that for I have to kill the mudblood." Lucius said.

Hermione was frightened and squeezed Draco's hand. Draco winced and said, "Why?" He said growling angrily. "I have information from a reliable source saying that you have been with the mudblood for a while." Lucius said. "Pansy told you didn't she?" Draco said still having the growl coming out of his mouth. His mouth was twitching.

"Correct. Now Draco for the fun part. I will get one of the newest deatheaters to come out and torcher the mudblood in front of you lot." Lucius said smiling evily. Draco's and Ron's eyes widened while Hermione started to wimper and cry. Out of the shadows came a figure with a mask and black cloak on. "Mr. Krum no need to have the cloak on, Miss Granger should see who she is getting torchered by." Lucius said.

Hermione lifted her head to face Viktor Krum. Viktor then said, "Kneel now mudblood!" He said angrily. She started to cry with tears like hail tumbling down her cheek. She took long glances at Ron and Draco before she knew what was coming.....

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In the Gryffindor Common Room......

Ginny's POV

I wonder where Hermione/Ron/and Draco are. Probably just arguing about something. Oh well. I stared at the fireplace for a while until I decided to read my book upstairs. I was reading when I heard something downstairs. I started slowly and quietly down the stairs. There was Cho and Harry arguing about something.

Harry's POV

I couldn't believe Cho had the nerve to ask me out! How dare she! Everyone knows that me and Ginny are together!

Ginny's POV

Oh no! I think that Cho just asked Harry to go to the ball with her! She can't! I know it's not good to cry but I can't help it! I don't want Harry to go with Cho and Harry still hasn't even asked me yet! It's not fair!

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Ginny walked up to Harry grabbed the collar of his shirt and kissed him full on the mouth. She parted with him quickly and said, " Harry, are you ever going
to ask your girlfriend to the ball? Or am I just going to have to ask myself?" Cho glared daggers at Ginny and said, "No Harry pick me! You know you want
to!" Harry was in a confused state. He didn't know what to do. All what he could think of was going with his girlfriend which would be the proper choice or go with his ex which wouldn't but he still likes her. Harry ruffled his hair and walked out of the common room leaving the two enemies there.

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In the Astronomy Tower...........

"Crucio!" Viktor said raising his wand at Hermione. Hermione screamed in pain of the cruiciatis curse. Ron and Draco were yelling and fumbling trying to get
out of the ropes to help their loved one. Viktor and Lucius laughed at all of them. "Just wait until the Dark Lord comes" Lucius said smily evily again.
"You will never get away with this!" Ron said.

"Oh is that so? hahahahahaha!" Viktor said. "I thought you loved her! How could you do that to her Viktor?" Ron said. "Oh the mudblood your referring to? Oh well it's quite obvious I went out with her to get some information out of her from you two, it didn't seem to help because my emotions got the best of me so I ended up snogging her most of them time." Viktor said.

Draco and Ron winced thinking about Viktor and Hermione together. They both looked down at Hermione who seemed to be unconcious. Lucius muttered a spell which apparated Draco, Hermione, and Ron into the Malfoy Manor basement. "How did you apparate out of Hogwarts? There are no ways of doing it!" Ron yelled. "You foolish boy! Do you not know who I am? I am the Dark Lord's assistant as you could say." Lucius yelled.

Draco winced but kept staring at Hermione next to him unconcious. "Now be quiet! I will check on you tomorrow evening for the Dark Lord's presence." Lucius said while Viktor and him went up the stairs. They all went to sleep thinking of the terrible things to happen.

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The Next Day (Morning)............

Harry's POV

I can't help thinking of those bloody girls! Ughhh! They are messing with my brain! I already have Voldemort messing with it I don't need these foolish girls! Even though I like them both. This is so confusing! Oh no! Here comes Cho! "Hello Harry!" Cho said sitting by me rubbing my arm. "Hello Cho, is Ginny up yet?" I asked.

She shook her head and said, " I need to tell you something can you lean closer? I don't want anybody to hear." She said looking back behind her smiling and leaned in. She then started snogging me! I pushed her away and I heard a gasp and a sob. "So you picked her? I see, well we are over Harry!" Ginny said picking up a piece of bread and ran out the door.

I followed Ginny into the empty classrooom and kneeled by her. "Ginny I do not choose her! I choose you! I want you to be mine! Please be! I also want you to come to the ball with me not her! Please do come! If not with me, please come though.

I can't live without your presence, I....erm.......I ....love you." I said staring into her eyes. She smiled triumphately and kissed me full on the mouth, parted with me and said, "Harry I would love to go with you to the ball! I also love you too!" My heart seemed to stop for a minute but I smiled and took her hand and we walked out of the classroom.

While we were walking down the halls to our next class, Potions Ginny asked me something, "Harry did you get the letter about Voldemort being back?" Ginny asked. I nodded my head. "Well I was thinking that maybe the disappearance with Hermione, Ron, and Draco has to do something with it." Ginny said quickly.

I hadn't even thought about Ron not even being there neither Hermione. Oh no! "What? They're gone? For how long!?!" I asked her. "Since yesterday night." She said quickly. "Oh Ginny, don't worry about it! They are all heads and they are probably just getting a early start on robes for the ball this Saturday. I mean it's still only Tuesday." I said not worried as much now. She nodded her head in agreement.

I hope everyone liked Chapter 13! Please PM me if you have any ideas for Chapter 14 because the more ideas I get from reviewers the faster the post is until it comes up!

Review please! Thanks! ~Jess

PotterGirl714 · 06-14-2009, 11:43 PM

I love it that is amazing!!! PAMS!

JeshieRAWR · 06-14-2009, 11:52 PM

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Originally Posted by PotterGirl714

I love it that is amazing!!! PAMS!

Thank You!
I hope everyone liked the Harry/Ginny parts.
I tried my best!
I will also try and reply soon but I still haven't got any ideas.

Thanks for commenting!

<3 Jess

POTTER128 · 06-15-2009, 05:11 AM

wow didnt really expect krum, but interesting, AWESOME. that one just gave me an idea the next chapter should be even more interesting i cant wait!!!!!!!!!

LOVE YOUR FF!!!!! <3

JeshieRAWR · 06-15-2009, 05:46 AM

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Originally Posted by POTTER128

wow didnt really expect krum, but interesting, AWESOME. that one just gave me an idea the next chapter should be even more interesting i cant wait!!!!!!!!!

LOVE YOUR FF!!!!! <3

Thanks so much!
I also got the message and I think I might use that idea!

Thanks!
~Jess