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01-02-2010, 08:48 AM
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| Murtlap
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: USA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Krystall First Year |
New reader here and I absolutely love your fic!!!
Scorp is sooo sweet. I can't wait for more
PAMS!!
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01-02-2010, 07:26 PM
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#202 (permalink)
| Ramora
Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: GMT -5
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Quote:
Originally Posted by lilyvictoire New reader here and I absolutely love your fic!!!
Scorp is sooo sweet. I can't wait for more
PAMS!! YAY!  Another reader. Well welcome to our little fan family here. I hope you enjoy it. And I will be PMing you everytime there is a new chapter up!  I haven't had a new reader in forever!
Marcy
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01-04-2010, 11:50 PM
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#203 (permalink)
| Formerly: DracikinsLuver4321   Mooncalf
Join Date: Oct 2009
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| JALIA♥|| Pat&Vanessa♥ ||DAN CER|| [The future Mrs. Efron] || Miss OCD chick  That last line was HILARIOUS!! Great new chappie! Update soon! PAMS!!!!!!!!
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01-06-2010, 03:20 AM
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#204 (permalink)
| Ramora
Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: GMT -5
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| Last chapter! :( Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Okay, here's a long awaited chapter. I know I promised I post last week, but I got caught up in getting ready for school again. And I'll be a lot more busy now too. My middle school is getting us 8th graders ready to move into high school so there are tons of things we need to do. Anyway...! Here's the chapter. Hope you like it.
__________________________________________________ __  Chapter 25
The One-Eyed Witch
After Christmas, everyone seemed to be a lot more happy. It was the first day back at Hogwarts, and everyone was talking about how their Christmas had gone. It was around 10:50 and Rose was up in her dormitory, trying to decide what she should wear to her meeting with Scorpius. Not that it really mattered really, but she had to look didn't she? Of course! Deciding on skinny jeans and a tee shirt, Rose left her dormitory and down to the common room.
"Where are you going?" Albus asked looking up from a chessboard. One of his pawns moved forward and stabbed Hugos. "She's probably going down to meet with her "boyfriend" so they can make kissy faces at each other." Hugo said making his own kissy face. Rose rolled her eyes and hit Hugo's arm hard. "OW!" Rose stuck her tongue out at him, said good bye, and walked out the portrait.
She walked down to the third floor. He was already there waiting. She took deep breath and walked over, clearing her throat. Scorpius turned around and smiled when he released who it was. “Hey.” He said running a hand through his hair. “Uh, hey. So what did you wanna talk about?” Rose asked. “Well I just wanted to let you know that I really like you….a lot. And I don’t care about what Poppy says about you. Your…perfect.” Scorpius said smiling.
Rose stared at him. What did he say? That he liked you! Duh. “You-you like me?” Rose asked, her voice barely a whisper. Scorpius nodded his head slowly. “Well I…I like you too.” She said, a big grin spreading across her face. A silence fell between them, until Scorpius finally pulled Rose into a hug. They stood there, in each others arm. Suddenly the sound of someone walking towards them had them separate.
And then Poppy Parkinson came around the corner. She stopped when she noticed Scorpius and Rose standing there. Rose and Scorpius looked at each other and then at Poppy. Her face was turning a bright shade of red. She stomped her foot and turned on her heel, walking back to wherever she had come from. Rose and Scorpius waited for the sounds of Poppy’s footsteps fade away before bursting out into laughter. “Well, I’ll see you later.” Rose said. “Yup, tomorrow in Potions.” Scorpius said.
As Rose walked away, she thought of how these four months had gone. All the ups and downs she'd been through. And now...everything was just perfect, just perfect. __________________________________________________ THE END
Last edited by MarcyMoo; 01-14-2010 at 11:56 PM.
Reason: added some few things
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01-06-2010, 03:23 AM
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#205 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
I think it was so darling sweet and cute!!!!!!!!!
Pams, great job Marcy
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01-06-2010, 03:28 AM
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#206 (permalink)
| Formerly: DracikinsLuver4321   Mooncalf
Join Date: Oct 2009
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| JALIA♥|| Pat&Vanessa♥ ||DAN CER|| [The future Mrs. Efron] || Miss OCD chick
That was so cute Marcy! I LOVE the way Scorpius started. Hugo was funny. Poppy was how she always was. Hee hee. That was adorable. I'll soon be getting ready for high school too. Seeing as we're both 8th graders. Hope to read more soon. PAMS!!!
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01-06-2010, 03:40 AM
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#207 (permalink)
| Ramora
Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: GMT -5
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy I think it was so darling sweet and cute!!!!!!!!!
Pams, great job Marcy Aww, your sweet.  Thanks!
Marcy Quote:
Originally Posted by DracikinsLuver4321 That was so cute Marcy! I LOVE the way Scorpius started. Hugo was funny. Poppy was how she always was. Hee hee. That was adorable. I'll soon be getting ready for high school too. Seeing as we're both 8th graders. Hope to read more soon. PAMS!!! Thank you!  I try to make Hugo as funny as I can, i just take whatever my brothers say and throw it in here.  Im glad I'm not alone with all this high school stuff.
Marcy
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01-06-2010, 03:49 AM
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#208 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Adams First Year |
That was so so sweet! Aww they hugged! I am so happy for them! haha poppy! PAMS!
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01-06-2010, 04:29 PM
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#209 (permalink)
| Murtlap
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: USA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Krystall First Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫
He was already there waiting. She took deep breath and walked over, clearing her throat. Scorpius turned around and smiled when he released who it was. “Hey.” He said running a hand through his hair. “Uh, hey. So what did you wanna talk about?” Rose asked. “Well I just wanted to let you know that I really like you….a lot. And I don’t care about what Poppy says about you. Your…perfect.” Scorpius said smiling. Rose stared at him. What did he say? That he liked you! Duh. “You-you like me?” Rose asked, her voice barely a whisper. Scorpius nodded his head slowly. “Well I…I like you too.” She said, a big grin spreading across her face. A silence fell between them, until Scorpius finally pulled Rose into a hug. __________________________________________________ _______. That was one of the weirdest experiences ever. I am not kidding that is the exact conversation that happened when I got together with my boyfriend six years ago. No exaggerating that is exactly how it happened...with different names of course lol. So weird!! I couldn't have written it better myself haha.
Good chapter! PAMS!!
Last edited by lilyvictoire; 01-06-2010 at 07:33 PM.
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01-06-2010, 10:53 PM
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#210 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Awe, that was too cute. Poppy needs to get off her high hippogriff and realize Scorp will never be hers. Fantastic as always! Please PAMS (:
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01-06-2010, 10:59 PM
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#211 (permalink)
| Ramora
Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: GMT -5
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack Awe, that was too cute. Poppy needs to get off her high hippogriff and realize Scorp will never be hers. Fantastic as always! Please PAMS (: But Poppy's way to positive to get off. She'll stop at nothing. She WILL get Scorpius Malfoy, one way or another. Quote:
Originally Posted by lilyvictoire That was one of the weirdest experiences ever. I am not kidding that is the exact conversation that happened when I got together with my boyfriend six years ago. No exaggerating that is exactly how it happened...with different names of course lol. So weird!! I couldn't have written it better myself haha.
Good chapter! PAMS!! Really? Wow...never thought that would happen!  But thank you for commenting!
Marcy
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01-07-2010, 12:36 AM
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#212 (permalink)
| Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Reeser Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ “Well I just wanted to let you know that I really like you….a lot. And I don’t care about what Poppy says about you. Your…perfect.” Scorpius said smiling.
This has got to be my favorite line in this chapter!
-- If only boys actually said that to me.
I'm very jealous of Rose right now. 
I wonder what Ron and Hermione might say once or if they find out Rose is with Scorpius.
Oh no, wait!
I really really really wonder what will happen once Draco finds out.
Lovely chapter MarcyMoo!
PAMS
PAMS
PAMS
PAMS
Jess(:
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01-07-2010, 02:15 AM
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#213 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black Quote:
Originally Posted by ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ But Poppy's way to positive to get off. She'll stop at nothing. She WILL get Scorpius Malfoy, one way or another.  WHAT! NOOOOOOOOO!!! *brutally murders Poppy*
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01-07-2010, 09:23 PM
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#214 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
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Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
aw...that was cute...and i am so glad that Poppy syomped off from there...hehehehe...and Hugo is so much of the real little brother with his comments...waiting for more...
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01-07-2010, 10:18 PM
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#215 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ But Poppy's way to positive to get off. She'll stop at nothing. She WILL get Scorpius Malfoy, one way or another. 
Marcy haha. That's Poppy talking, right? (: I'd like to see her try(:
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01-07-2010, 10:42 PM
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#216 (permalink)
| Ramora
Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: GMT -5
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Quote:
Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron
This has got to be my favorite line in this chapter!
-- If only boys actually said that to me.
I'm very jealous of Rose right now. 
I wonder what Ron and Hermione might say once or if they find out Rose is with Scorpius.
Oh no, wait!
I really really really wonder what will happen once Draco finds out.
Lovely chapter MarcyMoo!
PAMS
PAMS
PAMS
PAMS
Jess(: I know right? Why cant boys be more Scorpius? As for what their parents think, I'm deciding if I should make a squel with that little problem. So yeah.
Thanks Jess!  ,
Marcy Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy WHAT! NOOOOOOOOO!!! *brutally murders Poppy* Quote:
Originally Posted by harita aw...that was cute...and i am so glad that Poppy syomped off from there...hehehehe...and Hugo is so much of the real little brother with his comments...waiting for more... I know right. I try to make hugo as funny as possible. Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack haha. That's Poppy talking, right? (: I'd like to see her try(: Sure....you think that... mwhahahaha! |
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01-14-2010, 11:52 PM
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#217 (permalink)
| Ramora
Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: GMT -5
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco IMPORTANT! After a lot of thinking, I've decided that Chapter 25 was the last chapter of Love Is Dangerous. 
Now I'm sure some of you might ask why. Well here are some reasons: - I have writers block...again.
- I'd like to start writing something new
- I'm busy with school. We have the Constitution Test coming up soon and I need to pass it so I graduate.
- There's more, I just can't think of anything!

But look on the bright side: - I might write a sequel
- We've had a great time writing and reading this
- This is my first story that I've ACTUALLY finish!
 - I'm still gonna write!
So I'm going to keep this up, because I still have somethings I wanna post, and so you can comment and I can reply and stuff. I'll PM a mod sometime next week.
Thanks,
Marcy!
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01-15-2010, 01:00 AM
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#218 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥
WHAT!!!???? I can't believe you're ending it, but I guess it was a pretty good ending. The story was amazing and I hope you decide to write a sequel... Let me know if you do please, so I can definitely check it out... Thank you for the quite enjoyable story to read! Oh, and good look on your test! (:
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01-15-2010, 02:38 AM
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#219 (permalink)
| Shrake
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Awwwww I can't believe you're ending it!
But I totally understand about it all, I hope you write a Sequel!!!
Iwubyou. <3
Jess(:
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01-15-2010, 02:40 AM
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#220 (permalink)
| Snidget
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*GASP*  It's over!  Oh well. It was awesome well it lasted, thanks, I hope you write a sequel
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01-15-2010, 12:19 PM
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#221 (permalink)
| Formerly: Lily Lupin   Mooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: New Zealand <3
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ava James First Year | Facinelli<3 RP Sweetheart
MARCY! Finally, I've caught up just in time for you to finish it.  Haha, I seem to do that quite a bit.
I really loved reading this, it was a lot of fun, and I'm just sorry that I stopped reading.  Even though I am sad it's ending, it's a very nice ending, and it's cool when you get to see FF's finish.
This has also made me feel like writing something of this era, even though I want to finish my marauder story before I put anything else on SS, and I have something else in mind for my next FF.
But maybe I'll start to write one for myself and put it on SS someday.
Love you. Ana.
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01-15-2010, 07:02 PM
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#222 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
Alright Marcy get going with your Examinations...and all the very best for them... 
and as of your fanfiction and soon to come fanfictions we will be waiting...  ... |
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01-15-2010, 08:49 PM
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#223 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Adams First Year |
I loved reading this! It was so sweet! I will read everything you write! Farewell Love Is Dangerous!
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01-17-2010, 01:39 AM
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#224 (permalink)
| Ramora
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Thanks for the lovely commets guys! Love Is Dangerous, will return! I promise!
______________________________________________ CHARACTER OWNAGE - (In order of appearance)
Rose Weasley ; Albus Severus Potter ; The Fat Lady, Scorpius Malfoy ; Lily Luna Potter ; Hugo Weasley ; George Weasley ; Ron Weasley ; Hermione Weasley (Granger) ; Harry Potter ; Ginny Potter (Weasley) ; Molly Weasley - J.K. Rowling
Professor Quinn ; Elizabeth Carter ; Jen, Derek Turner ; Kelly Zambini ; Lloyd Goyle ; Herald Crabbe ; Poppy Parkinson ; Caretaker Xander ; Professor Linden ; Andrew ; Catalin ; Jenn ; Cameron Spinalie - ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ PLOT - ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ STORY BANNER - Anna Banana - You did an awesome job Anna!
If I missed any characters, they probably belong to J.K.
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