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Happy Trails to you, until we meet again. Da da da da da Wow Ottery, that was quite a wrap up. There's just one thing I want to ask, Ha Ha just teasing! I can't believe it's over. It's been a lot of fun, and excitment. Thanks for giving of yourself, it's been a pleasure to read this just like all your other stuff. And I still have Human Nature, and, A Christmas Carol Adventure. This really was a great one and I'll probably come back and read it again a few times. See ya over in the other universe.:hello: |
It's ... ENDED? I.. well... I really can't review, OttySt, I can't digest this. End... the end.. but - no way, me no like ends at all and... :cry: |
Your Happy Medium While I did spot a couple of grammar errors, I spotted absolutely no plot holes. I think your safe.;) I loved the ending. :love: Just let me Beta it before you close the thread, please.:whistle: Sorry I kept getting all your stories confused:blush: It should be easier to keep them straight now though :lol: As I said before, no one writes romance like you :loved: |
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:dizzy: Sooo many updates...but I'll read 'em all soon :evil: I happened to find a reply I was meant to post but didn't from centuries ago...might as well not let it get wasted right? I'll post again soon! :glomp: Quote:
:rotfl: It's okay to bash :lol: I don't like him as a person, he's too arrogant :/ YUSH PLEASE! Only a little bit...or you can make him "die" and come back to life....nursed by Madison to full health :whistle: I need a happy ending :lol: Oh good point :evil: I'll be looking out for your book :evil: That sounds really interesting! I really hope you finish this time :evil: *cheering squad* GOOOO Otty! :lol: In any case I'll be rooting you on ^_^ So write, write, write! Quote:
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I love it. I read the post where Freddie and Blaise "fight" before the party so I'm all excited :) ZOMG! it's OVA??!?!? Okay, keep the thread open...I wanna put in my final comment before it closes :lol: *selfish* |
*Whistles and is shifty* Oh what the hey ... LOL AN:I'll be back later with a zero issue :blink: that's a prequel in comic book terms :lol: maybe ... I don't know ... maybe ... :shifty: Excerpt from Freddie's Journal dated end of Summer: I wanted to go to the beach in the South of France as a way to say goodbye to the summer, but ... well, Madison is a hard girl to argue with. :lol: She did a little arm twisting, and I mean that in the literal sense, but I'm proud to say I only gave in when she kissed me. :blush: Well, not after the first one ... I'm not that weak. :lol: The boy sat at his desk thinking about what had happened at the beach in Tahiti. A little black boy came running down the beach with a coconut that had an umbrella in it, Madison payed him and took a sip. The boy stood there staring at her lithe form looking so beautiful in the sunlight and she turned and spotting him there kissed him on the cheek. "Hey!" Freddie complained. "I've got one for you too," she said and walking over to him kissed him. "Life sure is funny." "I should say," Freddie replied giggling, "But if that's funny then I'd love to see down right hilarious." Madison of course slapped him across the face, "I'm not that kind of girl," she teased and running after her Freddie picked her up and ran with her into the water. "Fredrick James St. Valentine you wouldn't ..." They were in the water laughing and splashing before she could finish. The Airship Arceus flew overhead. Ottery and Teddy in their swim trunks were standing on the other side of the rail ready to jump over it. Tiffany meanwhile in a bikini and sarong sighed and walked over to them with a clipboard in hand. "You know I could be working for Bill Gates right now or with MI6," she muttered. "Yeah, but they're not half as much fun," Teddy remarked cigar in his mouth. "Besides, they wouldn't give you a fruit basket for Christmas like I do," Ottery added nodding and smiling. "Yes, no one beats the incentives you offer, Ottery," Tiffany replied. "Like getting to wear beach wear at the beach." "Exactly," Ottery nodded. "So we doing this or what?" Teddy exclaimed, getting bored with standing around too long. "Yeah!" Ottery exclaimed. "Boys, I think I should warn you ... the waters are shark infested." "So?" Teddy asked. "Be nice and I'll bring you a fin," he winked at Tiffany. "Be still my heart," she replied. "Oh, and Ottery, before you forget, you don't know how to swim." "Wait, I don't know how to swim?" he asked. "Go and ruin the fun why don't you," Teddy remarked then pushed Ottery off the airship into the deep blue waters of the ocean below. "Go. Save him. Or I'm making the rest of your existence miserable." Tiffany threatened. "Promise?" The girl smirked and pushed the brown haired boy off the ship. Giovanni and Laura were riding on a bike, Giovanni driving and Laura sitting on the handlebars when they heard Ottery's scream and a giant splash. "Wow, the boss's got guts," Gio remarked. "He does if those are shark fins. They are right? Look at them all circling there ... wow, Ottery really is a daredevil," Laura replied. "Let's go get ice cream to celebrate the coolest boss ever." Giovanni said. "Mint chocolate chip?" Laura asked. "Yes, and for the lady Banana nut." Laura turned around and kissed the boy and the bicycle went crashing into a bunch of bushes. They laughed and giggled. Meanwhile Prince sighed and purred on the bar top of the local outdoor bar. "These kids are never going to change are they?" There was laughter and danger and funny drinks with coconuts and umbrellas and sharks and dancing and mostly fun and friendship, before an owl came in from Dumbledore asking for urgent help from Ottery and his friends. It seems the wizarding world was in trouble again. But when isn't the world in peril, no? |
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I read this AGES ago, the last update I mean, and I knowww I haven't left a review, but I love it, and I love you. Gimme some hours, 'kay? -rushes off to dress for the day- :xd: |
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I finished reading this fic! *feels immensely proud that she caught up* and it's FANTABULOUS! I'm really glad you decided to keep everyone alive :) I'll be sticking around for that zero issue! |
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