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02-13-2010, 12:50 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8) Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Spinnersend2 is right.
Explain.
Even I don't know who you mean.
OHHHH.......
I think I got it!
Tell me what ur thinking in a private message because this is getting embarrassing
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02-13-2010, 02:36 AM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Awe, that was sweet. If only Neville hadn't interrupted... Neville can't be with someone who wants to be a death eater!!!! I knew she was no good, unless she turns good... hmmm. *strokes imaginary beard* PLEASE PAMS!! (:
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02-13-2010, 02:49 AM
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#153 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8) Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack Awe, that was sweet. If only Neville hadn't interrupted... Neville can't be with someone who wants to be a death eater!!!! I knew she was no good, unless she turns good... hmmm. *strokes imaginary beard* PLEASE PAMS!! (: Hmm you might be on to something there ^^ thats all I'm going to say.
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02-16-2010, 04:00 PM
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| Murtlap
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Philadelphia, Pa USA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Dirk First Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Just to boys from school :L I'm alll Embarassed now haha Don't be embarassed, your young, enjoy school.
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02-21-2010, 09:27 PM
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#155 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8) Hey everyone ! there will hopefully be another post tommorow 
Kerri xx
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02-21-2010, 11:20 PM
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#156 (permalink)
| Jarvey
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Woooo can't wait!!!!
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02-22-2010, 10:06 AM
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#157 (permalink)
| Bugbear
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Down Under
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cody Liam Evans Seventh Year | HP, Harry & Ginny ♥ | Music Girl ♫ | | BW, JB, CS, 1D, Glee, AVPM/S Lover | Pray &
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02-22-2010, 08:04 PM
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#158 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8) Enjoy sorry for the delay !!!!
PARAMORE AND YOU ME AT SIX (music is soo inspiring)
WARNING : I can't spell so there will be errors  sorry haha Chapter 10
The Halloween feast as usual was magnificant. Hermione sat at the Gryffindor table waiting for Harry, Ginny and Ron to join her. Her and Draco and broke up after Hermione had told him that she had nearly got Ron back and Draco couldn't take it anymore and dumped her.(reallllllllllllllllly sorry Dramione fans) Hermione was fighting to keep the tears at bay when she gazed at the entrance of the great hall her jaw dropped. Neville had just walking in hand in hand with a now dirty blonde Hayley Veldings!!!!!! What the hell!Hermione thought as she watched Hayley kiss Nevilles cheek, let go of his hand, walk over and sitting next to a wide eyed Chloe.
" Shes great isn't she." Neville said as he sat down and saw where Hermione was looking.
"Uhm Neville....What the hell." she said desiding to speak her mind.
Harry, Ginny and Ron had now join then getting the tail end of the conversation.
"Awh Neville, what did you blow up this time?" Ginny asked.
"Nothing." hermione answered for him." Apparently he's dating Hayley Veldings!" They all turned to look at him gobsmacked.
"How did that happen." Harry asked totally forgetting about the mountains of food infront of him.
"Dunno really.There was the full thing in the cuboard lastnight and then at lunch I asked her out." He said and started to load food onto his plate.
"Do we even want to know what happened in the cuboard." Ron asked and they all started laughing.
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My head suddenly was seering with pain. I jumped up from the table and walked, trying not to attract attention, out of the hall. When I was away from everyone I sprinted out the castle and into the forest. When the pain was to much I collapsed against a tree.
"Naughty Hayley, not doing your job just so you can spent your time will that stupid lump of a boy."
"Stop it, Bellatrix take the stupid curse off of me."
"Very well but the dark lord is not happy. He knows about your little boyfriend and if he is distracting you then I will sovle that problem."
"No!" I cringed at the hurt in my voice.
"awh is little Hayley going to miss her boyfriend."
" No he's my way of getting what I need. He's friends with Harry Potter and he will tell me if I ask about him." I lied swiftly
"Hmm your quite a smart little girl aren't you.If you little plan fails however you know what the dark lord will do and your little byfriend won't be able to help you." Her shril laugh echoed as she disapperated. It was soo stupid of her to use the crutatius curse on me just to get me out of the castle. Bellatrix trully was evil. I leaned agains the tree tears pouring down my face as I thought of all the people I had now put in danger. I was really starting to like all of Nevilles friends even though I had never had a proper conversation with them.
Who would I choose to die?
Them.... or me ?
Hope you enjoyed
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02-22-2010, 08:18 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Ohhhh good chapter!!!
Hayley...choose the good side!! haha
Cant wait for more
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02-22-2010, 10:50 PM
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#160 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Kerri xx, I've been reading from the beginning and I think it's about time I post a comment. Your story keeps getting progressivly better with each post. Quote:
" No he's my way of getting what I need. He's friends with Harry Potter and he will tell me if I ask about him." I lied swiftly
Whew  that was some pretty quick thinking. Quote:
I leaned agains the tree tears pouring down my face as I thought of all the people I had now put in danger. I was really starting to like all of Nevilles friends even though I had never had a proper conversation with them.
I feel badly for her. Hope she can get out of this ok. Maybe she chould confide in them. Maybe they can help her. I'm not making suggestions here. It's just the way I read. Try to solve problems as I go along. Makes it fin, especially if my thoughts turn out to be the way the writer chooses to write it. Quote:
Who would I choose to die?

I'll be watching for your next post.
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02-22-2010, 11:40 PM
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#161 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Wow, great post! Hopefully she won't have to choose an answer for that last question... PLEASE PAMS!! (:
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02-23-2010, 01:50 AM
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#162 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Hermione.. Your crazy! Ron's dating Cho and then.. Whatev. your crazy lol
Neville is such a lucky guy.. I just love Ron's last comment!
Poor Hayley.. EVIL BELLA! I feel sooo bad for Hayley, she's young!
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02-23-2010, 10:28 AM
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#163 (permalink)
| Bugbear
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Down Under
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cody Liam Evans Seventh Year | HP, Harry & Ginny ♥ | Music Girl ♫ | | BW, JB, CS, 1D, Glee, AVPM/S Lover | Pray &
Awesomenessssssssssssssss!
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03-02-2010, 04:53 PM
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#164 (permalink)
| Snidget
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WOW!!!!!
Fabulous!
RonHermione(L) is having a crisis!
Her computer decided to break so she may be on via her iPOD.
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03-06-2010, 03:46 PM
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#165 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8) Next chapter :O It will be very short because im on my Ipod
Chapter 11
Friday night
Hermione was sitting behind a mountain of books in the library. She was reading up for paper she had in Potions.
"Hermione? Can we talk?"
Hermione froze. The voice sent a chill down her spine, she couldnt bare to have another fight with him.
"Sure Draco. Whats up?" She replied trying tosound like shedidnt have a care in the world aout the awkwardness of this conversation.
"You guys talk to Neville's girlfriend Hayley right ?"
"Yes. Why?"
"She can't e trusted!"
"what do you mean?" She tried to hide her slight alarm as his eyes grew dark. Sorry its short but you guys wanted more Hermione Draco according to the poll
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03-06-2010, 04:04 PM
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#166 (permalink)
| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Great short chapter!
I cant wait for more
Evangeline
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03-06-2010, 04:25 PM
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#167 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Nov 2009
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Ahhhh, CANNOT wait for more. Maybe Hermione and Draco back together?!?!?! <33
Cait
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03-06-2010, 06:23 PM
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#168 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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That was fantastic! I can't wait for more! I hope they don't get back together, no offense to those who do... PLEASE PAMS!! |
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03-06-2010, 08:46 PM
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#169 (permalink)
| Bugbear
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Down Under
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cody Liam Evans Seventh Year | HP, Harry & Ginny ♥ | Music Girl ♫ | | BW, JB, CS, 1D, Glee, AVPM/S Lover | Pray &
This is amazing! PAMS!! <33333333
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03-06-2010, 10:15 PM
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#170 (permalink)
|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Hiya Kerri. I'm now a member so I can post!
Fantastic! Love it! PAMS!
Can't wait for more!
I can't find that Finished FanFic you were telling me about. What was it called again?
Anyway... Keep up the good work! :L
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03-07-2010, 01:26 AM
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#171 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Ohmigosh! Draco is so sweet, trying to be helpful in all. But I sense trouble coming this way..
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03-07-2010, 02:45 AM
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#172 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8) Quote:
Originally Posted by bonnieginnyfan1 This is amazing! PAMS!! <33333333 Thank you  I'm glad you enjoyed it !
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03-07-2010, 02:47 AM
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#173 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8) Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag Hiya Kerri. I'm now a member so I can post!
Fantastic! Love it! PAMS!
Can't wait for more!
I can't find that Finished FanFic you were telling me about. What was it called again?
Anyway... Keep up the good work! :L
thanks soo much
Eh it was called be with you in the security vaults finished fan fiction
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03-07-2010, 02:47 AM
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#174 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8) Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy Ohmigosh! Draco is so sweet, trying to be helpful in all. But I sense trouble coming this way.. Hmmm..... 8-)
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03-07-2010, 04:31 AM
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#175 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hi Kerri, When you say very short, you really mean it! It's fine though. It must be rough working from your ipod. Quote:
"You guys talk to Neville's girlfriend Hayley right ?"
"Yes. Why?"
"She can't e trusted!"
I agree with Emily Black, I don't ship Hermione/Draco, but it's your story. I would like to know what Draco has to say about Hayley though.
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