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Tibz 04-12-2010 03:22 PM

I don't really like Hayley that much but she sounds bad and good at the same time which is kinda weird. Awwww! Ron and Hermione :woot:. :r/hr: :hermy: :val5: :ron: Yay I love them they are so cute together. :glomp: But :malfoy:, :mad: he deserved to be slapped by Hermione served him right. Nice work Kerri PAMS!!

PS: Paramore is awesome and Hayley rules.

Morag 04-12-2010 05:47 PM

Oh no, not poor Ginny! Don't make it too bad. Why can't they see through this Hayley?
Still loving the story Kerri. We need more! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
Soph :D

spinnersend2 04-14-2010 06:13 PM

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keep up the good work, Hope you remove the block

elika4ever 04-15-2010 06:02 AM

book
 
"new reader"

nice story cant wait for the next chapter

Ron&Hermione(L) 04-15-2010 03:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 (Post 9244782)
Nice little chapter
:)

Thank you!!!

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Originally Posted by emilyblack
Too bad she has no interest in getting to know Ginny better; it's a total trap! Or at least, that's what I'm thinking... This is NOT good.

Great small little post! Please Post More when you figure everything out! We can be patient.

Hey Emily :D
Thanks!
I'll try :P I think I'm getting there :L

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Originally Posted by connie
Hello Kerri, I'm glad there is a little bit at least. What you did write was very good, and it's enough to keep us wanting more. I wish Harry was suspicious and check things out for Ginny. Ooo maybe Harry Is suspicious and is only saying he's going to the Dursleys, but instead ... he's going to follow Hayley and find out for sure what's going on with her. Forgive me my guessing. This is what I do when I read a good book or watch a show on TV, or the movies. I'll be watching for more. I'm in total agreement with Emily ^ there. Figure things out, and we'll wait patiently for your next post, as long as it's tomorrow. TEASING! I'm sure we'll wait happily untill you get another post worked out no matter how long it takes.

Hey Connie,
Thanks :D

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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP
I really love this!
I miss our Chemistry chats but not the work.

Thanks
I miss them too :O :P

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Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy
OHMIGOSH! I TOTALLY SEE IT AS A TRAP! Then again, I may be crazy oh wait I already am Yep.. I hope no one get's hurt, and I hope Harry DOESN'T go to the Dursley's. Dey big fat meanies!
Lol I love it

Haha Thanks
We'll just have to wait and see what happens with Harry :P

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Originally Posted by Ron/Hermione 4 eva
I don't really like Hayley that much but she sounds bad and good at the same time which is kinda weird. Awwww! Ron and Hermione . Yay I love them they are so cute together. But , he deserved to be slapped by Hermione served him right. Nice work Kerri PAMS!!

PS: Paramore is awesome and Hayley rules.

Yeh no one seems to like Hayley :L
Haha I have funn writeing the slap part haha
yeh PARAMORE RULE !!!! :P

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Originally Posted by Morag
Oh no, not poor Ginny! Don't make it too bad. Why can't they see through this Hayley?
Still loving the story Kerri. We need more! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
Soph

Well we don't no if NONE of them know what shess up to (hint hint )
Thank you :D I know i'll get more up ASAP.:D

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Originally Posted by spinnersend2
keep up the good work, Hope you remove the block

Thanks

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Originally Posted by elika4ever

"new reader"

nice story cant wait for the next chapter

Hey welcome to Love at Last?
Thanks for reading :D



Hey guys Ill get the next post up as soon as I can :D

bonnieginnyfan1 04-16-2010 04:10 AM

Nice little chappie! Can't wait for the next one! :D

elika4ever 04-16-2010 04:23 AM

cant wait

Ladybug 04-16-2010 08:26 AM

Your Welcome :)

KatielovesHP 04-16-2010 07:21 PM

Hello!
Isn't this girl amazing!
Even though she isn't posting quick enough!!!!!!
We need more, more and more!!!!!

Morag 04-18-2010 08:46 PM

Kerri, quick! Post Quicker!
PAMS PAMS PAMS

Ron&Hermione(L) 04-22-2010 05:45 PM

Hey guys I’m posting woohoo :P Okay this might get confusing so bare with me for a while. Okay so this is the SAME chapter but it Ginny Hayley and Harry’s POV
But each POV will be a different post Every one follow ?
Okay if there is anything you don’t get just tell me :D


Part one -Ginny’s POV

It was 11 o’clock on a Saturday and I was up. Not cool. It would have been better if I was going home but it wasn’t I was basically going to a strangers house. Ok I hadn’t mentioned this to Harry or any one else for that matter, but when something bad is usually about to happen my hands get sore like when you spent 2 hours writing with no break. I got it just before the third task of the triwizard tournament but now it was worse, they were really stinging.
I was sitting in the train compartment with Harry, Ron, Hermione, Neville and Hayley. A single strand of hair fell from my ponytail and when a swept it back it was so painful. My jaw was clenched to stop me from screaming in pain. What was going on?
“Ginny?” Oh god Hermione not here. Not here. “Can I talk to you outside?” Oh thank the lord. I nodded my head, not trusting my voice. We left the compartment leaving everyone confused.
We found an empty compartment and when I sat down Hermione locked the door and shut the blinds.
“Ginny?” Hermione asked warily “Is everything alright? Did you and Harry have a fight?” I had to think before I answered. Should I tell her? Maybe she would no a spell or something to help with the pain.
“Um no.” Oh god I was bad at this
“No you not ok or no you didn’t have a fight with Harry?” Ha she thought she was the confused one. Wow I don’t think I’ve every seen her confused before. It made a nice change.
“Both.”
“Ok? Um. What?” I couldn’t help it I just had to laugh at the expression on her face. “Why are you laughing at me Ginny?!”
“I’m sorry you just look really funny when you’re confused. Um. What I mean is Harry and I didn’t have a fight but I don’t think I’m okay.”
“Why. Ginny what wrong?”
So I told her about my hands and how they were ten times sorer that they were before the third task
“So what do you think is going to happen? I mean what could happen that would be worse that Voldemort returning?”
“I don’t know but I think it has something to do with Hayley. I don’t even know why I’m spending Christmas with her there is -” I stop when I saw Hermione’s face it was like she was in a kind of trance “H-hermione? Are you okay?”
“Yeah, I- I think so. It’s just when you said that I thought I remembered something but it was gone when I started to think about it now I can’t remember. Sorry what were you saying?”
We continued to talk but when I noticed it was 1 and we had been away for about an hour and a half we went back to the compartment. I was getting to distracted to feel my hands hurt that much especially since it was snuggled into Harry’s side with his arms around my waist. We had had reached London and were getting off the train when the pain in my hands was practically screaming at me. Oh crap, whatever was going to happen it was going to be soon. I shared this with Hermione and she started at me worried. I told her I’d be fine and walked to meet Hayley she looked really strangely at me it was kind of like she was about to cry. I went over to Harry and kissed him and told him I loved him then waited for Hayley while she and Neville snogged each others faces off. Harry left soon followed by Hermione, who kept throwing me worried glanced, Ron and then Neville. It was just Hayley and I now.

“So Ginny shall we leave. Their expecting us.” I nodded. For some reason I couldn’t stop myself from searching for the double meaning in her words.



So what do we think it is that Hermione was trying to remember?
And do I even have to ask who knows who ‘They’ are?


Please comment :D
I just noticed that this post is quite long :P wow my hand hurts now from typing haha
hope you like it :D

Cassiopia Malfoy 04-22-2010 06:04 PM

WHAT DRACO TOLD HER! Sowwy.. All I could think of.
Wow, my hands hurt just thinking about the pain!
Oh noooo! I trap! I HATE/LOVE TRAPS! haha
Aww poor hands.. Can hardly wait for more! PAAAMS!

Ron&Hermione(L) 04-22-2010 06:15 PM

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Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy (Post 9288924)
WHAT DRACO TOLD HER! Sowwy.. All I could think of.
Wow, my hands hurt just thinking about the pain!
Oh noooo! I trap! I HATE/LOVE TRAPS! haha
Aww poor hands.. Can hardly wait for more! PAAAMS!

Well you might be on to somtheing there :P
I love how enthusiastic you are :P
Thanks Ill have more soon i hope :D

The next chapter will be the same events but in a different POV :D

Ron&Hermione(L) 04-22-2010 06:23 PM

Hey Random question but did anyone gett effected by the ash cloud cause by the volcano in Iceland ?

Ladybug 04-22-2010 07:52 PM

Ohh good chapter!
Hmmm whats wrong with her hands??
Interesting
Andd as for the ash cloud...Nope im completely fine :)

KatielovesHP 04-22-2010 08:10 PM

This was brilliant!
I kinda knew what would happen but this was great!
You know already that I wasn't affected by the ash cloud.
Everybody, our Headteacher has unfortunately just returned from being stranded. URGGGHHHH!

Morag 04-22-2010 08:29 PM

Loved the post Kerri. Will Harry save Ginny? Oh lets hope he does! Nope I wasn't affected by the ash cloud but you already knew that.
PAMS PAMS PAMS!
Soph x

Connie 04-22-2010 08:33 PM

Hello Kerri, Great post!
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So what do we think it is that Hermione was trying to remember?
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) (Post 9167135)


Chapter 11

Friday night

Hermione was sitting behind a mountain of books in the library. She was reading up for paper she had in Potions.

"Hermione? Can we talk?"
Hermione froze. The voice sent a chill down her spine, she couldnt bare to have another fight with him.
"Sure Draco. Whats up?" She replied trying tosound like shedidnt have a care in the world aout the awkwardness of this conversation.
"You guys talk to Neville's girlfriend Hayley right ?"
"Yes. Why?"
"She can't e trusted!"
"what do you mean?" She tried to hide her slight alarm as his eyes grew dark.

Quote:

And do I even have to ask who knows who ‘They’ are?
Umm, Darth Vader, and Elvirah?:blink: No, umm, Voldemort, Belletrix, and the rest of the gang?

I love Ginny's being able to feel when something bad is about to happen. I hope Hermione tells Harry, and Harry rescues Ginny. Don't mind me though, :) I've said Harry is my hero right? I'm sure I'll love what ever you write. Great post Kerri! I'll be watching for your next one.

Emileyn 04-22-2010 08:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) (Post 9288885)
“Yeah, I- I think so. It’s just when you said that I thought I remembered something but it was gone when I started to think about it now I can’t remember. Sorry what were you saying?”

Why can't she remember what Draco told her???
Quote:

It was just Hayley and I now.
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“So Ginny shall we leave. Their expecting us.” I nodded. For some reason I couldn’t stop myself from searching for the double meaning in her words.
Oh dear! Not good, this is no bueno.
*Great chappie as always :) PLEASE PAMS!! :)

Ron&Hermione(L) 04-23-2010 08:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 (Post 9289204)
Ohh good chapter!
Hmmm whats wrong with her hands??
Interesting
Andd as for the ash cloud...Nope im completely fine :)

Thanks
That's good :L i was bored so i thought i would ask every one :P


Quote:

Originally Posted by KatielovesHP
This was brilliant!
I kinda knew what would happen but this was great!
You know already that I wasn't affected by the ash cloud.
Everybody, our Headteacher has unfortunately just returned from being stranded. URGGGHHHH!

Thank you :D
I think every body should pray for us :O i think we'll need it haha



Quote:

Originally Posted by Morag
Loved the post Kerri. Will Harry save Ginny? Oh lets hope he does! Nope I wasn't affected by the ash cloud but you already knew that.
PAMS PAMS PAMS!
Soph x

Thanks :D Who knows :O He might he might not
I will soon :D


Quote:

Originally Posted by connie
Umm, Darth Vader, and Elvirah? No, umm, Voldemort, Belletrix, and the rest of the gang?

I love Ginny's being able to feel when something bad is about to happen. I hope Hermione tells Harry, and Harry rescues Ginny. Don't mind me though, I've said Harry is my hero right? I'm sure I'll love what ever you write. Great post Kerri! I'll be watching for your next one.

Haha i love your guesses but which one is right ? youll have to wait and see Mwahaha
Thanks so much :D Hopefully it will be soon I think iv FINALLY got over my writers block :D


Quote:

Originally Posted by emilyblack
Why can't she remember what Draco told her???


Oh dear! Not good, this is no bueno.
*Great chappie as always PLEASE PAMS!!


she started to remember it but then forgot and couldn't remember what she was about to remember . You follow ?

It certainly isnt good :L

Thanks :D
I will soon :D

Emileyn 04-23-2010 09:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L)
she started to remember it but then forgot and couldn't remember what she was about to remember . You follow ?

Hahahahahaha, yeah I think so :)

KatielovesHP 04-23-2010 09:31 PM

Hurry up Kerri!
I need to see your ideas turned into words!
Chemistry was amazing this morning!!!!

Ladybug 04-23-2010 10:57 PM

Haha..im bored all the time :)

bonnieginnyfan1 04-23-2010 11:02 PM

That was amazing!!!!!! :loved:

KatielovesHP 04-27-2010 05:39 PM

We need more!!!!
Quickly Kerri!
I am desperate!!!!


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