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KatielovesHP 02-08-2010 10:09 PM

OMG.
I loved it!
:) :P :D
It was so good
Short
but good.

Ron&Hermione(L) 02-08-2010 10:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cait malfoy (Post 9096526)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! I love it!!! They're cute!!!!

Cait

Thanks xx
I know

Kerri xx

Ron&Hermione(L) 02-08-2010 10:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KatielovesHP (Post 9096535)
OMG.
I loved it!
:) :P :D
It was so good
Short
but good.

Thanks :D
Sorry I had things on my mind (thing I shouldn't be thinking about 2 certain guys in particular if u catch my drifted:@)
I promise next time 1000 words !!

Kerri xx

Ladybug 02-08-2010 10:14 PM

Did she kiss Neville??
Awww great chapter
cant wait for more
x

Ron&Hermione(L) 02-08-2010 10:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evangeline Hermione (Post 9096549)
Did she kiss Neville??
Awww great chapter
cant wait for more
x

Yess she did indeed :P

Thanks xx


Kerri xx

Emileyn 02-09-2010 10:43 PM

Awe, that was precious! Loved it. Can't wait to see what's next (in a long[er] post) :D
PLEASE PAMS!! (:

MuggleDinosaur 02-09-2010 11:39 PM

epp I loved that Chapter

Ron&Hermione(L) 02-10-2010 04:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by emilyblack (Post 9099119)
Awe, that was precious! Loved it. Can't wait to see what's next (in a long[er] post) :D
PLEASE PAMS!! (:

I'm glad you like it :D
I know I know but I promise the next post will be at least 1000 words :D
Kerri xx




Quote:

Originally Posted by MuggleVampire
epp I loved that Chapter


Thank you :D

Kerri xx

spinnersend2 02-10-2010 05:03 PM

Great chapter, I like the different perspectives.

Ron&Hermione(L) 02-10-2010 05:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by spinnersend2 (Post 9100992)
Great chapter, I like the different perspectives.

Thank you :D

KatielovesHP 02-10-2010 07:38 PM

PAMS RIGHT NOW!
PRETTY PLEASE!
Kiddin'
but do post quickly
what do u mean 2 guys?
tell me in chemistry!

spinnersend2 02-11-2010 04:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) (Post 9096546)
Thanks :D
Sorry I had things on my mind (thing I shouldn't be thinking about 2 certain guys in particular if u catch my drifted:@)
I promise next time 1000 words !!

Kerri xx

kerri needs to expand

Ron&Hermione(L) 02-11-2010 04:59 PM

Okay guys I am currently writing the next chapter I'm at 600 words so I'll be done soon :D Keep your eyes open for it :D

Ron&Hermione(L) 02-11-2010 05:27 PM

Okay it's oly 600 words but enjoy!



CHAPTER 9


Ron and Hermione sat in the Gryffindor common room finishing their Potions homework. It had started to get awkward because they had to spend so much time together alone because Draco and Cho had to be in their common rooms by a certain time but, being head boy and girl they could stay up and say they were on patrol.
“Can’t we just go back to our common room?”
“No! If we go back you’ll go to bed! And I’m not finishing this by myself.”
“Please. For me.” Hermione felt her breathing get heavier she didn’t remember getting so close to him but they were both leaning in now. What the hell am I doing I’m with Draco. Ron’s thoughts were similar to Hermione’s. As their lips were about to touch the portrait hole banged closed. They hastily they jumped away from each other. Hermione moved as far away from Ron as she could. She felt ashamed with herself.
“Neville?” Hermione asked hesitantly when she saw the look on his face. He looked a mixture of happiness, surprise and confusion. He looked sort of lost.
“Neville? Neville are you OK?” she asked walking over to him.
“Neville !” she had reached him now and grabbed him by the shoulders.
“Oh, Hermione where did you come from?” Hermione glanced at Ron
“Neville mate? You OK?”
“OK? I’m more than OK. I’m fab!” Hermione had walked back over to Ron as Neville sat on the coach.
“Do you think he’s drunk?”
“No! This is Neville were talking about.”
They both turned to look at him. He was staring back his cheeks still rosy.
“Shekissedme.” He blurted out.
“Say it slower, mate.”
“She. Kissed. Me.” He said in a voice that sounded like he didn’t believe himself.
“Who did?” Hermione asked.
“Uhm..” Neville started having doubts about whether Hayley would want him to tell people
“You know what? I’m going to bed.” He jumped up and skipped to the boy’s dorm. Ron and Hermione stood there feeling the tension again now that Neville had left.
“Hermione ... about what nearly happened before Neville came in...”
“Ron I’m with Draco.” She picked up her books, left the common room and when to the heads dorm. Isn’t this what I wanted? She thought to herself. It was but she felt bad about cheating on Draco.


***


Hayley’s POV
It was like 5:30 on a Saturday morning when I was rudely awoken by Snape. He apparated us to the shrieking shack where he told me the Dark Lord was waiting to discuss my assignment. I hated having to speak to him but I had to put a brave face on, I would have to do this if I wanted to become a death eater.
“In there.” Snape pointed me to the door and stood outside. I smirked at the look on his face, He hated being left out and unaware of what was happening.
“Ah. Hayley, my sweet. I have asked you here tonight to see if you have the information on Potter Yet?”
“No. I haven’t. I’ve only been there for 3 weeks I have to earn his trust first. I mean he’s never away from that girlfriend of his. At least give me until summer.”
“Fine. But if you do not find out Potter’s weaknesses by then, it’s your life as well as his. Leave now!” I turned to leave, my hands were shaking due to his last statement. “Have fun at the Halloween feast tonight it might be your last. “ I walked faster as he laughed at his own little sick joke.



I know its still kinna short but I couldnt think of what else to write so i thought you guys would rather I posted than waited to get an idea :D

KatielovesHP 02-11-2010 05:35 PM

FIRST TO POST
Amazing post! Love it!
I like drunken Neville!!!!!!!!!!
Lovin' it!
PAMS.
You posting more in the long weekend

Ladybug 02-11-2010 05:44 PM

Ohhh good chapter
Ahh Hayley i dislike youuu!!!!
Cant wait for more
xx

bonnieginnyfan1 02-12-2010 06:00 AM

I love Neville in this chappie!

Ron&Hermione(L) 02-12-2010 12:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bonnieginnyfan1 (Post 9105268)
I love Neville in this chappie!

Haha He's a great character to write with:D

Kerri xx

Cassiopia Malfoy 02-12-2010 02:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) (Post 9091682)
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“Ron why doesn’t Cho ever come over to our table?” Hermione asked Ron a hint of amusement in her voice, she loved the fact that she never came over.
“Ehm...” Harry knew the real reason was that Cho didn’t like Hermione.

(I do too) Hehehehehe.. Hermione is just so cool..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) (Post 9096511)

Ok there was no denying it. I had fallen for him and falled hard!

*gasp* :faint: NEVILLE IS AWESOME! She's lucky..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) (Post 9103652)
Hayley’s POV
It was like 5:30 on a Saturday morning when I was rudely awoken by Snape.

How dare you Snape! lol


Woah! I missed three posts, there all awesome btw.. I love em

Ron&Hermione(L) 02-12-2010 06:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy (Post 9105770)
(I do too) Hehehehehe.. Hermione is just so cool..



*gasp* :faint: NEVILLE IS AWESOME! She's lucky..



How dare you Snape! lol


Woah! I missed three posts, there all awesome btw.. I love em



Thank xx

spinnersend2 02-12-2010 07:47 PM

bad girl(s)
 
I'm digging Haley

Kerri has some splainin to do

Ron&Hermione(L) 02-12-2010 07:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by spinnersend2 (Post 9106381)
I'm digging Haley

Kerri has some splainin to do



Do I ? About what, I'm confused :O

spinnersend2 02-12-2010 09:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) (Post 9106408)
Do I ? About what, I'm confused :O


2 boys???

KatielovesHP 02-12-2010 09:49 PM

Spinnersend2 is right.
Explain.
Even I don't know who you mean.
OHHHH.......
I think I got it!

Ron&Hermione(L) 02-13-2010 12:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by spinnersend2 (Post 9106606)
2 boys???



Just to boys from school :L I'm alll Embarassed now haha


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