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Ron&Hermione(L) 06-30-2010 12:11 AM

emilyblack

Thank you so much! I really have to think hard about how Harry saves Ginny because everyone seems to be looking forward to that!

Is anyone looking forward to everyone finding out about Ginny being pregnant :L because that is going to be fun to write :L

Cassiopia Malfoy 06-30-2010 12:34 AM

Sooooo sorry for not reviewing/reading recently!!!!!

OHMIGOSH SHE'S PREGNANT!!!! :faint:

Woowowowowowwo! I love all the plot twists, it's amazing! Again sorry for not r/ring!!! This is an awesome story!

PuppySara 06-30-2010 02:22 AM

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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) (Post 9503585)
Chapter Question: Should Neville be in the Burrow and find out that Hayey works for Voldemort?!


I think he should! Just to see if he really loves her or not.

Ron&Hermione(L) 07-06-2010 03:59 PM

Cassiopia Malfoy:
Don't worry about it you have read it now :D


PuppySara:
I desided to go a different way about it bt i hope its better than expected :P





This chapter was inspired by 30 seconds to mars and their amazing songs :D




Hermione’s POV


Me, Ron and Harry were all in Ron’s room. I was snuggled up with Ron on his bed and Harry was on his camp bed. The boys were talking about a potions paper that I had all ready finished so I just listened on not wanting to get talked into writing Ron’s for him. There was a knock at the Burrow door and then Mrs Weasley came up and told Harry that it was for him. Once he left I turned and faced Ron and we just stared at each other. I moved my head forward and kissed him lightly on the lips. When I pulled away he muttered the most amazing words in the world.
“I love you.” I was speechless I wanted so much to say it back but I couldn’t find my voice.
“You don’t have to say it back. I just wanted you to know how I feel about you. I-” I didn’t let him finish I pulled hiss face to mine and kissed him with as much passion I could.
“I love you too.” He pulled my face back too his and we just kissed passionately until we were interrupted by the bedroom door opening. Harry came in first his face as white as a sheet and behind him was Hayley who was also white and had tears streaming down her face. I sat up and turned and looked at Ron’s face, he looked as confused as I was.
“Harry what’s going on?” He didn’t say anything he just turned and looked expectantly at Hayley who didn’t do anything but look at the floor.
“Fine.” Harry said looking like he was beginning sound like he was losing it. “I’ll tell them.” He took a deep breath calming him and told us everything but I could tell he wasn’t telling us something. Once he had finished talking I asked.
“Harry? What aren’t you telling us? I mean what made Hayley tell you everything.”
“I’m really sorry Hermione but I can’t tell you, not right now anyway. I’m positive that Ginny wants to tell you herself anyway, so this is what I had in mind. Hayley gets me into Malfoy manor and down into the basement where Ginny is being kept, I will be wearing the invisibility cloak. Once I get to her I will give her the cloak and Hayley will get Ginny out and bring her here.”
“Harry, how are you planning on getting out?”
“Well that’s where everyone else comes into play. Once Hayley and I have left alert the order and tell them what has happened.”
“Tell Neville as well.” Hayley whispered, I just glared at her. I had not got over the fact that she had betrayed us. “You know he will want to help. He loves you guys.”
Her face twisted in pain I cold tell it was because soon enough when e fond out Neville would no longer love her.
“Ok well get them. When are you leaving.” Ron asked. I had to hand it to him; he was taking this better than I expected maybe he was saving his anger for the death eaters.
“Now.” Harry said standing p and grabbing his cloak and wand.




So who thinks its going to go as smoothly as planned ?
Chapter Question: When should Neville find out about Hayley ?


Enjoy :D :love:

Ron&Hermione(L) 07-06-2010 04:05 PM

Does anyone know how you remove a poll ? because mine doesn't really apply any more :lol:

hermione23 07-06-2010 04:19 PM

new reader! love the story. awwwwwwww! ron and hermione love each other! that is so cool that harry is going to risk his life to save ginny. he better not let something go wrong, though! PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!

Ron&Hermione(L) 07-06-2010 04:23 PM

hermione23:

Hey ! Love new readers!! Welcome to Love at Last? and Welcome to SS. I'm glad you like my story :d I'll have more for you soon :D :love:

Bookworm 07-06-2010 08:48 PM

Oh my...:gasp:
Ron and Hermione and...and....THE three words!How adorable!:loved:
And unexpected!But I'm really,really happy to read about that.
Although...poor Harry.I feel so bad for him.I hope that they'll rescue Ginny quickly.
P.S.I love Hermione's POV.:)

Ron&Hermione(L) 07-06-2010 09:07 PM

Bookworm:
Ha i love your reaction to 'THE three words!' I know it was kinna random but its good to be Spontaneous :P
Her POV is strangly hard to write :P but i got there in the end :love:

Emileyn 07-06-2010 09:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) (Post 9527417)
When I pulled away he muttered the most amazing words in the world.
“I love you.” I was speechless I wanted so much to say it back but I couldn’t find my voice.

Awe, that's so sweet :)
Quote:

So who thinks its going to go as smoothly as planned ?
I don't think it's going to go that smoothly.
Quote:

Chapter Question: When should Neville find out about Hayley ?
After they save Ginny, I'd say...
Unfortunately, I don't know how to remove the poll thing. Sorry.
Great post! PLEASE PAMS! :)

KatielovesHP 07-06-2010 09:27 PM

I have no clue how to remove a poll Kerri but I know how to love your story!!! I can't believe you didn't tell me you posted but I guess it's my fault for not being o for days. Anyways this was fabulous.

YES.... Neville should be at the Burrow and Hayley says 'I don't want to see him' so she wears the invisibility cloak but then clumsily bumps into him as she turns into the kitchen or something and he finds out because ron is still too furious to keep it bottled up and neville is told by him. Then she starts pleading for him to not hate her because she has never loved a boy so much before. Then he says coldly 'I'm coming to help Ginny, but not you.'

Then they obviously have to get back together but you can do that part.:D

SORRY, YOUR STORY- JUST A SUGGESTION. PLAY WITH IT IF YOU WANT.:D

Morag 07-06-2010 09:50 PM

Hey Dear. Hope your enjoying the holidays. Yeah I don't think it's going to go smothly. Harry had it just a bit too planned and Kerri you didn't get nominated for best plot twist for nothing. I think there will be a big twist. Your full of surprizes!
PAMS!
S x

Bookworm 07-06-2010 09:53 PM

:head:
I forgot to say!:head: :head: :head:
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!
Is it too much?:lmao:
I can't help myself.:xd:
PAMS!

Cassiopia Malfoy 07-07-2010 01:13 AM

:cries: Eh, I'm not Ron/Mione fan :P (but I'll live, I swears, it's still semi-nice to read)

Aaaanyways!! P-p-p-poor Hayley! (Is anyone else suddenly thinking of Poker face?!) Aaaanyways, I want to hugs Hayley! Poor her,

I love the story! But there's going to be a lot of trouble.. Soonish.. Lol!

Looooooove it!
PAAAAAAAMS PAAAAAMS! :D

Gabbeh

KatielovesHP 07-07-2010 12:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy (Post 9529203)
:cries: Eh, I'm not Ron/Mione fan :P (but I'll live, I swears, it's still semi-nice to read)

Traitor!!!!! Kidding:lol:

Quote:

Aaaanyways!! P-p-p-poor Hayley! (Is anyone else suddenly thinking of Poker face?!) Aaaanyways, I want to hugs Hayley! Poor her,


Gabbeh
I thought of pokerface:D:lol: (8)

hermione23 07-07-2010 04:36 PM

well, here i am at my grandmother's house. i couldn't help but check for a new post. i luv this story so much! please, please, please, pa-leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post more soon! i really, really wanna know how they save ginny. as 4 the neville/hayley thing, i think she should tell him but neville loves her anyway 'cause, well, you know, HE LOVES HER! all this waiting 4 a new post makes me angry. anyway, PAMS!

Ron&Hermione(L) 07-07-2010 06:17 PM

Hey Guy I just want to thank all of you who nominated me for best plot twist and best romance fic. i would love it if you voted for me :D and thanks again :D

Ron&Hermione(L) 07-07-2010 06:21 PM

emilyblack:
there will be more soon :D

KatielovesHP:
Thats a great idea but iv thought of something different :D and thank you :D

Morag :
Thanks :D i just hope it lives up to expectations

Bookworm:
when it comes to me theres never too much :lol:

Ron&Hermione(L) 07-07-2010 06:23 PM

Cassiopia Malfoy:
:lol: i did think of poker face :P
thanks so much :D more soon

hermione23 :
sorry none yet but i promise there will be more soon :D

crookshanks_kitty 07-08-2010 07:18 PM

I really like this story! Keep up the good work. :D PAMS

Ron&Hermione(L) 07-08-2010 08:20 PM

crookshanks_kitty

Thank you :D There will be more soon :D

Lily<33 07-11-2010 08:31 PM

lOve it XD PAMS

Ron&Hermione(L) 07-12-2010 06:57 PM

SarahLestrange:
Thankyou :D


Hey Guys :D There will be more either tonight or tomorow :D

Bookworm 07-12-2010 10:06 PM

Yes!:woot:
I can't wait!:woot:

Ron&Hermione(L) 07-13-2010 08:37 PM

Hey :D New Post :D
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Ginny POV

dizzy but I didn't care I just wanted to know if my baby was ok. At that moment the door opened and Hayley walked in and closed the door behind her locked it and casted the Muffliato spell. What was she up to? My silent question was answered when Harry appeared in the room from under his invisibility cloak.
“Harry?” He didn’t say anything he just walked over to me and pulled me into a hug gripping onto me so tightly I could hardly breathe but I didn’t care I was just so glad to see him. I hadn’t noticed I had started crying until Harry pulled away and wiped the tears away.
“It’s ok I’m here now, your going to be ok.” He said soothingly. At that moment there was a loud bang and people yelling.
“The order is here.” Hayley stated.
“Ginny I want you to listen to me carefully you and Hayley are going to get out of here and I want you to go straight to St Mungo’s to get checked over ok? Get under the cloak.”
“Harry I’m not leaving you.” I said the tears starting again. He didn’t listen to me though he just picked up the cloak and rapped it around my shoulders.
“Gin, I’ll be fine. I love you.” He said and kissed me.
“I love you too.” He turned to Hayley and said:
“Take care of her. Please.” Hayley nodded. We made our way up the stairs and into the entrance hall of the manor where there was people duelling every where. Hermione came running up to us and whispered to Hayley.
“Is she here?” Hayley nodded again but at that moment there was a massive explosion. I was throne forward and landed a few feet away. I tried to get up but there was something trapping me, the cloak had fallen off me and was lying just out of my reach. My hand immediately went to the slight bump on my stomach. I heard people shouting my name but it sounded as though I was in a tunnel and they were shouting from the other end, I was beginning to feel dizzy again and then everything went dark.



Chapter Question: How should the Weasley’s react to Ginny’s pregnancy?



Enjoy :D:love:


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