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Ron&Hermione(L) 04-29-2010 08:46 PM

Hey everyone :D New Post :D this post is going to be Harry’s POV of the last chapter events so it starts when Hermione and Ginny leave the compartment to talk. If any one is confused just tell me and ill do my best to explain what you don’t get :D


Harry POV

We were all sitting in the compartment and Ginny was snuggled into my side. Ron and I were having a discussion about which day I should go and stay at Ron’s when I felt Ginny go rigged next to me. I was about to ask what was wrong when Hermione bet me to it.
“Ginny?” I saw panic flash in Ginny’s eyes and the relief when she asked to speak to her.
“Wonder what’s up.” Ron said “Anyway why don’t you come on Boxing Day?” We spoke about this a bit longer until but then the subject changed when Hayley and Neville, Who had been snogging in the corner, got up and left when Hayley couldn’t stop giggling.
“Did you notice how weird Ginny was acting?” I asked Ron.
“Never mind that. I think the real question is how did Neville get her?”
“Ron you always ask that question.” I stated rolling my eyes. “So, how are you and Hermione doing?”
“Yeah were ok. I’ll admit a little awkward after all the cheating and her dating Malfoy and everything but were getting there.” He said smiling. “What about you and Ginny? You better be treating my sister right.” Wow this was so not the conversation I wanted to have. Just as I was about to answer God answered my prayers and sent me a distraction. Neville and Hayley came stumbling back into the compartment both of them now giggling and were closely followed by Ginny and Hermione. Ginny came and snuggled back into my side and I wrapped my hands around her waist. I started to feel sad when we reached London because I wouldn’t see Ginny in about a week. I watched her as she went and whispered something to Hermione how then got a concerned look on her face. She came over and kissed mah and told me she loved me and walked over and waited for Hayley and Neville to stop snogging. I saw Uncle Vernon waiting for me so I left and got into his car and braced myself for a full week of the Dursleys.





Sorry I know its short but I hope you like it :D

Comment please and give advise if you have any :D

KatielovesHP 04-29-2010 08:52 PM

This is so good, wasn't expecting Harry's POV Kerri. :P
lol
I enjoyed this. Alot.
Hopefully next post will be longer.
Maybe you should do Hayley's POV next? That is my advice!

Emileyn 04-30-2010 01:27 AM

Great chappie! So, why exactly did the Dursley's want Harry home for the holidays??? I'm really curious....
Great post! PLEASE PAMS :)

Cassiopia Malfoy 04-30-2010 01:39 AM

Aaaand then Vernon Dursley takes a gun to Harry's head when he's sound asleep, Harry dies. Ginny reducto's Voldemort into oblivion then runs off with Blaise the end! j/k

Sorry. That's what I thought of, bad bad bad me! Your story is sooooo much better then that! I love it... Hahaha! Hayley and Neville snoggin was really funny!

Ladybug 04-30-2010 02:52 PM

Ohhh good chapter
Hmmm...Harry knows Ginny so wel he knows something is wrong..
Cant wait for more
x

Ron&Hermione(L) 04-30-2010 05:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by emilyblack (Post 9306794)
Great chappie! So, why exactly did the Dursley's want Harry home for the holidays??? I'm really curious....
Great post! PLEASE PAMS :)

Hmm you'll just have to wait and see :L



Quote:

Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy
Aaaand then Vernon Dursley takes a gun to Harry's head when he's sound asleep, Harry dies. Ginny reducto's Voldemort into oblivion then runs off with Blaise the end! j/k

Sorry. That's what I thought of, bad bad bad me! Your story is sooooo much better then that! I love it... Hahaha! Hayley and Neville snoggin was really funny!




Haha great idea :P
Thank you :D
Hehe i laughed when i wrote it :P


Quote:

Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e
<3 Ohhh good chapter
Hmmm...Harry knows Ginny so wel he knows something is wrong..
Cant wait for more
x

:D There will be more soon :D

bonnieginnyfan1 05-02-2010 04:12 AM

Oh. It's so cute how Harry will miss Ginny while he as at one week with the Dursleys!
PAMS! :D

Morag 05-03-2010 08:48 PM

Pams Pams Pams !
Post quicker ! :D
I love the stort so far. I hope nothing bad happens to Ginny. And poor Harry, a full week with the Dursleys! Poor boy.
Sophie x

KatielovesHP 05-05-2010 08:34 PM

Kerri where are you?
I need more story now! PLEASE :P
See you in Chemistry tomorrow!!!!!!!!

PuppySara 05-05-2010 09:49 PM

Hey I'm a new reader and I really love the story keep writing!

Ron&Hermione(L) 05-10-2010 06:48 PM

Hi PuppySara welcome to Love at Last ?
Um sooo the big one is hear!! Well kind of :P the beginning of it. Anyhoo Enjoy :D



Hayley’s POV

God could this man make me feel any worse? Because I knew I was about to break Neville’s heart soon I decided never to leave his side until it was time. We were in the train compartment kissing and when we weren’t kissing I was giggling, but only to stop the tears from coming. The plan was in full swing there was nothing to do now but wait. I went over it in my head when I could. Thank god I could apparate (people working for the dark lord get privileges) her to the manor. So basically the full train ride was just kissing, giggling and thinking, lots of thinking.
My breathing picked up when the train slowly came to a stop. Oh crap! As I got off the train Malfoy caught my eye. He tapped his watch and gave me a knowing look.
When everyone started to go there separate ways I kissed Neville with as much passion I could. I knew this would be the last time when her found out what I was about to do. Oh crap I thought as my eyes watered as I watched him walk out of the station. Suck it up . I thought and turned to Ginny
“So Ginny shall we leave. Their expecting us.” My words were laced with double meaning. She nodded.
We walked out the door and into the street. I walked straight to the deserted part of the street and Ginny followed. Then I stopped. Breathing heavily, shaking and crying I grabbed onto Ginny’s wrist and then apparated.
We were in a dark room lit by candles and a fire. We were in the living room of Malfoy Manor. I couldn’t look a Ginny as I dropped her arm and stood back as Nott and Dolohov came forward and grabbed her upper arms and pushed her forward.
“Ah Miss Weasley. How nice of you to join us.”

KatielovesHP 05-10-2010 08:11 PM

I loved this (short) post Kerri.
Gin must be so scared!!! :(
PAMS PAMS

Emileyn 05-10-2010 09:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) (Post 9342981)
Because I knew I was about to break Neville’s heart soon I decided never to leave his side until it was time. We were in the train compartment kissing and when we weren’t kissing I was giggling, but only to stop the tears from coming.

Then don't do it, Haley!!!!!
Quote:

We were in the living room of Malfoy Manor. I couldn’t look a Ginny as I dropped her arm and stood back as Nott and Dolohov came forward and grabbed her upper arms and pushed her forward.
“Ah Miss Weasley. How nice of you to join us.”
Merlin's beard(;)), this is not good. I really hope Hermione tells everyone pretty quickly and Harry comes to the rescue! :)

Morag 05-11-2010 07:11 PM

Love it Kerri. But we need MORE!
PAMS PAMS PAMS !
s X

Connie 05-14-2010 04:44 AM

Kerrie, sorry I haven't been here in a bit. I have been keeping up though. I feel badly for Haley, but it just seems like there was something she could have done. I wish Ginny would have told Harry about her feeling the warning in her hands. Great post Kerrie. I hope Ginny will be alright. I'll be watching for your next post.

bonnieginnyfan1 05-14-2010 10:42 AM

PAMS!!!!!!!! :loved: it!

Ga.b. 05-14-2010 11:08 AM

Wooooow!

Ron&Hermione(L) 05-18-2010 04:43 PM

Hey Guys I'm kind of in two minds for this story so i thought i would sort of steal Emily's idea (sorry :P ) and get you guys to pick :D so pick either


1 or 2

Emileyn 05-18-2010 05:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) (Post 9366969)
so i thought i would sort of steal Emily's idea (sorry :P )

Hehehe, it's a good idea... unless you get a tie in the end, which was what happened with me... ;)
I choose 2 :)

KatielovesHP 05-18-2010 07:04 PM

I choose number one!!!

Cassiopia Malfoy 05-19-2010 01:39 AM

Two (because I have one sister and one friend which I wish was my sister, so that makes two! Yea, that has nothing to do with the question, but I had to have something affect my mind!)

Bookworm 05-19-2010 08:15 PM

You didn't say that you write fan-fictions!
This is awesome!I haven't read all yet,but I will read it soon!
It's great!
EDIT:Ok,I've read all!It's perfect!
PAMS!!!
And I pick 1.

Connie 05-25-2010 04:50 AM

I'll pick 2 to break the tie. Now, I hope you can post soon. :)

Lily<33 05-26-2010 06:49 AM

heY KatielovesHP told me about thus FF and I LOVE IT!!! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!

Morag 05-27-2010 11:38 AM

Hey Kerri. I allready told you what number I picked... I can't remember so...Well I think it was 1. Yeah it was one. Posts faster though. Can't wait to find out what happens!
S x


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