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LonelyLupin 04-27-2007 09:08 PM

LonelyLupin's Character Poems - Sa13+
 
Right, in this thread I shall post poems about varoius different characters in Harry Potter. Suggestions welcomed. I'll start with my fravourite character:
Remus Lupin.

Moony's Moon (Another Day)

In the moonlight,
At the dead of night.
He stands alone,
Without a soul in sight.
Waiting for the time that'll surely come,
The time when his self-conciousness will be gone.

He'll never know why,
It had to happen tonight.
He'll never see that even though tonight he's in pain,
Tomorrow is still another day.

And even though sometimes life didn't quite make sense,
Even though tonight he won't be the same.
He'll be able to forget the life he has,
Seeing as tomorrow is another day.

Turning and twisting into his new form,
His friends have to stay far away.
But always knowing,
And always seeing.

That tomorrow he'll see them again,
Because tomorrow is another day.

Hope you like it and improvements are welcomed!!!:twins2:

Trio1237 05-13-2007 11:25 AM

That was really good! *Clap clap*

LonelyLupin 05-26-2007 01:01 AM

Yay! I wasn't quite sure what people might think...

PhoenixSeeker 06-02-2007 12:28 AM

I liked it. You should post more! :)

~*ambora*~ 07-31-2007 02:08 AM

That was amazing!!

LonelyLupin 08-03-2007 11:10 PM

Thanks! I'll see if I can think up some more. *think, think!*

Zoe 02-17-2008 07:43 PM

*Helps you think*

I really like your stuff. :yes: PAMS!

LizzieEvans 08-09-2008 07:23 PM

That way great, with "tomorrow is another day" again and again, I felt like it was meant to be a song or something, but anyway, it was very good. Happy if you want to post more :D You write in kind of the same style as me, and it's always nice to read other poems that are kind of same style. Anyway, I hope you understand what I'm try to say, since I seem to be hopeless giving compliments, I know.. hehe


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