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12-18-2006, 01:54 AM
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#176 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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DRACO! YA RETARD!! WHAT DID YOU THINK SHE WAS GOING TO DO WHEN YOU DIDN'T RESPOND?
God.
Stupid.
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12-18-2006, 02:43 AM
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#177 (permalink)
| DA News Officer Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Just being me!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth |
Draco...she just doesn't know about us...they don't know nothing 'bout us...la la la./...great post! PAMS!
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12-18-2006, 02:58 AM
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#178 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
Posts: 995
| ahaha ^^ Brooke Hogan! woo! lol thanks guys! you all have the same response thanks again *Danielle* |
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12-18-2006, 06:15 AM
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#179 (permalink)
| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| DRACO IS AN IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!! For now. But that was just retarded. PAMS!
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12-24-2006, 03:10 AM
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#180 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
Posts: 995
| lol thanks guys!! i just wrote a new chapter and a half last night, and im telling you, only three more posts and then the end i planned it all last night! thanks for being so great and expect a post after christmas! happy holidays!! *Danielle* |
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12-29-2006, 06:42 PM
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#181 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
Posts: 995
| new post!: Chapter 23: Icebox - Omarion* Everything was a blur after that. I told Harry and Ron what happened with Draco and I begun to hang out with those two again. Draco and I didn't really say much to each other either. He had tried to explain himself on a few occasions, but I definitley didn't want to hear it. Besides, I know what happened. I let myself go. I was living the fantasy I had always read about when I was six. Only it had crashed and blew up in flames. And finally, the day came that I had feared most - graduation. It was the day where Draco and I, as both Head Boy and Girl, had to give our speech to the school. Together. I slipped on my dress, a short silky black one that my mother sent. I slowly slipped on my heels, while playing today's events in my mind, knowing what feelings I would experience. I was nervous by happy that I will be finishing my schooling at last. And...I was sad that this is how I am finishing it all. There was a knock on my door. I went over and opened it, half-expecting who it was. "Uh. Hi. Are you....you know.....ready?" It was Draco. "Yeah." I grabbed my robes and walked out with Draco. **** "And now, we end out ceremony with a speech by our Head Girl and Boy," Professor McGonnagall introduced us. I quickly looked over at Draco. He showed no emotion. "Thank you, Professor," Draco spoke. "Being seventeen isn't a cup of tea. It's one of the hardest ages you can go through in your life. But it's what we go through that makes it so great. SPending seven years at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry is a privelege. You meet people and learn things that you possibly can't get from anywhere else." Now I pick it up. "My schooling at Hogwarts has been memorable. From starting at first year, I was unsure and awkward. And meeting that troll didn't make it easier. "But by second year I was glad ot be back. Although the school ran into some danger signs and speed bumps, it became safe again and the situation was handeled with special thanks to my close friends." I smiled at the memory. "Third year was when it got harder. People were getting older and it became new again. The dementors were at Hogwarts at the current time, and like Dumbledore advised-" I took a deep breath at his name, "We got through it with happiness and brighter times. Third year was a turning point where got to experience new trips to Hogsmeade on the weekend and choose new classes. "Fourth year was a big one. I get a headache just thinking of it. Hogwarts got to host the Triwizard Tournament and share its home with Durmastrang and Beauxbatons neighboring wizard schools. Harry Potter, Cedric Diggory, Fleur DeLacour, and Viktor Krum competed in three competitive rounds to win the cup. Although we lost our champion, Cedric Diggory rest in peace, Hogwarts pulled out on top with a win from Harry Potter. It's an unfogettable memory for all of us. "Fifth year was when rumours started. It was floating around that Voldemort was back and people didn't know and didn't like what to believe. The Ministry sent Dolores Umbridge to teach at the school, and from a student's point of view, that was a stupid choice. Many students began to choose their career paths and OWLs came around. It was difficult. "Sixth year was most devestating and harder. We were practicing our Apparaition and got the blessing of Professor Slughorn teaching Potions. A war broke out in Hogwarts and we lost the best headmaster to grace his presence at this school...Professor Dumbledore." Tears started to fall, and it was Draco's turn to speak. "Seventh year began and ended quicker then any year I've had at my stay at Hogwarts. The people I've met, befriended, and even dated have changed my life. I've learned more about myself and know what kind of person I was capable of being. I wish I could go back in time and change a few things but it wouldn't be right. What's in the past is gone now and all we have now is the future. We, the graduating class, have just begun another chapter of our lives." Draco stepped back to signal he was finished. The hall exploded into applause and I broke down. Draco let a hand on my arm but I turned around. I raced off the stage with tears flooding down my face. What Draco said was right. You can't change the past. I've got an icebox where my heart used to be. I've got an icebox where my heart used to be. I'm so cold I'm so cold I'm so cold oooh. Why can't I get it right, just can't let it go. |
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12-29-2006, 08:08 PM
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#182 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Oooooooooooh. Poor Hermy...she should just forgive him, eesh.
Love
Adrienne
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12-30-2006, 12:36 AM
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#183 (permalink)
| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| BEAUTIFUL SPEECH! So beautiful *claps* PAMS!
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01-01-2007, 01:46 AM
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#184 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: u.s.a.
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Loved it, sad that this fic is ending but I'm on my way read your new one. I haven't been on in about a month so kudos to you on all the posts I read to catch up they were brilliant can't wait for more!
~Toni
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01-18-2007, 04:32 PM
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#185 (permalink)
| Banned Gnome
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: *eating green M&Ms* i love these things...
Posts: 351
| !!!!!! NO! That was the end? That was soo sad. I would be crying right now if I wasn't in school! (not supposed to be on here..shh..don't tell) anyway, that was fantastically brilliant and loved every word!!! Great Job! |
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01-19-2007, 02:40 AM
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#186 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
Posts: 995
| hey guys! thank you!!! yes this fic is coming fast at an end (this is the 2nd to last post), but mrs. potter, this fic hasnt ended yet!! here's the next post: Chapter 24: Promise - Ciara I stepped into the bookshop. I hadn't been in here since the summer of seventh year. Wow the memories. I walked off to search for the book I wanted. Same old cruddy books. Never better, never worse. My fingers landed on a thicker book, Cruel Potions for the Dark Minds. Just the one I was looking for. I flipped through the pages of the book but my bangs kept getting in the way. Stupid hair.. "Delaney, hurry will you!? Lunch is in an hour," a familiar voice called. No..it can't be. "Sure thing!" a smaller voice answered. Dear Lord, no! And I soon found out. "Draco?" I spun around. I was right. And she was a vision. "That'd be me," I said. "Wow! What's it been? 7 years?" she asked. "Yeah 7 years would be it." She was much more gorgeous since I had last laid my sad eyes on her. I got this pain in my heart. I wonder if it was because she was so unmistakingly beautiful or because I had let her go like that. But all I knew was that I'd never forgive myself for losing her. "That's a long time," she sighed. I sighed too. Maybe it's been too long. "Listen. I'm about to drop off my friend's daughter with her father at the Leaky Cauldron. D'you want to get an ice cream at Flortescue's?" I grinned. "Okay." We agreed to meet in fifteen minutes and I paid for my book and walked down to the shop. Fifteen minutes later and we were eating ice cream at a tiny table in front of the shop. "So how's things been going?" I asked, breaking the silence. She sighed. "It's been going. You?" "Been having some changed, but for the best." "Oh? How so, if you don't mind me asking.." She was always nosy back in school. So she hasn't changed. "Mum died three months ago. Just sold my flat and I'm moving back into our mansion. Father's still in prison and he's trying to get me to do some of his 'deeds' for him. I haven't really got back to him on that." "Oh. Sorry bout your mum," she apologized. Her hand laid on mine and memories flooded back. Luckily, she realized what she was doing and moved her hand before I literally pounced on her. "Don't worry about it. She wasn't what I'd call a mother anyway," I shrugged. That was the honest truth. "So are you seeing anyone?" That was the question we were both trying to avoid. "I've been dating this guy named Brenneck for seven months now. That was his daughter I had with me," she swallowed. It was an uncomfortable answer. For the both of us. "And you? But the answer is always obvious.." she smirked. "Haha, not always. I was seeing this one girl, Harmony, for three months. She had to move last month to Australia for a job transfer." "Wow you've got a lot going not so great. You've been okay?" She sounded worried. "Oh, yeah. Just fine," I lied. There was an uncomfortable silence. "You know I still think about you Draco. About us. I know we could've lasted up until this day..But I've been telling myself all these years that fate didn't have it destined for us and we followed different paths." She was interrupted by a ringing cell phone. "Crap. I have to go. But Draco, I will never ever be as happy as I was with you with anyone else." She picked up her purse and walked down the cobblestone road. And little did Hermione know, those words crushed me like a rock. Thinkin about you dreamin about you got me goin crazy. What you wanna do, do, do now it's me and you, you, you make a move. The mood is so right It feels so right. You can be my prince, my knight. You can be my superman, save me here I am.
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01-19-2007, 01:28 PM
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#187 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Very nice!! i loooooooooooved the post, and I'm glad Draco and Hermione weren't totally mad at each other. Will this be a happy or sad ending?
Love
Adrienne
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01-20-2007, 05:42 AM
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#188 (permalink)
| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| Aww, Draco. Stupid life and paths. PAMS!!
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02-07-2007, 02:36 AM
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#189 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| i want to thank all my readers who have supported this fic from the beginning, and the fans that hopped in on the joy ride throughout the story. you really kept me motivated and wanting the post! here is the final post, and i want to thank you so much for allowing me to finish this story...(my 2nd finished one!)...here you go!: Chapter 24: Hurt - Christina Aguilera It's been two years since we had ice cream at Flortescue's/ Delaney was just about to start for her 3rd year and Dawn turned one recently. I've been having dreams of him lateley. We'd be getting married or playing with our children or just lounging on the couch with my head in his lap. And other times, my dreams would go back to memories of us in seventh year. I hated it. "Morning darling," Brenneck mumbed and rolled over to kiss me on my forehead. No response from me. "S'pose I should start the coffee then.." He climbed out of the bed and waddled out of the room. Now I rolled out of ther bed too and padded into the bathroom. I sank down into my cushioned chair infront of the larg mirror. I took one look at myself, and the tears started to fall. "Mum?" Delaney was standing in the doorway. "Are you okay?" "Come here, honey...But close the door behind you." Delaney shut the door and sat on the floor in front of me. "Mum, what's the matter? Is it Dad?" Delaney was worried. "No, no. Brenneck's just fine. No. Let me tell you a little history about myself.." Delaney nodded. "When I was in my seventh year at Hogwarts I fell for this boy. Now this boy and I had been enemies from the moment I first got to the school! But when we were named Head Boy and Girl, something had changed. We dated the whole term - and we were inseprable. Right up until a few months before graduation, I had told him that I loved him - but he didn't love me. Well, he didn't answer me anyway. After that we never spole again until seven years later, two years ago, when I met him at Flourish and Blott's. The day I took you shopping for your books. We talked for awhile and I realized how much I missed him..and loved him. REcently, I've been having dreams of him. Dreams of old times we had shared together and how our lives could have ended up. It's been really getting to me and it tears me apart, Dal." I broke down again. "Mum, mum. It's okay. Why don't you call him? Meet up again..It might do some good," Delaney consoled. "I'm afraid I'll get attached again," I weeped. There was a knock at the door. "Sweetie? There's a bloke on the phone for you..Says he's got some news..," Brenneck's voice said through the door. "Mum's on the loo, Dad! Here. I'll take the phone to her," Delaney called and she cracked the door open enough to take the phone from Brenneck. I mouthed a thank you to her and took the phone from her hands. "Hello?" I said into the reciever. "Hermione Granger? It's..been a long time. In fact, I can't even remember the last time I even said a word to you.." "Erm, this is she." "Yeah, this is Blaise Zabini..From school ages ago? I've called to bring some..rather bad news." Blaise Zabini? Wow..This is..rare. "News? Of what sort? You're making me worry.." Delaney's eyes got big. "See..Hermione, Draco Malfoy....he past away..Or rather, he was found dead." The phone fell from my hand. My mind blanked and I couldn't move. From my perpherial vision, I could see Delaney rush to pick up the phone. "Mum...Mum..MUM!" Delaney was shaking my arm. "He is not..dead." "Mum, Mr. Zabini said that they found him dead a few yards away from his home. He says his father killed him with the Killing Curse and then killed himself. He says that Draco had a letter in his hand and it was...it was addressed to you..Mr. Zabini says he's willing to read it to you, if you'd come to the phone." Soundlessly, Delaney handed me the phone, and shakily, I put it back to my ear. "I'm..here.." "Right..Erm, the letter says: Dearest Hermione, I think my father is on my tail. We had had a horrible fight and there is a sick feeling in my stomach...I wanted to tell you this in case of something bad happening to me...What you had said to me nine years ago, has never left my mind since. Mostly because that I never got to tell you how I truly felt...I am really naieve about now I am really finding my feelings for you. I love you, Hermione J. Granger. And I will always. You are now married, and unfortunatley, this is the best I can do with my feelings at this point. I do not wish to cause turmoil within your personal life, but like I had said, I needed to get this out before possible future events. Best of luck, Draco.. And that's it...There will be a service next Saturday..I hope you can attend." And click went the line. I'm sorry for..blamin you for everything I just couldn't do and I hurt myself by hurtin you..If I had just one more day, I would tell you how much I've missed you since you been awayyy...Oh, it's dangerous..It's so out of line to try and turn back time.. The end. |
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02-07-2007, 03:15 AM
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#190 (permalink)
| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| HOLY CRAP, IT WAS SO GOOD. I can't believe it's over Danikins. Waaaaaa I'm actually REALLY sad. Like I'm like not smiling, hahaha. Thta was an awesome fic. Love,
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02-07-2007, 09:50 PM
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#191 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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OOOOOOOOOOH
I can't believe it ended!!!
It was amazing....great post...I can't believe he's dead.
*tears*
love
Adrienne
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02-08-2007, 03:40 AM
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#192 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: somewhere in the USA
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that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! so sad. i loved the ending. the song fit perfectly. thanks for postin this great fic!
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