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03-14-2006, 04:32 PM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
Posts: 13,488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ Quote:
wow! Tina, right?... the Riddle Queen Tina, im so glad I got a queen who had read my poems .. my poems are all descriptive thank you so much ...
Awww! Welcomes! My pleasure!  Yes, Thank you and please keep them coming! You're very talented!
Lots of Love,
~RQT
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |
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03-14-2006, 04:52 PM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Hogwarts, UK
Posts: 82
Hogwarts RPG Name: Emma |
i know i havent been around too much, but i just had a look at your poetry and i love it! yay for lala, love from emma xxxxx
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You can't spell Hermione without Ron
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03-16-2006, 10:56 PM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: avvy by linda hagrid
Posts: 3,446
Hogwarts RPG Name: melany Second |
ok, ive read all the poems and i think theyre great. post more as soon as youcan
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03-21-2006, 10:18 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
| ♥ Poet Extraordinaire ♥
hi lala!! i just read your poems... they're pretty cool... post more when you can!
*loves on you*
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04-03-2006, 11:11 PM
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|  Luna and Neville = OTP LV's Missing Nose Puffskein
Join Date: May 2004 Location: Manila
Posts: 1,794
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She woke up one fine morning
for just an ordinary day
She ran downstairs, still yawning
then someone took her breath away
He looked up and said hello
Her heartbeat took a big fall
Truth is she liked this fellow
No one knew, his smile jolts her all
That instant turned her stone cold
Tingling clout by such behold
Upstairs she ran flabbergasted
Tried to hide, much like a wanted
Behind a door stood ajar
she waited to catch those green eyes
He came and caught her afar
Those of her brown, she hoped are nice.
What is that fondness she had?
On him she had a big crush?
Well, one thing for sure is that
Ginny does have a lovely blush…
This is lovely! Quote:
Mayhem occurred, now im in big trouble
Wish i could just vanish like a bubble
I slept all night, stuck and feeling so bored
Im rescued by Weasleys flying their Ford…
And this is quite funny...who said your poems are "not-so-good"? Keep it up, you have a great eye for detail. |
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04-09-2006, 03:38 PM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 12,692
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im so sorry, I know im so LATE, but circumstances made me,
I shouldn't make any promise from now on :arg:
this is the only first poem that I promised
the second one will be on Tuesday night
here is something that is when the troubles at school started...
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Mr. Lockhart thought so wrong about me
I wanted to be normal, just Harry
But then something strange is happening here
I’m hearing voices no one else can hear
I tried to follow where it’s coming from
then I’m up to such an unlikely scene
Now wishing that I’m not this meddlesome
Too late! In this place of crime, I’ve been seen
That writing on the wall, I know nothing
And I want no harm to Mrs. Norris
Though a lot thinks these are all my doing
I don’t care; other things give me worries
Yet there it is furthermore, striking back
boy Colin Creevey was found petrified
Once more I get to blame for this attack
We students now need precaution and guide
So a Dueling Club is up for tonight
I gladly joined, expecting a good fight
Even if the drills seem a bit, not right
I’ve beaten Draco, now this is my night
Yet there’s that snake which halted my pleasure
Its fangs’ poised and seems ready to strike
I simply provided my own measure
Luckily it understood me more-like
What just happened, somehow changed everything
They are staring like there’s a weird-something
All I did was to help; I’m not playing
In low voices, they all started talking
“Move – come on”, Ron said while he steered me out
What’s bad about me being Parselmouth?
There’s nothing wrong; I just rescued Justin
Surely I’m not the Heir of Slytherin…
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tomorrow is such a big day for me, it'll mean everything 
anyway, another one is due Tue. night |
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04-25-2006, 01:00 AM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 12,692
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As I write this.. its Tue morning, yikes.. this is so late 
________________________________________________ I just spilled some ink
All that was lost in a wink
Stared for a moment,
coz I’m with astonishment
I wrote down something
not sure of what I’m doing
I’m shocked, you wrote back
I was then taken aback My name is Ginny
you replied hello to me
This is amazing…
You Tom, I started liking
I’m writing to you
but I’m not sure if you’re true
Yet still here you are
always present and not far
Nice and a good friend
each time ready to listen
I poured everything
my dear Potter including
All I can say now
is that you’re sweet, I go Wow
I hold you dearly!
Tom M. Riddle’s diary…
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Okay.. one more to go before going to book three… I wonder what im going to write about.. when will I post it? I don’t really know :arg: thanks so much to you all Emma, thanks so much  Im so glad I met yah here  cutestar thanks for reading my uhm poems  I’ve seen you there too Tina... really? No im not… its like a poetry of a nine year old, and im so not nine years old  thanks so much Tina emma!!!! you’ve read them?!  im embarrassed  I love you so much, thanks for reading * hugs*  hibbah!! Im glad you did..
Lai!  were doing the same hobby  .. thanks for reading! * smooches yah madly*
Jen! I said so coz they’re elementary poems  OMG thanks for reading them… you made me so happy
I cant thank you enough guys.. I’ve been away in this thread :arg: Im so loving all of yah… |
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04-26-2006, 10:28 AM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
Posts: 13,488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ Quote:
Tina... really? No im not… its like a poetry of a nine year old, and im so not nine years old thanks so much Tina
Nah...I <3 it so much! YOu rawk! I'd kill to be able to write like that!
Hehe, I loved the COS one sooooooooooo much! The Ginny one was a bit cute as well! Mwaha, I'm officially stalking this thread
<333333333333 *Luffs*
~~RQT
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |
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04-28-2006, 09:15 PM
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| My name's not JoMessy Hair FanRadio Artist Demiguise
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: FRIDGE'S FRIDGE
Posts: 24,344
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Originally Posted by lala_favehp Emma, thanks so much  Im so glad I met yah here  Aww! I'm so glad I met you here too. I'm so glad I found your poems to read! They're awesome! I like both the poems very much! Maybe, the second one more because there's Ginny! Anyway, update more! ♥♥♥ |
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04-29-2006, 04:41 AM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 12,692
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back to pentameters.. I admit im getting tired of this
This one ... i'll let you decide who do you think the speaker in this one should be... its between Ron and harry... hope you'll like it
__________________________________________________ _______________ Anticipated game was put aside
and the reason why made my eyes go wide
I didnt expect such unpleasant sight
Your body, hands and face were all cold white
Seeing you like that gives me no delight
Everything changed, everything is not right
Immense anger made me squeeze my fist tight
When someone dear to you is petrified...
It would felt like something inside you, died
Leaving you in a gloomy lonely night
Started imagining im in a fight
im battling hard for you with all my might
In reality im standing beside
Longing and hoping soon you'll be alright
Looking devastated as my heart cried...
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im imagining it was Ron Tina and Emma!!!!
- hugstacklesglompssmooches-
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04-30-2006, 02:23 PM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: avvy by linda hagrid
Posts: 3,446
Hogwarts RPG Name: melany Second |
awwww i love that one. i imagine it as ron. im so sorry i haven't been updating, ive obviously missed alot
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04-30-2006, 03:23 PM
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| My name's not JoMessy Hair FanRadio Artist Demiguise
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: FRIDGE'S FRIDGE
Posts: 24,344
| Awww! That's so sweet! It's awesome. And, yes, it is Ron but for other H/Hr shippers they might say Harry. I think it could go for both, right? -rolls eyes- Anyway, update more. I love how you make a poem out of every book. It's a great idea! |
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05-01-2006, 09:55 AM
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| Ashwinder
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada
Posts: 13,563
| Tale as Old as Time
^ gotta agree with Emma.. making a poem out of every book..
i love most is the recent one.. next will be the one about Ginny..
you're good.. like Ate Lai and Harmony..
keep it up!!
*hugs you*
__________________ (My) love... (My) angel... (My) always...
[Words] of sentiments
Wishing to be said;
[But] your name alone
Can send this heart to overdrive;
Yet your presence, my [forever],
Can make a heart specialist lose his career.
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05-11-2006, 05:26 AM
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|  SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Lala I like your poems. They're so cute. <3
Maxie |
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06-24-2006, 05:44 AM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
Posts: 13,488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ
AWW! You wrote Ron's perspective perfect in the latest one!
XD Keep them comin hun!
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |
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07-22-2006, 09:12 AM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Asia
Posts: 122
| hi lala, gosh all of your poems was amazing.... their so okay (there was the story behind it all).. now I know why you're so busy.... writing these poems is a good thing.... your creativeness comes out.... keep up the good work and I will visit this for your new ones. |
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10-04-2006, 10:42 PM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
Posts: 13,488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ
:bump:
Where has the lovely Lla gone to?
I MISS HER AND HER AWESOME POEMS!
*Dies and hopes you update soon to revive me*
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |
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