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Mrs.Lupin 10-31-2006 08:15 PM

OK I know it aint much but my brain wouldn't give anymore.

Remus dropped onto a chair looking shocked, "You would leave me?" Kris glared at Remus, "Yes. If you don't want the baby." Remus closed his eyes thinking, after a while he opened his eyes and looked at Kris, "If you want to keep the baby then you can raise it by yourself." He stood up then walked to the door, when he reached the door he turned and looked at Kris. "Have a nice life." After those painful words he left. Kris looked hurt she wanted to go after him but she didn't think he would take her back unless she didn't keep the baby.James put his hand on Kris' shoulder, "Krissy? You ok?" Kris didn't say anything she just stared at the door as if hoping Remus would come back.

Fire Eyes*Tayzer* 10-31-2006 09:13 PM

Awww.... it's so sad... poor Remus! But then again...Kris shouldn't have to get rid of the baby! *bangs head* don't do this to me!!! LOL PAMS!!!

padfoot_rox93 11-01-2006 12:35 AM

REMMY, OMG! Whya re you being so mean?? This isn't like you, Moonykins. PAMS!
Amie

HPlover_09 11-03-2006 09:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by padfoot_rox93 (Post 4091358)
REMMY, OMG! Whya re you being so mean?? This isn't like you, Moonykins. PAMS!
Amie

Yeah he is being awful..... but he kind of has a right to be.....I mean his best friend got is girlfriend pregnant. It's not an ideal situation.

Mrs.Lupin 11-22-2006 05:51 PM

ok I thought I would write what Remus is doing so here we go off into the wild blue yonder!...sorry bout that last bit but my school days flashed back *shudders*

Remus had his hand on the door handle thinking about going back inside. No! She doesn't love you, if she did she wouldn't have done this to you. He nodded then let go of the handle and walked off. He went straight home and started packing all of Kris' belongings. He was packing her stuffed animals when there was a knock on the door. He ran down the stairs half hoping it would be Kris, he saw it wasn't when he opened the door and saw Srius there.

"Playing with dolls now are ya, Moony?" Sirius smirked when he saw the doll in his hand. "No, I'm packing your baby sisters things." Remus snapped. Sirius looked shocked, mainly because he called Kris a baby. In all the years everyone had called her a baby...everyone except Remus. "Why? I thought you wanted her to live with you." "That was before she cheated on me with James." Remus and Sirius heard a snap and both looked at the doll in Remus' hands, he had broke it.

"Kris? Cheat on you? With James?"

"Yes, and you know what else? She is going to have a baby! Not my baby. James' baby!"

Sirius just laughed, "She loves you too mu-"

"No she don't!" Remus yelled throwing the already broke doll in the fireplace.

I am happy with me post! :D

padfoot_rox93 11-23-2006 02:36 AM

Awww, Remmy, it's okay. She does love you too much. You're just too idiotic right now to realize it. PAMS!
Amie

Fire Eyes*Tayzer* 11-24-2006 04:35 AM

LOL^ Agreed! PAMS!!!

Mrs.Lupin 11-24-2006 09:25 PM

Still is Remus' point of view.

Sirius stared at Remus shocked at how angry he was. "I don't believe she would cheat on you." He finally said after Remus began pacing, Remus shot him an angry look then punched the wall until his hands bled. "I'll kill her. I swear I will." "Remus you don't mean that...do you?" Remus turned to Sirius and glared at him. He pushed past him then walked out the front door with one thing one his mind; kill Kris.

(Kris' view)

Kris stood up with the help of James, "I'm going to find him to talk to him." She gave him a hug and a kiss on the cheek then left. She walked to Remus' house and saw him coming out of the house. She smiled when she saw him walking to wards him but her smile disappeard when he grabbed her arm tighter then what he usually did. He waved his wand and Kris couldn't talk he pulled her to the woods across from his house.

padfoot_rox93 11-25-2006 12:14 AM

WHAT! REMUS, NO! ARE YOU INSANE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!>! WTF! AEAGJEWAG;LKWEAJG;LKWAEJK;LWEGJLEKWAGJ;LKAEWG PAMS!
Amie

Fire Eyes*Tayzer* 11-25-2006 02:07 AM

ARG!!!! What the heck!!! How harsh can he be!!??? PAMS!!! (repeat that 1,000,000 X)

HPlover_09 11-26-2006 02:35 AM

Whoa, Remus what the heck is wrong with you? You can't kill people! Is Kris going to be ok? PAMS!

Mrs.Lupin 11-30-2006 01:02 AM

When they were deep in the woods Kris watched as Remus used his wand to tie her to a tree. Her eyes grew as she saw him pull a knife that had glinted in the moon light(No not a full moon). She tried to get free, "Oh stay still!" Remus said before he slapped her. Kris looked into his eyes and saw that they were dull and empty.

*slaps head* Stupid brain! It quit on me! Sorry peoplez this is all I got.

Fire Eyes*Tayzer* 11-30-2006 03:48 AM

Ummm.... what is there to say? Except...this is not good! Not good at all! *shakes head* :(

padfoot_rox93 11-30-2006 04:04 AM

OMFG. Total cliffie! Remmy has gone out of his mind. Snap out of it, Lupin! PAMS!
Amiekins

Fire Eyes*Tayzer* 11-30-2006 04:06 AM

Iknow! As much as I love him, I just wanna run up and smack him right now! (not really- he'll come to his sneses:)) ....maybe...*gulp*

Mrs.Lupin 12-02-2006 12:12 AM

At first Kris thought Remus was under a spell but when she saw pain and anger appear in his eyes she knew he wasn't. "You should have gotten rid of that baby, Kris." He ripped her shirt then ran the knife down her stomach lightly. Kris tried to scream for help but not a sound was heard. After a few minutes and stabs Remus left, leaving Kris tied to the tree.

Umm...there was suppose to be more but my mind has left to play cards with the Lord of the Underworld.

padfoot_rox93 12-02-2006 03:17 AM

Wow. I really think Remmy has gone insane. Is Kris dead?? :eek: PAMS!
Amie

HPlover_09 12-03-2006 02:12 AM

I don't think she's dead, but the baby probably is. Yep, Remus has deffinately gone insane. Now the question is, who will find her? Is it Sirius, James, Katie.... or will Remus come to his senses, and bring her to a hospital?

Mrs.Lupin 12-03-2006 03:30 AM

I'll post more once my mind has returned from giving me ideas for other stories....and about Kris being dead...hmmm....:shifty:

Fire Eyes*Tayzer* 12-03-2006 08:05 AM

Pams!! WE need to know!

Mrs.Lupin 12-08-2006 01:52 AM

Ok this has Remus' view, Kris' view and Sirius' view.

Remus walked back into his house. “Sirius? I’m back.” Sirius stepped out of the living room, “Where’s my sister?” Remus smirked and started to the kitchen Sirius grabbed his arm. “Where is she?” Remus jerked his arm out of Sirius’ grasp and continued to the kitchen. He walked to the sink, got out the bloody knife, “Is that Kris’…blood?” Sirius who had followed Remus asked.

Remus muttered, “She should have got rid of that baby.” He turned the sink on and began washing the knife. Sirius changed into a big, black dog, sniffed Remus shoes then ran out of the house. Kris’ head began to get heavy, it was starting to get hard for her to breath. I’m so stupid… why did I do it? Why? Sirius followed Remus’ sent to the woods, he stopped and sniffed the air.

Sirius barked as he smelled blood, he ran towards the sent. As he saw Kris he changed back into himself, “Kris!” Kris looked up as she heard her name she smiled weakly as she saw her brother. Sirius waved his wand once and took off the spell that stopped her from speaking. He waved his wand a second time and took the binds off her. He caught her before she fell, “It’s going to be alright, Kris…I’ve got you.” He ran to James’ house he kicked on the door, “James! Lily!”

Lily opened the door, “James! James!” James came running he stopped short, “What…who did this?” Neither Sirius or Kris answered. “James, I don’t know what to do…” Lily took over, she told Sirius to lay Kris on the couch then told James to get towels.


Quote:

Originally Posted by Katie
I don't think she's dead, but the baby probably is. Yep, Remus has deffinately gone insane. Now the question is, who will find her? Is it Sirius, James, Katie.... or will Remus come to his senses, and bring her to a hospital?

Uhmm...Katie is still in St. Mungos from what Wormtail did to her...she's not crazy but they are trying to stop the twitching....Remus made me say this...said I needed to...*laughs as Sirius acts like Remus*

Fire Eyes*Tayzer* 12-08-2006 02:00 AM

Go Sirius! Looking out for his sister! :lol: Um... Remus has seriously gone out of his mind! He's making me cry! :cry: WE shall see! PAMS!!!

padfoot_rox93 12-08-2006 02:22 AM

*wants to temporarily kill Remmy* Oh, Lupin Lupin. What has happened to your large brain?? Aww, Sirikins is all caring for her. PAMS!
Amie

Mrs.Lupin 12-13-2006 07:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amie
*wants to temporarily kill Remmy* Oh, Lupin Lupin. What has happened to your large brain?? Aww, Sirikins is all caring for her. PAMS!
Amie

*Steps infront of Remus* Hey! No killing Remus!

Kris kept mumbling something that no one could understand, James took Sirius aside, “Who did this to her?” “Is this concern out of friendship or something else?” Sirius asked harshly. James looked over at Lily and saw she was too busy taking care of Kris to notice what they were saying. “You know that I liked them both while we were kids but when I saw Kris liked Remus then I gave up on her. But in a moment of weakness…Sirius, I couldn’t help myself…my old feelings for her came rushing back.” James’ eyes slid onto Kris. “So you thought it was ok to get her pregnant?” Sirius asked. James looked at Sirius, “I asked her to get rid of it but she wouldn’t, she thought Remus would raise it as if it was his own…wait…did he do this?”

Sirius looked at Kris worry in his eyes, James walked to the door after he heard a knock. “Remus, what are you doing here?” James asked not letting him in. “Just thought I’d drop by.” Remus replied pushing James out of his way. He walked in nodded to Sirius but stopped short when he saw Kris. “Lily, there’s something you need to know about that girl you’re helping.” Lily looked up at Remus from her spot on the floor, “What is it?” James walked up behind Remus and whispered, “Remus, please don’t tell her.”


*Prays everyone will like it*

Fire Eyes*Tayzer* 12-13-2006 07:42 PM

Oooooooo!!! Wow... lot of information in just that! I loved it! *huggles you* PAMS!!!^_^


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