before i start my long LAME speech i just wanted to warn ya..

you admitted*blehh* but hey, doesnt mean you CANT CANT CANT CANT CANT CANT CANT CANT CANT make it NOT happen right? >.^ i know you can u you want to u smell his hair you go woohoo in heart u say i wanna kiss you out loud you go to ur fren crying boo hoo i really really relly want him oo oo~ okay enuf of my lame-ness, the story must continue wifout it :x

ahh, lily, maybe you dont give out expert advice doesnt mean you couldnt TRY! (try asking her to do a sexy babe wriggle or something infront of tanzeel, pretending to attract some guy like a used tissue -> example "oh willis"(the guy, tissue paper) *BLOWS UR NOSE REAL HARD* "goot bye, willis" and you know, throw him in the air(FROM HANNAH MONATANA, LILY.) btw i admit this is kinda lame, you know, my idea but lame=make it interesting maybei shud put it in my fanfic o.O )

if it were me, i would NEVER tell anyone besides my best mates cause you know i fret tt the secret will become burning fire and i've gotta agree wif kashan: the story tanzeel is really a JERK. she's really something actually, nt falling for a guy for so many years. hey, i go to an all girl school since i started elementry school, whats in it for me? NOTHING. no hot guys etc etc, so me=nt falling in love nah ah, besides im like totally too young. [btw thanks for ur tip, james could be that nutter that does THAT stuff ]

or will he? what if he is the smart kind?? *shakes head* maybe he's the ignorant, you know, dumb kind.. :x girls are just like computers if you really know them, but guys are like- SPORTS. sometimes they wanna play with you, they play. the smart ones back off, stupid ones say go ahead, hottie hot hottie- and when they're thru -palapoo- out you go, BYE BYE. some guys like james however arent like that. (my opinion, anyone can go against it for all i care)

Pams like ASAP my dear maxie cant get ur story out of my head today at the exams X3
<3 from the oh-too-talkative-punky-funky-gurl(exaggeratin')
mayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyy

Wow five boyfriends in a week...lemme see how many I had...zero!

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“Well, you’re right,” Lily admitted. “But you need to slow down, for now, at least. You haven’t even had what you could call a proper conversation with him.”

She doesn’t need to talk to him, she just has to look at him

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“That’s not my fault,” Kashan shot back. “It’s not like he’s very interested in talking to me.”

*Pets her*

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“KASHAN ALEEN.”

“Sorry, didja say something?” Kashan asked, almost jumping up and managing to knock down her goblet of pumpkin juice in the process.

“Yes,” Lily said firmly, cleaning up the mess with a flick of her wand. “You need to talk to Sadi Andrews. As in, today.”

*Daydreams with Kash*

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“Because I think you need some expert advice, not mine,” Lily replied smoothly.

Expert advise on what?

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“No way am I telling Sadi Andrews that I’ve actually managed to fall for a boy, after all these years. And that too for one who’s a major, handsome jerk.”

Ohhhh…

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If anyone could give her some advice on how to tackle someone like Tanzeel, Sadi could.

Tanzeel likes Sadi, doesn’t he?

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“– Well, I guess I’ll go talk to her,” Kashan said, cutting across Lily’s seemingly endless lecture.

*’s lily* XD

PAMS luv!
Luv u loads!

No new post?

Oh well, PAMS, me love! Um hooked.

+ + Congrats on reaching Pg # 6.

Love
~~Jay~~

Thanks. Wub you. <3

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okay enuf of my lame-ness, the story must continue wifout it :x

No prob, I enjoyed reading everything you wrote, darl. =D

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Pams like ASAP my dear maxie cant get ur story out of my head today at the exams X3

Awww.

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Wow five boyfriends in a week...lemme see how many I had...zero!

*pets* You'll get 'em soon, hunny.

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She doesn’t need to talk to him, she just has to look at him

For some reason, that sounds pretty funny. XD

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Tanzeel likes Sadi, doesn’t he?

I don't think so. =P

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+ + Congrats on reaching Pg # 6.

Thanks. Imma vairrrr happy.

“I wish I was a punk rock girl with flowers in my hair …”

“Oey, Sadi.”

The fourth grade corridor was almost deserted after school, with only a few students wandering around. The girl who had been singing the song – she was, apparently, yet another muggle; Faztel had lots of them – turned around, her clearly curled reddish brown ringlets swinging forward to conceal her forehead and bright, blue eyes.

“Kash,” Sadi Andrews said brightly, walking elegantly over to Kashan. “Haven’t seen you in forever. Where have you been? Anything special up?”

“Oh, not much, really,” Kashan replied. “The usual. I finally managed to get my eyes on someone, though,” she added, getting directly to the point – Kashan knew it was never any use trying to fool Sadi in these matters. The girl was too clever when it came to love.

Sadi laughed. “Remember when I told you last year that you’d fall in love with someone when the time came, and you insisted you weren’t going to?” she asked, eyes twinkling in her usually, charming way. “So, who’s the lucky guy? You told him yet?”

Kashan smiled faintly. “I don’t think he considers himself so lucky,” she said truthfully. Sadi looked back at her in disbelief. “Impossible!” she said, her eyes widening very slightly. “Which boy couldn’t be glad to know you’re in love with him?”

Kashan only had a one word answer to respond with:

“Tanzeel.”

Comprehension dawned across Sadi’s features. “Oh,” she said, her face falling slightly. “Wrong pick, Kash. He’s not the type. He’s too stuck up about his looks, grades and popularity. I thought of trying for him at one time, and then decided against it. No offence, but he doesn’t seem worth all the trouble. Not when you can get so many other, just as handsome boys. There’s no scarcity of them around Faztel, anyway, if I’m getting my point across.”

“I was hoping you wouldn’t say that,” Kashan replied. She half-wished Lily was here to talk for her. “That’s why I came to you in the first place – For advice.”

Sadi shrugged. “Well, the best I can give you is to shut your eyes every time he passes, and forget he even exists. Period.”

Kashan shook her head. “Not that kind, Sa,” she said doggedly. “Come on, you’re supposed to be the resident flirt here, aren’t you?

Sadi laughed. “Yeah, I am,” she admitted. “I would still tell you to move on while you still can.” Seeing the determined look on Kashan’s face, though, she frowned. “Okay, okay, so I get it. None of the moving on lecture, right? Have you tried talking to him?”

Kashan shook her head. “Well, yes and no,” she began hesitantly. “It’s just that he doesn’t seem very interested in talking. He doesn’t seem interested in having anything to do with me at all.” She quickly narrated everything that had passed in the past week or two.

“You ruined everything when you tried to infuriate him that way,” Sadi said immediately. “It was all over the school.”

“Hey, no fair!” Kashan protested. “How was I supposed to know I’d end up falling for him!”

“Oh yeah, that’s a problem, too,” Sadi said thoughtfully. “I heard you turned down David Raymond?”

Kashan nodded.

Sadi gave her a thumbs-up. “I did, too. He didn't exactly ask me out, but he tried to, week before last. Super jerk, that one. As if I don’t know he’s an absolute player. Interesting to note, though, that he hasn’t gone out with anyone else since you refused him. Usually, he gets together with someone else less than a day after he breaks with some other girlfriend of his. I’d say he’s finally fallen for you. And not just in his player-ish way, either; only because you turned him down, though.”

Kashan raised an eyebrow, having no idea where all this was going. “What’s David got to do with this whole Tanzeel business?” she inquired. “I mean, I need a way to be able to talk to Tanzeel on friendly terms; if that is even possible. Isn’t there a way he can’t possibly ignore me if I go up and talk to him?”

Sadi nodded. “There is, and David’s got literally everything to do with it,” she said seriously.

“Huh?” Kashan said. “I’m not sure if I understand.”

“Get together with David,” Sadi replied quietly.

Ooh just thought I'd tell ya Maxie that I've been reading your fan-fic ever since the first day you posted it and I love it. I just don't know you that well and was feeling too shy to post anything *blush*. I think you've really awesome potential as a writer. I finally plucked up the nerve to post because...

^ That is too awesome not to comment on! Lol. Neways, I'll quit rambling and good luck with the rest of your fic.

-Sameen (although I'm better known as Sam around here)

Note: I've heard around that you live in Pakistan, and maybe even Karachi? I was just wondering 'cos I've moved here too a couple months before from England.

Hehehe evil plot...date best friend of guy you love to get to the guy you really want.

Aww. *huggles*

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I think you've really awesome potential as a writer.

Thanks, hunny.

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^ That is too awesome not to comment on! Lol. Neways, I'll quit rambling and good luck with the rest of your fic.

Thanks. I'm happy you dropped in. =]

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Note: I've heard around that you live in Pakistan, and maybe even Karachi? I was just wondering 'cos I've moved here too a couple months before from England.

Yup, I live in Karachi. It's t3h best place, ever; you're gunna LOVE it, even though it's way different from England, here. <333

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Hehehe evil plot...date best friend of guy you love to get to the guy you really want.

Yes, aren't I evil? XD

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I wish I was a punk rock girl with flowers in my hair …”

Nice choice of song.

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... Anything special up?”

I would say yes. =DDD

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“Which boy couldn’t be glad to know you’re in love with him?”

Kashan only had a one word answer to respond with:

“Tanzeel.”

*hearts the convo* Awesome writing, love!!!!

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Sadi shrugged. “Well, the best I can give you is to shut your eyes every time he passes, and forget he even exists. Period.”

Hehe, nice advice, Sadi. And no, um not being sarcastic.

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Sadi nodded. “There is, and David’s got literally everything to do with it,” she said seriously.

“Huh?” Kashan said. “I’m not sure if I understand.”

“Get together with David,” Sadi replied quietly.

OMG, no, no, no! Is this evil or exciting or what?

Great work. Luffffin' it. Can't wait fer more!

Love,
~~Jay~~

Yes, but Max. You are Evil in a good way. Muahahahaha...

SS has been acting up, lately, and not letting me get on. I FINALLY managed to open KasTan, though; man, am I glad. So, without further ado - an update. =D

“WHAT?” Kashan asked, her mouth falling open.

Said nodded. “I know, I know, I never though I’d live to see the day when I would advise someone to get together with David Raymond,” she said, scowling heavily at the mere mention of the boy’s name. “But it’s the best way out in your case, Kash, trust me.”

Kashan knew Sadi too well to think the girl was playing some sort of prank on her. When it came to giving advice on love related matters, Sadi Andrews never, ever joked. Trying not to bite her lip, Kashan said only word: “Explain.”

“Tanzeel can’t get out of talking to you if you’re his best friend’s girlfriend,” Sadi began. “David would kill him if you broke up with him because Tanzeel was a jerk to you; and Tanzeel knows that, too. Take it this way: Tanzeel would hit a friend back if he hit him, but he also happens to be the kind to care very, very deeply for his friends. At least, I know for a fact that he cares for David – a lot. They aren’t best friends for just any reason. He would never do a thing that would, directly or indirectly, hurt David.”

Kashan was now beginning to understand what Sadi was getting at. “So more time with David means I get more of a chance with Tanzeel, right?” she said, slightly hesitantly. “And when I’m sure Tanzeel and I’ve become too good as friends for him to ignore me again, I break up with David.”

Sadi nodded. “That’s the plan.”

For a moment, Kashan was quiet. “I can’t do that!” she finally blurted out.

“Why not?” Sadi asked, surprised.

“That would be cheating on David,” Kashan pointed out. “First I would be getting together with him without even actually liking him, and then I would actually be using him to get together with his best friend. The shock would kill him, when he finds out.”

“I think David needs to be used and cheated on,” Sadi replied coldly. Her tone was always cold when she spoke of David. “It isn’t as if he doesn’t two-time, double cross, use and cheat on girls, himself.”

Kashan remained silent. On one hand, Sadi’s plan could not have sounded more appealing; Kashan was almost bursting to attempt it. On the other hand, Kashan knew she had never been the type to get together with a boy she despised with all her heart. Even if he was the best friend of the love of her life.

“Decided yet?” Sadi asked.

Kashan shook her head. Then she abruptly asked, “Be honest, Sadi – What do you want me to decide?”

Sadi shrugged. “It’s your choice, Kash,” she said at once. “You can either get together with David, or say goodbye to the chances of ever getting your Tanzeel. Personally, I would be happier if you forgot that Tanzeel even exists because, and I confess it openly, I’m going to feel like a total jerk every time I see you with David.”

Kashan tried not to bite her lip before nodding. Sadi’s advice had, instead of making things easier, made them even more difficult. Way more difficult.

“I need to talk to Lily about this,” was all she said.

“No, no, and no,” Lily said angrily. “David Raymond? Sadi Andrews is definitely losing her touch.”

“Sadi told me she didn’t like the advice she was offering, herself,” Kashan reminded her.

“She’s still losing her touch,” Lily said firmly. “Because, honestly, even I could come up with a better plan.”

Kashan blinked. “Go on, tell me your plan,” she said sarcastically, knowing fully well that Lily Asaif had no plans in that brilliant brain of hers to tell.

As could have been expected, Lily looked highly taken aback. Then, seeing the smug look on he best friend’s face, she folded her arms against her chest. “Well,” she said, clearly thinking furiously. “Ha! Got it! You could always let David know you’re interested in him, and then he’d force Tanzeel to be nice to you, because he wants you to get together with him. Err ...” she trailed off, looking sheepish.

“You mean I pretend I’m interested in him, but don’t get together with him?” Kashan asked sarcastically.

“Forget I ever said that,” Lily said, still sheepishly. “I’m no Sadi Andrews, and you fully well know that.”

“But – but – but –”

“But what?” Lily asked, both eyebrows raised sceptically.

“But that’s a brilliant plan, Lil!”

“Wha –?”

Kasha nodded enthusiastically. “That was just the little modification Sadi’s plan needed,” she said excitedly. “I just realized how perfect this will be; David will definitely have to force Tanzeel to be on better terms with me, if he’s sure I’m ready to give him a chance. I would still be, well, sort of using him, but at least no one can say Kashan Aleen got together with a boy and then cheated on him. This is bloody brilliant!”

It was Lily’s turn to look astounded now. “You aren’t telling me you’re going to act this out, Kash,” she said, looking mortified at the very thought.

“Oh, but I so am,” Kashan replied, positively quivering with delight. “I so, so am.”

Lily looked stricken. “And I’m dead,” was all she said. “I’m so, so dead.”

Thanks. XD

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*hearts the convo* Awesome writing, love!!!!

Thanks once more, hunny.

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Great work. Luffffin' it. Can't wait fer more!

Wow, you flatter me. <333

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Yes, but Max. You are Evil in a good way. Muahahahaha...

I know. Lol. *huggles*

Wootness, awesome post Maxie.

^ Ahaha, hilarious! Can't wait to see how Kashan sets about her plan with David!

Sam! *madtacklepounces* XD

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^ Ahaha, hilarious! Can't wait to see how Kashan sets about her plan with David!

Thanks. =)

I love it Max. Brilliantness again. And love the plan, the old pretend your into the best friend plan to get him to say 'good' things to the love thing...muahahaha.evil.

Thanks! <333

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And love the plan, the old pretend your into the best friend plan to get him to say 'good' things to the love thing...muahahaha.evil.

Hehe.

Awesome work once more, lovey!

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“WHAT?” Kashan asked, her mouth falling open.

Yeah, that wazzz my reaction too.

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Said nodded. “I know, I know, I never though I’d live to see the day when I would advise someone to get together with David Raymond,” she said, scowling heavily at the mere mention of the boy’s name.

Kind of funny, how she herself doesn't like her advice. =DD

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Trying not to bite her lip, Kashan said only word: “Explain.”

Love this line! Perfectness!

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“And when I’m sure Tanzeel and I’ve become too good as friends for him to ignore me again, I break up with David.”

Sadi nodded. “That’s the plan.”

And it's evil. Veeeeeeery evil.

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For a moment, Kashan was quiet. “I can’t do that!” she finally blurted out.

Man I'm torn. I want her to do it and, at the same time, I don't want her to do it.

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“I think David needs to be used and cheated on,” Sadi replied coldly.

Wow, she sure hates him.

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“I need to talk to Lily about this,” was all she said.

Lily had better give her some good, solid advice. *anticipatez*

Loveness,
~~Jay~~

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“No, no, and no,” Lily said angrily. “David Raymond? Sadi Andrews is definitely losing her touch.”

Haha, I can't say I didn't expect such a reaction. Lily reminds me a very teensy bit of Lilly from Princess Diaries. =DD

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“Sadi told me she didn’t like the advice she was offering, herself,” Kashan reminded her.

Oh yeah, stick up for Sadi Andrews...

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“She’s still losing her touch,” Lily said firmly. “Because, honestly, even I could come up with a better plan.”

That's the spirit, girl. Now COME up with a better plan.

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“Forget I ever said that,” Lily said, still sheepishly. “I’m no Sadi Andrews, and you fully well know that.”

“But – but – but –”

“But what?” Lily asked, both eyebrows raised sceptically.

“But that’s a brilliant plan, Lil!”

LUFFFIN' this part. Yer stowee just keeps gettin' better and better!

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This is bloody brilliant!

xd

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“Oh, but I so am,” Kashan replied, positively quivering with delight. “I so, so am.”

Lily looked stricken. “And I’m dead,” was all she said. “I’m so, so dead.”

Super funny, this part. *dieslaughing* PAMS!

Love,
~~Jay~~

Okay. So i kept seeing how absolutely obsessed with KasTan you are, (ie: with tanzeel. with tanzeel. with tanzeel.) *grins* And i've heard other people talk about it, so i decided. There's no way i'm missing out on this one. So i came and read it! All in one sitting too!

I have one question though, How do you say tanzeel? Is it eel as in peel or eel and is elf. (LOL) for some reason i thought it was eel as in elf..

But yes, i love this! I love the way it is so far from hogwarts- yet it's still in JKR's world. I love the characters too. You've done it again! Brilliant!

Ahhhhh you're getting ahead of me again!
*reads everything quickly*

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Sadi shrugged. “Well, the best I can give you is to shut your eyes every time he passes, and forget he even exists. Period.”

Good advise

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“Get together with David,” Sadi replied quietly.

Reminds me of a certain blonde that goes by the name of Randy

Brilliant plan to get Tanzeel!
I'm not sure how this is going to end up but good luck to Kash!
luv u ancient luff!
PAMS! PAMS!

Aaaah! *screams like a headless chicken* Naa, kidding. *huggles*
Oh and I also wanted to ask you, do you mind if I put a link to your fan-fic in my siggeh?