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qoldenwonder 05-22-2007 02:41 AM

Just Between Us - Sa13+
 
Hey all! It's Lisa again with another FanFic.So, I'll tell you a bit of what the plot is.

Everyone was on their sumer vacations. Hermione has seen Draco and somehow they both became Girlfriend and Boyfriend. Now, Hermione knew everyone would be shocked about the news, so she doesn't know what to do once she gets to Hogwarts. Will she keep this secret love forever throughout the year or tell?


-Chapter 1-
Hermione and her parents went on an early day to get her things for Hogwarts. Seeing a store that Hermione was interested in, she walked inside. She looked around and out of nowhere Draco was behind her.

"Hello Granger.." He said softly under his breath behind her shoulder.

Hermione jumped and turned around. The first thing she saw was his pale gray eyes staring at her. She snapped out of it.

"What do you want Malfoy?" She folded her arms and gave a deep glare.

"Feisty one, aren't you."

Hermione rolled her eyes and then walked off.

Draco smirked and leaned against the table. "You're a lonely girl, Granger, I think you're better off having a boyfriend by your side, say... me!"

Hermione paused. Walking back to Draco she looked at him.

"What's your problem? You think you can get anything you want!" She snapped.

Draco looked at her and gave a evil Malfoy charm smile.He left with that.



-Chapter 2-
-Chapter 3-
-Chapter 4-
-Chapter 5-
-Chapter 6-
-chapter 7-
-Chapter 8-
-chapter 9-
-chapter 10-
-Chapter 11-
-Chapter 12-
-Chapter 13-
-Chapter 14-
-chapter 15-
-Chapter 16-

kami 05-22-2007 09:08 PM

Hey Lisa, That was a great beginning. And I really like to see them fight. I'll like the idea of them being together. PAMS!

qoldenwonder 05-22-2007 09:59 PM

Hey,thanks! i was about to edit it to add more to it and make it longer.But what ever.

LyonLover417 05-22-2007 10:42 PM

o0o0o0o oh dear Hermione, just accept Draco for the hot sexy mama that he IS! Great start Lisa, PAMS!

Katie

MalfoyzBeloved 05-22-2007 11:01 PM

Ooh, great start :)
Love it so far!

Give Draco a chance, Hermione, he can prove himself somehow :D

PAMS!
~Sarah :clown:

HOPEendures 05-24-2007 04:47 AM

I love it Lisa it's a shame you didn't go with my title but i still love it.PAMS.

~Heather~

qoldenwonder 05-25-2007 12:33 AM

OK my fellow readers!

-Chapter 2-

Hermione went to go supply shopping again on the next day.She hope she wouldn't see Malfoy.

While going to get her book for her three different classes,she went into a book store. "

So, i need two books for transfiguration, one book for potions,and another for D.A.D.A. "Wow,this many." She looked around to get her books.

Draco walked passed many stores not really caring about his supply's.He then saw Hermione.It was pretty easy to notice her with her brunette hair.

"Well,what do we have here... a mudblood right in front of my eyes." Walking inside the store he sneaks to be by her side without her seeing him.

"Hm...this is so confusing. Miss, could you help me?" He said looking at her.

Without even looking and not paying any attention she responded back. "Yea, sure. What do you need help with?"

"I have a list of books a need,and from seeing you...you must be a pro at this."

Hermione laughed a bit. " No, I'm not really."

"Yes you are..." Draco then put his hand on Hermione's back.

Hermione turned to the person she didn't know who,which was Draco. "Malfoy?!?!" She took his hand off her back. "What the bloody hell are you doing!"

"I was just getting comfortable with you." Giving a confused face,Hermione folded her arms and spoke again.

"Comfortable!?"Draco looked into her eyes and he came closer...and closer...and closer.

Hermione knew what he was going to do. She would of backed away and let him fall on his face but her body wouldn't! She was like frozen!

Draco was getting much closer by the minute! His eyes were closing. Hermione panicked. " What shall i do! He's getting even closer!"She said to herself in her head.

jkrsong96 05-25-2007 02:03 AM

New reader! (one from your other fanfic) This is fantastic! Malfoy should use a better way than doing that...^^ PAMS
☆★☆★
Mindy

MalfoyzBeloved 05-25-2007 04:41 AM

Ooh, evil cliffie! :D
Can't wait for the next update.
(it's a great story so far!! :))
PAMS!

~Sarah

LyonLover417 05-25-2007 04:11 PM

Hermione, you're body betrayed you because I used the Body-Bind! You two deserve each other! :mwaha:

PAMS! Katie

kami 05-25-2007 10:51 PM

New post! That was awsome. And really, what will Hermione do next? Can't wait. PAMS

Kami

qoldenwonder 05-28-2007 11:09 AM

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New reader! (one from your other fanfic) This is fantastic! Malfoy should use a better way than doing that...^^ PAMS
☆★☆★
Mindy
Ahahahaha,yea he should but thats him.What can we do.And thanks for reading!

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Ooh, evil cliffie!
Can't wait for the next update.
(it's a great story so far!! )
PAMS!

~Sarah
Thanks! im glad you the story so far for what i have now. ^_^

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Hermione, you're body betrayed you because I used the Body-Bind! You two deserve each other!

PAMS! Katie
*in shock* Oh,so thats why Hermione could'nt move...hm,no wonder why.lmao!i love you katie xD

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New post! That was awsome. And really, what will Hermione do next? Can't wait. PAMS

Kami
I know! cant wait for more.I so can't wait for more....oh wait,im the story teller.my bad.

I'll post soon!

qoldenwonder 05-30-2007 12:29 AM

-Chapter 3-
As Draco came closer to Hermione,she pushed him away.She took her books,payed for them and went out the door.

"Man,i love how she is hard to get!" Draco stood there watching her walk out.
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Later on Hermione was at home Cooking with her mother. 'Dear,could you cut the carrots." Her mum said pointing out at the orange vegetable.

Hermione went to the cutting bored and took the carrots.While cutting them the door bell rang. "I'll get it mum,you can finish up the carrots." Hermione said.

Walking up the door and open it she saw Draco.Yes,Draco! No Ron,No Harry...just the snotty boy named Draco. "Hello,love" He said looking at her.

Folding her arms she stared at him. "How may i not help-" Hermione's mom came with a rag wipeing her hands. " 'Mione who is this young boy?" Her mother asked.

Hermione sighed and answered back. "This is Draco Malfoy mum.The boy I was telling you about." Hermione was not happy about this at all. Her mother smiled with glee.

"Oh,you've talked about me?" Draco was flattered.

Hermione's mum laughed. "Yes,we have... would you like to come in? I'm cooking dinner."

Hermione could not believe what she heard! Draco coming to have dinner! No way,this couldn't be happening.Hermione was completely shocked.

"Sure,Mrs. Granger. I'd love to have dinner with you all." Draco came in smirking and walked right to the living room. He sat down and looked at the two girls.

Mrs. Granger was very glad to have company especially from Hermione's good old friends... ok Draco wasn't but you know what i mean. "Hermione, why don't you talk with your friend while I finish the rest."

Hermione groaned and plopped on the couch.

"Come on Granger, we have to set things right some how." Draco came closer to her.

"Why would I do that?" She said right away before he did anything.

Draco opened his mouth then closed it,then opened it again to speak. "I'm hot! And you know you want me." He said being oh so annoying to Hermione.

She rolled her eyes. "Listen, just be glad your here! You eat and your on your merry way out the door!" She said pointing to her brown door. Draco came even closer.He wasn't scared of her at all.

"Granger..." he said.

"what!?" Hermione became more annoyed than ever.She was looking straight not staring at Draco's face.

"Kiss me!" Hermione turned to him and when she was about to respond back Draco kissed her. Right smack down on the lips. Hermione let it go and put her hand on his blond hair. Draco put his hands on her waist.

Hermione for some reason was in heaven... but not just in heaven with any boy,but Draco!"


Oh my! Draco kissed Hermione!

LyonLover417 05-30-2007 01:08 AM

EEEE! Draco, please ask me to kiss you! I respect and appreciate your hotness! LOL Awesome post, just give in Hermione! PAMS!

Katie

hp_lvr01 05-30-2007 01:34 AM

:woot: that was awesome!! PAMSPAMSPAMS!

*subscribe*

-Bells

jkrsong96 06-02-2007 04:57 AM

Very exciting! Kissy kissy...Draco's like addicted to her. ^^

Fallon Chanel 06-02-2007 01:40 PM

heck yes! Im a new reader! And this is good!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

Titch 06-02-2007 04:03 PM

This is amazing. your a really good writer. write more soon!!!:frog:

HOPEendures 06-03-2007 08:56 AM

Draco and hermione kissing and the equals heaven .OAMG.Good post.PAMS.

~Heather~

qoldenwonder 06-03-2007 03:48 PM

coming up,another chapter!

-Chapter 4-
Hermione let her lips let go from Draco's. "Oh,wow..." Hermione was amazed. Draco was a good kisser and must be the top out of all boys.

"Granger...?"

"Yes,Malfoy...?" Draco looked at her. His gray eyes darting at hers..

"Go out with me."

Hermione was shocked. Draco? Asking her out? This must of beena dream for her. "Go out with you?"

"yes,would you?" He said looking at her.

"I'm not sure Malfoy... "

Hermione's mum came in the living room and told the two it was times to eat.

Draco and Hermione's mum talked and laughed. Hermione tried to keep her mean self out while eating.

After the dinner Draco left. Hermione slid down the door and sighed. "What shall i do.." She became worried and cup her hands on her face.
_________________

It was the second to last day of the Summer. Hermione went to finish up her shopping all by herself. "Now let's see... I need to get my robe, my wand, my hat and my ...."

Draco answer the last part of her sentence. "Draco... or should I say Malfoy since everyone calls me that."

Hermione lowered her paper and looked at Draco. "What do you want from me?!" Hermione said. She then went back to her paper.

"Answer me on my question that I just asked yesterday night." Draco followed her.

"I'm a bit busy here!" She said still walking.

"Granger,just say yes or no." Hermione thought to herself...she did like the kissing part and from there she liked him.Truly did, which was weired,since were talking about "The Draco Malfoy".

"Yes..." Hermione said.

"Yes?" Draco said not being sure.

"Yes, I said Yes.." Draco smiled.

"But! Theres rules...." Draco's smile went down.

"Rules..?" He questioned.

"My rules are... No one can no were together, you can't be around me showing that we are together when I'm around people and mainly my Friends."

"So i can't be around you at all!?!"

"You can Malfoy,just be careful when you asked me to be around you."

"Ok then, I have rules."

"Go on.." Hermione said looking at her Paper still.

"You have to call me Draco not Malfoy."

"Ok...Mhm.... Then same with me if you can remember mine." She giggled.

Draco though hard. "Er...."

"Yea thought so.I knew you wouldn't remember."

"Well, i use Granger a lot so your first name is not in my head."

"It's Hermione,babe.Now any other rules?"

"No i think thats it,if there is I'll make sure I tell you."

Hours later Hermione finished her supplies. She went home and got everything ready.

hp_lvr01 06-03-2007 11:57 PM

:lol: I liked that post. He forgot her last name lol. PAMS!

-Bells :pea:

MalfoyzBeloved 06-04-2007 12:03 AM

I just caught up! I totally forgot to read the updates awhile back!
Sorry!
But I'm back and STILL LOVIN IT!
Finally Draco kisses her :D
That's cute - "So I can't be around you at all?!"...

PAMS!!

LyonLover417 06-04-2007 01:53 AM

Gosh Hermione! It's about time! Geez...I know I wouldn't have hesitated to date the incredibly hot Draco Malfoy! PAMS!

Katie

HOPEendures 06-04-2007 07:47 AM

they are together at last forgetting the past dum dum dum dum dum dum dumd....Yeah didnt know what to finish my song with.Anyways good post.PAMS

~Heather~

qoldenwonder 06-04-2007 10:39 AM

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I liked that post. He forgot her last name lol. PAMS!
Thank you.Lol, of course Draco would probably forget her anem so i put it in,in my own cool funny way!

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I just caught up! I totally forgot to read the updates awhile back!
Sorry!
But I'm back and STILL LOVIN IT!
Finally Draco kisses her
That's cute - "So I can't be around you at all?!"...
Don't be sorry, just be glad you caught up :D. Yea Draco finally kissed her.But he did it in un-expected way.

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Gosh Hermione! It's about time! Geez...I know I wouldn't have hesitated to date the incredibly hot Draco Malfoy! PAMS!
Boy katie, IF Draco was real you'd be all over him.HA1 and he'd probably freek out. AHAHAHAHA! jk jk i love ya!

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they are together at last forgetting the past dum dum dum dum dum dum dumd....Yeah didnt know what to finish my song with.Anyways good post.PAMS
Thank you that you thought it was good. I'll post sooner this time!


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