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This is my quasi-creative outlet home on SS. Feel free to take a peek. --- this shirt is old and faded, hanging to his skin the differences of the natural and synthetic wrapping are becoming vague his voice recalls his first smoke on a summer afternoon at the age of 13 its rasp like the thin paper of the cigarette the prescription the doctor had given him his physique so speedily diminishing 22 and just out of the army always stopping at the diner for coffee and pie after work at the factory the woman he passed every day at the bus stop how her eyes seemed to shift indifference then longing after all this time "Regret will eat you up inside," said the doctor on tv some self-help book she had wrote, he never knew the title "Always aspire to do the things you've dreamed of." he half-listened while skimming the newspaper for entertaining headlines to distract him from living what happened to cards on sunday night? all of these new things and no one left to share the old his hands shake now he can't open jars or bottles anymore they sit in his cabinet coated with a light dust the jam, the olives, the wine waiting for a release that won't come He walks slowly around the block looking at the flowers blooming on the neatly-trimmed bushes the neighbors wave complacently as he passes His name was never known nor sought out He nods, smile thin, eyes dry Back to his house he shuts the door and latches it the porchlight not on it burned out years ago |
wow! I love your writing style! Very good!!! WOOOGHAAA! |
thats really good, it makes you think a lot about concequences and everything. Keep up the good work! |
Wow thats good! |
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