Hi this is my first time trying this kind of thread but people have said i was good at writing so here it is:

World Unseen

Take me to a world unseen,
the place inside my dreams,
wher flying, magic, and creatures redeem,
Harry Potter and Voldmort battle,
Hermione and Ron one another,
Draco and Ginny hate eachother
This is where I long to be,
The world unseen.

and here is one i entered into a contest and one First place:

Love


Feeling deep inside,
A feeling for another,
People tend to Hide.

no coments!!oh well here is some more!!

My Life

My life revalves around what makes me happy,
Where reality dissapears and magic dwells around every corner,
I close my eyes and see the world i long to be in,
But when i open my eyes it is all that i tried to leave behind.

You're really good too! Can you write a Haiku? (Rhyme wasn't intended)

sure...and i now i have a poem request u tell me what style and subject. do u have a subject for the Haiku?

No how about Dumbledork? Oh yeah I clicked the link and I'd like my soul back. Oh and I've joined that thing too!

You mean Dumbledor right??u said Dumbledork!!!!and souls are non-returnable....i lost mine to Pigwidgeon Took!!

A kind brave man True,
The powerfulest wizard,
We always miss you!!

how is that???that might not be good...just from the top of my mind.

I meant Dumbledork! And that's not a haiku

wow that was excellent

She stares at him longly waiting for something,
When she turns he glances,
No one will know the disires,
The sweet fires,
Shared inside for one another.
A SLytherin Prince and a Gryffindor gal,
Red hair glimmering in the light,
He sighs sadly,
She glances,
He glances,
They catch eyes and pause.
It an unallowed love,
Which will never happen.

that was a long thing that i made up!!

here is a waky storie about Neville's waky grampa!

Ginny walked around Diagon Ally,
A man with a grate joy walked up to her.
"Hello young miss but i got this question for you!"
"Sir what is it..."Ginny said with curiosity.
"Will you please marry my grand boy, he is shy..."
"My....well....erm..."Ginny sighed.
"Gramps?? Whadda ya doin to ginny??"Neville cried.
"Well you said you liked her!!"
Neville blushed.
Ginny blushed.
"Well bye Ginny...Cya at school..."
"Bye...."She said dreamaly...

sorry i am now writing short comics....i am editing my thread name!

I love your poems...they're very creative!

I really like the Haiku about love, it is not only good...its true!

I love them! Keep up the good work! ~*<3*~

Thankya! Havent checked back so i owe all you a poem or two!

Thy Guard,
Who Art outside the jail cell,
Freedom be thy name?
Thy Trail come,
Will I be done?
In Jail as it is in the City!

That was goofy nothing more.

Sweet Roses outside,
Red, White, and Pink together,
Bringing lands color.

And another little comic!

Hermione walked down the street of her muggle home.
Some one whom no one would seem to find here walked up to her.
"I need Help!"Draco cried out."I turned my parents into toads and i NEED them back!"
Hermione looked at him curiously."Draco your dad's in Askaban!"
"Oh right then it was your parents!"Draco said, starting to run.
"MALFOY!"Hermione yelled.

wow I really like your writing, you have a great potential if you nurture it!

thank you, i just try really hard and i write down what i have...
another poem.

To know,
To grow,
Forever more opening passages,
Leading to more doors locked.

more later..kinda blanked right now.

nice imagination ... the last one is really nice but it's chopped $_$ ... i mean if u complete it it'll be nicer ...


keep up

I like your poetry Joanna. Think you could write a poem up about ... Neville?