SnitchSeeker.com

SnitchSeeker.com (https://www.snitchseeker.com/forum.php)
-   Candy Display Case (Finished Fanfiction) (https://www.snitchseeker.com/candy-display-case-finished-fanfiction/)
-   -   Jen's Poems (https://www.snitchseeker.com/candy-display-case-finished-fanfiction/jen-s-poems-10915/)

Jenny Panic 07-27-2003 03:11 AM

Is this what love is,
these bruises on my face?
Is this where home is,
please get me out of this place.
Are you my hero,
a loving knight upon his steed.
Or one big zero,
will I ever fill this need.
You say you love me,
you throw me to the floor.
You push and shove me,
if I could just get to the door.
You scream and hit me,
where did I go wrong?
If you'd just quit, please,
I thought you loved me for so long.
You stop and shiver,
like you always tend to do.
Your lip, it quivers,
your eyes, they fill with dew.
You walk towards me,
arms stretched open wide.
Your words, recorded
forever in my mind.
"Don't leave, I'd miss you,
I don't know what I've done."
I sigh and kiss you,
and once again, you've won.

© Jen Sellers/ronweasleylover

TomFelton'sGurl41 07-27-2003 03:50 AM

thats on of the best poems i read. that beats mine by a mile. plz right more *CMG*

Fuzi 07-27-2003 05:21 AM

<span style='color:gray'>"You stop and shiver,
like you always tend to do.
Your lip, it quivers,
your eyes, they fill with dew."

-Faboulous Jen! I really like it , mostly that line though. You must put more!</span>

Jenny Panic 07-27-2003 05:40 AM

Wow, thanks guys! It means so much that you like it. I don't really have anymore that I'm that proud of, but when I find some, I'll post them.

Jenny Panic 07-27-2003 08:42 AM

Found another one. There's a swear word in here, but I can't think of a word to replace it so I'm using astrisk's. Deal with it.

Oh, and mostly all of my poems are Untitled. Simply because of my immense lack of creativity.

The roses that you gave me
sit wilted on my shelf.
And everytime I see them
it makes me hate myself.
But then, why do I keep them,
distant memories of you.
Though there were mostly bad times,
of good, there were a few.
The times you held me closely,
the times you kissed my cheek,
the way you'd say you loved me,
it made my knees go weak.
But then, as if by magic, something transformed you,
from a loving, carefree person into something cold and cruel.
Oh, the way you'd hit me
it made me cry in pain.
How could you do this to me?
What did you have to gain?
And now the times I see you
I want to take the blade,
the one from which all of the scars upon me once were made,
I'd hold it tightly in my hand,
walk up to you, and say,
"Vengence is a little *****"
and then I'd make you pay.

© Jen Sellers/ronweasleylover

And yes, these poems are both about the same thing.

LittleMissChriss 07-27-2003 10:47 AM

I like your work too.

I especially liked the first.
It sent chillers down my spine,
Somthing not many are able to do.

And please write more.

Laurix0rz 07-27-2003 08:43 PM

Goodness, Jen. They have so much emotion! So much style! And I like how they're all untitled, it gives them more "oomph"...IMO, anyway.

Keep 'em coming! :lol:

:up: :up: (Two thumbs up...I would put more, but I only have two thumbs. :lol:)

WeasleyTwinsRox 07-27-2003 08:44 PM

Really awesome, Jen! *claps* Very nice :up:

Jenny Panic 07-27-2003 08:52 PM

Haha, thanks Laurie, I'm glad my poems have "oomph" :lol:

Thanks Anigy!

QuidditchCutie13 07-27-2003 08:53 PM

omg...Jen these are WONDERFUL! *claps throws money and roses* Bravo!

i like the first one the best. it was awesome. YAY! *claps more*

r-grint-rocks 07-27-2003 08:54 PM

Those are awesome Jenster, good job! :)

Jenny Panic 07-27-2003 08:58 PM

Thanks guys! *Takes money and roses* :)

LilDrummerGirl 07-27-2003 09:01 PM

Oh my gosh wow. :o

I dont know if you are truly going through the stuff that's described in these poems...but you certainly have me convinced that you could be. if you arent...dang you're imaginative. wait that came out wrong :ermsmile: ...you're imaginative anyway, but i just mean, to be able to make that up, you know? I AM TRYING TO GIVE A COMPLIMENT...but i just cant talk, type, whatever. cant put it into words. :unsure: you made me cry. wow...amazing stuff. Brilliant. :flowersmile:

Jenny Panic 07-27-2003 09:03 PM

No, I'm not going through that stuff anymore. I wrote this when I was, though. Hah, thanks for the compliment! Much appreciated. :)

QuidditchCutie13 07-27-2003 09:05 PM

ooooooo that person who did that to you jen.....oooooo when i find that person, they are getting a beating. i dont CARE who or what it is.

omg, now im crying. thats horrible :( im REALLY REALLY sorry jen *big hugs* i love YOU!!

Jenny Panic 07-27-2003 09:07 PM

Aww :( *hugs Chels* thanks Chels, but I'm fine now. *Hugs Chels super tight* I love you too!!!!!

AnnDelacour 07-27-2003 09:11 PM

You're brilliant Jen. Marry me! :lol:

Jenny Panic 07-27-2003 09:20 PM

Hmm, ok! *Gets down on one knee* :lol:

QuidditchCutie13 07-27-2003 09:22 PM

Can i be the maid of honor?!!? ROFL im kidding

ok one more time then ill leave you alone...BRILLIANT AND I LOVE YOU AND IM SORRY YOU HAD TO GO THROUGH THAT! ok im done <33

Cho Chang 611 07-27-2003 09:25 PM

Oooh! I love those! They are sOooooOOo BEAUTIFUL! *sniff* their making me crryy! I sent them to my friends to tell them what a wonderful poet you are! I give you 4 thumbs up! :up: :up: :up: :up: !

btw...
THAT'S SOOO SOOO BEAUTIFUL!

I'm sorry you had to go through that...

Jenny Panic 07-27-2003 09:32 PM

Yes! You, Steph, Anig and Care can all be the maids of honour! I will make you all wear poofy pink dresses with huge sleeves and sequins.

Wow, thank Cho Chang 611!

Hmm...I make people cry a lot. I wonder if that's a good or bad thing? lol

QuidditchCutie13 07-27-2003 09:34 PM

oh man i look so good in pink sequins ;) Its a good thing, honestly. Trust Me.

Cho Chang 611 07-27-2003 09:38 PM

Don't worry, its a good thing!

Jenny Panic 07-27-2003 09:45 PM

I'll add some..ruffles and...blinking lights to the dresses too, then!
Haha, ok well that's good then!

I'm trying to find more poems, they're all over the place. In books, journals, on the computer. :arg:

Cho Chang 611 07-27-2003 09:50 PM

I can't wait to read more! You got me obssesed with your poems! ahah... that's a good thing too.. heeheh


All times are GMT. The time now is 10:04 PM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
LinkBacks Enabled by vBSEO 3.3.2 © 2009, Crawlability, Inc.
Site designed by Richard Harris Design


1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 164 165 166 167 168 169 170 171 172 173 174 175 176 177 178 179 180 181 182 183 184 185 186 187 188 189 190 191 192 193 194 195 196 197 198 199 200 201 202 203 204 205 206 207 208 209 210 211 212 213 214 215 216 217 218 219 220 221 222 223 224 225 226 227 228 229 230 231 232 233 234 235 236 237 238 239 240 241 242 243 244 245 246 247 248 249 250 251 252 253 254 255 256 257 258