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Jacobishereb 04-28-2007 05:06 PM

JB's Poems - Sa13+
 
"The Chronicles of Potter"

Some say he’s good some say he’s bad
I think they judge too much thinking he’s his dad

When the time comes for this man to go
He will go with knowing Voldemort walks the earth no more

As he sits waiting for the ultimate fight
He gets ready by perfecting his might

Sooner or later all this will all happen
Best be ready or die while he’s there

Now is the time young Harry is ready
At the end of the day who will be standing

He falls to the earth hand on his heart
Knowing he’s defeated is the worst part

Letting the man who killed his whole family
Not die again for he is the one they call the dark lord

No one can stop him he is the man
The man whole will take over forever again.

Jacobishereb 04-28-2007 11:50 PM

On the day he was there no one there

On the day he thought to be dead he never did die

When he called on his men they all showed

When he told them to destroy they did so destroy

As he laughed they laughed right along

These sick minds dont ever stop thinking

These sick people never stop living

As long as hes here they stay at his side

With him gone what will determine the line

The line will be crossed again and again

Only untill he is gone will the line stay broken

Broken like the bones of his dear father

It will all end in one big turn

Never being ready is not to be Harry

He will be there in the heat of the battle

He will end up on top of the world once he rid the earth of the evil

The line will be back and never be crossed

If so he will be there alway forever.

Believe 04-30-2007 05:46 PM

I love these poems, JB. Excellent job! Post some more, please!

~*ambora*~ 07-31-2007 02:11 AM

Nice work =)

Krissy Moon 10-10-2007 07:25 AM

i like these you have some budding talent!

Zoe 02-17-2008 07:40 PM

Nice work! I hope that you will post some more soon.

Paintbrush 06-16-2008 06:21 PM

I like the rhythm and flow of both of these :)


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