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Here I am!!!

This bit made me go all "awwwee!" It's kind of hard trying to imagine Draco as a dad. It's so cute.

YOU MAD WOMAN!!! Get him scorpy! :smash:

Huraaay!!! *Does a ridiculous happy dance* *passes around some cookies* Here, have some!

Oh and yaay they got her safely out of that horrible place. I wonder how they'd be able to deal with Bellatrix now that she's back from the dead. I'm curious to know how that happened and what caused Bethany to become invisible.

Great new posts as always! PAMS (please?)

YAYAYAY! New READER!

And to crookshanks_kitty:

Glad that someone is entusiastic about the William Bethany Moment! You'll just have to wait for answers!

I shall pams soon...but now, Bed.

Chapter Eight: An interesting thing to explain

Third Person PoV:

Bethany, Scorpius, and William each shuffled into the Headmistresses office. It took a while to guess the answer to get past the gargoyles, but they managed it.

Headmistress Mcgonagall jumped at the sight of the three children. "What is going on here Mr. Stone?"

She turned to the Head Boy, only made sense, he could give her a sensible, reasonable answer.

"This is my sister, Bethany, that we just rescued from Malfoy Manor where Bellatrix Lestrange was...holding her captive so she would work for her to finish Tom Riddle's work."

Minerva blinked in shocked. Not quite the sensible, reasonable answer she had been hoping for. Then her eyes fell onto the girl who practically dead on her feet. All thoughts of reasoning and sensibility fled her mind.

She grabbed hold of her arm and led her to on of the chairs, which Bethany gladly sank into. She looked to William and Scorpius, "Please, start the story from the beginning Mr. Stone."

He shrugged and said simply, "I'd ask Scorpius, he knows more then I do about this."

She turned her attention the small boy who was silent for a moment then he began explaining. He started from the train, how he could kind of hear her, but William couldn't and continued, telling the whole story.

"And then we came back here and came to see you," Scorpius finished.

Minerva chewed her cheeks, an annoying habit she had picked up. She wordlessly went to her desk and scrawled out a quick letter. She handed the parchment to William, "Please go send this to ministry, and go tell Professor Longbottom to come see me. Scorpius, please bring Bethany to Madame Pomfrey."

"Yes Ma'am," they responded.

Bethany, having stayed silent during this all, was watching the sorting hat our of boredom. As she stood shakily to her feet, she could have sworn it winked at her. She shook her head, telling ehrself she was just overtired.

Scorpius reached out and put his arm around her shoulder, leading her out of the room. Once out of the room they had a silent walk to Madame Pomfrey.

When they reached the doorway Scorpius stopped her. Looking straight in her up and down. Then he shook his head, "Bethany, I cannot believe you are standing right in front of me."

She smiled weakly, "Neither can I, Scorp."

He was so relieved to see that smile again, he let out a deep breath that he had been holding since he first saw his great aunt. He returned her smile and said, "Did you know that it's possible to not breath for several, several, days?"

She laughed, really laughed. "Thank you Scorpius, for everything..."

Before Scorpius could respond the door opened and there stood Madame Pomfrey, she looked down, saw Bethany, and dropped her water glass.

Without bothering to repair the glass, she hustled Bethany in and closed the door on Scorpius. He was left with nothing else to do other then go to bed.

***

Bethany woke up to chatter right outside the open door to the Hospital Wing. "Yes, I'm so glad you two could make it! And congratulations Mrs. Stone," came Minerva Mcgonagall's voice.

Congratulations on what? Bethany thought to herself.

The teary voice of Mr. Stone floated in, "Yes..We are so happy to bring both our daughters home."

Both? Bethany wondered. As far as she knew they only had one daughter and one son...unless William knew something she didn't.

"Well, you know we'll be happy to accept Bethany to Hogwarts as soon as you feel comfortable letting her come," Minerva responded, the voices were coming closer to the room.

"Yes, of course. Thank you Minerva..." came the tired voice of Mrs. Stone.

She heard Madame Pomfrey shuffle by, "Come now, you can see her, it's about time she woke up anyway."

She quickly closed her eyes, pretending to be asleep.

***

Bethany's PoV

I'll spare you the details of the family reunion. I will tell you this, it involved a lot of crying, hugging, kissing, and laughing. It had been all a blur. But I do remember this part.

My mother told me some big news that day, though it was quite apparent in her appearance. She was pregnant with my new little sister, VERY pregnant, the baby was do in under a month.

They were going to name the child Bethany (after me of course, and I couldn't decide how I felt about that...) but because I had reappeared, they decided on Beth Scorpia Stone.

I was made to stay in the hospital wing at the school for several days, and I didn't mind, because it meant I could stay at the school for a bit more.

But something I will write about, the first time Scorpius and I got to be alone together for more then one minute.

Scorpius entered the room slowly and scanned the room until he found me.

His whole body shone with relief when he saw that I was sitting up. He came up and tapped my arm (because I was indulged in my book, and not paying attention to my surroundings) I jumped and, seeing it was just Scorpius, smiled. "Sorry, I'm still not used to having people touch me...

He just laughed and hugged me. I am proud to say that I did not flinch, jump, or wince in pain (despite the fact the was squeezing harder than he had to) he pulled back and we both blushed.

He cleared his throat and said, "Hi," rather lamely.

I responded with an equally lame, "Hey."

I smirked and said, "So, seen any invisible kids recently?"

He laughed and shook his head, "Just you, but you aren't invisible anymore, shame actually...no more pulling off cool pranks."

Even though I knew he was trying to get me to laugh I couldn't help but sigh inwardly, "You know," I said, keeping a smile planted on my face, "I never really could pull off any pranks."

He frowned slightly, "True, but now you can't sneak into my common room and sleep on the awkward couch."

THAT I laughed at. "That sounds so weird Scorpius. I think I'd rather be sleeping on an actual bed."

"Now why would you do that? Isn't the lumpy couch enough?" Scorpius asked.

"Why would it be?" I raised my eyebrow at him.

He smirked his Malfoy smirk and replied, "Because, your closer to me that way."

I responded by smacking his arm, but I was laughing, so he knew I didn't mean it.

***

The day I was to be released and go home with Mom and Dad, I was told that I could stay and finish the school year, it was only two months left, and my parents said they would allow me to stay, as long as I stuck around William (and he gave me permision to stick with Scorpius instead...) often.

I would gladly comply with these conditions, and was to start classes Monday.

Brillient chapter
Yay she can go to Hogwarts (:

Eviee.

Of course Scorpius would want her closer to him, and the fact he was smirking the Malfoy smirk that line, it was sooo cool.

SHE'S PREGNANT? (She being the mother) That is suuuuper duper cool! And the baby named Beth Scorpia, I cracked up so hard.

Does Scorpius know that there is going to be a girl named after him? I'd be a little frightened if I was him.

And the fact that no one interrupted, how cute.

Gaaahhh I LOVE WILL! The fact that he's letting Bethany hang out with Scorpius, teehehe.

McGonagall is awesome, as always, and the sorting hat, it still is cracking me up that it was winking at her, naughty, bad hat!

And Bethany can go to Hogwarts, YIPPEE! It would be horrible if she couldn't.

IT WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER! No kidding, I fell in love with your story once again.

pamspamspamspamspamspamspamspamspleeeeeeaaaaaaase!

Yours truly, Gabbeh.

An update! That was an awesome chapter! Bethany'll have an adorable little sister, YAAAYYYSSS! And I love the name Beth Scorpia

And she finally gets to go to Hogwarts! Hooray for her! PAMS!

Aww....Thanks guys! I loved the part with winking hat also, Thanks Cassie. And yeah..the name Beth Scorpia is pretty awesome. though, I think I freaked Cassiopia Malfoy out when I asked her the girl version of Scorpius...

I know right! I totally agree, btw, I hope you continue that eh, Lily Luna Potter story. ;]

I'VE MISSED SO BLOODY MUCH! IT'S UNBELIEVABLE!

Still...

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OM GOMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMFG!

PAMS! like, NOW!

HAhahha, I shall post tonight if all goes well...(I'm currently at school....so....)

Loved this chapter! Especially this part:

Yaaay They're all happy and together now. I'm sooo happy for Bethany. And a new baby sister? Aweee that's so cute. They better keep a closer eye on this little one before she fades right before thier eyes!

Is it normal that I get so excited over this? (I have a stupid grin on my face and my mom looks suspicious of me, and yes I had to explain that I'm not chatting on facebook!)

He smirked his Malfoy smirk and replied, "Because, your closer to me that way." hehehe squeee

Brilliant chapter as always! PAMS (pleaseee?) xx

New Reader here!! I started reading this story a couple of days ago, but I only read a couple of paragraphs. When I started reading again today I couldn't, Could Not stop!!!!!!! It's sooo amazing and creative and Scorpius and ah, I love it!! PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!! please!

~Noelle

YAYAYAYAY! I love new readers!

I feel horrible for not posting! The chapter is almost complete...but it's been that way for the past week or so... I realize there is a bunch wanting to read it.... so I shall post it tonight!

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! Tonight better come faster

Well...tonight seems to have stretched out a bit...but here is...well, we'll just say half a chapter...

Author's Note: Okay, in your comments, please let me know if you think I should keep this story going, or end it when she arrives home. Thank you! Signed, the unimaginative author of this FF

Chapter Nine: "Welcome to class Ms. Stone,"

Bethany's PoV

I was finally released from the hospital, I was given books and supplies that I would need, and I was on my way to my first class.

A lot of people whispered behind their hands as I passed. I was dressed in Hogwarts' robes, with the colors of Gyffindor. Scorpius muttered to me, as one girl froze in place and instantly started to her friend in a hushed tone, "They're just jealous that you're walking next to me and they aren't." He slung his arm around my shoulder and smirked at me.

I bit back my laughter and responded to him, probably louder then I needed to, "Well, Yolanda's probably jealous."

He blinked and cocked his head at me, "What's that supposed to mean?" Boys are really oblivious to everything.

"Oh...Nothing," was my response as we reached Professor Longbottom, who was waiting out near the green houses.

We were kinda late to class because Headmistress Mcgonagall had to give me my books, and I had dragged Scorpius along with me, not really wanting to walk down to class alone.

Professor Longbottom saw me, smiled widely, and said happily, "Welcome to class Ms. Stone, I assume you listened on my class often enough that you're caught up?" I knew he was just kidding (even though I had listened in on his class, actually I listened to his class with the fourth years, and fifth years, so I was kinda ahead, just like with transiguration and quidditch..).

I smiled back, "Yes, Sir, thank you."

***

I really lucked out when it came to quidditch. Well, I lucked out, the seeker however, did not. After one unfortunate practice, the seeker was placed in the hospital and deemed unfit for the final few games... So there I was, decorated in gryffindor quidditch team robes, ready for my first game, after only two practices.

James Potter, the captain of the team and star chaser had made me take it easy the first practice, but when I ignored him and went for the snitch full force (It was easy because I was used to being in the background and noticing things other people didn't) he allowed me to "Beat the Boogers out of those slimey Slytherins!"

William of course was not happy with all this, he had wanted me to relax, and to not "over excite" myself. After the excitement I've had recently, I didn't really think that playing a sport could count as excitement, but James convinced him that it would work out.

James, amongst others on the team, were not that happy that I was such close friends with a Malfoy (him having walked me to practice and picking me up after, through orders of Will, which is kinda dumb because Will goes to the same place I do...) But I just said for them to live with it because he saved my life and if they couldn't deal with that then I would leave the team.

And they lived with it, even managed to fake a few friendly hellos when he came by. It was kinda funny, (Ever notice how often I use the word kinda?) and gave me and William some amusement.

Anyway, my first game came up. Us v.s. Them. (Us=well...us, Them=the snakes..aka Scorpius)

Scorpius was the seeker for the Snake's team so this would be fun. We walked out onto the field just as it started to rain. Cool. An epic battle in the rain. As their team walked onto the field and the captains shook hand I searched for Scoprius, not that hard since he was one of the smallest members on the team. We met eyes and smirked at each other. We had one of those wordless conversations where you just speak with your facial expression.

To sum it, I let him know that we going to cream them.

And that is what we did...barely.

Scorpius had seen the snitch first and I had been lagging behind him. But he had become too cocky when he saw how far behind I was. He tried to tease me, slowing down then speeding up again. It was during this that I slowly caught up and that he lost sight of the snitch. I manage zoom ahead and grab it just as our chaser were beginning to fall behind in points.

Scorpius and I joked about it later, he kept saying he let me win and I would just brush him off, knowing full well that no Malfoy, no matter which one, would let you win at anything.

Yeah!! Oh, I love Scorpius, and it is soooo true that no Malfoy would ever let someone win. Seriously. Anyway, that was awesome!! And I also love how you portray Neville!!! PAMS please!

~Noelle

Bwahahahaha, too funny. I love Scorpius, he's just so adorable, and cocky, and Malfoy-ish. I just LOVE him.

And um... I really dunno if you should continue cause I'm just as unimaginative as you are (hence the reason I'm not updating anything).

LOVE THE UPDATE BTW!

Thank you Noelle!

And Cassie! Thanks for the comment, but you're no help :p I need more opinions.

I loved the chapter!

And maybe you could finish it, and then make a sequel or something? Or maybe some oneshot series about various events, like with the new little sister or something? *isn't really sure*

Again, awesome chapter!

brillient chapter!

Yeah maybe finishing it and writing a sequal? i mean you got to the end of the main plot in this story and continuing to write it would just dragg it on too far. It's something i would do not being rude

Eviee <33

Typical boys! And they must look so cute walking together! I can just see them in my mind.

lol yes as I've noticed!

Wow! Epic battle on the Quiditch field indeed. Interesting to see Bethany go against Scorpious. And squeee!!! They're sooo cute!

OMG they're adorable! Sorry I must be getting a bit overexcited here. *Cools self down* And that last sentence was so true.

Brilliant as always. And as for whether I think you should continue on with this story, well I think I'm in agreement with all the people before me who said that perhaps it's best that you end it here and decide to go with a series later as although as much as I love to read more, it would seem like the plot would be dragging on a bit after it came to a fair conclusion. This way you'd be wrapping it up nicely. So yeah, that's my personal opinion. I hope it helps.

Yes, the comments helped. I shall end in it probably in my next post, and then a sequel is in my mind... now if I can only remember it... ....Thank you so much for the comments!

Yeah, as much as I hate to have the story end, it has already come to a conclusion. Kinda. (lol) But yes, please write a sequel, and I hope you can remember your idea soon!

If this story comes to an end, I will be sad, but I will let go. But you better write a sequel!