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SilverTiger · 07-15-2008, 06:51 PM

I happened to decide to check this out again, just as there's more to read. How lucky am I?

Anyway, great job, as usual. And I think pretty much everyone is tired of the separated schools, boring routine, etc. So that whole part wasn't that annoying.

RavenSnape · 07-15-2008, 07:02 PM

Flaming spork??? That was awesome! I'm happy to see sporks getting the face time they deserve!

Once again, you did an awesome job! I can't wait to read more!!!

MUSTANG SALLY · 07-15-2008, 07:28 PM

HEEHEEEE!!!!

He had a girlfriend names Whitney

Oh how I wonder how you found that name

Man! Maddox is a ladies man isnt he

Loved it Mah Soodle DuckY

Jamers · 07-16-2008, 12:42 AM

Awesome Suzers!
Loved it.
Waiting for more!

Con_Stripes · 07-16-2008, 08:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Celandine

*snickers*

Nicholai has a journal of his own.........

I'm stalking both of you! I want some more crazy Durmstrang action!

*glares at Cela*

You are supposed to be on MY side!

Quote:

Originally Posted by suzy18

Hmmmmm someone didnt tell me that! *pokesconner*

hmmm maddox and i might just have to have a look at that....*runs to look*

edit: hmmm interesting...i cant find it...LOL

*snickers* cos I haven't posted it. But its true that he does carry one around in the RP....it isn't precisely a fuzzy feelings get up like this though

*reads the fuzzy feelings get up*

Suziella · 07-16-2008, 04:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NicoT

*glares at Cela*

You are supposed to be on MY side!

*snickers* cos I haven't posted it. But its true that he does carry one around in the RP....it isn't precisely a fuzzy feelings get up like this though

*reads the fuzzy feelings get up*

*pokesyoumore* hey its not all going to be fuzzy feelings must i remind you

lol I have alot more instore then him just talking about his girlfriends. Its a good thing Cela's on my side. MWAHAHAHAHA!

and you better post that soon.....i shall stalk it if you do!

maybe i will even make you a banner for it

To everyone else: thank you for the support and comments. More to come as soon as i get writing.

Gissel · 07-16-2008, 05:14 PM

I know I'm a little late
but it was great!
I really liked it,
and it was funny

Great job!

mathi · 07-18-2008, 04:30 AM

ZOMG!! Seems Maddox and Girls are inseparable

Warning to the Maddy Maddox: Take care of my Lima baby

*watching him through my third eye* XD

Great Post Wubber<33!!

Suziella · 07-21-2008, 08:42 PM

Thank you everyone for the amazing comments i really appreciate it. Like i said last time, i really didnt expect it to take off like this. Its very exciting for me. Anyways, here is the third entry. Im working on the fourth, but im leaving on friday to go out of town for 10 days, and i dont know if i will have a computer. So i will either post my next entry after this before i leave, or when i get back.

Anyways....here it is...i hope you enjoy it. Its a little darker this week. you'll see why.

November 7 (1:17 am),

Happy Birthday to me...Happy Birthday to me....Happy Birthday to MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE..... Happybirthdaytome!

Yup it’s officially my birthday. I am now finally 15. I don’t feel any different. But you never know....Alright back to bed I suppose.

Night!

Signed,
Maddox Ryder Darcy, age 15

November 7th (4:30 pm),

So I got 2 letters and 2 presents. One letter was hidden with the letter from my mom. The hidden letter is the letter from my cousin Suzy who goes to Beauxbatons.

Here is the letter from Suzy, she also got me the new quill that I have been wanting for ages, with which I am writing right now. Anyway, Suzy's letter:

Quote:

Dear Maddox,

Happy Birthday! In the long parcel you will find your birthday present from me. I heard you have been wanting it for a very long time, *hinthint* so I thought I would get it for you. I hope you like it.

I heard about Hogwarts splitting up. You must miss Lima terribly. Oh yeah, I heard about that too LOL! I'm so happy that you are dating her. She’s a great girl. Anyways, I'm sending this via your mom because I'm not allowed to send it directly to you since the split there. I Hope you enjoy your gift, and write me back. Send the letter to your mum.

Love,
Suzy

P.S. I have a boyfriend now...his name is Pierre.... *blush*

I can’t believe she has a boyfriend. Weird...anyway, I wrote her back already and it’s on its way to mum. Now mum gave me something very special. It was my fathers pocket watch. It means alot to me that she finally gave me something of his. Here is her letter:

Quote:

My Dear Maddox,

Happy birthday my darling! I can’t believe how old you are now. It seems like yesterday I could hold you in my arms. Now you’re a giant like your father. Anyways, sorry, not trying to get mushy on you. So your present, I know you have always wanted something of your fathers, and I figured with all the things you have been through lately, you really deserve it my darling.

So open it, and please take care of it, it was one of his most prized possessions. It was his great grandfathers. They men in his family passed it down from generation to generation, and now it is finally yours. You are a man now, you deserve it.

Also, I can’t wait to meet your new girl friend. The next time you see her tell her she’s welcome to visit this summer and that I can’t wait to meet her. From your descriptions, she sounds amazing. Anyways, I love you my wonderful boy. Happy Birthday!

Love,
Mum
(Mya Darcy)

P.S. Please behave, we don’t need you getting in more trouble.

I seriously can’t believe that I am holding this pocket watch in my hand. I already wrote mum back and told her how much I appreciated it all. Besides his clothes, it was the only thing we got back after he was murdered. They destroyed his wand, and he didn’t have any money on him at the time, which is a good thing because I’m pretty sure the bloody deatheaters would have taken it as well. Anyways, I need to go; I have homework to get done before and after dinner. I shall write soon. Here is a picture of the watch:

Signed
Maddox Ryder Darcy
Proud Son of
Ryder and Mya Darcy

November 16 (3:15 am),

I can’t sleep. I just had a horrible nightmare. I was hiding in the bushes as my father was murdered by the deatheaters. Even though I know all they did was the killing curse, at least that is what my mother told me. In my dream, they actually beat him until he was a lump on the ground, then they used the killing curse on him, and saw me. They started to come after me, but I woke up before anything happened.

The healers at St. Mungo’s said this would be a possible side effect from my coma and being beaten in the head. They said it would be caused by stress. I don’t know what I could be stressing about, well of course school is a huge stress, but I don’t know, I didn’t think it would stress me out that bad. Maybe it’s because of my father’s death anniversary next month, and me being worried about my mum. I don’t know. I just hope they don’t get worse then this. The healers said it can get to me having them every single night. Let’s hope it doesn’t get to that point.

Anyway, I'm going to try to get back to sleep.

November 26th (9:30 pm),

So today was the second Hogsmead visit. I got to see Lima. But we were interrupted by one of her friends from the girls’ side. It’s really annoying. I only get to see her once a month and her friends get to see her all the time. Of course her friend had to come and bother us. But I didn’t say anything. I kept my mouth shut. I’m pretty sure I was giving the death stare. I didn’t mean to, but when you don’t get to see your girlfriend for a month all you want is some time to just be with her.

Anyways, an update on my nightmares. They have slowly been getting worse. Every dream is different. It’s either me or my father dead on the ground. Once it was my mom. That really shook me. They are getting horribly graphic, to the point where it feels like it’s really happening. I don’t like it. I almost want to get to St. Mungo's for a check up or something, but I can’t skip out on school. Maybe this summer I will go. Alright well, I have some homework that needs to be done. So off to bed.

Night

November 30 (4:15 am),

Well this wasn’t really a nightmare per say. It was more like a really weird dream. You see Praying mantises are my biggest fear. They are just....bleck... *shivers.* Anyways, I had this dream, it was a normal date with lima we were just hanging out, and all of a sudden out of nowhere she starts throwing live praying mantis's at me. It was disgusting and creepy. *shiversagain* Just thinking about there big eyes and weird pincher-like arms it just really grosses me out.

Another update about my nightmares. I haven’t had one since the last time I wrote. This makes me incredibly happy. Let’s just hope it stays that way. Anyways, back to bed with me, I gotta get up in a couple of hours for class.

Signed,
Dork with the fear of a small bug.

MUSTANG SALLY · 07-21-2008, 08:55 PM

Ahhhhhhhhhhh *pets Maddox*

Nightmares are really not cool

I hope they stop

This is very interesting Suzy!!

PAMS

WhittyBitty · 07-21-2008, 09:06 PM

Wow. That was great. I love your writing.

Poor Maddox.

Lima: *hugs him*

PAMS! PAMS!

SilverTiger · 07-21-2008, 09:56 PM

*pets Maddox* Poor thing. Nightmares are terrible.

One of Rhiannon's worst fears is having the man who killed her parents come after her, so I'm sure she could relate.

As usual, great job on the writing.

See, I did read it.

Jamers · 07-22-2008, 04:42 AM

Poor Maddox.
Great writting!!!

RavenSnape · 07-22-2008, 06:19 PM

Great job, dear. The nightmares are a little creepy. I'm starting to get it. Forgive my slowness. Anyway, awesome job. Keep it up!

Have fun on your vacation! You will definetly be missed!

BanaBatGirl · 07-23-2008, 04:28 AM

SUZY!

I looooooove Maddox's journal. Really. He's such a guy, with that one entry all about girls and stuff...

Brilliant! You do such a great job of staying in character.

I sooooo should have read this ages ago. Maddox seems perfect for WhiggyLima...both of them with their weird nightmares....

Anyways, KEEP WRITING!

RoRo

Suziella · 07-24-2008, 03:10 AM

Alright lovers! Here is my 4th entry! Like i said in my last i will be gone for 10 days. So you will have to wait untill i get back for my next entry.

I know this one is very long, but believe me its worth it. You will learn alot about maddox.

Please leave me some comments! I really love them.

I will be back August 3rd! See you all then!

Enjoy,

Suzy

December 5 (10:30 pm),

Today was an awesome day. It was the Hufflepuffs first quiditch match, which I got to play, and we won. It was awesome. Our seeker Curt is one of the fastest seekers I have ever seen. Mia, our captain, has been working us so hard, and she is an amazing chaser. Everyone on our team was awesome today. I’m still nervous to play with girls though. I'm just not used to it.

At Drumstrang the girls and guys always had separate teams because of the fact that the guys were so rough, and so much bigger then the girls. Generally the guys liked to keep their wands on them, just in case. In my case, I got a months worth of detention once because I sent a curse at Nico and he now has a V shaped scare. But that’s besides the point.*clearsthroat* Hopefully I will get used to it before the championship game, otherwise I'm going to hate myself. Well, not really, but I will be really upset. Hopefully we will win. Especially since it’s Mia’s Last year.

Anyway, off to bed.

Signed,
Sucky chaser

December 11 (9:13 pm),

I don’t even know where to start right now. I’m so angry. I guess I will start at the beginning.

Today was the next Hogsmead visit. It was going pretty well until I walked away to use the restroom. When I came back to the table Lima and I were sitting at, I noticed my journal was sitting on the table. I asked lima why it was there, she said when I left I kicked my bag over and it fell on her foot so she put it on the table until I got back. I figured ok no big, and she said she didn’t read it.

Then we started talking. I told her about my aunt being in St. Mungo’s because she was out in the garden pruning, (not magically), and she cut her self extremely bad, so my mom had to take her there. Then she said it. She said, and I quote, "I hope she isn’t as bad off as you were in St. Mungo's." She clapped her hand to her mouth and couldn’t believe she just let that out. She had read my journal. My entry about the fight. The very entry I didn’t want her to read, because I wasn’t ready to tell her every detail. She knew I got hurt. But she didn’t know I was in a coma, and she didn’t know what I had done.

I know she felt bad, because then she started saying she would understand if I wanted to break up with her, and all this other stuff. I was about to tell her that it was ok and that I wasn’t even thinking about that, I just wanted her to be honest with me. Just before I could tell her, some girl walks up to the table and starts talking to Lima. I calmly asked her to leave because we were having an important conversation. Little did I know the girl, Sam, was Lima's cousin. Not only did Sam get mad at me for politely asking her to leave, but so did LIMA! I got yelled at by Lima and Sam. So I pretty much gave up the conversation and left after that. I couldn’t believe she got mad at me for asking her cousin to leave; I was very nice about it too, when she's the one that read MY journal.

Gahhhhhhhhhhh! I need a punching bag right now. Seriously....*takes a deeeeeep breath* I'm sure I won’t be angry in a couple days but, man, it was completely uncalled for. I’m gonna go to bed now before I get even more mad.

Night

December 18 (2:42 am),

I have had nightmares every night since my last entry. This time....it’s been Lima. It’s really starting to scare me. I don’t know how much more of this I can take. It was a different scenerio this time.

Lima and I were walking in a park, and I got hit with a body-binding spell. I was...on the ground watching. I couldn’t move. I couldn’t help her. My wand was about five feet from me but I couldn’t move. I could tell that it was another girl fighting with Lima, but the other girl was much stronger then her, and was beating the crap out of her. Lima put up a strong fight but in the end the other girl knocked her out and then used the killing curse on her.

I think it was the worst nightmare I have ever had. My heart is still beating so wildly I can hardly breathe. I’m so wet from sweat that its like just took a shower or something. I'm pretty sure I know what’s triggered it. I’m stressed out about the fight I had with lima, and the anniversary of my fathers death is coming up. Hopefully, after I get to talk to her again I won’t be so stressed out.

Well I’m going to try to get back to bed I have classes in the morning.

December 20 (4:38 pm),

So the day after I had the worst nightmare ever, I found out that today would be a co-ed flying lesson...a secret co-ed flying lesson. It was awesome. The girls were supposed to dress as boys so in secret I sent some clothes of mine to Lima. I will not reveal how I got them there. Anyways, I was the first person to class, then came curt, who has become a pretty good friend since we started quiditch and destroyed all the ugly purple in the common room together. Ha...that was fun.

Anyways, then Mia came in dressed like a guy. It was kinda fitting...not saying she’s manly, she’s just kina a tomboy. Anyways, then came in Lima. She looked like a dwarf in humans clothing it was so adorable. She sat next to me, and started to appologize, I told her to forget about it. It’s hard for me to stay mad at her. Then Sam came in. She addressed me by my last name, and sat next to Lima. I said hello and ignored her. I continued to talk with Lima, quietly, when I hadn’t realized that, Professor V. had started to ask questions and such so I lost 5 points for talking. He always seems to get me for some reason.

Anyway, after we had out Q&A session we played quidditch for the rest of the class. I played a quick game with Cale and Anna while Lima watched. At one point I managed to stop right in front of her and didn’t realize it and she slammed into me. We had a tiny argument but she calmed down. I asked her why she wasn’t playing. She said she wasn’t any good, which really she just had some confidence issues. So we tossed the quaffle for a while, while flying I made her throw it hard and she somehow managed to aim at my head. It’s a good thing it was an old ball or she would have knocked me out.

So...it’s been a good day. I don’t think I’m going to have any nightmares for a while.

December 25 (10:30 am)

So I got some presents today. On from mum and one from Lima. Lima sent her letter and present to my mum so she wouldn’t get into trouble. If they knew where we sending stuff via my mom we would be in soooo much trouble! Anyway, here is the letter from Lima:

Quote:

My dearest My Maddox,
Merry Christmas!
I hope that you are having a great Holidays and that everything is going well with you. I wish that I could spend this time with you, but I am glad that I’ll at least see you next month. I miss you terribly *blush* For even though we only started dating a few months ago and haven’t seen each other too often, I am so fond of you already. You make me feel so happy; you have no idea. I always look forward to the Hogsmead visits so much just because of you. You always make me feel so special and you understand me too. You understand me more than a lot of the people I know do. And I appreciate you so much. I would never really think anything badly of you, even when we fight. For I can never stay mad at you; you always know how to get through to my heart. And now I am blushing even more from telling you all this…

I am sending you my picture along with this letter. It is a small gift, but one that I want you to have. Now you can see my face whenever you want to, and not just during Hogsmead visits.

With all my Love
Lima

P.S. I totally just realized that your last name is from Pride and Prejudice. *giggles* That is so awesome! I’m dating Mr. Darcy. *snorts*

Here is the beautiful picture she got for me and a drawing she made me:

She’s so funny. I already sent her letter off to mum along with the present I got her. It’s a beautiful locket. If I had a picture of it I would show you but I don’t. Mum sent me a letter and gave me 100 galleons to do whatever I want to do with it. So we are wealthy big deal....Anyways...she also is trying to prepare me for the anniversary of my fathers death. So here is her letter:

Quote:

My dearest Maddox,

Hello darling, how are you? I’m doing well. I'm going to be spending the next few days with your Aunt. I’m so glad I have her right now. Anyways, Happy Christmas darling. I didn’t get you an actual gift because your taste is so different from mine, so I figured at the next Hogsmead visit you could get what you wanted. I have sent with this letter 100 galleons, do as you wish with it.

Now onto my next subject. Don’t worry I will be brief. Its 2 days to the anniversary of your father’s death. I want you to prepare for it. It’s hard every year, but after what happened to you, I feel its going to be even harder. I love you my darling. Know that I am just an owl away.

Happy Christmas, and be good to your girlfriend darling she’s very sweet.

All my love,
You’re Mum
(Mya Darcy)

Well, there’s not much more that I can say. I sent her a letter back already. Happy Christmas.

Maddox

December 27 (8:45 pm),

I left dinner a little early. I didn’t think I was going to feel so sad and angry at the same time. Today is the anniversary of my father’s death. I had just turned 2 the month before, so I don’t even remember him. All I have are pictures of him holding me as a baby. I'm sad because that’s all the time I got with him. I'm angry because he left when he knew he wasn’t supposed to, and knew the deatheaters were looking for him. I sent my mum an owl to make sure she was doing alright. She replied back saying she was ok and wondering how I was. All I could reply was...Not good.

I wish I could talk to Lima. She doesn’t know what today is. I haven’t told her yet. I can’t wait till the next Hogsmead visit. Also my nightmares have steadily been getting worse.
Anyway, the new term starts in a couple of days so I’m going to get my homework done.

R.I.P
Ryder Darcy

Signed,
M.R.D.

D.A Forever · 07-24-2008, 03:22 AM

~~Maddox should visit the nurse to get something to stop the nightmares XD~~ Very awesome Dory!

Mister Maddox seems girl obsessed

WhittyBitty · 07-24-2008, 03:28 AM

Great job Soodle! Loved it.
Mah poor Maddox.

First Lima reading his diary then the nightmare than his father. The boy just needs a break. lol.

RavenSnape · 07-24-2008, 04:28 AM

Let me first say the Lima's artwork needs to be hung in a museum. She's brilliant! I know I couldn't do any better! The best I can do is disco stick people. Compared to her work, mine is so ameteur.

So many things going on. But you did great, as usual. Can't wait until you get back so I can read all of the interesting things you came up with. See you soon!!!!

MUSTANG SALLY · 07-24-2008, 05:16 AM

Ahhhhh!!! Poor Maddox

Now I feel Sam was too harsh on him

But then again that girl has a mind of her own

Sammy: Do I now?

Do you see what I have to deal with

These dreams are brutal! Put him out of his misery!!

Great job Suzy!!
PAMS!

SilverTiger · 07-24-2008, 07:18 AM

Great job.

I feel for Maddox, really.

Even though it was long, it was impossible to not want to read it.

*PhoenixRising* · 07-25-2008, 12:00 AM

Meep!! So i finally read Maddox's ~~diary~~ Journal....

I love it twinny!! <33

Mia: Pfft... so you went easy during tryouts because of girls!? o.O You have a lot to learn pal! And of course I'm an amazing chaser... *poses* Honestly Maddox, they don't put someone as captain for being only fair! Oh and one more thing: I am NOT a tomboy!! *shakes head and glares*

Jess: *shifty* Er, sorry... she's just a bit... temperamental

Oh and I think Mia and Maddox need to RP more...

, since really they're only contact has been through quidditch ~~not that it's a bad thing, of course~~ ... but er, next hogsmeade weekend?

Oh geez, and Maddox with the ladies...

How many girls DID he kiss anyway?

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MADDOX!!

And one more thing, poor Maddox and his nightmares

I agree with grace; he should go see the nurse

Oh and in case you didn't know, you're an awesome writer <3

Happy now? I've read it.

Gissel · 07-26-2008, 03:25 AM

Really good!!!
A little sad

but still really good
Love the Limas and Maddox's relationship

Keep it up!
Cant wait

Jamers · 08-05-2008, 04:02 AM

I is sorry I am late
Very great writing!!
Jamie

Eclipsed · 08-06-2008, 10:12 PM

Phew. SUZY!!!!!!!!!!! <333

xD You'll be pleased to know I've just his whole journal until now all in... -glances at clock- ... Ten minutes. xD

Neways, I really REALLY love your writing style, you can get it to flow it really well.

-huggles Maddox- Poor him and his nightmares! Is there something behind all that?

I feel so bad now. I'll try and tell Terry to keep himself under control. xD

PAMS!

x

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