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Old 08-04-2006, 05:14 AM   #1 (permalink)

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Okay..this is something I came up with today.I wrote it and my buddy here, Believe, the best beta reader ever, helped me with punctuation and that stuff. So thank you!
Okay..I hope you enjoy..and please, review! It's quite sad..*cries*

Oh! The song is In loving memory by Alter bridge. It's an amazing song. You should listen to it!


In Loving memory


Thanks for all you've done
I've missed you for so long
I can't believe you're gone


"Now... when it all ends, it's my time to be grateful. Thank you, for being the person who brought joy to my life. You were right there for me when I needed it. You weren't afraid to fight by my side. You didn't deserve to be the one caught between Voldemort's hands. Gin, you were so kind, my love, my sweetheart... I can't believe I'm talking in past tense now. I tried to keep you safe, but that made us unhappy. I missed your face, your skin, your embrace... I can't believe this is happening now..."

You still live in me
I feel you in the wind
You guide me constantly


"I still think about you. You're in my thoughts and my dreams. I still remember that day, that one day when the war was over. We should have been happy like the others, enjoying HIS death. But that wasn't the case. I looked for you everywhere and I found you lying on the ground. You were really hurt. Again, Bellatrix Lestrange was the guilty one. I had so many mixed feelings: hatred, anger and sadness ran through my body. And you fell asleep, there in my arms, not knowing you were'nt going to wake up..."

I've never knew what it was to be alone, no
Cause you´re always there for me
You´re always home waiting
And now I come home and I miss your face oh
Smiling down on me
I close my eyes to see


"You told me I shouldn't be scared. You were really weak and spoke slowly, but still you looked at me confidently. Your eyes showed love. That you love me, and I still love you. How can this not be love?
You were the one for me and no one can take your place. Since I met you, my life changed. I never experienced loneliness, only because you were there... and now... I just see you smile in my dreams. I can only feel your lips touch mine when I sleep."

And I know, you're a part of me
And it's your song that sets me free
I sing it while I feel I can't hold on
I sing tonight cause it comforts me


"Years ago I thought of you as a silly girl, who sent weird valentines and was so shy around me. Time passed and our friendship grew. And so did my romantic feelings for you. I felt it was so right. Being with you made me realize, there's another part of me I have never expressed. And those days were terrific for me. I can't live without you anymore..."

I carry the things that remind me of you
In loving memory of
The one that was so true
You were as kind as you could be
And even though you're gone
You still mean the world to me


"I take care of your things now. I have the idea that maybe, just maybe, it was all a nightmare and you are alive. And you might come back to me. Maybe it's just me, but anything that's yours, makes me want to smile now. Every single thing reminds me of you. I'm staying in your bedroom now. Your family is now used to having me at The Burrow. Surprisingly, they don't blame me for your death, and even though I feel guilty, they make me feel better. Everyone knows it... you are still in my heart, and you always will be."

I've never knew what it was to be alone, no
Cause you´re always there for me
You´re always home waiting
But now I come home and it's not the same, no
Feels empty and alone
I can't believe you're gone


"The Burrow is not the same without you. No one makes jokes anymore, not even the twins. Bill took some time off from work and Fleur tries to comfort him, but he'll never be the same. None of us will be. You were always there to make us smile. You used to make us laugh and happy after a bad day. Nobody believes you are really... gone. You were the seventh child, the only girl, their baby. Molly is sobbing all day and hugging me. It's quite frustrating. You were the one who united the family. Even Percy's back and he feels really bad. He couldn't tell you he loves you. But I know you already knew that. Nobody could hate you, darling."

And I know, you're a part of me
And it's your song that sets me free
I sing it while I feel I can't hold on
I sing tonight cause it comforts me

I'm glad he set you free from sorrow
I'll still love you more tomorrow
And you'll be with me still


"You're watching me, I can feel it. I'm crying for you now. Not for me, like I did many times. It's for you that I'm crying. You can't do all the rutinary things people do. Like go to a park, or go to Gringotts to get some money from your account, or pay a bill. You can't do those silly things that earlier seemed to be something annoying, but now they seem essential. You can't feel loved by all of us who still love you and remember you. And I feel so useless now. I lived for you and I don't care about anyone else. I want you, and only you. But I won't have you anymore... I still can't believe you are gone."



EDIT:I forgot to say, this is a one shot ff.
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Old 08-04-2006, 07:45 AM   #2 (permalink)
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wow you said it, it was really sad , it's written in a very convincing way!!! sob sob , i think you can really write nicely that's evident in the first post itself ,
but i really request you to update real soon i want to see where the story goes
edit: oh yeah i really like all the songs by alterbridge but i consider their song "open their eyes" the best.
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Yay! It's up! Woo hoo! It looks great! It really is a great story! Too bad it's only a one-shot...! Oh well. But I'm serious, you should really write another one!

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I loved it!!! *sob* Either I'm extremely over-emotional or you are such a good writer. You made me cry!!! I agree with Cai. you should write another one!!! Cai for beta-reading it!!!
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Oh! Thanks guys!
I love you for your support!

*dances* I still can*t believe you liked it!
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Gin, you were so kind, my love, my sweetheart... I can't believe I'm talking in past tense now.

Aww this is such a sweet, and sad oneshot! I love it. Good job.
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I loved it!!! *sob* Either I'm extremely over-emotional or you are such a good writer. You made me cry!!! I agree with Cai. you should write another one!!! Cai for beta-reading it!!!

haha I'm with her I'm over emotional and your a fantastic writer!!!
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Awww, thanks sweetie! But it was mostly Agos. She's the one who wrote it and there weren't many errors to beta. !
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Quite a surprise! I thought it was terrible! Lol!
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Awww! Agos! That was totally cute! *sob*.

So, Harry had died? *sob*
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*cries* That was so sad! But I loved it! Too bad it was only a one-shot! You should write more of these! They're great! Really! But I did love it... Poor Harry! He misses her so much!
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Oh! Thanks! It means a lot that a wonderful writer like you thinks that! I'm so happy!
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Omg I just read this and I was like..well i'm nearly crying! I'm pretty emotional now I just listened to A really sad song which now is making me extremely emotional!
Wow...you are a really good writer and I love the song!
I hope you do more stories...maybe even longer ones?
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Thanks for reading! And don't cry! Lol!
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Aww. Too bad. I myself find it extremely hard to carry on my ficcie and school together. That's why I wrote half of it beforehand - So even if I'm too busy to write, I'll always have something to post.

Anyways, I hope you write more one-shots. Always let me knwo if you do, 'cause I love your work. *huggles* It's really great, I miss your other ficcie - The Last Letter, I mean. *sobclings*

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I really miss it too...But I can't write it..it' too much for me...

You can carry on with it if you want to... I can help you with my plot! Lol
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hi i'm grace, i just read your one shot ff, it was beautiful! in a sad sorta way! hehe, you should make another ff! your a great writer from what i've read well hope to find another story thats by you soon! have a nice day!

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Thanks! A lot! It means so much to me!

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