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07-14-2008, 10:33 AM
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| Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lou Ysobelle Hopkins First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =)) Quote:
Originally Posted by keeper#1 oh my gosh!
I am so confused!
Great post but i need answers here!
will teddys gran be able to see them?
are they really there?
is it a dream.
an illusion.
is teddy a crazed nut case!?
PAMS! 
for your questions i can't answer right now...
but with the next posts maybe you'll find an answer...
thanks... Quote:
Originally Posted by Harry Potter Freak 1 WOW loved that last chapter so much well i cant wait for more posts!!!!!! I guess we're close to the end of the story... just a few more posts..
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Last edited by Nat nat; 07-14-2008 at 10:40 AM.
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07-14-2008, 10:39 AM
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| Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lou Ysobelle Hopkins First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =)) Andromeda was saddened with Teddy’s story, but she just stared incredulously at him. Her eyes were suddenly filled with tears and she tenderly embraced her grandson as to hide the sadness in her face, tears were now gushing down her cheeks.
“Why are you crying, Gran?” he calmingly asked, wiping the tears from his grandmother’s face with his hands.
His grandmother sniffed. “I’m sorry; I knew you wouldn’t be happy with Mum’s gift,” Teddy mumbled. “Maybe she’ll cheer you up. She’s waiting at the hallway with Dad.”
Had to leave that cliffie part.
Sorry for the short post..
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07-14-2008, 12:52 PM
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#53 (permalink)
| Plimpy
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: 6 Ft Under The Stars
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacklyn Gold Fifth Year |
ahh post more!!!
I dont have time to write a whole lot cause, I'm supposed to be at work in...8 minutes  but to sum it all up
PAMS!!
xoxo
Becca
__________________ ♥ ♥ Jacklyn Gold ♥ ♥  You go for seconds and days I live for moments to say that I may never get a second chance don't throw it away Living for dollars and dimes They'll all diminish in time Oh let that motion come and crash
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07-14-2008, 02:03 PM
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#54 (permalink)
| Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lou Ysobelle Hopkins First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =)) Quote:
Originally Posted by HPobsession33 ahh post more!!!
I dont have time to write a whole lot cause, I'm supposed to be at work in...8 minutes  but to sum it all up
PAMS!!
xoxo
Becca Thanks BEcca!!
I will...
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07-15-2008, 04:59 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlotte Tonks Second Year |
not a flining flaning cliffie!
post so soon!
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07-16-2008, 01:23 AM
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#56 (permalink)
| Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lou Ysobelle Hopkins First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =)) Quote:
Originally Posted by keeper#1 not a flining flaning cliffie!
post so soon!
great post by the way  i'll really post soon..
thanks...
sorry for the cliffie..
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Last edited by Nat nat; 07-16-2008 at 02:28 AM.
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07-16-2008, 02:41 AM
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| Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lou Ysobelle Hopkins First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =)) He started making his way back to the hallway, but Andromeda grabbed his hand and Teddy turned to face his grandmother, and their eyes met. She was still crying.
“She’s not there, Teddy,” she bravely whispered, when she got her voice back. “Nymphadora’s not waiting in the hallway or even upstairs, and Remus’ not there, too.”
“I don’t understand, Gran,” Teddy said calmly, “Mum and Dad are in there and they’re waiting for me, for you.”
Andromeda found it hard to continue the conversation. She had tried to move on after that tragic result of the last battle.
“Gran, come on,” Teddy insisted, growing impatient as he tried to pull his grandmother.
“No, Teddy!” Andromeda said, “Nobody’s waiting for you, nor for me.”
Silence started to settle between them as Teddy stared at his grandmother. Andromeda Tonks looked over to the window, trying to find some strength and courage from happy memories. She closed her eyes and more memories flashed in her mind. She can't contain it anymore and she opened her eyes again.
“They’re gone,” she croaked. “And they’re not coming back.” It was hard for her to say the words, but she managed to say them. “They’re dead!”  hope you like it.
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07-16-2008, 02:51 AM
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| Plimpy
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: 6 Ft Under The Stars
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacklyn Gold Fifth Year |
I know they're dead, but they were there!! I know, I saw them 
Still so many unanswered questions Nat!! Will they still be in the hallway?? Cause I still have this feeling that they will be gone...
PAMS!!
xoxo
Becca
__________________ ♥ ♥ Jacklyn Gold ♥ ♥  You go for seconds and days I live for moments to say that I may never get a second chance don't throw it away Living for dollars and dimes They'll all diminish in time Oh let that motion come and crash
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07-16-2008, 12:44 PM
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#59 (permalink)
| Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lou Ysobelle Hopkins First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =)) Quote:
Originally Posted by HPobsession33 I know they're dead, but they were there!! I know, I saw them  You saw them? great. Quote:
Still so many unanswered questions Nat!! Will they still be in the hallway?? Cause I still have this feeling that they will be gone...
PAMS!!
xoxo
Becca
 i'm getting excited.
an eleven year old and a grandmother.
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07-17-2008, 05:24 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlotte Tonks Second Year |
what?!
huh?!?
too many questions with none answered!
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07-18-2008, 10:28 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Mystic Falls
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellie Summers Sixth Year |
Oh my gosh loved that last post soooooooooooo much and cant wait for mroe posts.
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07-18-2008, 11:25 AM
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| Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lou Ysobelle Hopkins First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =)) Quote:
Originally Posted by keeper#1 what?!
huh?!?
too many questions with none answered!
PAMS!  apologize
thanks.. Quote:
Originally Posted by Harry Potter Freak 1 Oh my gosh loved that last post soooooooooooo much and cant wait for mroe posts. thanks..
post next soon..
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07-18-2008, 11:40 AM
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| Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lou Ysobelle Hopkins First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =)) At that point, when her Grandmother had said that his parents were dead, Teddy somehow heard music. A song was playing on his mind. Let it go,
Let it roll right off your shoulder
Don't you know
The hardest part is over
Let it in,
Let your clarity define you
In the end
We will only just remember how it feels No! He thought. I don't like this feeling. Our lives are made
In these small hours
These little wonders,
These twists & turns of fate
Time falls away,
But these small hours,
These small hours still remain This can't be.
Let it slide,
Let your troubles fall behind you
Let it shine
Until you feel it all around you
And i don't mind
If it's me you need to turn to
We'll get by,
It's the heart that really matters in the end
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07-18-2008, 12:07 PM
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| Plimpy
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: 6 Ft Under The Stars
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacklyn Gold Fifth Year |
but they are there right??
right???
xoxo
Becca
__________________ ♥ ♥ Jacklyn Gold ♥ ♥  You go for seconds and days I live for moments to say that I may never get a second chance don't throw it away Living for dollars and dimes They'll all diminish in time Oh let that motion come and crash
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07-18-2008, 02:33 PM
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#65 (permalink)
| Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lou Ysobelle Hopkins First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =)) Quote:
Originally Posted by HPobsession33 but they are there right??
right???
xoxo
Becca The answer to all of your questions i guess are on the next post..
Sorry bout that last post... My brother popped out of nowhere and wanted to use the computer so haven't got time to edit it.
Thanks for reading Becca..
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07-18-2008, 03:09 PM
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| Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lou Ysobelle Hopkins First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =)) The song was LITTLE WONDERS by Rob Thomas from Meet the Robinsons Soundtrack album Our lives are made
In these small hours
These little wonders,
These twists & turns of fate
Time falls away,
But these small hours,
These small hours still remain
He didn't notice a tear slid down his cheek. "They're there, They're in there." The song kept on playing. Stop it, he thought.
All of my regret
Will wash away some how
But i can not forget
The way i feel right now
In these small hours
These little wonders
These twists & turns of fate
Teddy noticed his reflection in a mirror. He was crying.
“No!” he protested, “Fine, Gran, ff you don’t want to see them, I’ll go.” He walked fast as he wiped the tears on his face.
Although he was rushing to see his parents, he never reached the hallway. He was walking towards them, yet was only moving farther and farther away. The song kept on playing.
These twists & turns of fate
Time falls away but these small hours
These small hours, still remain,
Still remain
Then everything turned to blackness… there was a loud crack…
And Teddy Remus Lupin found himself lying in the floor. He stared around him and noticed that he was in his room and that he had fallen from his bed. He slowly stood up and saw the mound of unwrapped packages.
“It was a dream,” he breathed sadly.
It was one of my happiest yet one of my saddest dreams, he thought.
“Happy birthday!” he cheerfully said to himself in a forced tone.
He glanced at the top of his bedside table. For reasons beyond his control, the thing he was supposed to be looking at should have really cheered him up. But the desk was empty.
"Wha..Where's the..." he sighed sadly. He started searching for the stuff under his bed, under his bedside table, inside the drawers at the mound of packages... but unfortunately, he wasn't lucky enough, he didn't found it.
Exhausted, Teddy went back to his bed and curled up again. Just as he was about to close his watery eyes and pulled his blanket over his body, he felt something hard hit him, when he's bed was supposed to be soft. He got up and picked the solid thing that had hit him. It was the thing he had been looking for.
The eleven year old Teddy, happy to see the photo of his Mum; Nymphadora Tonks,and his Dad; Remus Lupin. He was staring at the picture still with glint in his eyes. Then he heard the song again.
These little wonders
These twists & turns of fate
Time falls away
But these small hours
These little wonders still remain
He smiled and he said, “I love you, Mum. I love you, Dad.” FIN
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07-18-2008, 10:00 PM
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| Plimpy
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: 6 Ft Under The Stars
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacklyn Gold Fifth Year |
aww this was a great chapter!! It explained everything!!
ANd it was just... 
is this the last chapter though??
xoxo
Becca
__________________ ♥ ♥ Jacklyn Gold ♥ ♥  You go for seconds and days I live for moments to say that I may never get a second chance don't throw it away Living for dollars and dimes They'll all diminish in time Oh let that motion come and crash
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07-19-2008, 03:59 AM
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#68 (permalink)
| Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlotte Tonks Second Year | oh my gosh!
well!
that explains it all!
great post!
poor dream teddy
are you going to write more?!
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07-19-2008, 01:47 PM
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| Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lou Ysobelle Hopkins First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =)) Quote:
Originally Posted by HPobsession33 aww this was a great chapter!! It explained everything!!
ANd it was just... 
is this the last chapter though??
xoxo
Becca I guess so Becca.
hmmm. i don't know what to write next.
Thanks. Another story? i'll think about it, when i have time to.
i'll write again.
Teddy's story was supposed to be a one shot.
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09-27-2008, 12:28 PM
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| Moke
Join Date: May 2008 Location: The Netherlands
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Meredith Natasha Lillian Adams Third Year | Sirius Lee B. Harry dayz!
Aw..*wants Remus and Tonks to be still alive, but knows they can't*
So sad, so happy..
A really nice FF!
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