I would normally never post because I am really shy but Firebolt suggested I post a poem so here I go:

All around me I am lost
Eyes like tunnels stare at me
Wicked hearts cold and full of hate
As I walk down this road of life
I feel lost
Only pain is here
Only love can protect you

I know it is not the best,but please reply.If you like it I may post more.
- Life

Thats good!!

Yay someone replied,and liked it!
Thank you! :embaressed:

It's really good, life! Write more! Oh, sorry - I mean PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :up:

Ok here is another poem this is a haiku:

Summer

The sun is burning
The hot sand between my toes
Cool water splashing

What do think? :ermsmile: Reply please.
I want to know if like the first one better because I have a few more free verses like that.

The first one was longer and more deep, but they're both really good :up:

i agree.Its still good!!!
You can make it deep by posting a lot of Hiaku's and stringing them together.
For an example you can look at mine.

Thanks, everyone! But I've decided not to write anymore in case these get into the wrong hands, because I may be planning on writing a book with them. :P Thanks for understanding! :rose: Flowers for everyone!

Thats what I do with my poems. :o
I write here mostly though. :mrgreen:

Hey everyone I had Firebolt post that I wouldn't be posting anymore poems.She said that just saying I wouldn't was not right and I need a reason so she wrote that.I am not posting partially because my poems have become more personal and not enough people have replied.Though you never know writing them and publishing a book sounds like a good idea. :P