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08-22-2009, 06:17 PM
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#126 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Knight Bus Depot
Posts: 1,115
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Acalia Montgomery-Lapin
Second Year |
Oh, gosh...
I don't know what to say. I loved it, but it was so SAD! I'm shaking, because I don't know what else to do (i don't cry when I read stuff). That was beautiful!
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08-22-2009, 06:30 PM
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#127 (permalink)
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Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarani Glass
Graduated  x12
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Whoa, long. Intense, too.
Enjoyed reading it though, luff.
Post more soonnnn. <3
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08-22-2009, 08:02 PM
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#128 (permalink)
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
Posts: 7,769
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
oh
my
gosh
xavier, you have done it again
you have made me cry again
and i am all full up from maceroni cheese!
whilst crying!
you are such a lovely writer
its so deep
i didnt want it to end
and then it did!
i am in shock
i think i need sugar!
or surgery!
wow, is all i can say
post another one soon, i think im addicted. A LOT!
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08-26-2009, 03:30 PM
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#129 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Reading HBP!!!
Posts: 137
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Brad Coldwater
First Year |
Ah-mazing.You're one good poet.
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08-31-2009, 11:54 PM
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#130 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Thanks For the Comments Guys....
Here is A short Loving Poem.....
#**#*#*##***#*#*#**#**#*#*#*#**#*#***#*#*## Heartbeat Lullaby
Once One time....
You were with Me....
Laid In My arms....
How warm it filled me.....
That you were with me....
And that You Loved me....
I stroked your hair...
So Gently.....
You looked upward At me.....
And You kissed Me....
I still Remember....
It was Beautiful.......
You laid On my Chest....
Im breathing Heavily....
You hear A beat.....
It sound so sweet....
It was My beating Heart....
That Loved Being..
Loved By you....
And Forever You didnt Stop.....
You said I love you....
And Forever Shall I be.....
The Leaves Were Blowing hard...
Pushing Every Orange Leaves Away From you and me....
And I said,"We cant be....
I cant risk Your Life Because Your With Me....
Hold On to Me...
Remember?
You Love me....
You went Back Sad....
Laid On your Bed.....
You heared A beat....
A hard,Lively..
Bass Drum Beat.... Thump,......
Thump,......
Your Eyes Closed to the Beat Of My Heart....
I will Always Be with You always...
Think Of Me....
When You Fall Asleep....
To Your Own HeartBeat Lullably...
Ginny......
#*#**#*#**#**#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#
Hoped You Liked It...
-Xavier  -
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09-01-2009, 12:03 AM
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#131 (permalink)
| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated |  ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
XAIVER I MISSED YOU!!!! 
Now that you're back, I just have to say......
THAT I LUFFED IT AND I LUFF YOU SOOOO MUCHH!!!!
That was awesomeee!!!!!!!!
Poor Ginny, she can't be with Harry, but she will be.
Confusing I know right? LOLOL! 
PAMS!!!!
Jessica
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09-01-2009, 12:06 AM
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#132 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
I missed You 2......<3
Ya A little Confusing...
Lol....
Anyways...
Im Already Working on another poem...
-Xavier -
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09-01-2009, 12:32 AM
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#133 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: island of misfit toy
Posts: 399
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Diana Lacey Delhi
First Year |
oh my god i loooooved it xavier write more soon please Xd
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09-01-2009, 12:40 AM
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#134 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Okey dokey...
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09-01-2009, 12:49 PM
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#135 (permalink)
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
Posts: 7,769
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
 
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!
more please
more more more please!!
aww thats so cute! bless!! i love the heartbeat lullaby thing!
PAMS!
jen xxx
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09-01-2009, 05:38 PM
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#136 (permalink)
| | Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
Posts: 32,845
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Alexander River Hirsch
Gryffindor Third Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Aw! That was really, really sweet and sad! I felt like crying! Aw! Harry and Ginny! So cute! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
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09-01-2009, 09:59 PM
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#137 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Thank you for the Wonderful Comments....
Here is A tiny tiny poem.... ~He sees you~
Your going through my mind...
Trying to find My weakness...
He passes through Images...
Its Of friends...And People I care About.....
Im in Pain....
I can sense...
That what He sees In My mind Is you....
So He can use You...
Because He now Knows That I love you....
So Go...
Get Out Of my Life....
So he wont hurt you....
So He wont see you...
#########################
Hehehehheeh hope you liked the Short...
Tiny...
Poem
-Xavier-
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09-01-2009, 11:15 PM
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#138 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: island of misfit toy
Posts: 399
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Diana Lacey Delhi
First Year |
that on is soooooooooooo cool 
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09-01-2009, 11:18 PM
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#139 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Thank you...
Thank you...
More Poetry on the Way
-Xavier -
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09-01-2009, 11:40 PM
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#140 (permalink)
| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
AHhhhhh!!!!
Xaiverluff I luffed ittt!!!! <333 Jess
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09-02-2009, 12:51 AM
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#141 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Aww thank you.....
More Poems On the Way...
-Xavier-
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09-02-2009, 11:10 AM
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#142 (permalink)
| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 15,697
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
Very Good Xavier!
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09-02-2009, 11:24 AM
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#143 (permalink)
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
Posts: 7,769
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
AWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!
xavier, buddie, u are rather spectacular arn't you really
luff it
more please
*gets out "we love xavier" banner*
jen
x
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♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.
I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
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09-02-2009, 11:30 AM
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#144 (permalink)
| | Mooncalf
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Home ♔
Posts: 7,300
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Tilly C. Richards
First Year | Bluejay | Potatopop! | SRS - Stupid Ravenclaw Syndrome
Woah! Not that's cool!
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09-02-2009, 11:32 AM
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#145 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Thank you guys here is another short short poem...
hehhehehe
#****#**#**#*#*#*#**#*#**#*#*#*#*#***#*#*
Confused In Mind....
Im lost Of time...
I cant complete the task
he gave me....
I failed...
I lost...
All my friends and
my family is gone......
There is nothing here for
me to live for....
The thick air stops......
The people around me....
Thier spells to a complete stop.....
I walk to him.....
The One who they call....
The Dark Lord....
I stand in front of him....
Ready to give up.....
I thought Of everyone....
The ones I loved....
But still time didnt move....
and I knew what I had to do...
I got my wand....
Put It to his Chest...
And I said the Two words.....
And he was Dead..
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Ok,...
I really didnt like this poem...
But You know it is a Hp poem...
So there you go..
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09-02-2009, 11:34 AM
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#146 (permalink)
| | Mooncalf
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Home ♔
Posts: 7,300
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Tilly C. Richards
First Year | Bluejay | Potatopop! | SRS - Stupid Ravenclaw Syndrome
It was good, not one of my favourites, but it was good! 
First to post!
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09-02-2009, 11:35 AM
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#147 (permalink)
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
Posts: 7,769
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
WOAH!!! NO WAY!!!
yes way!!!
wow xavier
wowzee wow wow
Jen
xxx
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♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.
I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
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09-02-2009, 11:45 AM
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#148 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Thanks here is another poem
#**#**#*#**#**#*#*#**#**#*#*#*
Brokendown...
Crying....
Hiding.......
Im scared....
That If I dont complete
The task I might Die....
The Dark lord Isnt merciful......
I have the Brand of a DeathEater....
I must....
I have to....
I cry....
Because Im weak....
No other plans.....
I have to let them through.....
What Will happen to my Friends?
What will Happen to the Other children?
Will they Suffer?
I can just Hear Bellatrix screech....
I have to do it....
Or he will kill me...
No other Choice....
No one cares About me....
Im all alone.....
They will deserve what They Get....
The Dark Lord will win...
I went to a secret room....
I let The DeathEaters In....
Bellatrix...
Blew the Windows Off the school....
Fear And Terror elightened my eyes...
This Was The Last Battle....
Good vs. Evil....
It will Come...
One will win One will Fall...
Lets Just Hope
I did the Right Thing...
My body,
My life...
Or Despair
With the Death Of Dumbledore...
The Plan has Already Gone through...
I must go with Them....
I will not Die tonight....
But what About The Days To come....?
#**#*#*#*#*#*##*#***#*#*#*#*#*#*##
Here you go
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09-02-2009, 11:47 AM
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#149 (permalink)
| | Mooncalf
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Home ♔
Posts: 7,300
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Tilly C. Richards
First Year | Bluejay | Potatopop! | SRS - Stupid Ravenclaw Syndrome
Awwww!
Was that Draco?
poor him! 
Dwaco! It's okay!
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09-02-2009, 11:50 AM
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#150 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Ya It was Draco.....
More Poems On the Way
-Xavier-
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