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Thank you... here is another poem... #*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#**#*# Tighting... Crushing me.... Your also here with me.... We are trapped in Devil's Snare.... I close my eyes... you do the same... we relax.... stay calm... what Im thinking about... is you... You keep me in order... you make my head go fuzzy.... Your thinking of me.... I hope you are... Devil's Snare starts moving our bodies... Im twirling in vines.... Trapped inside... Then I feel something... I touch the Figure all around... I feel a chest... And the shoulder... It feels so broad... I make my way up... and I feel lips.... Its pushing against my fingers... I depart my hand.... And I opened my eyes... And it was you.. ron... thats kissing me..... We stopped... I was no longer in Devil's Snare... For I was now in your arms.. #*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#* there you go:) |
*dead'ed* So. Many. Poems. Good posting, good posting. Just make sure you don't lose your touch, Xavier. Other than that -- gimme more poetry. :P Hehe, update when you can. =DD |
Thanks Maxie... But I am losing my touch:( here is another poem.. #*#*#*#***#*#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*##* Suffer In Silence.... I skipped down the halls... I put a smile on my face... I greet everyone happily.... But they cant see... Beneath my heart... my thoughts... my feelings.... They dont care.... There is no one... but me... that cares.... I try to make new friends..... But they go what they hear.... They go with their instinct... They go by the way I look... and Act.... "Hey,There is Loony Lovegood!!!!" They all say... I put a grin on my face... I think what I say.... There is nothing wrong with me.... Dont judge me please... It hurts me... Stings me.. I cant help it.... I cry... Because of people who makes fun of me... But usually I suffer in Silence... Im Luna Lovegood. #**#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*##*#**#*#*#*#*#*#* Hoped you liked it -Xavier- |
Ohhh! Your not losing your touch! Dont say that!:( It was a brilliant poem! ^_^ |
Thank you LilylunaGinnyPotter.. More poems... Coming soon... |
OMG! Bad Kita! Missed Xavier's poems again! Anyways. Here's my comment for all your poems i've missed: You walk the halls: Haha! :lol: That was hilarious! I was laughing so much! You've portrayed how the students felt when Umbridge was there well! You can't hear no-one: That was so sad! I felt so sorry for Harry! It reminded me of the time in Ootp after Sirius died. That was really good! You say i can't have you: Aw! That was so sad! And sweet! I felt so sorry for Tonks! I like the hair comment - how it'll turn black! You've done a good job in showing the love between Tonks and Remus and the furry problem getting in the way! The air is dim: Aw! You've portrayed the whole Hermione-Ron-Lavender thing really well! I feel so sad for Hermione! And Ron's a bit silly! Tighting: Aw! That was so cute! I loved the way you made it sound dangerous and then you ended it so sweetly! I loved the ending! It was really cute! Suffer in silence: Wow! For the first time, i feel sorry for Luna! Ok, i felt sorry for her before but i've never felt as sorry for her as i felt when i read your poem! That was so sad! Poor Luna! She puts on a brave face! *sniffs* Great poems Xavier! They really made my day! Loved them! Can't wait for more! Kita |
Thanks Kita!!!!!!!! This poem is for you!!! *#*#*#*#*##*#*#*#*#*#**##*#* Whenever I get close to you... Im warm.... I kiss you... You light up my soul..... Inside... You might have a problem..... Whenever... the Full moon rises...... But nothing is never permanent.... Your not going to be alone... Im here forever.... I wont let you pass me along... I know you love me... I love you too... We have to be..... If there is a solution... Whenever you feel left out... you have me... to turn you upside down... You wont bite me... your stronger than That.... I know you wont hurt me...... We tied our love... We are now bonded.. we are permanent..... *#*#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*# There you go:) |
Those poems were AMAZING!!! I'm tellling ya, I'm veryy jealous of your talent. xDD Your poems make my day! =DD PAMS!! :) Jess |
Thanks here is another poem... *#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#**# Hide.... I run... I find my secret place... Im down... I cry.... Two worlds divide... I come from a muggle family... You come from a wizard family... Im Muggleborn... Your pureblood... Im a girl... Your a boy.... People who are different... Attract... Pull me towards you.... You speak... I shut..... I keep myself inclosed... You explode.... There is nothing I want more... Its you.... Im ducking.... I cover...... I hear you come.... I quicly hover.. Find a new place.... Twigs break.... I turn... I meet your kiss.... We duck... We hide... To get away from Everyone else.... So We can be alone.... #*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#**#*# There you go:) |
I loved it and you, but of course you won. ;) <3333 PAMS!! :) Jess |
Its cuteeeeeee and sweeeeett...hahah... n great one XavierPal! :) |
Aw! A poem dedicated to little old me? Aw! :blush: I feel all warm on the inside. Ok. Time to comment. When i get close to you: Aw! That was really, really cute! You done a good job in showing how much Tonks and Remus love each other! With Remus' furry problem! I was about to cry from all the love between them! You've done a great job! Hide: Aw! That was so cute! You've done a good job in comparing their differences and how they get together! Well done, once again! Wow! Great poems! Loved them! Can't wait for more! Kita |
YOU. Have me HOOKED!! Imma come back tomorrow. I wanna see another poem ;) I love your poems, Xavier!! <33 |
Woah, cooool poem! |
TAHNKS FOR THE COMMENTS!!!!!:) here is another one #*#*#*#***#**#*#**#*#*#*#*#*##* How does it feel to see the one you love with someone else? Do you feel a sharp pain.. stab your beating heart..? Feel the black hole.. Taking in... all the great times.... yall had once? Do you break down and cry... Hide away from everyone else.... The moment you saw him.... Press his lips on hers... You were lost of air... Couldve died right there... Couldnt he see that you loved him? He is the Only reason you still breathe... waking up every morning... Its all because of you... Only you... Hermione Granger Is in Love... with you. |
Aw! *lower lip trembles; breaks down and cries* That was so sad! Poor Hermione! I love the rhetorical questions you added in! They had a really good effect on your already brilliant poems! I feel so sorry for Hermione! *sniffs* Xavier, these poems have really made my day! Thanks so much! Great poem! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Kita |
Wow! So sad but so brilliant! |
So Sad!! but really good! PAMS! :) Jess |
Thanks for the comments.... Here is another poem... #**#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#* I cannot smile... When she is around... Holding onto you... Kissing you.... I cannot take it... The feeling of Losing you.... Seperates the light inside me... From my dying body... Because Im not with you... Dont make me smile... I hate you... You caused this pain... So why dont you leave.... Get away from me... Hold up... Do I want you to leave... For All i know... you might love me... Dont make me hurt you... Stop messing with my emotions... Or I will send nasty spells at you... It hurts... you Hurt me... So go away and leave.... Dont make me smile..... It will not work... You sent the pain onto me.. So Let me be...... #*#**#**#*#*#**#*#*#***#*# There you go:) |
Yay..great post ^_^..i luv itt.. |
AWESOME!!! (Is it okay if I ask I want some more happier poems??) PAMS!! :) Jess |
HEY EVERYONE CHECK OUT MY ROMANCE FANFIC CALLED, "SHATTERED GLASS AND MY BROKEN HEART- CAN'T YOU SEE THAT I LOVE YOU?-Sa13+" PLEASE AND THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! |
Hahaha I asked before! |
Aw! That poem was so sad! I was so close to crying - i think there's something wrong with me! Ah well. You've done a great job in showing how she feels! I felt really sad on the inside. Great poem! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Kita PS: I'll make sure to check out your new ff! :D |
Ohhh! Great poem! I love your fic! |
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