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ooooooooooooooooooo i liked that one >.< |
wow.. I love it Xavier :glomp: and its d-dedicated to me??? ooh..Thanks! you're awesome.. ^_^ |
Woah, that was sooooo good, Xavier! Your a great wrighter! |
Tahnks guys for the Comments... here is another one. #**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*##*#*#*#* Are you sure you want to be with me? Wherever I may go.... Whatever he might see... To get to me.... He will use you.... I cant stand knowing... That if we get together... Im putting you in Danger... Its best if you stay away... Dont think of me... When your on your way... It will hurt... You and me.... Go... Find someone new.... Im nothing you should love over... Trust me... Your better off without me..... If I should see you hurt... I wouldnt forgive myself... If you were captured.... I will breakdown.... Because I told you so... Dont get involved with me... Im nothing.. Cant you see? Im all alone... Looking at the Black Lake... When I hear The footsteps... Your footsteps Ginny... That Your Leaving... *#*#**#*#***#*#*#**#*#**#*#*# Hoped you liked it -Xavier:)- |
Awwwwwww! *lip qivers* Aww! Really sweet but sad! :( but :D |
Thanks here is another Poem... *#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#* Everything is over... So many are dropped Dead... I rush back... I see my mate Ron.... Holding onto Hermione....... I love those Guys... They have been with me.... Facing all these things... I never wanted nothing more... But them........ I pass by teachers... The stress On them... Has finally been passed away.... I see House Elves... Free to do whatever.... They now please..... I see my fellow Gryfindors... Crying... Holding onto eachother... and carrying the Dead.... I See pale faces.... It makes me sad... What A life now... They Couldve had.... I see the Light Now... Everything is done... Full Of peace.... I rush back to you... So I can hold you ... Kiss you..... We are staring at Eachother.... You say,"I love you.... I always had..." I put my arm around Her neck... Before I kissed her I said, "I told You After I was Done with all this Ginny...I would Rush back to you." *#*#*#**##***#**#*#*#*#**#*#***#*#*# Hoped you like it. |
Awwww! My favourite poem so far! |
Glad you liked it.. Here is another poem... #**#*#*#*#*#*#*#**##*#*##*##*# Crushing.... Falling in Love.... I never met anyone like her... That Romilda Vane... Her hair Falls Down to her Shoulders... Those eyes grip you... Pull you towards her.... Isnt it great... To fall in Love with her? I love the Feeling... Its so Exotic.... Shes All I think about... Some say im crazy... But hey... Dont deny Love... Im in love with that Girl... That Girl Romilda Vane... Then Harry says, "You drank love potion dude." Still,It felt amazing... While It lasted. To be in Love with... Romilda Vane. *#*#**#*#**#*#*#*##**#*#*#*#*# Hoped you liked it |
So many people are on a roll this week. hahaha. :lol: Anyways, I especially loved the last one. It was really funny. I love the other two too, you put so much detail in it. PAMS!! :) Jess |
Thank you... Here is another poem... #**#*##*#*#*#*#*#*#**#*#*##* Im blue... When you pass around me during school... A chill runs down my spine... It covers my heart... With devil Snare... It chokes me... Leaving me breathless.... You talk to me... I just stare... Frozen... Like block of Ice... Dont know what to say... Lost in words... The vines Tighten my heart... Every second... I see you.... I cant take it... I run away from you... I cry... Because I cant have you.... When Im scared you come to me..... Hold me.... It makes me More sad... Im afraid of everything... The worst is seeing you... Drop dead... any second... Anywhere... You held me up.. You kissed me.... My heart Knots up... Then I feel warm.... It comes undone.... Everything is right... Just for now... Soon... I can see that I tighten up... Im lost Of breath.... You take one last look at me... The brightness of my eyes... Curls up.... There is no more Of me. #*#*#**#*#*#*#*#***#**#*#*#*#*# Hoped you liked it. |
Xavier, that is not even close to what I'm thinking.... I LOVED IT! |
you are so good PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS |
Hey A NEW READER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM SOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! here is another poem:) #**#**#*#*#**#*#*#*#**#*#*#**#*#*#**# Once... You were with me..... I hid My feelings.... To protect myself... From being killed.... You told me to do it to... So I did.... I forgot about us.... I went to my 6th year... At Hogwarts.. You.. Hermione... And My Brother Ron... Were gone... Things over here.... Werent doing so good.... We were trapped.... Inclosed... In what Seemed like a safe place... I was Wrong... Punishments for nothing... Was cruel... Practicing... UNFORGIVABLE Spells... It felt so wrong..... As seeing these spells... Were used on innocent muggles.... And wizards Like me... Everday I thought About you..... Then One day you came back... We had to fight... Yelling... Throwing... Staggering People... Weak... Then After what It seemed Like forever... I got the News You were dead... Voldemort has rised above all others... That was Once to long ago... Now your here... Voldemort is Dead... All that was Once has past.... And we made our own future. #*#**#*#*#*#**#*#*#**#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*# Hoped you liked it. |
OMG! I missed so much poems! Bad Kita! Vulnerable: That was so sad! I felt so sorry for Draco! You've portrayed him very well! And you've gone in depth to his feelings! Well done! The intense of my heart: Aw! That was so cute! I couldn't help feeling fuzzy and warm inside! Trying so hard: Again, very cute! I laughed at some of it but i still loved it! Are you sure you want to be with me: Aw! That was so cute and so sad! I felt so sorry for Harry! Everything is over: Aw! That was so sad in the beginning but the ending was so cute! I felt so sorry for all the people carrying the dead and then the last couple of lines made me feel happy! Crushing: Haha! I couldn't help laughing as i remembered that scene! It was so funny! I'm blue: That was so sad! I felt so sorry for that person! I felt like crying: You're really good, Xavier! Once: Aw! That was so sad! I felt so sorry for Ginny! Once again, i liked the ending! Great posts! Loved it - all of them! Can't wait for more! Kita |
Thanks kita for the Comments... here is another poem. #**#*#*##**#*#**#*#**#**#*##*#* You walk the Halls... With great dignity..and all. Pink is what you wear... I wonder if they cover up... what you want us to do.... Your an evil little toad.... You look old... The smile... That grin... It makes me... want to throw up.... You want to change us.... Be all like you.. You tuck in our t-shirts... You try to seperate us from our friends... Your just an evil little snob.... I despise you all around... I wouldnt even care... If you died at all... The world would be happier... Without you making a ton of rules.... Look at yourself... Your the one who has the Problem... Let us fix you... Instead of you... Changing us Proffesor Umbridge... Your a tiny work of art... #*#**##*#**#*##*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*# hahhaha that was funny... Hoped you liked it... -Xavier:)- |
LOL that one was very funny!! :) Jess |
:lol: that was funny |
Thank you.... here is another poem... #**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#* You cant hear no one.... You keep to yourself... What happened at the Ministry.. Im so sorry for your lost.... Flashing photos.... Show all around you... Your famous Harry Potter... That want the juicy news.... I know your broken... For the one you loved... The only family member left... Is dead.... He didnt die in vain.... He was kind... Mistreated... Not seen for who he was... Come on Harry... I got you... and Im not going to leave you... No.....not yet. #**#*###**#*#*##**#*#*#*#*##*# Hoped you liked it:) |
Nice, new poems, Xavier. =] Keep them coming hun, you're doing fine. ^_^ |
URGH i missed LOADS!! i love them all tho. the umbridge one was hilarious, especially Quote:
the one with harry going back to ginny was sooooooooo cute!! the one where ginny goes back to 6th year was sooo sad but really good, i liked it A LOT. And the one about Sirius :( so sad, i luff him, and i luff you and your poems, more please :D |
Thanks here is another poem... #*#**#***#*#*#**#*#*#*#**#*# You say I cant have you... for your too dangerous... Too poor.... You see strands of black hair appear... I walked and turned away... I just cant see why you dont want to be with me... You should know... that i dont care if your all that... Its whats in there... what your heart tells you.. I love you remus.. Please... can we be... together.. forever... Dont disagree... Please... There is nothing here for me... to protect me... to love me... like you....... Or my hair... is going to turn black... like nothing.... without you.. #**#*#*#*#*#*##*#***#*#*# There you go:) |
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! i love the hair thing, good analagy (cant spell lol) youre really spoiling us with all these poems you know more please :D |
I love how you use the love between Tonks and Remus |
ya i am... here is another one... #**#***#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*##*#* The air is dim... You come out... you sit... The vision of seeing them... kissing.... Hurt her... Nothing left....... to feel her heart up... its left with a black hole... you cant help it... but to cry... there is nobody watching.... let it out.... six years you loved him... and he left you like this..... boiled up anger... and heartbroken inside.... she always wanted you.... everything she thought about... ended with you..... you feel lavendars lips... sweet... You feel a sting... running down your spine... you know deep inside.... that Lavendar is not the one for you... and you were standing there... waiting for Hermione... looking at her cry... you messed up..... but there you were.. going to make things right. #*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*# there you go:) |
bravo dude :D you have done it again :D |
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