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firenjen 09-02-2009 11:53 AM

awwwwwwwwwww!

dwakiepoooo!!!!!

bless him

good work batman!
jen xx

##Hermione&Draco## 09-02-2009 11:55 AM

Hheheheheheh thank you
-Xavier-

hermionesclone 09-02-2009 04:43 PM

Aw! Xavier! I'm so sorry i haven't posted in a long time! I can't believe i missed 3 poems! Anyways. He sees you: That was so sweet! Reminded me of the scene at Dumbledore's funeral. I felt so sad on the inside. The confused one: That one made me feel really sad as well! It was so deep and meaningful (all your poems are)! The brokendown one: That one made me realise how Draco felt during HBP. I felt so sorry for him! It was so sad! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita

JeshieRAWR 09-02-2009 10:17 PM

-clingstodracoluffahh- <333 tehe. xD
I can't believe I missed two poems by the amazing Xavierluffahh!!!!!!!!! =(
Anyways, now that I have read them, there were awesomee!!!!
Absolutely amazing!
You have a fantastic talent Xavier!
I'm soo jealous!! hahaha! :lol:
PAMS!!
:) Jess

therealginnyweasly 09-02-2009 11:15 PM

these are soo cool im jealous of you hahajk you have got some serious talent

##Hermione&Draco## 09-02-2009 11:32 PM

Thank you For the Comments..
Here is a poem..
*#*#*#*##*#***#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#**##**#
Cant you see Im heartbroken?...
Living everyday with Your love unopen..
No room for me to go in there..
Im Just a Person you see...
Nothing more...
There is no more to say...
Laying down by an oak tree...
Nothing to hold...
Just the Air I cant see...
It surrounds Me....
I wish It hadnt....
So I couldnt breathe....
Because I Dont want to suffer.....
It hurts....
Stings My heart....
I break Down and Hide....
I let no one see....
that I have feelings...
and Let people figure out That I have feelings For you....
I want you to say it...
Say those words....
Just Three simple words....
It wont hurt you at All...
No meaning....
Ok now Im Crazy....
Those Words Could Bond Us....
Together By Love...
Just say it....
So I can be free....
Do want I want....
If I get hurt...
You can catch Me....
When Im down...
You can Hold Me....
And When I think you dont Love me...
You can kiss me....
Oh....
Those Lips....
Please Meet Mine...
Im lonely cant you see....
Just Kiss me....
Forever we can be....
Just think...
You and Me....
Why Cant you see Im heartbroken?
Maybe if You did You would Come to me....
Well,I guess not....
Because I Have to go to The real world...
Engrave the Words,"I love you."
On a Tree...
On my wrist....
For now Ill just Dream...
Where There...
we Are Together....
Cant wait to Go back....
So I wont Cry....
And Lean in Your Arms....
You walk Pass me....
You smile...
As So Do I.....
Cant you See that Im Heartbroken?
##**#*#*#*#*##**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#**#*##*#
Hoped you Liked It...
-Xavier:)-

therealginnyweasly 09-02-2009 11:41 PM

oh
my
god!
i love that one sooooooooo much it really describes what i feel right now coinscience

##Hermione&Draco## 09-02-2009 11:46 PM

I know...
I hope you feel better..
Dont worry he will see that your heartbroken sooner or Later...
Trust me....
I will Post another Poem soon....
-Xavier:)-

JeshieRAWR 09-03-2009 02:35 AM

Xaiver that was sooo sad!!! =(((



but AMAZING!!

:) Jess

Lollipop! 09-03-2009 11:33 AM

Oh wow!
That was so amazing i almost cried!

hermionesclone 09-03-2009 04:55 PM

That was really, really sad! I almost cried as well! Xavier: you're really good! I felt so sorry for the person who is heartbroken! That's just too sad. Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita

##Hermione&Draco## 09-04-2009 12:13 AM

Hello thank you for the Comments....
Here is a tiny tiny poem...
#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*
When you look at me....
What do you see?
A peacful mind?
Or a hurt one...
Which one could it be?
I hold on to you...
It feels warm...
It lights my soul....
Nothing matters...
When your here with me...
Just by a tree...
Just you and me...
Its meant to be....
The darkess Days...
Its when your not with me...
Kissing her...
Not me....
I look In disgust...
Its so slow...
It mocks me...
Im in Shock...
Just have took look...
Your lips almost touch...
I cry...
I break down And Hide..
Maybe its not meant to be....
Lets be Friends....
Only that...
Nothing more to say...
Dont care about me...
Im Fine...
I guess...
Hopefully you cant see...
Ill just Get away so You can be...
You and Lavendar Brown...
#*#*#*#*#**##*#*#**#*##*#*#*#*
Hoped you liked it..

JeshieRAWR 09-04-2009 01:27 AM

=((((((
-cries-
:console: Poor Hermione! :console:
PAMS!!
:) Jess

Wenzlebug 09-04-2009 08:03 AM

aww..You're a very good poet buddie!

I like your poems!:glomp:

and poor Hermione :(

haha

Lollipop! 09-04-2009 11:21 AM

AWW!
'Mione cheer up it's okay! ^_^

##Hermione&Draco## 09-04-2009 11:24 AM

Thank you for the comments...
AND HEY CEDRICDIGGORY(we are buddies)
and **I hug Jessica**
Because she has been here with me since the beggining.
Here is a tiny poem
#**#**#*#*#**#*#*#**#*#*#
A dark twisted past....
Inside this mask....
It hides the truth....
Scared..
Maybe worried.....
Follow the Dark lords tasks...
And he will not banish you....
Send you to the world....
So you can get Captured.....
And send you to death....
Worse....
Just suck your soul....
Those no room
for traitors....
No room for muggles....
Bring them down...
There will not be worries after all....
Wait...
He can sense....
Do you feel leftout?
Worried?
Scared?
Maybe dont want to this Anymore......
He comes up to you....
Holds the Wand...
Directly at your Chest.....
Says,"AVADA KEDAVRA!"
And guess what...your dead...
You wasted life....
You wasted time....
It all started when you chose a side......
And you got branded...
With the Dark Mark....
You cant be afraid....
For now you are....
Are a deathEater...
More or less...
End up dead.
#**#**#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*##*
Here you go...
-Xavier-

Lollipop! 09-04-2009 11:27 AM

Pretty pwease Xavier, give us a happy poem!
I'm in tears!
Loved it!

firenjen 09-04-2009 11:31 AM

ALL FABBY XAVIER
is your romance thread open yet?

hermionesclone 09-04-2009 06:28 PM

OMG! I can't believe i missed 2 of Xavier's brilliant poems! When you look at me: That was so sad! You really described Hermione's feelings well! Poor Hermione! A dark twisted path: That was sad as well! You've portrayed the broken between 2 sides thing well! Well done! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: I'll try not to miss so much next time! :blush:

##Hermione&Draco## 09-04-2009 09:18 PM

Thank you for the Comments...
Here is another poem...
#*#**#*#*#**#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#
Vulnerable...
Weak....
His wand flies through the Air..
Talking...
Muttering....
He says He wont...
A bang...
Cloaks...
They come in and see....
Do it now....
Kill him...
Destroy him Draco...
Bellatrix says.....
Dracos Tears fall to the Ground...
Poor little boy...
He is afraid of what to do.....
Your not a killer Draco....
He says,"I HAVE TO DO THIS..."
You hear Footsteps below...
Harry Is scared...
Snape calms him down...
He goes up and you see...
A brokendown...
Full of Sadness...
Hidden secrets....
He says "Avada Kedavra..."
The Headmaster is dead....
No more mercy anymore....
#*#**#*#*#*#**##**#**#*#*#*#
Ok,That Was A lame poem...
lol...
-Xavier:)-

JeshieRAWR 09-04-2009 09:52 PM

I can't believe I missed a poem!!!!!!
I'm soo bad. :lol:
Anyways, you wrote a lot of intense poems mister!
not that I don't mind, because you are an AWESOME writer!
No more!!
kidding
LOVED IT!!!
PAMS!!
:) Jess

##Hermione&Draco## 09-04-2009 11:52 PM

Thank you...
Here is another poem:)
its tiny.
#**#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#
The intense of my heart...
I have never been in love this long....
I love you so much..
When you figure out I do..
Tell me what to do next...
Or kiss me On my lips...
Let me fall into your arms...
Warm me up...
Your eyes...
They Light me up....
Intense is when you speak to me...
You say we are going to be in love forever...
Nothing is going to change...
Not you and me...
We will never be apart...
A reason I still live...
Intense is when you look at me...
Describe me as many things.....
Your love,
Your heart,
And your all...
Intense is when I get lost around you...
So powerful...
Nothing besides you...
Is all I think About.....
You cloud up my mind...
My reactions...
My thoughts...
They surround all around you....
Intense...
Is wherever...
Me...
And...
You...
Are at Ron.
#*#**#*##**#**#**#*#*#**#
Hoped you liked it:)
-Xavier-

JeshieRAWR 09-05-2009 12:01 AM

teheheheheheheheehhee. xDD
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You go so much in detail I can't even describe it! =))
Luff you!
:) Jess

Wenzlebug 09-05-2009 12:39 AM

oooh..I laik it ^_^..

great update Xavier ;)

##Hermione&Draco## 09-05-2009 03:00 AM

Thanks WenzelBud And Jess..
here is a poem deticated to WenzelBud...
#**#*#*#**#*##**##**#*#*#**##*#*#*#
Trying so hard...
To complete tasks...
All around...
When it comes to girls..
You make me laugh...
We dont Know anything...
But hey...
Will Do that Together...
When your down Dude...
Ill talk to You...
Maybe think about...
The ones we Love...
and talk about...
How great their skin is!!!!!
Dude lets crank up Laughs...
Pull some jokes...
What a great time we will have...
How about some sweets...
I wants some treats..
And hang out with you..
Bud...
All day...
Lets talk about...
What people dont get about us...
And it aways ends with...
Dude,I know everything about you....
Your my friend for life.....
Once we are older we can talk about...
Our old Friendship Of ours....
Play new pranks with our wands....
Like we are still young...
So lets pull some pranks...
Talk about girls....
Figure out why People dont understand us...
Because Your my Bud...
My bud For life Ron.
#**#*#**#*#**#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#
Hoped you liked it.
-Xavier:)-


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