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Oh, gosh... I don't know what to say. I loved it, but it was so SAD! I'm shaking, because I don't know what else to do (i don't cry when I read stuff). That was beautiful! |
Whoa, long. Intense, too. Enjoyed reading it though, luff. Post more soonnnn. <3 |
oh my gosh xavier, you have done it again you have made me cry again and i am all full up from maceroni cheese! whilst crying! you are such a lovely writer its so deep i didnt want it to end and then it did! i am in shock i think i need sugar! or surgery! wow, is all i can say post another one soon, i think im addicted. A LOT! |
Ah-mazing.You're one good poet. |
Thanks For the Comments Guys.... Here is A short Loving Poem..... #**#*#*##***#*#*#**#**#*#*#*#**#*#***#*#*## Heartbeat Lullaby Once One time.... You were with Me.... Laid In My arms.... How warm it filled me..... That you were with me.... And that You Loved me.... I stroked your hair... So Gently..... You looked upward At me..... And You kissed Me.... I still Remember.... It was Beautiful....... You laid On my Chest.... Im breathing Heavily.... You hear A beat..... It sound so sweet.... It was My beating Heart.... That Loved Being.. Loved By you.... And Forever You didnt Stop..... You said I love you.... And Forever Shall I be..... The Leaves Were Blowing hard... Pushing Every Orange Leaves Away From you and me.... And I said,"We cant be.... I cant risk Your Life Because Your With Me.... Hold On to Me... Remember? You Love me.... You went Back Sad.... Laid On your Bed..... You heared A beat.... A hard,Lively.. Bass Drum Beat.... Thump,...... Thump,...... Your Eyes Closed to the Beat Of My Heart.... I will Always Be with You always... Think Of Me.... When You Fall Asleep.... To Your Own HeartBeat Lullably... Ginny...... #*#**#*#**#**#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*# Hoped You Liked It... -Xavier:)- |
XAIVER I MISSED YOU!!!! :poke: Now that you're back, I just have to say...... THAT I LUFFED IT AND I LUFF YOU SOOOO MUCHH!!!! That was awesomeee!!!!!!!! Poor Ginny, she can't be with Harry, but she will be. Confusing I know right? LOLOL! :lol: PAMS!!!! :) Jessica |
I missed You 2......<3 Ya A little Confusing... Lol.... Anyways... Im Already Working on another poem... -Xavier:)- |
oh my god i loooooved it xavier write more soon please Xd |
Okey dokey... -Xavier:)- |
:bugeyes: :faint: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! more please more more more please!! aww thats so cute! bless!! i love the heartbeat lullaby thing! PAMS! jen xxx |
Aw! That was really, really sweet and sad! I felt like crying! Aw! Harry and Ginny! So cute! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Kita |
Thank you for the Wonderful Comments.... Here is A tiny tiny poem.... ~He sees you~ Your going through my mind... Trying to find My weakness... He passes through Images... Its Of friends...And People I care About..... Im in Pain.... I can sense... That what He sees In My mind Is you.... So He can use You... Because He now Knows That I love you.... So Go... Get Out Of my Life.... So he wont hurt you.... So He wont see you... ######################### Hehehehheeh hope you liked the Short... Tiny... Poem:) -Xavier- |
that on is soooooooooooo cool :D |
Thank you... Thank you... More Poetry on the Way -Xavier:)- |
AHhhhhh!!!! Xaiverluff I luffed ittt!!!! <333 :) Jess |
Aww thank you..... More Poems On the Way... -Xavier- |
Very Good Xavier! |
AWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! xavier, buddie, u are rather spectacular arn't you really :D luff it more please *gets out "we love xavier" banner* :lol: jen x |
Woah! Not that's cool! |
Thank you guys here is another short short poem... hehhehehe #****#**#**#*#*#*#**#*#**#*#*#*#*#***#*#* Confused In Mind.... Im lost Of time... I cant complete the task he gave me.... I failed... I lost... All my friends and my family is gone...... There is nothing here for me to live for.... The thick air stops...... The people around me.... Thier spells to a complete stop..... I walk to him..... The One who they call.... The Dark Lord.... I stand in front of him.... Ready to give up..... I thought Of everyone.... The ones I loved.... But still time didnt move.... and I knew what I had to do... I got my wand.... Put It to his Chest... And I said the Two words..... And he was Dead.. *#*#*#**#**#**#*#**#*#*#**#*#**#*#*#*# Ok,... I really didnt like this poem... But You know it is a Hp poem... So there you go.. |
It was good, not one of my favourites, but it was good! ^_^ First to post!:D |
WOAH!!! NO WAY!!! yes way!!! wow xavier wowzee wow wow Jen xxx |
Thanks here is another poem #**#**#*#**#**#*#*#**#**#*#*#* Brokendown... Crying.... Hiding....... Im scared.... That If I dont complete The task I might Die.... The Dark lord Isnt merciful...... I have the Brand of a DeathEater.... I must.... I have to.... I cry.... Because Im weak.... No other plans..... I have to let them through..... What Will happen to my Friends? What will Happen to the Other children? Will they Suffer? I can just Hear Bellatrix screech.... I have to do it.... Or he will kill me... No other Choice.... No one cares About me.... Im all alone..... They will deserve what They Get.... The Dark Lord will win... I went to a secret room.... I let The DeathEaters In.... Bellatrix... Blew the Windows Off the school.... Fear And Terror elightened my eyes... This Was The Last Battle.... Good vs. Evil.... It will Come... One will win One will Fall... Lets Just Hope I did the Right Thing... My body, My life... Or Despair With the Death Of Dumbledore... The Plan has Already Gone through... I must go with Them.... I will not Die tonight.... But what About The Days To come....? #**#*#*#*#*#*##*#***#*#*#*#*#*#*## Here you go |
Awwww! Was that Draco? poor him!:cry: Dwaco! It's okay! |
Ya It was Draco..... More Poems On the Way:) -Xavier- |
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