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Why thank you kind sir! lol!!! Yeahh!!! Can't wait for more posts from Xavierluffehh!!! :) Jess |
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lol Sir Spots was good, but he hasn't posted in FOREVAH! *kicks pup* |
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Anyway.... Back to this thread. Nice, new poems. Can't wait for more! |
Sorry i havnt posted for AGES!!!! BUT WOWZEE WOW WOW WOW Dude Your Awsome!!! A LOT!!!!! mOREEEEE Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! |
oh my goodness... that was so.. DEEP. and touching. i love your poems, they dig deep. your style is very creative. can't wait for more poems. i loved the line from That Night At The Astronomy Tower: She wouldnt have a chance to say.. that she loved him.. Day in.. And day out.. and Snape and Lily was really touching. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! three cheers for xavier! |
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Thank you... Thank you my Luff.... And dont worry I will... -Xavier:)- ================================================== == Quote:
Its alright.. And Thank you... Thank you soo very much... Ok will do... -Xavier:)- ================================================== = Quote:
I know!!!!!!!!! I loved SirSpots... I looked up to him... He was My idol... Thats The Only reason Im here writing Hp Poems... Its all because Of him..<3 And Thank you.. -Xavier:)- ================================================== == Quote:
I entered But I know Im not going to win... I only Had 30 mins...to think Of a Poem and Post it Because It was SOOOOOOOO LATE AND I WANTED TO GO TO BED... Because I was In a Parade For Tae-Kwon-Do.. And Also there was a festival and i wanted to hang out with my friends.... I know I want him to post poems!!!!!!!!!! -Xavier:)- ================================================== = Quote:
Lol!!!!!!!!!! And Dont worry a new one is on the way....... -Xavier:)- ================================================== = Hey guys:hello: here is A short Poem... Its not one Of those Long ones.... But here you go..... #*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*# I see great mountains.... Beyond the Black lake............ So Beautiful... But yet... I never seemed to noticed It Before...... What A shame... For I have been Missing Out on... Mostly Everything..... For I been caught... Trapped... In things... That always Bubbled in my mind.... I see Harmless... Unloved creatures.... They are not as much different from me... I see them... It makes me wonder... Why I have hated all the Creatures in the world... mostly all my life... For I only incountered Werwolves.... And Some Dementors.... Ive seen a new side Of life... And Of The world... Then I see.... Strands of hair on her face... Her Beautiful Smile... It doesnt mean I havent thought About her... About us... She is Different.... I am different... Im a person... She is A person.... I think Im In love with Her.... Her name is Ginny Weasley.... But Ive been so blinded from my life... Ive been trying to save many others... But Im done... I have succeeded.. So Now Im finally... Looking out.... #*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#**##*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#* I hoped You liked It... This Poem Is deticated to all of you... My Readers... I love you... -Xavier:)- |
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Awwww how cutee!!! This part was my favorite! Quote:
Photos!: NO WAY!! Awww I luff you too :) Jess |
I really liked this one! |
Photos!: Click me!!! |
Aw! That was so cute! I loved it so much! That last part was so cute! I couldn't help but get a bit emotional! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Kita PS: Aw! Love you too, Xavier! You and your brilliant poems! |
[QUOTE=##Hermione&Draco##;8507301 But Im done... I have succeeded.. So Now Im finally... Looking out.... -Xavier:)-[/QUOTE] AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! XAVIER!!!! I ACTUALLY LOVE YOUR POEMS!! THEY ARE DEEP !!! you finish reading and its like "woah!!!" NEVER STOP WRITING!!! YOUR AMAZING AND DESERVE SOMETHING SHINEY!! MAYBE EVEN A KNITEHOOD!! WOW! |
i just read nine tears again and i cried :( i am actually crying!! |
Aww.... Dont cry... **I go over There and Give you a Hug...** Im going to Post Soon.. -Xavier:)- |
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Ya... The Problem Is Idk what To write About.. Hahahaha But I will Post For sure... -Xavier:)- |
errrmmm... write about me!!! lol OHH I KNOW! if you havnt done it already.... you could do about dumbledores family and when his sister died? like what dumbledore saw when he drank the potion?? just an idea if you havnt done it already :) |
Ooo......... Very Intresting..... I will take that Into Consideration............... -Xavier:)- |
XAVIER! im waitingggg......... no pressure but... POST!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :):) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :):) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :):) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :):) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) |
You have a very different style. The ellipses make for a unique poetic rhythm. Keep up the writing and wonderful work. A poetess dedicated to her words are the best kind. =] |
Hehehehehe.. Thank You:) Im just wierd Like that.. Im Proud Of it... Thanks For The Advice.. POETRY BUDDIE:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Xavier- #*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*##**#*#*#**#* Hey Guys.. Thank You for supporting My poems... It means Alot!!!! <3 Anyways here is Another Poem... Its Not One Of those War Poems... So here you go.... Hope you Like it #*#**#*#**#**#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#**#*#**#**#*#*# Stand By Me When The Snowy Mountains.... Start Breaking down... And they slowly begin... To fall straight Down.................................... When The water slowly evaporates.... And Makes Its way Up.... Until there is No more single Drop Of water Left On this World.................................. If the Blue Pale sky...... That Stands above us... Tumbles... And Fall..... And its to come Down... And smash Me.... Or If Hope... And Mankind.... Begins to Crumble.. And Turn Into Dust.... And Falls Into My Open Palms... And All the Pressure Is On Me... Will You stand By Me? When A tear Begins To Form... And slowly starts To Fall Down..... Will You Be The one? To catch it... And Never Let It Fall....... Only to wonder... Why The Tear Formed... Came Out Of The White.. Right Out Of My Eyes........ In the First Place... Will You still Be there to Comfort me.... When Im Down... Lost... Done..... UnLoved... Not Worth It.... No More...... When I think that you... My BestFriend.... My Bud.. Dont Care About Me anymore..... And Hold me.... And Watch me... Vulnerable... Weak... In your arms.... While I start Crying.... Yelling.... For Im done with this world now..... Will you still Be there to Stand By Me? When The Green Leaves... Begin.. To Transform.... Into a Broken Down... Lifeless yellow..... And Falls.... When There is No life at all... Just me and You.... And Will We try to share our Feelings.... And Cry into eachothers Arms.... Because There is Nothing For Us Now.... Will you still Be there... Right Next To me... Standing By me? Whever I may Go... What If we Get Hurt..... What if we are in danger..... What If Im causing it..... As Long as Your with Me..... Right Next To me..... You will Get Hurt.... Break...... You will Bleed Once in a while...... And Your Family will fall to the Ground... PowerLess..... Because Your with Me... I dont want you to sacrifice so much for me.... am Worthless... Nothing at All..... But I still Ask... Will You still Stand Beside me? I have no Family... No one To thank For supporting Me... When I was A baby.... Because My real Parents Are Dead.... Buried Under The Ground... Waiting For me.. When My time comes.... But Will you carry Out My Worries.... Try To fix Them.... Will you Listen to Me... Will you understand My Fears... And Try to destroy them all... Together... Just Me And You... Be my father.... My mother... Please Im all Alone..... Just Hold Me Mate.... Never let me go... Im in so much pain... You understand me.... You know what Im going through.... The question Is still.... Will you stand By me? What If I turn Bad.... I point my wand at You.... And IF i speak The Words That may Kill you..... Before It hits you.... Will you try To help Me... See Whats Wrong..... Will you trust me... With Your Weaknesses... If I Turn Against You... And use Those Weaknesses Against You... To kill you... Bring you to your .... DownFall.... Will you try to remind me... The Times We had... The things That we talked about... To change me.... So I wont try to Kill You... Will You Still Stand By Me? What If Im seconds Of Dying..... Will You try To stop It... From Happening.... Will You cry.... Will it feel like a Part Of You died.... Will You hold me... One Last Time..... Until I die... I soon see Green Light... It hits Me... I cry.. And I fall Into a Sleep..... For I sacrificed Myself... For you... And Every wizard Alive.... My Eyes Open... Im very weary.. I see the World... Crushing And Burning.... Buildings Begin to fall...... The Light is Going out.... Then Time stops........ Its Just Me And You... Im laying Down... You crying.. Holding me.... I move my Dying Face.... I see Danger All around.... My time has Come..... I will Soon Be gone.... And Then You said, "Im right here....... Please Dont go.......... Dont leave me.... Without you mate....... Please.." And After I see you.... For My very Last Time....... I say," Ron...... You dont need me... Its I... Ialways Needed you.... You protected Me when Danger was Around... You helped Me with Love... Mainly Everything.... You Dont need Me to Stand By you.... I needed You to stand By me... Now here I am... Dying... Stand By me Ron... One Last Time?" Ron was Holding me.... Tears Fell on me... I shed A tear.. At Last... I said,"Let me go.....Its Time...." And you looked At me.... And said,"No... Im not going... Im standing By you.... Forever... Me and You Harry... Will Will Never be apart....." Then One last Feeling Of Love... Dropped To My Heart... Before It stopped.. ##*#*#*#*#*##**#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#* Hoped You Liked It!!!! I LOVE YALL!!!!!!!!!!! -Xavier:)- |
thats such a pretty poem :) |
I agree with therealginnyweasly. It was a pretty poem. Luffed it! More Xaiverluffehh!!! <333 :) Jess |
That was really great! |
Xavier. That was so sad! It was pretty but still so sad! The way you ended! I was crying so much - no-one's ever made me cry whilst i was having ice-cream (i was reading little women so i was already crying). You write really well! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! *sniffles* Kita |
What a long poem! Good though! I liked it! |
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