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I Open At The Close - Sa13+ Made by: Jess, of S.O.S. [Jessica's Request Thread] Hey,my name is Xavier :hello: and I'm new to SS..and new to writing HP poems. All of the harry potter stuff belongs to J.K Rowling. I would like to thank Jess and Spork! because I am doing this for them..:glomp: Read Jess's 4 fanFictions called Love is in the Air, Mission Pureblood, Desperate, and Wizard POV's :read!: its REALLY GOOD! And also read my friend Spork! stories.. Go check out The W Questions! I know you will love it! And all three stories go under the romance section..so check it out! If you have any comments you wish to tell me about my poem dont hesitate to tell me because we are all friends here:D So I hope you like my poems... here is the first one.......... ################################################## ################################################## ##################################### I Open At The Close Walking through the neverendless dark forest... thinking about all the fallen warriors that died fighting for me..in what seemed like a neverending.. bloody battle at Hogwarts.... They sacrificed their own lives.... just for me.. at the very end.. surrender into the grasp of my worst enemies... and to take my own life away.. Step by Step.. I'm getting near.. The cold wind blowing in the air... ....while the dementors were swiftly gliding right pass by me.. putting terror into anyone not on Lord Voldemort's side... as giants went to pick up thier dead brothers.. while some are getting ready to go into battle... I remember the images inside Hogwarts... Shattered glass.. Broken walls... Bloodstains upon the grounds.. While the dead lay in rows in The Great Hall.. The teachers were worried that the end of Hogwarts was to come.. For their protective charms didn't hold Voldemort's army for very long.. They fought brave,and true.. just like the statues of knights that would die for their school.. But it wont hold the enemy for long... Suddenly Death Eaters came into view... dueling what seems to be every D.A member I taught during my 5th year.. There was Luna swaying back and forth.. For the killing curse missed her only by a few inches. She held out her wand.. and bellowed some words that sent a Death Eater knocking to the ground.. No mercy should be shown tonight.. Luna killed the Death Eater... And left the rotten body and left to fight some more.. Dean and Seamus each dueling thier own Death Eater... While Neville was planting some angry mandrakes up against the wall... for if any Death Eater passes along.. they are going to get a very loud yell coming from the wall.. and knock them fainted on the ground.. I remembered the battle was on the full moon.. I hear howling sounds coming from the Hogwart's Courtyard.. Then the werewolves pushed the entrance door.. and pounced on some of the members of the order.. Then the most terrifying site I have seen.. Greyback and Lupin clawing and biting into each others red flesh.. As I saw my loyal friends dueling themselves three Death Eaters at a time.. Then a thought came to me.. Ron....... Hermione..... They have been here for me.. Till this... My very end..., The vision of the battle was hours ago.. And if I dont turn myself in..., the battle will go on.. I grow nearer and nearer.. I will miss my friends.. I open at the close, ............................I'm almost there....... I worry about dying,but what will happen to the innocent people that fought for their lives trying to protect me? Will they all die like Sirius, my parents, Cedric, or Dobby...? For they all protected me.. As I worry for them.. I'm coming to my end.. And then a teardrop fell to the ground I just couldnt help it.. The memories of my friends will be so close to my heart... Then...., ghostly figures began to appear on both sides of me.. My parents,Sirius,and Lupin were there.. Lupin..? I couldnt believe it...he was dead.. Greyback will pay for that.., and I asked the most childish question to him.. "Does it hurt,.....to die?" But it wasnt him that anwsered it was my loving godfather that said"It is very quick and painless.." I missed him.. I missed all of them.. I knew they werent alive because nobody can rise from the dead.. I wanted them to be alive.. the pain of knowing they had a whole life ahead of them was eating me alive....... I looked up to the sky.. trying to hide my tears..then sighed.. "Will you stay with me?" My mom looked at me with tears in her eyes.. and said.. "To the very end.." The leaves were pushing against my feet.. nearer and nearer im walking to my end.. I will miss Hogwarts..it was the closest thing of me calling it my "Home." I glanced at the school.. The stars around it were shining bright.. like that same night Dumbledore died.. I will miss that place when.....I'm gone.. I turned my head back walking toward to my death.. and came to a complete hault and I took my leave.. Voldemort shall be mortal again when he takes my own life away.. He raised his wand and said,"Avada Kedavra" And through my circle glasses the light in my eyes simply went away......... "I Open At The Close..." ################################################## ################################################## ##################################### Hoped you liked it!:) If you hadnt noticed my poem idea was from the Deathly Hallows where Harry walks through the forest to find Voldemort so he could kill him.. which makes Voldemort mortal again.. Please review.. And I wish I could be nominated in the golden goblins FanFiction Awards.. but Im too late..:faint: Well have a nice day....:D Your Friend, ##Hermione&Draco##a.k.a Xavier:loved: |
OMS..... Xavier, this is ah-mazing! :glomp: It's not a traditional poem which is awesome! You are so talented! |
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THANKS!:glomp: your my first reader.. And just for that here is a hint of my next HP poem..this line is in the poem. "She is the daughter of one of the four founders":D Thanks so much again!!! You just made my day!:console: Love you buddy,:loved: ##Hermione&Draco##a.k.a Xavier ************************************************* |
I loved it Xavier! It was amazing! I could never write like that! You are really talented!! Can't wait for more poems from you! PAMS!!! ~Jess P.S. Thanks so much for the ads! I'll put one up for you! :glomp: |
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Thanks Jess!!:D Dont worry im going to write alot more poems!! I just need a few more readers and I will post the next one up! Ok?? Thanks for supporting me too.. Much love,:flowers: ##Hermione&Draco##a.k.a Xavier *********************************************** |
Hey Guys..:hello: Since you two are mostly my only readers and decided to give me a shot of reading my poems Im going to post another one just for yall! Personally I really didnt like this one but you might..:blush: So here it is..... ################################################## ################################################## ################################### Helena Ravenclaw..The daughter of one of the Four Great Founders A pale white body floats through the walls of Hogwarts.. She is the daughter of one..of the four great founders... Under her ghostly transparent white dress.. is a large mark just below her chest.. That reminds her what happened to her and the reason she is dead.. The scene is changed and there was a young lady..her blue dress blowing in the breeze.. while the trees surrounded the people of her town as she looked very envious at her mother.. For the people only looked at her mother because they were consumed at the beauty and cleverness.. And that made her wanting to kill her.. All eyes upon her not enough on me... Oh.. I wish I was her.. and let everybody admire me.. Nobody else.. Not even my mother. I looked at her and I noticed the crown on her head.. Red,Green,and Gold.. As you saw it through my desiring eyes.. Thats it! I shall steal it for whoever wears it is bestowed with wisdom.. Then,I was back to the scene.. The speech my mother was giving..ended.. FINALLY! All I heard was something about her.. and three other people finding a magical school..but I didnt care. So me and my mother went to bed.. I woke up.. The candlelight was brighting up my darkened room.. The cold breeze blew hard.. so I got to my feet and closed the window. I thought of the crown.. so I had a plan.. I didnt have time to pack.. For tonight I will steal the crown and leave.. I put on my white dress and went to my mothers room.. The crown was trapped.. concealed in a glass.. I walked quietly toward the crown.. and lifted the glass.. And went away for good.. I managed to get out of the country I once lived in.. But the news that my mother was ashamed of not having the crown.. She locked herself inside of her own house.. Then two days later she fell fatally ill.. and wish to see me once more again she sent the baron to hunt me down and bring me to her.. The Baron was a hot tempered man.. though he loved me so.. he will look for me until his soul is reaped but I wish not to be seen.. The wind blew hard.. It was a cold windy night.. I laid here by an old oak tree.. with no one gazing at me.. "What Happened?!" I have the crown... "But where are the people who are suppose to be gazing at me?" Im beautiful.. and clever.. "Why havent people been crowding me?" I took off the crown.. I think I'm just ugly.. Iwas unharmed and untouched... I was worried for my mother because soon she would draw her last breath..and all I did was betray her then..- "H-e-l-e-n-a... Where are you-?" It was him! The Baron! I quickly ran into a dark forest.. "I-hear-you.." "Come to me Helena!" Then,my voice echoed through the forest that said.., "Leave me alone!" Then I stopped and walked to the other tree.. I ducked down and held my breath.. The Baron..his voice cold and hard said, "Come out your mother wants you.." I bellowed,"NO!" Then I hear some twigs break in half.. He was close.. I quickly hid the crown in a tree's trunk.. And turned my head to see.. The Baron staring down at me.. His eyes were so scary.. "We can be together Helena.." I was shocked and anwsered with a "no." "If you dont want me nobody can have you.." He took a dagger fom deep within his pocket.. "NO! I BEG YOU! DONT!" The last things I heard were.. "Your too late my dear Helena.." And he stabbed me and I was dead. But it wasnt over.. The Baron looked at his love and saw what he had done.. And then he felt her blood.. A teardrop fell.. He held the dagger in his hand and stabbed himself to his own death.. All he wanted was for them to be together.. Now they laid there.. They were together.. But they were dead... Thats the tragic story of Helena Ravenclaw.. The daughter of one of the four great founders.. And her ghost remains at Hogwarts.. She is now known as The Grey Lady.. ################################################## ################################################## ################################### HOPED YOU LIKED IT!!! Read and review..thank you.. And I will post another poem when I have 5 new more readers..ok? Love yall, Xavier |
I loved this poem too! It was brilliant! I could've never written it! I loved the whole story part of your poems, they are amazing! PAMS!!! :) Jessica |
****************************************** Thanks Jess.. And Im not going to post until I get 5 readers..ok? Love you buddy, Xavier ******************************************* |
Okay that's cool, I'll help you get some new readers! :) Jessica |
New Reader! OMG! So sad! You are a true wrighter! I love your poem! ~Lily :harry: :ron: :hermy: |
I love your poems, Xavier. :glomp: PAMS! |
Very Nice! Keep it up |
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Yay!!!!!!!!A new reader:woot: Im soo happy now!!!!!!!!:console: And Thanks:D your friend, Xavier ************************************************** **** Quote:
Thanks Dory:loved: Ill post another poem hopefully today.. Love you buddy, Xavier:) ************************************************** *** Quote:
Thanks:D And dont worry I will. your new friend, Xavier ************************************************** *** ******************************** *** *** *** *** *** *** *** *** *** *** *** *** *** ################################################## ############### Hello my fellow friends/readers:hello: LOL! Here is another poem..I didnt have nothing to write about that seemed intresting so I just wrote this out of nowhere.. I had the idea from the Deathly Hallows.. Its kindve short though.. Please read and review.. (To tell you the truth I really didnt like this one but yall might) So here it is.. ################################################## ##### Bathilda Bagshot is Dead As the doorbell rang... Lily Potter quickly got to her feet to open the door.. It was Harry's first Birthday you see.. and friendly nice Bathilda,.. their next door neighboor.. wanted to wish little sweet Harry a, "Happy Birthday.." She and Lily had fresh tea while James was trying to catch up to Harry.. For he was riding his toy broomstick that his godfather had given him.. But he was unable to come.. It was a quiet little Birthday as you see.. The Potters were nice and so very sweet.. Bathilda was like family to them.. Then one day she found out that her close friends that seemed like family to her..That Lily and James were both dead.. After that poor Bathilda wasnt the same again.. Then sixteen years later.. Sweet little Harry was grown up at the age of seventeen.. Him and two other friends were finding and destroying Horcruxes.. It was always dark outside.. The world they now lived in were now haunted by Dementors and Death Eaters..but she new Harry was destined to take them and destroy the killer of her Beloved friends and restore light again.. It was too much to ask of this young adult so she did her part and posted a sign in her front yard.. And if Harry was to ever past by her house he would know that her prayers and heart were always with him.. Twelve days later it was a cold and windy night.. The trees were pushing up against this old rusty house.. There was a sign in the front yard.. Saying.., "Long live Harry Potter! The night that Voldemort tore your family apart.. You were so young... He used the,"Avada Kedavra" curse on you but yet your still alive.. When you grow older you will understand.. You will start to have feelings.. And grow envy of Lord Voldemort.. You will have to be the one.. The one to kill him.. Wherever you are stay strong.. And maybe the light will come out again...." Inside the light was dim.. For there was only one single candle to light up that single room.. The rocking chair was swaying back and forth.. She lay there.. Her eyes piercing with fright.. Outside.. The grate creeked open.. While the lighting sprang out in the open.. She knew what was to become of her.. She waited there pale and still.. Then.. Her door slamed open.. She opened her mouth then said, "I know why your here.." The person moved a little bit closer.. "You shall die tonight.." She nodded.. Then said.., "I will die to see the faces of my beloved friends.. you remember them dont you.. Lily and James Potter.. You seperated them from me and her son.. Now.. Soon.. You will die.. And the last face you will see is their son.. Harry.. He will kill you." Then the person looked down at the coiled snake upon the ground.. Then spoke in Parseltongue.. "Kill" Nagini wrapped around the lifeless rocking chair.. and made her way up.. Then,Bathilda was consumed in the grasp of Nagini.. The snake squeezed tighter and tighter until Bathilda turned Blue.. Then the snake let loose and slithered to her head then into her Mouth.. The chair was shaking rapidly and it sended it to the ground.. Bathilda's eyes popped open.. Then her blood was coming right out of her eyes and mouth.. Nagini or Voldemort didnt care.. The snake was almost unseen.. For she avoided the blood and stuffed her whole body in the woman's body.. Lord Voldemort chanted ancient words as his wand lit up bright orange and it hit Bathilda's body.. And it looked like as Bathilda was untouched but no one will notice that it was Nagini that was now in control of her body.. And nobody will know that.. Poor Bathilda Bagshot...was dead.. ################################################ Hoped you liked it!!!!!:D Please review.. And hopefully tommorow I will post another one.. With much love.., Xavier |
That was amazing! It was soo good! I liked how you used that part from Deathly Hallows in your poem, that's brilliant! I thought this was your best one so far! PAMS!!! :) Jess |
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Thanks Jess..:D Ill try to post another 1 2morrow.. ok? Love you buddy, Xavier ***************************************** |
*drops in* Wheee! Awesome poetry, Xavier. You could go really far, so stick to this, hun - you definitely have the spark. Oh, and I love the title of the last poem. Bathilda Bagshot is dead. Really catchy. ^___^ Quote:
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Thanks SenoritaMaxie!!!:D I know it was catchy...LOL!! And sure thing..I guess Im hyper or something lol And also again thank you..:loved: your friend, Xavier ******************************************* |
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************************************* **XavierBlushes** Thank you Maxie... Ill post soon...today most likely.. and my next poem is a love poem!!! Love you Maxie, Xavier ************************************* |
I can't wait. ^^ And it's good to know that it will be a love poem. Because all the dark ones are making me shiver. :D Keep rocking. <3 |
Haha yeah..they were giving me the shivers too.. Ill give you a hint of my next poem.. "It has to do with the silver doe.." |
*poofs back in* :gasp: Excellent. I can't say any more than that. Wow! That last one was really good...Bathilda Bagshot is Dead. That is a great title. ;) |
WELCOME BACK!!! And thanks... Ill post another poem today.. LOVE YOU!!! **Xavier** |
Hey here is another poem.. I decided it should be a love one..lol Hope you like it!!!!!! ######################################## ######################################### Snape and Lily As Snape brushed a strand of hair from Lily's face she said, "What happened to you..?" Snape looked at her and reached deep within her blue eyes.., "What do you mean?" Lily stared at him and bowed her head to the ground and Snape pressed his hand upon her chin and brought her face up towards his..and they were so close together.. "What happened to us..Severus what I mean is..We loved each other.." Snape turned his head away then Lily said, "Look at me..Severus ever since you became a Slytherin.. I'm scared..you have been hanging out with the wrong crowd.. I'm just worried for you.." Then Snape turned to look at her..and he said, "They understand me.. you dont know what I go through.. And what life I live in!" Lily yelled,"Then help me to understand Severus.. Everytime I try to organize my feelings it always ends up with you.. maybe because... I-I love you!" He looked shocked.. He wanted to say something but he was cut off when Lily leaned toward him.. And kissed him.. After that Lily said she was sorry and left.. while Snape stood there pale and still.. Until he went back to the castle.. And dreamt of Lily.. while he laid there sleeping in the Slytherins Boy's Dorm Room.. The next day he scattered off to Potions Class..for it was his favorite class of all.. Once the day was nearly out lily had wrote a note to him to meet her by the lake.. As he walked to the lake he saw Moony and Padfoot.. But then he saw Lily and he didnt care about them for all that mattered was him and Lily.. For now he realized he was in love with her.. As he approached them.. Moony said,"What are you doing here Half Blood?" I looked at Lily awkwardly and said,"Lily-.." But I was caught off when Lily said, "I guess he cant find his way to the castle.. Half Bloods these days dont know a single thing.." And they laughed at him until their cold hearts were content.. But he guessed it wasnt enough for them.. for they lifted him into the air and left him.. hanging upon a tree.. Later that evening his fellow Slytherins helped him off the tree.. And he headed for the Slytherin's Common Room... But he didnt sleep that night.. Light was shining through an open window.. He went to the Great Hall to eat some food.. But just as he pushed the door someone thrust their arms upon his open waist and it was Lily.. He stared at her and walked off but Lily kept following as she was saying.., "Please Severus listen to me! 'Please my friends will kill me if I was seen with you!" Snape came to a complete hault and said, "Now I see..your ashamed of me.." Lily tried to say something but everything ended with a, "Goodbye." Fifteen years later Lily died.. And it was all because of Snape.. And from the first day Lily and him met.. to the day they fell apart.. Snape had always loved her.. ##################################### ##################################### HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!!:) Please read and review.. Thanks.. Love, Xavier |
Awwww how cute Xavier!! Another one of my favorites of yours! It's so sad but so great!! Keep it coming! PAMS!!! :) Jess |
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