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Old 01-21-2006, 10:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Gryffindor I Felt It When We Touched - Sa13+

this is my story my 1st story so tell me if you like it


"Thanks again Lunna, for coming"
"dont sweat it ginny i've always wanted to see you'r home"
"I still cant believe snape gave us all this work to do over break." ginny said dipping her quill in ink "i mean come on its almost christmas!"
"I dont understand why snape does'nt like you guys. He didnt give us any work" luna heard ginny mumble "jerk" under her breath
"hes such a jerk i wish i can just hex him!"

"Ginny , Lunna!" it was Hermione at the door her bushy hair in a pony tail "come on Harry's here" she turned around and her skirt swaid from side to side when she walked. Hermione grew a little over break

Lunna got up and walked to the door "Ginny ,are'nt you comig?"ginny looked up and felt a little wierd inside
"what....uhm....ye....yes,yes i'll be down in a minute"Ginny smiled, Lunna rose her ibrow and walked out. Ginny ran to her mirror, tide up her hair and rubed her face and ran down stairs.

"Hi Ginny" Harry said running his fingers through his hair
'hi " Ginny whent red and smiled
everyone was sitting around the table ready to eat
"Ginny dear" said miss. Weasley giving everyone a plate "can you show harry to his room. You remember what room it is, right
'yes mother" Ginny went even more red "come on Harry" Harry looked down and his bags where gone "dont worry harry you'r bags are alrady up stairs"
Harry and Ginny felt funny they where both alone in a hallway, no one around .
"So Ginny are you still with Dean? "
Ginny smiled and said "no, i like someone ells, but i dont think he likes me. Well harry this is you'r room

"Thanks Ginny" he smiled and Ginny smiled back "and i do like you, a lot"
he moved a little closer to her and Ginny felt the bed behind her
harry took the clip from Ginny's hair and put on the side table. He put his hand on the back of her head and could feel her soft hair. Put his other hand on her waist , Ginny put one hand on the bed and the other on Harrys shoulder.

Ginny felt her heart in her stomach but it felt good Harry put his lips to her's and gave her a kiss and Ginny gave him a kiss back before you knew it they where kissing each other more and more ginny felt harry's hand in her shirt and he rubed her back. Ginny fell back on the bed.
"are you ok?" harry asked, his arm still on her waist. Ginny grabed him by his shirt and began to kiss him more
"harry?" ginny said trying to talk while she was kissing him
"ya?" harry replied
"they are going to wonder where we are"
"oh...... right... lets go."
Ginny put her clip back in her hair and puld her shirt down. Harry fixed
his hair and wiped his lips, they walked out. When they got to the kitchen
Lunna,Hermione,and Ron where looking at them in a wierd way
"oh good your here " miss. Weasley said serving avery one food
Ginny sat across Harry and they smiled at each other.


WELL THATS ALL I GOT RIGHT NOW, I'LL RIGHT MORE SOON PROMIS

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Old 01-22-2006, 12:27 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 01-22-2006, 06:25 AM   #3 (permalink)
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well this sucks is my story that bad

please some one say something i want 2 know if i should still write
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Old 01-22-2006, 11:03 AM   #4 (permalink)
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it's great! Please continue! Do write more, please!!
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Old 01-22-2006, 06:38 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Please, keep it up! its brilliant! need to know what happens!
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Thanks Guys Your Awsome I Wish Mor People Liked It
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this is a really wonderful and brillant story post more soon
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Old 01-22-2006, 07:57 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Gryffindor Second Chapter

tHIS IS MY SECOND CHAPTER TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK

" Why did you take so long with harry this afternoon?" Hermione and lunna asked. "no reasen" Ginny said turning red " i just had trouble opening his door" Ginny said tying up her hair so she can go to bed "you mean the door to his pants" lunna said giggling "come on Ginny tell us what happend?"
"please...please....." lunna and hermione whined
" ok..ok, well he asked me if i was still with dean so i told him no"
"then what happend?" hermione asked
"well" ginny started "when i opend the door he told me he liked me a lot"ginny whent red

In the next room harry, ron, fred and goerge where in the room
"you know if Granger wasnt so uptight maybe shed be more atractive."
goerge said putting his extendible ears in his bag. Ron gave him a dirty look
and put his shirt on. Harry was on his bed thinking about what had happend earlyer
"what do you think harry?" fred asked "what?" harry said about to fall of the bed "i said who do you think is good looking?" Harry froze he couldent tell them what had hapend with ginny. he didnt want to say he thought ginny was one of the most beautful girls he had ever seen.
"uhm....well....i ...dont know" every one just looked at him. ther was an alarm in his head saying "no dont tell them its there sister" but his heart was screaming "tell them if you love her tell them"
well we all know who ron likes goerge said laying on his bed. Ron whent red.

"he love hemione, oooh look at me im hermione" goerge said and he stuffed paper in his shirt.

"shut up goerge" ron said in a mad voice

"oooh ron come to me " this time it was fred he had stufed paper in his shirt too. harry started to laugh

"kiss me ron kiss me" fred and goerge were on ther beds rubing ther chests.

ill write more soon

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Lol! the bit where Fred and george and pretending to be Hermione is hilarious! Keep it up! its great!
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Gryffindor third chapter

thanks alot (zodiacgirl) your very sweet



The next morning ron and harry went down stairs and saw ginny,lunna,and hermione. hermione and lunna giggled a little and finished there breakfast.
harry saw ginny and smiled at her he still could not believe what had happend yasterday

"oh harry dear you look a bit skinny you want to eat?" mrs.Weasley asked him wile she was serving ron a plate of eggs
"uhm...a slise of toast would be nice" harry said looking at ginny, ginny licked her finger and smiled at him "oh harry you must eat some thing"
"its all right mrs.Weasley i had alot to eat last night"
"uhm harry i dont recall seeing you eat much last night" lunna said biting a piace of her toast. Ginny gave her a pinch in the leg.
"ooooh....ow!" lunna yelped
lunna dear what happend?"
ginny gave her a look "oh sorry i startled you, crookshanks just gave a little scratch its fine dont worry."

that afternoon everyone was outside playing quiditch accept ginny she didnt want to see harry play every time she looks at him she just wants to kiss them over and over again. she sat on her bed reading something she never does when she heard the front door openand foot steps coming up the stairs.
it was harry he opend the door and sat next to her.
"Did mom come back from Diagon Alley?" Ginny asked putting the book down "uhm.....no she has'nt" harrylooked at her and they stared into each others eyes "why dont you come down and play with us?" ginny let a tear stream down her cheak "why are you crying?" hary asked grabing her chin and and put her head up
"Hary every time i see you i just want to kiss you. i want to feel your lips against mine" ginny wiped the tear from her eye she felt so stupid crying in front of harry "it makes me sad to know that we might not be able to be together. your rons friend he wont llike it"
since when have you cared what ron thinks?"
ginny looked at him and she grabed him from his shirt through him on the bed and began to kiss him she felt so good and so happy . harry held her waist and brought her closer to him. she pushed against him and put her toung in his mouth they just felt like one they where alone together they where happy thats all that matered she didnt care any more he pulld her shirt of and he rubed her back and pulled her even closer

that second hermione and lunna came in ginny got up, pulled her shirt over her chest and she felt dirty
"oh sorry ginny " Lunna said
Ginny and harry started laughing

************ THE END************


sorry for the crappy ending i didnt know what 2 to write


love, mrs. radcliffe


ps. see underworld revolution it flippen rocks!!!!
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omg this is so funny 'kiss me ron kiss me!' otfl please post soon!
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Old 02-18-2006, 09:43 AM   #12 (permalink)
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The end???? That's not fair, I only just found out about your fic, and it's already finished?! so unfair....

it by the way...but if you ever wanna write a fic again...do try to mind your sentences and all those little sign thingies and capital letters and everything...it just makes it easier to read...

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