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hpangel · 08-02-2003, 05:20 AM

I am not exactly the best poet but I thought of a poem and thought I may post it here. Well here goes:

Friends

Friends have fun
Till the day is done
Friends hang together
Even if it means forever

Friends sometimes cause trouble
But you are there for them on the double
Friends may do pranks
But to you ten is their rank

Friends as you can see
Are always meant to be
Even if they move
They will always love you

What do you think?

Sweet*Strawberry · 08-02-2003, 06:36 AM

I think its...

WONDERFUL!

LittleMissChriss · 08-02-2003, 05:09 PM

Great!

It really captures the spirit of a friendship.

08-03-2003, 05:30 PM

these are great!!!!!!

hpangel · 08-05-2003, 07:41 AM

thank you all here is another one it doesn;t ryhme but it is a poem

F is for the friendship you and your friends share
<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>R is for the rought times you and your friends have been through
I is for the intelligence you all share
E is for the elegance you all have
N is for all the nice times you have had
D is for the dremas you all all share whether good or bad
S is for the secrets you and your friedns have and will share no matter what it is.</span>

HarryWoodSiriusLuv · 08-05-2003, 07:43 AM

I like them!Really good!I like the 2nd Poem you did, I've always liked that format.

hpangel · 08-06-2003, 10:40 PM

Thanks here is one that has nothing to do with friends...in fact it is the exact oppisite.

[color= darkblue ]If you leave me
Then you shall please me
If you come near
Then I feel fear

When I feel pain
I feel the same
But if I am glad
Inside I feel mad.[/color]

FireboltFlyer · 08-06-2003, 10:41 PM

Cool poems! I loved the first one! :up:

hpangel · 08-07-2003, 08:42 AM

Thank You. Here is another one:

My Rose and My Heart

My rose is like my heart
Each petal holds one part
When my rose or I are alone
I let out a long sad groan

Because a petal just fell off
Making my rose feel smaller
And me...well I feel like I lost one hundred dollars

Now my heart
Just lost another part
But if I laugh

Which I will do
Cause now I don't feel so blue
And now that I think about it
My heart I just think grew
one million times two

There it is.

Chihiro · 09-05-2003, 01:45 PM

HPANGEL! Wow, these are good, I didn't know you wrote poetry either! That's so good!

hpangel · 09-05-2003, 08:20 PM

Thanks. I am not the best poet but I try so thnaks. Right now I can't think of anything so I'll post more later when I come up with somehting.

Lilly Potter 127 · 09-05-2003, 08:23 PM

Wow! Those are really great, hpangel! On my fanfic you told me you weren't a poet! Of course you are! Those were awesome; extremely well written. don't ever stop writing.

itsjustjesse · 09-05-2003, 08:33 PM

you aren't a bad poet! really! poems need to be catchy and yours are!

hpangel · 09-09-2003, 08:48 PM

oh wo w thanks guys, there will be a new poem soon since I have to write one for school. So by either today or tomorrow I there will be a new poem, again thanks.

hpangel · 09-12-2003, 02:04 AM

Thoughts can be confusing things
They can be hard to thread
But once you found that string
Thoughtfulness and kindness start to spread

Good Thoughts and being kind
Can do good deeds
Whether it is helping the blind
Or helping nature by planting a seed

k I here it is. hope you liek it. I knwo my friend did.

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