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09-12-2006, 04:30 AM
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Originally Posted by Secret Agent Man Ali I dunno about a next fic now, I'm writing a mini book called Conspiracy [or something along those lines] and that'll probably last me till the end of my exams. Then I'll be free, for a while. Aww well. If you post it up somewhere lemme know I'd like to read it. Is it about 24? Quote:
Originally Posted by Ali 007 We should have, is Teddy around 100 aswell? Well I got Teddy when I was six so ... that would make him about ... *counts on fingers and Teddy smacks him* T: I'm 95 years old. Quote: I might be able to add on some more tommorow. No promises though. Whenever you can Ali's fine by me ... *sniffles* but I am gonna miss it. I guess I should start reading Shan-Shan's again ... maybe ... *wonders* Quote:
He tried to pick Harry up in his arms. He pushed a few bricks out of the way and picked Harry up fully. This was quite hard for him as Harry had become a grown man. Lifted in the air, Harry was carried onto the side. He was out cold, but alive.
So of course I was crying ... I mean ... the dust from the debris, yeah ... *sniffles* OMG! Harry! *runningmadglompsHarry&Alifornotkillinghim* Good story Ali. *sniffles* I'm glad you're finishing it. I don't know how many stories I've started ... *sighs* It'll be sad but you can have them put it away and then we can go back and reread it anytime we want to ... *sniffles*
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09-12-2006, 07:07 PM
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Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole Aww well. If you post it up somewhere lemme know I'd like to read it. Is it about 24?  Lol, for once it isn't. It's sort of made up, so you could say it's an original piece of work Quote:
Originally Posted by Special Agent Ottery Well I got Teddy when I was six so ... that would make him about ... *counts on fingers and Teddy smacks him* T: I'm 95 years old. Whoa, he'd like really old. And so are you Quote:
Originally Posted by Ex- Spook Otts Good story Ali. *sniffles* I'm glad you're finishing it. I don't know how many stories I've started ... *sighs* It'll be sad but you can have them put it away and then we can go back and reread it anytime we want to ... *sniffles* Thanks Ottery. Yeah, I might just re-read it for the replies. They've been awesome in the past year. They make me
Oh yeah, I'm really liking your siggie. It made me
Wow, for once I've actually kept up to my deadline. I've got a post now so wheeee.
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09-12-2006, 07:10 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ana-Marie Aylesworth Third Year | Old Man Beans | "BOY" | FARM ASSIST| L u L u | Derping like a Boss ***
It had been almost a month since Harry Potter had saved the wizarding world. He had managed to defeat the Darkest Wizard alive but was in trouble. In the past month Harry had not made a move, he could not talk. He appeared asleep, but this was all to change soon.
He had been getting visits from his friends, for he was lying in the hospital wing. Sirius and Remus had appeared regularly, filling Harry in on what had happened. Ron and Hermione were talking to Harry on this warm summer’s day.
“Lessons were funny, but they aren’t the same without you, mate.” Ron said looking at him.
“Yeah, I’m sure that you’ll be up soon to join Ron, though.” Hermione said slipping her hand onto Rons.
“Just don’t take too long,” Ron chuckled.
Something was shining over head. It wasn’t the sun, but it was just as bright. He could hear the sound of some people in the background, but he didn’t know who. They were laughing, they seemed familiar. As soon as he tried to open his eyes he felt something. His head was light, with a strange cooling on his forehead.
Harry automatically moved his arm to the side, reaching for his glasses. He found them further back then they would normally be, and placed them on his face. He opened his eyes, and then closed them feeling the strain on them. After waiting a couple of seconds, he slowly opened his eyes and took in all the room. He saw Ron and Hermione, talking about something which had happened in the grounds. Smiling, he let out a small cough to catch their attention.
“Harry!” Hermione said, looking at his open eyes. “You’re okay!”
“Hey mate, how are ya doing?” Ron said looking at Harry with a grin.
“Yeah, thanks. I’m doing well, just a bit sore.” Harry croaked. He hadn’t talked in a while and could feel it going at his throat. “What time is it?”
“Erm, I think it’s around 4. Lunch is in a bit.” Ron said, “You wanna go to the hall?”
“Wait Ron, we were supposed to tell Orios when Harry woke up. I’ll go get him now.” Hermione said disappearing from view.
“Okay then,” Ron said watching her go. “You want a drink?” He asked pouring himself some water.
“Yeah, sure,” Harry said taking hold of a glass of water. Ron poured it for him and Harry felt the weight go on his arms. His right arm almost dropped, but he threw his left in to the way to stop the fall. A bit had split onto his arm and he felt the cold water spread.
“You okay,” Ron said helping Harry raise his hand. He looked behind him and saw someone walk towards them. He had dark hair and a smile on his face.
“Harry!” Sirius said throwing his arms around Harry. “It’s great to see you’re up, everything ok?”
“Yeah,” Harry said catching his godfather. He winced as his upper torso was up, and tried to lean back on to the cushions.
“Good, look. We’ll let you rest, but we expect you to come to the hall in a bit. Are you okay with that?” Sirius said staring at Harry’s forehead.
“Yeah, sure. Am I okay to just get up, or do I have to wait for something?” Harry said yawning. One month of sleeping and he still was tired.
“Yes, as soon as you feel ready to go you can get up. If you want to you can ask the nurse to check you out, but you don’t have to.” He said. “If you don’t come I’ll be back to check on you.”
“Okay, I’ll go in a bit. I just need to get some clothes; I can’t go in wearing this.” He pointed to his gown.
“Okay, I’ll go get some for you,” Ron said getting ready. “I’ll put them here when I bring them,” Ron said pointing to the side. “Cya Harry.” The EndOkay, maybe not. Not long to go though.
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09-12-2006, 07:28 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ottery St. Catchpole Gryffindor Third Year | Livin' ain't easy lovin's twice as tough ... Paris & Kellybear r luv :Read Otty 's fics:Gone With the Wind:I♥Rupert *Reserved for Ottery* I'm so evil. I was here first but I have to go to class so I only got to read half. I'll be back to edit this though ... *sniffles* Love your fic Ali ♥ EDIT: First off, how lame I can't see the other posts when I'm editing  The End You truly are evil Ali *sniffles* I don't want this story to end. It's probably one of the only one's I've finished, most of the time people abandon their fics ... I'll be sorry to see it go. I swear it's my allergies *Teddy smacks Ottery* And Harry's alright ... after a month long coma, ZOMG! A lot can happen in a month you know ... and why in the hall *worries for Harry* Nooooooooooo LOL
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09-12-2006, 08:04 PM
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| It's Sirius..why else? James' Glasses Remus Artiste Jarvey
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Yay!  Harry's alive!
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09-14-2006, 12:31 AM
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*does a victory dance* Wootness! He's okay and safe!  I'm glad you didn't make him die.
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09-20-2006, 04:01 PM
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Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole First off, how lame I can't see the other posts when I'm editing  Yeah, it's like the most irritating thing ever. Apart from posting a really long post and then SS crashes out on you. Quote: The End You truly are evil Ali *sniffles* I don't want this story to end. It's probably one of the only one's I've finished, most of the time people abandon their fics ... I'll be sorry to see it go. I swear it's my allergies *Teddy smacks Ottery* You're evil, I'm evil. We're all evil. *pokes Teddy* Quote:
Originally Posted by Mrs.Lupin Yay!  Harry's alive! Yay, for now I mean, yeah. He's alive and well. Quote:
Originally Posted by Fortune Cookie *does a victory dance* Wootness! He's okay and safe!  I'm glad you didn't make him die.   Yeah, so am I. If I killed him I think that you'd all kill me,
I have a post coming up soon, but typing is quite hard with a broken finger so it might take me time. I managed to type this up, so I should be able to do the post.
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09-20-2006, 04:31 PM
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Owie, sore fingers.
The great hall had been decorated for the end of year feast; banners were hung above each house table. Students were celebrating as another year of studies had ended. The staff table was full, and so was a table which was placed on the side. On that were a couple of people Harry recognised, and a few he didn’t. One man who Harry saw was Severus Snape, another was Sirius Black. Both men were giving each other death looks but Harry knew that nothing could destroy the men’s bond. Remus Lupin was sat at the table with Tonks and they were chatting whilst Tonks kept bursting into laughter.
As Harry walked into the hall he felt pain on his ankles. He wasn’t surprised though, he had been lying down for almost a month and now he was trying to walk. He managed to get to the Gryffindor table without falling and took a seat near Hermione, Ron and Ginny. They all stopped talking when they saw Harry arrive, and got up hugging him.
They took it in turns and were done in a few seconds when the headmaster coughed rather loudly.
He had appeared behind Harry and shook his hand. He was smiling, something which hadn’t been seen before.
“Harry, it’s great to see you back on your feet.” He said, looking at the boy.
“Thanks Professor.” Harry looked towards the table where Snape was sat. “Why is he here?” He pointed at Snape.
“He is here because he helped defeat the Death Eaters, and I would prefer it if you called him Severus.” Orios looked up to the table and saw Professor McGonagall eying him. “Excuse me Harry, I must go and deliver the end of year speech.” He took off and went into the middle of the staff table, where his seat was.
“Ladies and Gentlemen, I am pleased to tell you that this year of Hogwarts has ended.” A bunch of first years cheered. “Over the year, there have been some, occurrences. But these have been dealt with and Hogwarts is now as safe as it ever was.”
“However, just because some odd events have been happening, doesn’t mean that the usual school celebrations will not go on. So I present the house cup, to,” He clapped his hands and red and gold banners fell from the high ceiling, “Gryffindor!”
The hall erupted into cheers as the Gryffindors clapped and whistled, shouting things like, “Go, Go, Gryffindor.” Orios moved his hand and they all fell to silence. “Congratulations, congratulations. Although this was very close, Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw. You were joint second at 429 points.” He didn’t say anything about Slytherin, as barely any had started this term.
“And now, as my words come to a close. I would like to say good bye to you all. It has been a marvellous year, where I have learnt so much from you,” at this he looked at Harry and winked. “But I joined for a year, and I will hold that. So may I please introduce the new Headmistress of Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry, Professor McGonagall.”
The students in the hall rose, clapping hard as Minerva McGonagall moved into the central position and Orios had joined the team from the Order.
“Thank you, thank you. All I have to say is tuck in!” She said as a thousand different meals appeared on plates. The seventh year students began their final Hogwarts meal.
The meal was great, as Harry and Ron tried a bit of everything and Hermione began talking about the house elves. After a minute of being convinced by Harry and Ron she began to eat the marvellous food.
It felt like a year as they sat at the table talking about their Hogwarts memories.
“And the troll, which I beat up,” Ron said, “Bit like Crabbe and Goyle.”
“Troll Bogeys,” both Harry and Ron began laughing.
The night fell as memories of the castle were told to Ginny, Luna and a few others which had joined the Gryffindor table. Most people had returned to their common rooms, but Harry and the rest sat there talking.
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09-20-2006, 10:23 PM
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Lovely! I love how everything is so happy; just what nearing of the ending should be like.  Great job.
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09-20-2006, 10:47 PM
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| It's Sirius..why else? James' Glasses Remus Artiste Jarvey
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Great post! *sniffs* I don't want it to end!
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09-20-2006, 11:34 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ottery St. Catchpole Gryffindor Third Year | *Ottery & Teddy are mischievous evil* C'mon Ali, join the dark side lol Paris & Kellybear r luv :Read Otty 's fics:Gone With the Wind:I♥Rupert Quote:
Originally Posted by allucha Owie, sore fingers. You broke your finger Ali ... wait didn't you already tell me this? I swear school is sucking up all my abilities to think ... ZOMG! You poor thing wait 'till you're better Ali ... we'll wait. *sniffles* Besides we don't want the story to end so soon ... Quote:
One man who Harry saw was Severus Snape, another was Sirius Black. Both men were giving each other death looks but Harry knew that nothing could destroy the men’s bond.
I swear ... boys *smacks Severus and Sirius* Oh well *shrugs* I like that Gryffindor won the cup LOL but then again ... that is my house LOL, and Professor McGonagall as the new Headmistress pwns!!!!!!!! Quote:
It felt like a year as they sat at the table talking about their Hogwarts memories.
“And the troll, which I beat up,” Ron said, “Bit like Crabbe and Goyle.”
“Troll Bogeys,” both Harry and Ron began laughing.
The night fell as memories of the castle were told to Ginny, Luna and a few others which had joined the Gryffindor table. Most people had returned to their common rooms, but Harry and the rest sat there talking.
It was the last night at Hogwarts, they would make it special.
It is sad to think that's their last year at school. *sighs* But I always imagined the end of term is sad. It was for me back when I was in school ... now in Uni it's not so much because I don't have school friends there ... Hmm. Anyways, yeah, I thought you captured that rather prettily there. Jo just seems to say it about Harry and only in passing at the end of the books but I mean ... he should be really sad by the end of the book because he won't see his friends over the summer but this being the end of school as we know it for them ... ZOMG!!! Talk about total sadness :sad: Anyways, you're story is still going good Ali, I'm just really gonna miss it. So ... take it slow okay? LOL seriously, wait until your fingers better, and SS crashing in the middle of a long post ... DUDE! Do I know about that ... *would start cursing here but ... the kiddies are watching LOL* Seriously Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh. I know , I know already ... stop you're making me cry ...
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09-23-2006, 07:40 PM
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harry is alive 
this is like almost over 
are you goin to write another story Ali?
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09-26-2006, 08:46 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ana-Marie Aylesworth Third Year | Old Man Beans | "BOY" | FARM ASSIST| L u L u | Derping like a Boss Heylo. I've been meaning to post, but today I woke up with sore eyes and a buggy nose, and staring at screens just ain't working for me. So I can't really stare at the PC for too long. I'll get the replies and post done as soon as all this clears up. |
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09-27-2006, 01:51 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ottery St. Catchpole Gryffindor Third Year | Ali *glomps* Paris & Kellybear r luv :Read Otty 's fics:Gone With the Wind:I♥Rupert I'm sorry you're sick Ali, but don't worry about posting or replies or anything. I hope you feel better. I know all about being sick ... it's no fun. Besides, the first thing you should do is go take a look at the new Ootp pics. I really like Luna, it's everyone else, but especially Neville, who's haircuts I can't stand. I swear, and it's barely Neville's first appearance. And where's Seamus. *sighs* He was in the D.A. ... even if it was just at the end ... *sighs* Post when you can Ali, hope you get better.
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09-28-2006, 04:35 PM
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EEEEeeek, It posted before it was ready. Well, something'll be up in a min. A few hours later... Quote:
Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole I'm sorry you're sick Ali, but don't worry about posting or replies or anything. I hope you feel better. I know all about being sick ... it's no fun. Besides, the first thing you should do is go take a look at the new Ootp pics. I really like Luna, it's everyone else, but especially Neville, who's haircuts I can't stand. I swear, and it's barely Neville's first appearance. And where's Seamus. *sighs* He was in the D.A. ... even if it was just at the end ... *sighs* Post when you can Ali, hope you get better. Aw, thanks Ottery. I'm all better now, being sick smells, 'specially when water is rolling from your eyes, 24/7. The OotP pictures are interesting, but I really don't like the Harry ones. Maybe I need time to get used to his short hair, but hmm. The DA pics are awesome, Nevilles hair is amusing. Maybe Seamus will be in the film, You know what the film-makers are like.
Okay, so I've said above. I'm all better now, and have a post in the making. I'm trying to cut down the deaths which won't be happening, but some big deaths will have to not take place. Now lets let the replies roll on. Quote:
Originally Posted by Fortune_Cookie Lovely! I love how everything is so happy; just what nearing of the ending should be like.  Great job. Happy? I mean, yes. Happy, the perfect end to any story but this one Am I bluffing, you'll never know...until I finish. Quote:
Originally Posted by Mrs.Lupin Great post! *sniffs* I don't want it to end! Neither do I, I say that we go on strike. Against the writers, so they keep writing forever. *notices I'm the writer* Urm, well, everything that starts has to end. Quote:
Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole It is sad to think that's their last year at school. *sighs* But I always imagined the end of term is sad. It was for me back when I was in school ... now in Uni it's not so much because I don't have school friends there ... Hmm. Anyways, yeah, I thought you captured that rather prettily there. Jo just seems to say it about Harry and only in passing at the end of the books but I mean ... he should be really sad by the end of the book because he won't see his friends over the summer but this being the end of school as we know it for them ... ZOMG!!! Talk about total sadness :sad: Aww, I really don't want to end this year at school because it's my last with some of my friends. Then I'll be all alone, *starts to sing the song Donkey sang in Shrek* Um, yar. But then again, Jo mainly focuses on his school activities. I've been a bit weird with that, switching the PoV, sometimes writing stuff without Harry. *pokes self* Quote:
Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole Anyways, you're story is still going good Ali, I'm just really gonna miss it. So ... take it slow okay? LOL seriously, wait until your fingers better, and SS crashing in the middle of a long post ... DUDE! Do I know about that ... *would start cursing here but ... the kiddies are watching LOL* Seriously Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh. A coincidence or what...I was just replying to your fic, and it was a rather long post so I decided I'd copy it just in case, and guess what. SS crashed. It's just so , *ahem* back to the fic now. Quote:
Originally Posted by danismine omg!!!
harry is alive 
this is like almost over 
are you goin to write another story Ali?
PAMS
Roshni It is, the end is near, I can see it with my eyes... Nope, that's the space bar. I may be writing another HP fic, depends on which prologue I chose. I have an evil one planned, and a good one. It all depends, because the evil one would make sense with the stuff that I've been dropping in the fic for me to do a sequel. But it'd probably be non-fictionnon-canon. Yurp, and double yurp. If I remember correctly I said I had 2 posts left. These don't include the epilogue, so I have to make a go of it. Post will hopefully be up tonight, now I have to catch up on some History work.
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Reason: Stupid Pre-Mature Posting.
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09-28-2006, 10:37 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ana-Marie Aylesworth Third Year | Old Man Beans | "BOY" | FARM ASSIST| L u L u | Derping like a Boss Okay, maybe two more because I did something in this which I was not supposed to. You'll notice at the end.
The sun of July shone through the windows as birds were chirping cheerfully. The warm four poster beds seemed to be ever so comfortable as the Gryffindor boys slowly woke up one by one.
Harry, the first to wake up had sat upright for a few seconds, and then melted back into the bed. He was soon awakened by Ron who woke up a few minutes later. After a long 20 minutes, all the boys were up and talking about their last day.
“I really want to play quidditch,” Neville said. Harry and Ron hid a laugh as they remembered the last time they saw Neville Longbottom on a broomstick.
Getting out of bed and dressed took another few minutes, and they were all on their way down to the common room where many students of all years were sat chattering. Some were happy, and some were sad. A few first years were running round the place, as usual and Hermione and Ginny were sat near the windows leading to the magnificent grounds of the Hogwarts castle.
“Morning, Ginny, Hermione.” Harry said joining the two girls. He sat on the window ledge and placed his hand on the glass. The warm glass heated his fingers and he felt like he was in bed all over again.
“Morning Harry, Ron,” both girls said. Hermione looked at Ron, then at Harry, then the common room. Seven years, she had spent here. Working, laughing, crying, this place truly was a home away from home.
“Do you guys want to go to the hall?” She asked, looking back at the guys and Ginny.
“Yeah, I think we should.” Harry said jumping off the ledge and onto his feet. Ron let out a yawn and all four of them exited the portrait of the fat lady.
They arrived at the common room to see it full of joy, as plates of food were scattered everywhere, being emptied every so often by students feasting on the morning delights.
Harry and Ron served themselves a healthy portion of everything, including pancakes, toast and jam whilst the girls had a slice of bread each.
“’ermione,” Ron said whilst swallowing a pancake. “You need to try some of this stuff before we go.” He now poured himself some pumpkin juice. “It’s bloody brilliant.”
Hermione looked at him for a moment, and then at the plate which was full. She bit her tongue, and then gave in, under one condition. “Only if Ginny eats some as well.”
Five minutes later all four of them were munching of the breakfast delights of Hogwarts when Neville and Luna joined them.
After twenty minutes of eating, they all walked outside and decided to visit Hagrid one last time. The cabin was darker than its usual colour, but it was as homely as ever. Harry knocked three times and waited for Hagrid to answer.
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Reason: Why am I talking in the American terms for Jam?
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09-29-2006, 12:07 AM
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yay! great post! plz post more soon!
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09-29-2006, 01:18 AM
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OMG i cryed it was so sad but i really loved the story !!
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09-29-2006, 02:18 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ottery St. Catchpole Gryffindor Third Year | Paris & Kellybear r luv :Read Otty 's fics:Gone With the Wind:I♥Rupert No fair posting when I'm not here ... *grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr* EDIT: I'm quoting the whole post ... LOL Quote:
The sun of July shone through the windows as birds were chirping cheerfully. The warm four poster beds seemed to be ever so comfortable as the Gryffindor boys slowly woke up one by one.
That was a lovely description of how I'm going to feel tomorrow morning not wanting to get out of bed ... *is dreading morning already* I think it was lovely, but I don't get chirping birds, just this annoying woodpecker ... My house is not a tree ... Quote:
“I really want to play quidditch,” Neville said. Harry and Ron hid a laugh as they remembered the last time they saw Neville Longbottom on a broomstick.
Too cute, Neville wanting to become a quidditch player. *ruffles Neville's hair* Oh well weirder things have happened, no? Quote:
Getting out of bed and dressed took another few minutes, and they were all on their way down to the common room where many students of all years were sat chattering. Some were happy, and some were sad.
Leaving school really is bittersweet. Well I mean back then ... it means growing up, and leaving old familiar things behind, and *is getting all philosophical* it's painful, because Uni isn't ever the same way, the same thing, you'll never have those days back, of innocence and laughter ... *Teddy smacks Ottery because he's putting Ali and everyone else to sleep* Sorry I miss being a kid. *sniffles* I wanna be ten again. Quote:
He sat on the window ledge and placed his hand on the glass. The warm glass heated his fingers and he felt like he was in bed all over again.
That was a really sweet moment. I don't know why but ... it's like you struck a chord ... it rang a note in my heart ♥ *Teddy smacks Ottery again* Sorry ... I'm getting all sad cuz you can feel the end coming. Quote:
Seven years, she had spent here. Working, laughing, crying, this place truly was a home away from home.
*sniffles* I am a sentimental sap. It's disgusting really ... sorry. *Ottery cries up the whole thread and all the readers have to open the windows and dry out the place for weeks* Quote:
“Yeah, I think we should.” Harry said jumping off the ledge and onto his feet. Ron let out a yawn and all four of them exited the portrait of the fat lady.
I like your descriptiveness Ali. Ron yawning harry jumping ... things happen, I like that. I miss doing that ... I think drabbles have made me all dialogue happy LOL Quote:
“’ermione,” Ron said whilst swallowing a pancake. “You need to try some of this stuff before we go.” He now poured himself some pumpkin juice. “It’s bloody brilliant.”
As always you get Ron perfectly. *madglomps the Ron* He's too cute. Seriously, and you write him so well ... *sighs* most people don't get Ron they just think he's there for comic relief, but he's Harry's best mate, his wingman, who you'd turn too if the whole world were after you. We should all have someone like that ... *sniffles* Instead Teddy tries to kill me everytime we disagree ... Quote:
Five minutes later all four of them were munching of the breakfast delights of Hogwarts when Neville and Luna joined them.
N/L is the loves ♥. I really like Luna too ... I mean film Luna, I think they got the perfect actress Evana is so cute and perfect, she just looks Luna. *Sighs* but why did they have to get rid of the Quidditch? *whines* Anyways, *fires the cannons for the D.A.* Quote:
After twenty minutes of eating, they all walked outside and decided to visit Hagrid one last time. The cabin was darker than its usual colour, but it was as homely as ever. Harry knocked three times and waited for Hagrid to answer.
It's sad but *sniffles* I was getting ready for school and I realized, then, the next book IS the last one ... no new Harry Potter adventures. How sad ... and it's the same way with your story Ali. *sniffles* I hope you write another HP story someday. But yeah, winding things down I see ... I think I'd miss Hagrid too ... well don't mind my earlier outburst LOL I was just surprised you'd posted story. I like being the first one here when I can ... To show my loyalty. *growls* Back when I can Ali, post when you can. Grrrrrrrr.
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09-29-2006, 10:16 AM
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something is wrong with Hagrid???????????? 
isn't it? I am sure it is. 
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09-30-2006, 12:45 PM
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Originally Posted by Radcliffe's lil angel yay! great post! plz post more soon! Thanks, only a few posts to go. Quote:
Originally Posted by Katie Bell OMG i cryed it was so sad but i really loved the story !!
Katie Aww, I'm sowwy for making you cry. I promise you, it'll only get worse Quote:
Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole Leaving school really is bittersweet. Well I mean back then ... it means growing up, and leaving old familiar things behind, and *is getting all philosophical* it's painful, because Uni isn't ever the same way, the same thing, you'll never have those days back, of innocence and laughter ... *Teddy smacks Ottery because he's putting Ali and everyone else to sleep* Sorry I miss being a kid. *sniffles* I wanna be ten again. Ten again, thats like. 91 years ago. Wow, but then you'd have Teddy trying to kill you. Or was he nice and friendly and not murderous to begin with? Quote:
Originally Posted by 00 Otty. *sniffles* I am a sentimental sap. It's disgusting really ... sorry. *Ottery cries up the whole thread and all the readers have to open the windows and dry out the place for weeks* LOL, *brings in loads of sponges.* The thread's only got a couple of days of life left, and now it's wet. Oh well, the mods'll have to deal with that. Quote:
Originally Posted by Ottery *that's Sergent Ottery* Catchpole As always you get Ron perfectly. *madglomps the Ron* He's too cute. Seriously, and you write him so well ... *sighs* most people don't get Ron they just think he's there for comic relief, but he's Harry's best mate, his wingman, who you'd turn too if the whole world were after you. We should all have someone like that ... *sniffles* Instead Teddy tries to kill me everytime we disagree ...  Thanks Ottery. Ron's the best person, character wise, because his personality is good to relate to. And I'm sure Teddy likes you, he just hides it behind the weapons he tries to kill you with Quote:
Originally Posted by Roshni! something is wrong with Hagrid???????????? 
isn't it? I am sure it is. 
PAMS
Roshni What makes you think that. Have you been looking at my notes. Then you'd know. *dials hitman on phone* there's only one was this can end.
Umm, I'll be posting something in a minute, and it'd be great if you guys can let me know what ya think. So, yeah. Post next. |
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09-30-2006, 12:46 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ana-Marie Aylesworth Third Year | Old Man Beans | "BOY" | FARM ASSIST| L u L u | Derping like a Boss Hey guys, No post for now, just a question. I want you guys to vote for which ending you'll be getting, either the evil or good ending. I'll probably end up posting the other one before I lock the thread, but for now. You can probably guess which one will lead up to another book.
Anyways... Which one do you guys want to see???
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09-30-2006, 03:03 PM
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Nice post!
Heh heh...the ending doesn't really matter to me, as long as it's good.  Happy ending sounds nice, though!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ottery St. Catchpole Gryffindor Third Year | Teddy put that down you'll destroy us all ... Eeeeeeeeeek Paris & Kellybear r luv :Read Otty 's fics:Gone With the Wind:I♥Rupert I have to admit, I'd rather the happy ending ... unless picking the sad ending means you'll write a sequel *hopes* but I know you're busy with school so ... maybe the happy ending and then you can just start another fic with disaster LOL I'm so lost. Give us the happy ending Ali, but ... write us a sequel *Ottery's greedy and he wants everything* Quote:
Originally Posted by My Man with the Plan, Ali And I'm sure Teddy likes you, I'm sure you're right Ali, I mean I'm just paranoid what with all the supervillains after me *laughs while behind him Teddy points the Doomsday device at Ottery*
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Great post! I am dreading the end...but I'll have time to do other things in the place of reading this ff.
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