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02-28-2007, 10:16 PM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Playing quidditch with Harry, Ron, and Ginny.
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i think that hermione and peter are great together so harry can remember that he loves ginny and they can get together. by the way even though i have to care if harry is miserable i still don't.
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02-28-2007, 11:40 PM
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#152 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run!
I think Hermione and Peter are great together but like I said... the end of the story well... just wait and see.
Oh well... I can't make you feel sorry for Harry! He's a big boy though he could take care of himself.
New post..... Chapter 22: Forgive and Forget
“ Peter I need to tell you something”.
“ Sure Hermione. What is it?”
“ I…remember when I told you that I didn’t like Harry anymore?” Hermione
said.
“ Yeah”.
“ Did you ever wonder in asking why?”
“ No. Because I know you do love Harry. You feel like you don’t but in reality
you do. It’s what you call hidden love”.
“ Hidden love?” Hermione asked.
“ Yes, why are you bringing this up?”
“ Because I don’t have a hidden love Peter!” Hermione yelled.
Peter jumped.
“ Hermione, that’s what you think but…?”
“ Peter I… I love you!” Hermione turned away from Peter and walked fast
towards Hogwarts.
Peter stood still. “ Hermione… Hermione wait!”
Hermione ignored him. “ If he’s going to say I love Harry all the time what’s
the point in trying”.
Peter ran to Hermione. He caught her hand and pulled her back.
“ Peter let go… I guess you don’t feel the same way about me so just let me
go” Hermione whispered.
“ But I do feel the same way” Peter said not letting Hermione go.
“ You do?”
“ Yes, I just never said anything because I knew you were still hurt over
the whole Harry thing”.
“Oh” Hermione couldn’t find anything else to say.
“ Lets go, dinner is about to start” Peter said as silence fell between them.
“ Okay” Hermione said.
Peter took hold of Hermione’s hand and kissed her cheek and together they
walked to the Great Hall to have dinner.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Harry jumped up when he saw Hermione and Peter enter the Great Hall.
“ Harry sit down!” Ron said.
“ Ron get off!” Harry snapped.
“ Then calm down!”
“ Ron how am I suppose to calm down! She’s with another guy!”
“ I told you to let her go”.
Harry watched Hermione and Peter sit down and start eating. Harry caught
Hermione’s eye once and she gave Harry a look that said " Yes were dating
so get over it". Harry looked away, tears falling down his cheeks. Harry got
up and left the hall.
“ Peter I’ll be right back”.
Hermione followed Harry out of the hall. She found him sitting on the stairs.
“ Harry?”
“ Hermione why?”
“ I told you I didn’t love you anymore!”
“ Hermione I thought you were lying! I thought you were just scared!”
“ Scared? Of what?”
“ Of being with me because I don’t know maybe Vol…”
“ Voldemort is gone Harry!”
“ Well maybe his followers would come and kill me or something and we
wouldn't be together!”
“ Harry don’t be ridiculous!”
“ Ridiculous!”
“ Harry listen to me! Graduations in three days and I want to end the year
happy! Will you forgive me and can we just be friends?”
Harry took a while to answer. “ Yeah, I guess so. I’m sorry”.
“ Me too Harry”. And with that Hermione left to go back to Peter.
“ Is everything okay?” Peter asked.
“ Yes” Hermione said as she sat down.
Harry didn’t return to the hall though. He decided to go for a walk outside. He
went to the lake and sat down. After five minutes of just sitting there Harry
heard a noise.
“ Who’s there?” Harry asked taking his wand out.
“ Calm down Harry”.
It was Peter. Harry turned away. He wanted to hit Peter so bad.
“ Harry listen, I wanted to say sorry. I didn’t mean to take Hermione away
from you”.
“ Then why is she’s with you and not me?” Harry snapped.
“ I don’t know. I guess because she likes me and I like her”.
Harry turned and faced Peter.
“ Your wrong! She may be with you right now but deep inside I know she
wants to be with me because she still loves me!”
“ I know”.
“ Yea you… what?” Harry was confused.
“ I know she still loves you. I keep telling her that she probably has a hidden
love for you but she doesn’t listen”.
“ That’s Hermione for you” Harry said.
“ Anyways, I’m sorry”.
“ Peter… it’s okay. I’ll get over her one day.”
“ Maybe… well I’ll see you later” Peter said as he left.
“ Yeah, later”.
Tada!!!! New post... and only 6 more chapters until it's over... I don't know about you guys but I'm sad that it's ending.
Well Enjoy!!
Love Always,
Emma
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03-01-2007, 01:58 AM
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#153 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Australia
Posts: 3,706
| Six chapters still is a lot, but I am sad that it's ending too. This has been a wonderful story! I'm interested to see what happens with this triangle that's appeared...Harry/Hermione/Peter...who will she choose? Hope you post more soon! Shan XoXo
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03-01-2007, 09:21 PM
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#154 (permalink)
| Fire Slug
Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Playing quidditch with Harry, Ron, and Ginny.
Posts: 146
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loved the post! i still say that hermione should stick with peter and that harry and ginny should get together even if ginny happens to be dating malfoy.
~Cheyenne~
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03-01-2007, 11:17 PM
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#155 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: NY(but im also in lo
Posts: 771
Hogwarts RPG Name: Hermione Granger Seventh Year |
awwww poor Harry..PAMS
__________________ Proud H/HR shipper and supporter of the trio.
Hermione: You, You foul loathsome evil little cockroach!
Ron: Hermione no!...He's not worth it.
*Malfoy whimpers and then Hermione punches him and Malfoy runs away*
Hermione: That felt good
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03-02-2007, 12:54 AM
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#156 (permalink)
| Fire Slug
Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Playing quidditch with Harry, Ron, and Ginny.
Posts: 146
| hurry up and post emma! i'm a very impatient person and i want you to post even though i don't want you to post. i want you to post because i want to know what happens, but i don't want you to post because that means the story will be over sooner.
P.S i still don't care if Harry is upset or not. yes i'm mean
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03-02-2007, 01:04 AM
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#157 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run! Quote:
Originally Posted by padfoot_88 Six chapters still is a lot, but I am sad that it's ending too. This has been a wonderful story! I'm interested to see what happens with this triangle that's appeared...Harry/Hermione/Peter...who will she choose? Hope you post more soon! Shan XoXo Yeah, six chapters is still a lot.
And as for the triangle... well it won't be a triangle soon. Quote:
Originally Posted by HP1FAN2004 awwww poor Harry..PAMS I'll post soon. Quote:
Originally Posted by GinnyRocks713 hurry up and post emma! i'm a very impatient person and i want you to post even though i don't want you to post. i want you to post because i want to know what happens, but i don't want you to post because that means the story will be over sooner.
P.S i still don't care if Harry is upset or not. yes i'm mean
~Cheyenne~ Calm down Cheyenne! Girl take a chill pill! lol! I'm sorry to say that I can't post today though. I'll post tomorrow though!
Love Always,
Emma
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03-02-2007, 01:07 AM
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#158 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: midwest :(
Posts: 2,267
Hogwarts RPG Name: Ariel Brown Third Year |
It cant be ending!  it just cant I like it all too much for it to end!  but the post still rocks! PMAS!
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03-02-2007, 01:12 AM
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#159 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run!
^^ Thanks!!!
Yes, sadly it is ending but their is a sequel!!!!!!
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03-02-2007, 02:02 AM
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#160 (permalink)
| Bundimun
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 33
Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted |
OMG i havent been here in a while and alot has happened!!! I cant believe Harry and Hermoine broke up they need to be together really soon & Hermoine needs to forget Peter cause she loves Harry... cant wait for the post tomorrow and I cant believe its ending soon but altleast theres a sequel so i have something to look forward to =)
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03-02-2007, 03:47 AM
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#161 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run!
^^ Hello there! It's nice to be reading your comments again! lol!
Yes... Hidden Love is coming to an end and I have already started working on the sequel... I'm on chapter 3 or something.
Hermione forget Peter... whoa! Even if I want Harry and Hermione to be together, who could forget a guy like Peter?
New post coming soon!
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03-03-2007, 02:06 AM
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#162 (permalink)
| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
Posts: 11,247
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only 6 left? aww!!!
If Reter really likes Hermioen, then--with the Harry--and the Hermione not listening. Argh! my brain hurts. pams though
Jessica
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03-03-2007, 02:08 PM
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#163 (permalink)
| Fire Slug
Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Playing quidditch with Harry, Ron, and Ginny.
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*takes a chill pill and calms down*. sorry about the outburst but i love your story and i want it to end but i don't want it to end. i hope that makes sense.
~Cheyenne~
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03-04-2007, 04:05 AM
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#164 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run! Quote:
Originally Posted by dancerbookl only 6 left? aww!!!
If Reter really likes Hermioen, then--with the Harry--and the Hermione not listening. Argh! my brain hurts. pams though
Jessica Yes there is only 6... well now 5 chapters left of the story. But the sequel is gonna be awsome, I promise! Quote:
Originally Posted by GinnyRocks713 *takes a chill pill and calms down*. sorry about the outburst but i love your story and i want it to end but i don't want it to end. i hope that makes sense.
~Cheyenne~ Lol!! It's okay. And now since you forced yourself to calm down... a new post!!! Chapter 23: Graduation!!!!
“ Peter fix your robes!!!!!!” Hermione said.
“ Hold on Hermione!”
Hermione laughed. Today was the day the 7th years would walk out as
graduates.
“ Okay ready. Let’s go!”
Peter and Hermione ran off to the Great Hall.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
“ Harry get up!” Ron yelled.
“ Why?” Harry said lazily.
“ Graduation is in 30 minutes!”
Harry jumped up. He had forgotten today was graduation. He got dressed
into his robes and combed his hair.
“ It’s a good thing you took a shower last night!” Ron laughed.
“ Shut up!”
Once Harry was done he and Ron made their way to the Great Hall.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
“ Today we gather in this old great hall to celebrate the hard work of our
graduates” Dumbledore began.
Hermione was waiting for Dumbledore to finish with his speech. She wanted
to graduate already and go on that cruise! All 7th years were going on a
cruise as a gift from Dumbledore.
Dumbledore talked for about another 10 minutes then… “ The ceremony to
receive your diplomas will begin now!”
Rows and rows of students went up to receive their diplomas and shake
Dumbledore’s hand. Then…
“ Hermione Granger”
Hermione jumped up, Peter who already got his diploma, gave Hermione a hug
and a kiss. Then she walked up to get her diploma.
“ Harry Potter”
Harry did the same and as he walked up to Dumbledore he bumped into
Hermione.
He looked at her and said, “ Congrats Smarty Pants!”
“ Harry shut up!” Hermione laughed.
Once everyone received their diplomas, all the 7th years ran to get their
luggage to depart on the cruise.
Short chapter I know. Sorry! But I still hope you all enjoy the post!
Love Always,
Emma
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03-04-2007, 04:34 AM
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#165 (permalink)
| Fire Slug
Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Playing quidditch with Harry, Ron, and Ginny.
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Yeah you posted!!! i'm happy i calmed down. now the reason i want this fanfic to end is so that i know what happens but i don't want it to end because that means no more posts. *tries not to cry*. i'm gonna miss you but you said that there will be a sequel so i can look forward to that and i will, of course, read it.
You ever faithful reader,
~Cheyenne~
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03-04-2007, 04:42 AM
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#166 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run! Quote:
Originally Posted by GinnyRocks713 Yeah you posted!!! i'm happy i calmed down. now the reason i want this fanfic to end is so that i know what happens but i don't want it to end because that means no more posts. *tries not to cry*. i'm gonna miss you but you said that there will be a sequel so i can look forward to that and i will, of course, read it.
You ever faithful reader,
~Cheyenne~ Awww! Thank you so much! It's good to know one of my faithful readers will stick with me! You made me want to cry... but hold on... why are we talking like it's the end? It's not even the end of the story.
I hope you enjoyed the new post!!
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03-04-2007, 11:46 AM
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#167 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Australia
Posts: 3,706
| Loved the post, Emma! I can't wait to see what happens on this cruise! Don't worry, I'm sticking around until the end too! I can't read this far then just forget about it...LOL. Hope you post soon! Shan XoXo
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03-04-2007, 06:13 PM
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#168 (permalink)
| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
Posts: 11,247
| Book Club Babe
I'm not a faithful reader? I'm sorry. I didn't know that you posted. I feel so bad now. wah!
"Smarty Pants." *snickers* That was funny. pams please
Jessica
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03-04-2007, 09:33 PM
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#169 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: NY(but im also in lo
Posts: 771
Hogwarts RPG Name: Hermione Granger Seventh Year |
awww great post PAMS
__________________ Proud H/HR shipper and supporter of the trio.
Hermione: You, You foul loathsome evil little cockroach!
Ron: Hermione no!...He's not worth it.
*Malfoy whimpers and then Hermione punches him and Malfoy runs away*
Hermione: That felt good
Ron: Not good...brilliant!!! |
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03-05-2007, 03:55 AM
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#170 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run! Quote:
Originally Posted by padfoot_88 Loved the post, Emma! I can't wait to see what happens on this cruise! Don't worry, I'm sticking around until the end too! I can't read this far then just forget about it...LOL. Hope you post soon! Shan XoXo Thanks! I'm glad you're sticking around too!!!!! Quote:
Originally Posted by dancerbookl I'm not a faithful reader? I'm sorry. I didn't know that you posted. I feel so bad now. wah!
"Smarty Pants." *snickers* That was funny. pams please
Jessica Of course you are Jessica!!! I'm sorry I hurt your feelings! I feel so bad now!!!! Quote:
Originally Posted by HP1FAN2004 awww great post PAMS Thank you! I shall post as soon as possible!
Love Always,
Emma
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03-05-2007, 04:04 AM
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#171 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: midwest :(
Posts: 2,267
Hogwarts RPG Name: Ariel Brown Third Year |
aww sad only 5 left but the sequal to look forward too! cool! oh and great chapy even if it is short!
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03-06-2007, 01:53 PM
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#172 (permalink)
| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
Posts: 11,247
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Of course you are Jessica!!! I'm sorry I hurt your feelings! I feel so bad now!!!!
A way to make me feel better is to post.  pams
Jessica
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03-09-2007, 12:57 AM
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#173 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run!
Everyone I am so sorry I haven't posted! My internet went down and I was left with no internet for how long has it been? Anyways I am sooooooooo sorry! Please forgive me!
Okay to make up for the absence of a post (and to make Jessica feel better!) here is a new post! Chapter 24: The Cruise
“ Oh Peter! It’s amazing!” Hermione said as she looked out into the ocean.
“That’s what you said the minute we got on the boat” Peter replied.
It was their third day on the cruise. And they were having the time of their
lives! The ship was very huge and everyone was treated like royalty.
“ Be quiet. So what are you going to wear tonight?” Hermione asked.
“ Clothes why?”
“ Peter!”
“ I’m kidding! How about that tux thingy?”
“ Sounds good”.
Tonight was the grand ball the ship threw almost every year. It was going to
start at seven and end at midnight. Hermione couldn’t wait.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
“ Harry at least try to have fun,” Ron pleaded.
“ I am having fun” Harry replied.
“ Sitting in bed all day isn’t having fun”.
“ You’re right. It sounds like something you would do though”.
“ Ha Ha!”
“ Are you read for the ball?”
“ Heck yeah! Jenn and me are going to be the hottest couple there! How
about you?”
“ Yeah, I guess”.
“ Harry you want me to go find you a date?”
“ Nah, it’s okay. I’ll go solo”.
And since I know the chapter is short and I feel like I owe all my readers a lot more here's another post! Chapter 25: The Ball
“ Hermione you look beautiful,” Peter said as he watched Hermione fix her hair.
“ Thank you and you look handsome” she replied.
“ Ready to go?”
“ Almost… okay done!”
Hermione got up and grabbed her purse. She then turned to Peter and held
out her hand, “ You don’t expect this beauty to walk herself out?”
Peter laughed. He took her hand and led her out to the ballroom. But before
entering the ballroom Peter turned to Hermione and said, “ Hermione
remember what I told you last night?”
Hermione smiled and said, “ Yes”.
“ So you believe me right? That I will never leave you, no matter what”.
“ Peter I believe you. But what’s wrong?”
Peter was acting odd. But Peter couldn’t let Hermione know what he thought
was going to happen.
“ Nothing love”.
And with that they entered the ballroom. When they entered Hermione’s
breath was taken away. The decorations were wonderful! Everything was
basically made out of gold and whatever wasn’t looked like gold.
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“ How do I look?” Ron asked.
“ You look divine Ronald!” Harry said in his girly voice.
Ron laughed. “ Ready to go?”
“ Yea let’s go”.
As Harry and Ron walked to the ballroom, Harry couldn’t help but feel
nervous. Something bad was going to happen.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Everyone was having a blast at the ball. Everyone laughed, danced, and
enjoyed themselves. Hermione and Peter were dancing the entire night. Peter
however kept looking over his shoulder now and then.
“ Peter what’s wrong?” Hermione asked.
“ Nothing” was his reply.
Hermione and Peter exited the ballroom, the party, after five hours, was over.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
“ Harry what’s up?” Jennifer asked.
“ Nothing why?”
“ You keep looking over your shoulder as if someone was going to attack
you”.
“ Jen I’m fine really”.
“ Okay. Ron well I’ll see you in the morning”.
Jennifer left. Ron turned to Harry. “ What’s up?”
“ Ron something bad is going to happen”.
“ How do you know?”
“ I’ve been having this feeling all night and…”
Harry never got to finish his sentence because an alarm went off and
everyone started to scream.
There! Two posts! Once again I am so sorry! And I hope you all enjoy the posts!
Love Always,
Emma
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03-09-2007, 01:07 AM
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#174 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: NY(but im also in lo
Posts: 771
Hogwarts RPG Name: Hermione Granger Seventh Year |
Awww PAMS soon i gotta find out what happens
__________________ Proud H/HR shipper and supporter of the trio.
Hermione: You, You foul loathsome evil little cockroach!
Ron: Hermione no!...He's not worth it.
*Malfoy whimpers and then Hermione punches him and Malfoy runs away*
Hermione: That felt good
Ron: Not good...brilliant!!! |
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03-09-2007, 01:35 AM
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#175 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Australia
Posts: 3,706
| Ooh...an alarm? I wonder what happened? Post soon! Shan XoXo
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