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malfoygrl 12-05-2010 03:35 PM

Oh noooo!!!

Shame Hermione!! No Krum!! Ron is the one you needdd :loved:

I loved itt :)

PAMS!!
xxSara

bonnieginnyfan1 12-05-2010 08:33 PM

Noooooooooooooo!

Krum can't dance with Hermione! :cry:

Poor Ron! :console:

I love this chappie, Jess! :loved:

PAMS! :pfd:

♥Stef♥

SoftballBlondie4 12-05-2010 09:39 PM

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Not Victor!
LOL as much as I liked them together in the 4th movie, I thought they were cute and I'm quite shocked they didn't have him in the 7th movie at the wedding like the book had, I much rather have her with Ron.
I WANT MORE. Keep it up =] =] I love this!!

hermione19 12-05-2010 10:39 PM

new reader and i love it!!!!

PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMS!!!!

P.S....PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jesse_Longbottom 12-06-2010 08:13 AM

Hey Krum? GO HOME! Okay? Thanks man.

Okay Ron floors clear, just remember. Duck.

Great posts! Loved it! :)
!Jesse!

Morag 12-06-2010 11:35 AM

Aww Poor Ron! :(

I'm sure Hermione will see sence soon enough!

Great Chapter!
PAMS!
Soph x

PallaviLove_HHR 12-07-2010 06:42 PM

woohoo!!!! great one there...
I wud love to have ron get back his girl and specially when he ahs upset hemione I mean The- Hermione..it must be fun!!!
keep it and good going
PM me for the next part..eager to read on

JeshieRAWR 12-09-2010 12:39 AM

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Amusement

Ginny watched along with Ron as Viktor Krum came and took Hermione to dance with him. She felt bad for Ron, but then again she felt as if he needed a wake up check. She shrugged and stood up, walking over to the back of the tent where Harry was. "Harry, what took you so long to get a drink?" She asked him, curious. Harry shook his head back and forth, focusing his attention back to Ginny. "Oh, yeah, sorry, Gin. Just watching Mr. Lovegood and Luna dance, it's very...unique." He chuckled. "I guess I had gotten caught up into it. It is quite amusing."

"What's quite amusing, Harry?" Luna's voice popped in, as well as her body in the middle of the two; making it quite awkward. "Oh, these...gnomes that I found outside of the Burrow. They happen to dance with each other and I haven't seen anything like it." He answered quickly. Harry took a glance towards Ginny to help, but she shrugged, not knowing what else to say. Ginny thought his story was quite good. "Gnomes? They must have a disease of some sort, you know, they are known to bite." Luna said, nodding.

"Luna, your father wants a picture with the moving trees out in the yard. Care to join us?" Rolf asked, nodding towards Ginny and Harry.

"Oh no, we're fine. We must stay in the tent or my mum will have a fit." Ginny said, genuinely and waved to Rolf and Luna.

"What a nice couple." Ginny said, receiving a laugh from Harry. "They really are though."

"While you think like that, care to join me for a dance, Miss Weasley?" Harry asked holding out a hand for hers. "I would love to, Mr. Potter." Ginny said with a smile and they headed onto the dance floor.

Mordanyes 12-09-2010 07:06 AM

Love it!

bonnieginnyfan1 12-09-2010 08:42 AM

Awwwwwwwwwwwww! :loved:

That's such a sweet chappie, Jess!

Keep up the great work! :D

Come What May 12-09-2010 05:31 PM

New Reader!

I love this story :) It consists of short well written chapters! :) Perfect for a college girl like me who has no time at all to be reading long chapters! I wish I did though.

Anyways! Excellent story so far :) Keep it going!

potterobsessionist 12-09-2010 07:14 PM

Oh I loved that chappie as well :yes:

am waiting for Ron to confront Krum though, I have to admit :shifty: Weasley is our king! *sings* :woot:

Post soooon :bow:

<3 love Josey

SoftballBlondie4 12-09-2010 08:58 PM

Awwwwwwwww!! <3
Soooo cute. I love it.
I loove looove when my boyfriend addresses me by my last name like that. It's so romantic.
So this scene is super adorable. They should have do a scene like that in the first part of the 7th movie!!
Keep it up!!
MORE SOON PLEASE =]

malfoygrl 12-09-2010 11:39 PM

Awwwwwwwww :)
I love it! Luna is so awesomee :D
Excellent! PAMS! PAMS!!

xx Sara <33

Cassiopia Malfoy 12-10-2010 12:51 AM

Jess's Writing+Harry+Ginny=AWWWWWW! So adorable :)

Luna is adorable as well, an amazing character to like, and the gnomes hehehehehe, that is very amusing.. Love the update!

-Gabbeh

JeshieRAWR 12-12-2010 11:17 PM

Hey everybody! I won't be updating today because I looked up the next post for you guys and I have some editing to do. Hope you don't mind if the next post is delayed for a few days. ^_^

Thanks for reading/commenting! <333

Jess(:

harita 12-14-2010 05:42 AM

wonderful posts Jess...:)

Lily<33 12-18-2010 06:45 PM

great post Jess :) so glad Luna and Rolf came into the picture :)
*lauren*

Morag 12-18-2010 10:09 PM

I like how you put Rolf in a the end. Not many people put Luna and Rolf together.
Cute Chapter!
PAMS!
Soph xx

bassoonbuddy 12-27-2010 05:38 AM

Aww how cute!!<3

JeshieRAWR 01-08-2011 06:02 AM

Final Chapter :: Heartbeat
 
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Heartbeat

Hermione hurried over to Ron, practically running over to him, and taking his hand. "Get up; I need you to come with me." She said pulling on his hand as she ran out of the tent. Ron followed behind her, wondering if she turned into some crazy woman or something. Usually, at this time Hermione would have expected an obstacle of some sort, but luckily there was none and she bursted through the Burrow, taking Ron into the living room. She just stood there in silence, her arms crossed, staring at Ron as if she was wanting something. After a few minutes of silence, seeming as Ron is oblivious to everything, she blurted out something, something wonderful.

"I love you." She stated. "I love you, Ronald Weasley and I can't believe you had me outside your door; day and night, waiting for you to come out and you didn't. I can't believe it, but yet I can because you... are you. And yet, here I am, still to this day, I love you and what do I get? Nothing. Nothing! So tell me how you truly feel. Tell me!"

Ron sighed, in relief and just in general. He hated when she demanded something out of him, then again it seemed like he should have told her this before as well. "I love you too, Hermione. However I probably love you more than you will ever. I didn't...I didn't come out of my room when you were there because I felt as if I ever left my room the memories that I have in my mind will just disappear or something. I don't know what I was thinking, but in the end I knew that my heart belonged to you and if I needed to do something about it, that time was now." He said taking a deep breath of air into his lungs and letting it out.

Hermione was about to interrupt but Ron put his hand upon her lips, quieting her. He took one of her hands and put it on the left part of his chest. "If you died in the war, I wouldn't be able to live, Hermione. I've been wanting to say this for a while..." He said, but then was interrupted by a heartfelt kiss upon his lips by Hermione. He responded back with all the love he had in him and they broke apart. Ron shook his head and kissed his beloved on the cheek, continuing on with his little speech;

"In the end, what matters the most in life, to me, Hermione, is that you're alive. Hermione, your heartbeat pulls me through."



The End.
I just wanted to say that I want to thank everybody for reading this little short story of mine and commenting.
It means the world to me when people read my stories, so look out because I might be posting another one soon.
I hope you enjoyed it and thank you once more. <3
Jess(:

Cedric 01-08-2011 06:28 AM

OH, OH! Jess, I just stumbled upon this and I love it! Great cliffhangers - you really know how to pull in the readers! xD

Post more sooooooooooon. :)

bonnieginnyfan1 01-08-2011 10:29 AM

Aw, Jess! :glomp:

I was really looking forward to a lot more. I can't wait for you to start a new FF! :pfd:

Brilliany work! :D

♥Stef♥

potterobsessionist 01-08-2011 10:39 AM

Aw this was lovely *__* and so romantic *swoon and points to my tag*

what I loved most about aall the chapters was the final line :loved:

Quote:

"In the end, what matters the most in life, to me, Hermione, is that you're alive. Hermione, your heartbeat pulls me through."

- really?! *squeal* fabolous dear just fabolous :)

don't forget to PM me when you start another FF alright? *eyes you*

:glomp: Jojo

Cassiopia Malfoy 01-08-2011 02:50 PM

Awwwww! Adorableness :) So sad it's over though, it was awesome Jessluff! Ron's speech was amaaaaazing! Happy Endings make me reaallly happy :xd: I LOVED IT!
-Gabbeh


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