hey I'm writing this song for a contest wht do you think about this?
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All I can do is dream

I know that I
May not be the best
But someday I’d
Like to soar above the rest

I know
It seems
Like it
Would not
Even be
A dream

Wouldn’t it be great
Wouldn’t it be fine
To know my name
Would be known sometime
But all I can do
Is dream


I know that I
May not pass the test
But someday I’d
Like to be the quest

I know
It seems
Like it
Would not
Even be
A dream

Wouldn’t it be great
Wouldn’t it be fine
To know my name
Would be known sometime
But all I can do
Is dream

Wouldn’t it be great
Wouldn’t it be fine
To know my name
Would be known sometime
But all I can do
Is dream

But all I can do
Is dream

Dream ooh

Only in my dreams

I see you there
All alone
Your dieing
I’m crying
For you

Only in my dreams to be
I see you there
Waiting
Beside me
Keep waiting for me
Keep waiting for me

No one
can save
The life
you gave
You are my hero
And continue to be so

Only in my dreams to be
I see you there
Waiting
Beside me
Keep waiting for me
Keep waiting for me

I don’t know where to go
I don’t want to be alone
I can’t bare to see you go
Don’t go

Only in my dreams to be
I see you there
Waiting
Beside me
Keep waiting for me
Keep waiting for me

Wait
Wait
For me
Wait
Wait
For me
For me

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how about this for the contest?

In the dark
In the night
Sleeping throught rain
And nothing seems right
At all

In a room
In a place
Dreaming hopes and goals
There is a face
So familiar to me

Dream
They can come true
If you want them to
Dream
Of the future's past
And make them last

In a world
Of my own
I'm with anyone
I'm not alone
At all

In the peace
In my mind
No one knows my past
And me you can find
There

Dream
They can come true
If you want them to
Dream
Of the future's past
And make them last

Dream
In the night
In the dark
Dream
In a room
In a place
Dream
In a world
Of my own
Dream
In a peace
In my mind
Dream
Dream
_________

What about this one? The theme for the contest is American dreams

This one?
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From a Single Dream

Tiredness creeps across me
And the wind blows
And the thought goes
And the dark collapses

I can see what I
Want my future to be
I can see what I
Feel deep inside me
All from a single
Dream

The sorrow fills
I know it’s a lie
It’s just fantasy
Where no one dies

I can see what I
Want my future to be
I can see what I
Feel deep inside me
All from a single
Dream

I can see you
I can see me
My thoughts run free
And it’s all I need

I can see what I
Want my future to be
I can see what I
Feel deep inside me
All from a single
Dream

All from a single
Dream

Whoa

All from a single
Dream


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Geeee....you are one heck of a good writer! I have no idea where you get all the inspriation from, it takes ages to hit me. Brilliant talent!

Awww thank you! I jus start singing and then I write down the songs! Thank you

I can't look at you
And I can't speak
I can't even think
at all

hey

I can't breathe
I can't even see
I just know
It's you not me

hey

This is my one chance
And I'm blowin' it all
It's leavin' me
As I begin to fall

I can't walk
I can't act like me
I can't be
When I'm around you

hey

I can't hear
I can't concentrate
I can't feel
I'm going to be late

This is my one chance
And I'm blowin' it all
It's leavin' me
As I begin to fall
I know this is all
Please help me not fall

yay ee yay

ooh ooh ooh I think I may have a good one for the contest tell me what you think aboutit
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It’s amazing here
Lost in my own
Atmosphere
I am a star
I can go far
But then the dream drifts off

Don’t go
Don’t leave
Don’t go away
I’m not alone
I believe
You have to stay

It’s my world
My place
I know
Every single face
And now lost
Forever and ever here

Don’t go
Don’t leave
Don’t go away
I’m not alone
I believe
You have to stay

Every single day
I’m lost with my own way
Thought they inspire me
They’ve concealed me
Inside my thoughts
And the dreams drift off

Don’t go
Don’t leave
Don’t go away
I’m not alone
I believe
You have to stay

Don’t leave me alone
I can’t let my dreams go

Well?

thanks guys

cool poems

thank you I appreciate it here is another sonnet

Too long have I been crying
Can’t remember my own smile
I’ve given up on fighting
Thrown away my past lifestyle

I saw rain when there was sun
I saw the dark when it was light
The happiness? There was none
I was left alone in the night

I lift my head by instinct
To see a hand reaching down
The depression is extinct
A smile replaces my frown

A true friend had come to my side
A friend in which I could confide

the first one I just sort a created the second and fith I did it from the character Luna Lovegood the third is for christmas the fourth I got inspiration from my friend who's grandfather just died

I just read them now, and I think they're great! Congrats! :sorcerer:

Awwwwwwwww thank you som much

These are good check out one in crazy mutant poems i made one about professor umbridge!!!!

I want to change this name of this thread to Alyssa's songs but how? ahhhhhhhhh

Oooh, this one is very good. You should enter it in the contest.

What contest?

The contest you were referring to.

oh yeah it's over I didn't get done on time

Dead good! hehe im not good at reviews