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12-30-2003, 07:18 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
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cool poems
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12-30-2003, 08:18 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Texas, United States
Posts: 306
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those are really good poems
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12-31-2003, 01:04 AM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
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Thanks!
Tears
I must have shed a 1,000 tears,
from all my sadness and my fears.
It makes me feel like I'm lost in
space,though when I cry most of
my sadness is erased.I shed a
tears a lot,I heal a lot. Though
some sadness in me still remains.
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12-31-2003, 03:46 AM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
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~*Fantasy Land*~
I'm living in a Fantasy Land,
the sun is shining brightly,
and my feet are warm under
the sand. Cinderella,Sleeping
Beauty are singing in a band.
I'm in a great place,where
love is all true. Though
some princesses are still
a little blue. Necklaces,
bracelets,all sorts of
beautiful things. All given
to princesses,and lovely
elegant queens. Hey it's
a Fantasy Land,all
these princesses,,
princes,man they are all
teens! ^ _ ^
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12-31-2003, 04:53 AM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
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Thank you
Thank you for always being there for me,
no matter what. I love you,sometimes
we fight though I still love you much.
You come to me and trust me with
all of your problems,I do the same
wiht you. No has ever been there for
me like you always do. You pick me
up when I am dwon,wipe away all
my frowns,make me love you even
more. There's only one sister I can adore. ^ _ ^
To my dear sweet older sister! I love her!
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01-01-2004, 12:55 AM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Jul 2003
Posts: 163
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This is excellent!!!! I absolutely love it, i think it's most likely your best yet!
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01-01-2004, 12:55 AM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
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Man my poems about my ex-bestfriend makes me feel a lot better.I really don't care about her anymore.
^ _ ^
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01-01-2004, 12:57 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
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I luv your poems they're great! yeah mine are mostly about lonelyiness (sometimes has nothing to do with me) please read mine (Sonnets oof Alyssa) I'd love to hear your feedback
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01-01-2004, 12:57 AM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
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I commmented on your poems! I luv them. I can relate to a lot of them.
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01-01-2004, 01:00 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
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odd I can realate to yours too!
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01-01-2004, 03:35 AM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
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Serious? Cool! ^ _ ^
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01-09-2004, 03:04 AM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
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Wow so long I haven't posted.
Outcast
Everywhere I go,
people point and
laugh at me. My
oddness,my clothes,
everything that I show.
My personality,my fashion
laughing at that I think is
their passion. I'm normal
jsut like everyone else,
you laugh at me because I'm
different,but I laugh because
you are all the same.
So who do you think this poem is for?(HP related)
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01-12-2004, 08:34 PM
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| DRFC Activity Officer Protector of Dan’s Brains Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Everywhere and no-where
Posts: 2,396
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Luna Lovegood!!!
I really like your poems I can totally relate!
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01-13-2004, 02:58 PM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
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Thanks!
Who?
Who will cheer me up
when I shed my tears?
Who will I tell all my
secrets and my fears?
Who will catch me when I
fall.Out of all of my friends
I loved you most of all.
Now you're leaving me
forever,you've already pulled the
lever,and our friendship is over.
Just so you know,wherever you go,
and whatever you do I wil always be there for you.
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01-13-2004, 03:10 PM
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| His life is like a river Billywig
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Australia
Posts: 3,229
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It's great!
I'm guessing from Hermione to Ron!
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01-19-2004, 01:25 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: May 2003 Location: a Hicktown
Posts: 579
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dude this is sooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its awesome!!!!!!!! post more :sorcerer:
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01-24-2004, 02:53 AM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
| Quote: Originally posted by Lupin Jr@Jan 13 2004, 08:50 AM It's great!
I'm guessing from Hermione to Ron! Ding Ding Ding! We have a winner!! And thanks guys!!
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02-08-2004, 05:49 PM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
|  Here's one I just made up.
Trapped
I'm gone in this endless world,
trapped in a box, a lonley girl.
Crying my eyes out for all you've
done to me. My soul is crying and
no one can see. Stuck forever, never
to be found, I scream so loud, but to you
I don't make a sound. You can't even see me
to you I'm like a bug. I have many problems,
but when I tell you them, you just shrug.
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02-22-2004, 04:04 AM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
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Dedicated to Sirus Black may he rest in peace. Still here
You may be gone
but no matter what
you're still here. Where
you ask? In my heart, my
soul. You live on, no matter
where you go. Your laughter,
jokes, and witty remarks live
on and on forever more.
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02-22-2004, 04:12 AM
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| Poetry Prince Spotty Quidditch Fanatic Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 4,768
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Kawai, these are really good but too sad, I hope there's some happiness in your life, you should write something while smiling, it works for me...(I have some poems too....) keep posting.. :flowersmile:
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02-22-2004, 04:16 AM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
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Lol thanks Fang I think....
Lifesaver
I love you so much,
wanna say thanks!
You rock so much,
you cheer me up,
I do the same for you.
I know you would too!
Just wanna say I love you,
also one last thing.........
Thank you!
*beams :flowersmile: *
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02-22-2004, 04:20 AM
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| Poetry Prince Spotty Quidditch Fanatic Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 4,768
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I can see you smiling already........nice one :rose:
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02-22-2004, 07:19 AM
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| Ramora
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Sydney, Australia
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Aww! I love your poems! :flowersmile:
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