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01-29-2006, 05:22 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| Harry & Blair: The After Romance - Sa13+
omg this is like the 4th time trying to post this!!! and if ur reading this, thankfully it worked!!! okay so this story is based on the major motion picture Tristan & Isolde, and i fell in love with that movie and so i desicided to write a Harry Potter version! the first few chapters will be kinda short but please read and reply!:
Chapter 1- Blair King
Blair finished off her blonde hair with two long braids. Sh made it loose and messyl, for her hair was cruly already. She wore her makeup looking natural. She never liked to go all out. Blair grabbed her bag and went to breakfast.
Blair hated her father for sending her to this school. Just because the creepy magic powers skipped a generation and landed with her. Her father thought she wasn't responsible enough to keep them under control and all that junk. How pathetic. Blair walked in the Great Hall and sat down at her assigned table next to a girl with shoulder length strawberry blonde wavy hair. The blue-eyed looked at Blair.
"You're new, I'm Lorraine," the girl called Lorraine smiled.
"Blair. This is the, Slytherin, table right?"
"Yeah. Hey, what class do you have next? We'll go together," Lorraine said, biting some toast.
"Potions," Blair said checking her list of classes.
"Excellent." Lorraine smiled and Blair smiled back.
Chapter 2- Harry Potter
Harry sighed, tieing a knot in his tie. He missed loving somebody. Ginny was taken. She had ANOTHER boyfriend. Cho graduated last year and Hermione clearly loved Ron. Harry was SO not ready for his 7th year.
Harry took his seat next to Ron and across from Hermione at the Gryffindor table. Ron was cussing between every faceful of food. Harry looked at Hermione for an explanation.
"Malfoy's been picking on Ron again. Ron just wants to prove to Malfoy that he's not some worthless, carrot-headed, poor Weasley," The way Hermione said that made it funnier then what it's supposed to be.
Harry snorted in his Pumpkin Juice and Ron elbowed him hard in the ribs. He started directing his cussing towards Harry.
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01-29-2006, 02:15 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Whoa!! This is awesome!! PAMS!!
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01-30-2006, 10:03 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: May 2003 Location: At the box office waiting for Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire to come out duh
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ooo i this sounds good and i loved tristan and isolde to so please post more!!!!!!!!!
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01-31-2006, 12:25 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: May 2004
Posts: 285
Hogwarts RPG Name: marisabel Fifth |
its good cant wait for more!
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01-31-2006, 08:31 AM
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| Dance like there's Nobody watching Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Wouldn't you like to know!
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This is the start of something really great!! post more as soon as you can!!
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02-02-2006, 04:14 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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whoa. i didnt kno this story would be THIS popular! okay, i dont have my notebook with me right now, but heres a preview!: Harry suddenly felt himself falling from his broom. He fell like 20 feet from where he was flying in the sky. He didn't know how it happened, he just closed his eyes and fell. Blair gasped and stood up in the Slytheirn stands. Malfoy was sitting next to her laughing. She shoved him down and ran down the steps with Lorraine trailing behind her.
thanks! expect a new post this weekend! eeeeeeeeek im so excited!
*Danielle*
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02-02-2006, 06:52 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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|   You can't run from me, Danielle   I have found you yet again! Lol, yeah. I like Lorraine, dunno why... lol, awww, Ronnie was picked on! As long as it was by Draco, then that's okay. But if it was by someone else... yeah, you know. *reads preview* Noooo, Draco got shoved! Harry falls again... again... PAMS!
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02-03-2006, 01:22 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 241
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good story
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02-04-2006, 02:28 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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darn amie found me! jkk, im glad u read the story! *whoop whoop!* and just to let u kno, my goal in life is to finally write a story in which u like a character!!!!!!! Hehe....
anyways here comes a new post!:
Chapter 3- Meeting Malfoy
The Dungeon's door slammed open. A tall, thin, blonde hair boy walked in followed by his entourage. He sat down at a desk in the front. He looked to where Blair was and did a double take. He smirked and faced the front. Blair noticed he had cold grey eyes.
"Malfoy can't stand Gryffindors...Or Mudbloods. He rules Slytherins," Lorraine simply said, watching Blair stare at Malfoy.
All through Potions Malfoy kept looking at Blair. For the first time in her life, it was making her uncomfortable.
After class, Malfoy stopped her. He caught her by the wrist. "I, erm, will meet up with you later, Lorraine," Blair said unsure.
"You. You're new," Malfoy said when Lorraine left.
"Yeah. And I've heard some things about you too. Try 'King of Slytherins'?"
"Yeah. I'm known as one. Hope it doesn't change anything between us."
"Us? I just met you, I-" Blair stopped talking when Malfoy pulled her close.
"You want to be with me? Wow, that's kind of sudden. I feel the same!" Malfoy said, pretending to be touched.
Blair closed her eyes and sighed, wondering what she did to deserve this. Malfoy took ahold of her hand tightly and took her to their next class.
When Blair walked in with Malfoy, Lorraine looked at her with wide eyes. Blair let out a exasperated sigh and sat next to Malfoy, forcedly.
Chapter 4- The Fall
Harry suddenly felt himself falling from his broom. He fell like 20 feet from where he was flying in the sky. He didn't know how it happened, he just closed his eyes and fell.
Blair gasped and stood up in the Slytheirn stands. Malfoy was sitting next to her laughing. She shoved him down and ran down the steps with Lorraine trailing behind her.
Blair fell to her knees next to him and checked his pulse. "Is he breathing?" Lorraine asked twisting her hair nervously.
Last edited by lUnAlOvEgOoD4lIfE; 02-04-2006 at 05:08 AM.
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02-04-2006, 04:41 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: May 2004
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Hogwarts RPG Name: marisabel Fifth |
that was good post more soon! wat made harry fall i wonder?
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02-04-2006, 05:54 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| No one can hide from me Lol, your life goal? Yeah, right *scoff* Tee hee, jk jk Anyway. It's DRACO! AGAIN! Lol, Blair doesn't seem to like him that much. What made Harry fall? PAMS!
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02-04-2006, 09:42 AM
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| Dance like there's Nobody watching Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Wouldn't you like to know!
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Yeah what made him fall? Me loves the Draco *fangirl sigh*. Cant wait for more.
PAMS
Jess
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02-04-2006, 08:22 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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hey thanks guys. to clear things up, harry was flying with his eyes closed (for pure enjoyment and adrenline rush) and just fell. heres ur next post:
"Barely. But he broke his arm, and from the looks of the swelling, he fractured his ankle," Blair said panicked. "I know what to do, help me bring him to the Changing Rooms." Blair took the not broken arm and Lorraine took the other ankle They heaved Harry to the Changing Rooms.
Blair stripped off his shirt and robe and folded the clothing into a size where she put it under his head on the stone ground. She gasped when she saw a long bleeding cut across his right set of ribs. "Get some bandages from that cabinet over there," Blair instructed Lorraine.
She waved her hand and a bowl of water and a cloth appeared next to her. She dampened the cloth and pressed it against the cut. Lorraine came back with the bandages. "Where did that come from?"
"I come from a family with supposedly a different kind of magic," Blair said, cleaning the cut. Then she soaked the whole cloth and wrapped the the boy's ankle in it. "Help me sit him up," she told Lorraine.
Lorriane sat the boy up and Blair grabbed another bandage. She wrapped the bandage around his body where the cut was, to protect it. They laid him down again carefully. Then Blair remembered his broken arm, she wrapped it up in a bandage. Then Blair waved her arm over it and a sheet of dry ice appeared over the broken part of the arm.
"Are you coming, then?" Lorraine asked, ready to leave.
"You surely don't expect me to leave him here? No, I'm staying here with him. If anyone askes, I'm already asleep, okay?"
"Fine. But if he wakes up, don't tell him your name. The less he knows, the better you're off. A Gryffindor to a Slytherin is equal to a piece of dirt. Don't want mixing of the sort," Lorraine left with a spin.
Blair sighed and waved her hand over an empty space on the stone floor. There appeared a burning fire. Blair laid next to the boy and fell asleep.
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02-04-2006, 08:27 PM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| Quote:
harry was flying with his eyes closed (for pure enjoyment and adrenline rush)
That's... well... a stupid thing to do... lol.Blair's really good at healing peeps. PAMS!!
Amie |
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02-04-2006, 11:45 PM
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| Dance like there's Nobody watching Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Wouldn't you like to know!
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I agree lol^. Good job for stickin with Harry, Blair. Hope he wakes up soon.
Jess
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02-05-2006, 03:21 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: May 2004
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post more soon
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02-10-2006, 12:36 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Dec 2005
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wow this is good PAMS!!!!!!!!!!
~fia~
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02-16-2006, 04:45 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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happy valentine's day!!! hope all ya'lls was goooood! now, down to business: i cant get up a post right now cuz i dont have my notebook with me...but there will be one this weekend! i've been so busy lately u wouldnt believe my life...but thank goodness i have SS and u guys, otherwise i would personally sue my cheer team....yuck nationals next weekend, and they r like really killing us!!!!! um expect more Blair/Harryness in the next post and Ron trying to fulfill his dream of being super-dooper powerful!!!!!! thanks guys!
*Danielle*
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02-19-2006, 02:38 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| hey im here!!! heres the next part of chapter 4!!:
She woke, about an hour later, with the boy sitting up against the wall, staring at her. "Hi," she yawned. The boy kept staring. "You fractured your ankle there, and you have a broken arm. Oh, and there's a cut across your rib cage the size of the broom you fell off of. How're you feeling?"
"Why'd you do this for me? Aren't you Malfoy's sort?" The boy finally spoke.
"I like helping people. And between me and you, he reminds me of my father. Harsh and pushing."
"But still, I'm a Gryffindor, aren't I?"
"Should it matter? It'd be a fine miracle if it stopped, this dispute between Gryffindors and Slytherins. It's just a favor, okay?"
"Favor or not, I owe you my life. What is your name? A proper thank you isn't much, but it could do for now, right?" He asked.
Lorraine's words rang in Blair's head. "I believe you just did thank me."
"Yes, but believe me, it's worth knowing."
"Well, if you must know, I-I'm Clarissa," Blair said, unsure of what she just said.
"I'm Harry Potter. Thank you for your kind favor, Clarissa." Harry tried to get up, but failed.
"Oh no, you must stay here! You're not strong enough! But I will stay with you," Blair and Harry stared at each other long before talking. When they did talk, they talked for hours. They eventually fell asleep at one point.
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Blair woke up curled next to Harry. She sighed and got up. She fixed her hair and dusted off her clothes. Then she sat down and waved her hand over her lap. A plate of food appeared and she ate.
Harry stretched and yawned. "Hey," He said, opening his eyes.
"You hungry?" Blair asked.
"Very. But where did you-?" Harry stopped when Blair waved her hand and a food appeared at Harry's feet. "Er...nevermind."
Blair laughed. When they finished eating, they started talking again until Lorraine walked in.
"Er, Bl-" Blair coughed loudly, interupting Lorraine. "Oh er, you, um, Malfoy is looking for you. Actually he's going around saying "Where's my girlfriend?". Nobody's giving him satisfactory answers and now they're afraid he'll go on rampage," Lorraine laughed nervously.
Blair looked at Harry. He was staring at the ground. "I see. Go. I don't care."
"It's not-" Blair let out a groan of anger. She ran out past Lorraine. Harry groaned and leaned back against the wall. thats the end of the chapter! stay tuned!! *Danielle* |
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02-19-2006, 03:28 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: May 2004
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Hogwarts RPG Name: marisabel Fifth |
yay post more soon
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02-19-2006, 04:12 AM
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| Dance like there's Nobody watching Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Wouldn't you like to know!
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| YAY finally some more post. Somethings happening between them two.
Cant wait to find out what happens next.
PAMS
Jess |
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02-19-2006, 11:58 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Dec 2005
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YAAAAAAAAAAY GOOD POST VERY GOOD POST
PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMS!!!!!!
lol i'm hyper i just took a 3 hour nap
!!! hahaha!!!! i feel like i'm in kindergarten again
lol
~fia~
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02-20-2006, 03:59 AM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: #4 Privet Drive
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Blair likes two boys! Blair likes two boys! Haha!Post
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02-20-2006, 05:49 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
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| Note: Ignore this post if you love Harry.
Eww, Harry's being too nice again!!!!!!!!! All this 'Thank you' and 'I owe you my life' is making me... ugh. It is kinda cool that he likes Blair-Clarissa too, though. PAMS!!
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02-20-2006, 07:20 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| hey guyzes! thanks for reading!...i will try to get up a post later today !!! devileangle612: thanks for reading! hope ur enjoying this....disasterous romance! dans girl37: yes! something IS happening between them two! caution: this story is HIGHLY mushy and sad and well, just read the story !! fly away moxie: yes! kindergarten was fun....especially the napping part....well, kindergartener or not, keep readin! ;-) Harmony Evans: hey thanks for readin...but i think u've gotten somin confused. Blair doesn't like Malfoy...he kinda forced her to be with him....referring to Tristan & Isolde....Isolde was forced to marry one of her father's soilders (but then he got killed in a fight before she had to marry him, but thats not my point!)....thats why Blair said that Malfoy reminds her of her father, harsh and pushing. just wanted everything to be clear! keep reading!!! Amie: omgawd hi!!! i loved your little "note" in your replying part of this whole ff. you complete me as an author with this whole hating-of-the-important-character role you portray......in other words you rock!!! dont worry, harry gets kinda harsh and upset as the story goes on....and then as you hate, he gets all mushy and lovesick...but w/e, thats y i love this story, and the movie im basing it after!! things clear up with Blair's identity-"Clarissa" later on. for now, keep readin on!!! thanks a bunch, *Danielle* |
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