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11-02-2006, 09:58 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels Third Year |
.:NEW READER:.
I like this story so far! PAMS!
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11-02-2006, 11:48 PM
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| Quintaped
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Robert Allyn Winchester First Year | Runs With Vampires Quote:
(knocking her to the ground? because I don't think Bellatrix would just let him go, even if she didn't have her wand)
Amy! that was a suggestion, not a part of the actual fic hahaha.
I'm in the process of beta reading the next chapters now. Expect them back in about an hour.
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11-02-2006, 11:54 PM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
oopps was tiered when I posted it sorry. I'm going to take that out. I posted after being up all night with my daughter  feels imbarresed  thanks again
Fixed it. I so was not with it. Ya that was a good suggestion and you are right about that she need to fall. Thanks again ya'll i promise ill be more with it  again
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11-03-2006, 01:08 AM
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| Vair Stalkerish Missing Sirius Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Emma McKingley Graduated | WHAT?! He didn't kill Bellatrix? The woman who killed his godfather, his only family?! *shccked* Great post Amy! Can't wait to see what he does to Bellatrix later on -Emma
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11-03-2006, 06:24 AM
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| Banshee
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| Fortress of Brilliance ღ Mommy Quad cool, cant wait for the next update ,
i used to be a BIG *N sync fan untill they split up, now i'm still a fan but i'ma a bit mad at them still. Quote:
And Grace, thats what I though about mine, you should just give it a try. I'm sure loads of people will read it  I would.
thanks i'm thinking about doing one, for now i'm just writting in my notebook and going over what i wrote and fixing it to make it better, and maybe by december or january i'll have it up, hopefully. 
sorry for spamming,
!!!!!!!cant wait for your updates!!!!!!!
EDIT: haha, i agree with emma! 
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11-03-2006, 03:51 PM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity Hey all heres the next two chapters. I'll have more either tommorow or next tuesday depends when i get them done. Oh I have something instore for her in the end trust me . Hope you all enjoy Chapter 10
Ron woke up and Harry wasn't there. Hermione came in and said "Ginny's not here, or in her room".
"Nor is Harry".
"Wonder were they are.." they said together.
They walked downstairs and Mrs. Weasley was in the kitchen a room were the dish cleaned there self and a weired clock that didn't tell time, but were all the Weasleys were.
"Mum, where are Harry and Ginny?" Ron asked.
"Asleep on the couch. I didn't want to wake them" she replied.
"Oh okay" Ron said.
Then he and Hermione walked into the living room and sat down. Ron gave Hermione a kiss. They kissed until they heard:
"What's going on?" A groggy voice asked it was Ginny.
"You and Harry feel asleep together. Mum seen you though, but she didn't seem at all upset about it" Ron said.
"I need to go and talk to her" Ginny replied.
Ginny slowly got up not to wake Harry, and went into the kitchen.
"Morning Mum" she said.
"Morning"
"Umm, I need to tell you something" Ginny replied.
"And whats that dear?" Mrs Weasley said.
Ginny held out her hand and showed her the Promise ring.
"Its from Harry." she said "We are back together and he gave this to me, promising we will be together".
Mrs. Weasley smiled and said "I'm so happy for you Ginny. I figurured you were back together when I saw you asleep on the couch".
"Sorry about that mum. We were talking and just feel asleep" Ginny replied.
"Its okay"
Chapter 11
Harry awoke suddenly.
"Where's Ginny?" he asked scaring Ron and Hermione, who were kissing and didn't expect him to wake so soon.
"She's fine, she's in the kitchen telling mum about the ring" Ron said.
"Oh, good" Harry said relaxing more. For a moment he'd thought someone had taken her.
"You okay Harry?" Hermione asked.
"Yeah, I found another Horcrux, actually I had a dream of where it was and I went and destroyed it last night. I also ran into Bellatrix, but I haven't told Ginny that part though - Don't want to scare her" he said.
He stood up and walked in the kitchen, where Ginny and Mrs Weasley were sitting at the kitchen table. Harry went and sat by Ginny. He then kissed her not even seeing that Mrs. Weasley was there. He then spotted her.
"Good morning" he said quickly.
"Morning" Mrs. Weasley said smiling at them. "Ginny has told me and i'm happy for you " She replied.
The last few weeks at the Burrow were wonderful fun. Harry was so happy to be back with Ginny and that everyone was happy for them. Their last night before they would be going back to school they had a nice dinner, packed their trunks and went to bed.
They woke up early the next morning, and when the Ministry cars arrived they all hurried out into them, getting to the station with 10 minutes to spare. Harry and Ginny went though the barrier between platforms 9 and 10 first, then Ron and Hermione followed by Mr. and Mrs. Weasley.
"Can I have a word?" Mr. Weasley asked Harry.
"Sure"
"First off, congratulations on the ring, I'm happy you have chosen my daughter. She seems so happy to have you in her life" Mr. Weasley said.
"I'm happy to be in her life, and thanks" Harry said.
"Secondly, please watch over her Harry. I don't want anything to happen to her, and you be careful don't go finding trouble you have a commitment now" Mr. Weasley added.
"I wont, I want to be with Ginny forever, and nothing will stop me from doing so" Harry said.
The trains whistle blew and Harry hurried and got on the train.
"We'll go and find a compartment" Ginny said grabbing Harry's hand.
"Okay, we'll come and find you when we are done" Hermione said. Ron and Hermione had been made Head Boy and Girl.
"Sounds good" Harry said as he followed Ginny.
They found a empty compartment,way in the back of the train, stored their stuff away and got in their robes. They were just about to get comfy when the compartment door slid open and there stood.......
HOpe you all like
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11-03-2006, 04:09 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels Third Year |
There stood Draco? Just a guess. If it is not, PAMS with the answer!
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11-03-2006, 11:59 PM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
I should have the next chapter up no later then Wensday.
I'm glad you all are enjoying this. I love cliffies. Hehehehehe YOu just half to wait and see who it was. Maybe I should make you all wait longer just to put you on pins and needles
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11-04-2006, 10:01 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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Please, don't be that mean! Put it up v. soon!
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11-05-2006, 04:16 AM
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| Billywig
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That is just pure evil! Can't wait for the next post...
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11-06-2006, 04:15 PM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
K I'm so gonig to put up the next chapter tommorow  then you'll now who walked in  I'm so evil
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11-06-2006, 05:21 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels Third Year |
Aw, you so are evil! I want to know now, not tomorrow!
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11-06-2006, 09:36 PM
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| Banshee
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| Fortress of Brilliance ღ Mommy Quad tomorrow?!
aww fine... i'll wait,
cant wait for the next update! ,
i will be checking for it all day tomorrow .
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11-07-2006, 01:04 PM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity Okay all heres the next chapter. I so hope you enjoy it. Sorry about all the song lyrics but it helps me to describe their love for each other and they are just the perfect songs you know. I think music helps you express yourself so much. So with that I half to say "Something like You" is from *N Syncs Celebrity CD and "Hevans Missing and Angel" is from 98 degrees. So ya. Hope you all don't mind the songs So should I sit her and ramble some more or should I put up the chapter. HMMMMM what to do what to do....
Ah okay, i wont be evil anymore. and without further ado I present you the 12th chapter. Chapter 12 Luna and Neville had hooked up over the summer, and they wanted to tell their friends. "Oh sorry didn't mean to interupt" Neville said as he entered the compartment Harry and Ginny were in. "You didn't interupt anything, we were just relaxing" Ginny replied. "Well just wanted to come and tell you that Neville and I hooked up" Luna said. "Aw thats awesome" Ginny said. "Can I tell them are happy news?" Ginny asked Harry. "Yeah of course you can" Harry said, kissing her on the cheek. "Well first off, Harry and I got back together" she said. "Thats a given" Luna replied. "And second" Ginny said as she held out her left hand,"Its a promise ring" "Aww that sweet of you Harry" Luna said. "Well just wanted to tell you guys, and Congrats to you". "Same to you guys" Harry replied. "Bye" they all said in unison. Harry then leaned back again on the seat, and Ginny laid back on his chest. She loved how he smelled so good, like Old Spice - and how soft he was to lean on. "Will you sing to me Harry?" she asked. "Please it helped me to relax last time" she said giving him the puppy dog eyes. "Okay " He said. Ginny lay her head back down on his chest and closed her eyes as Harry began to sing: "Something happens when you look at me I forget to speak. Smething happens when you kiss my mouth my knees get so weak. Could it be true this is what God has meant for me cause baby, I can't believe that something like you could happen to me." While singing, Harry sat there smiling at his red haired beauty. Nothing can spoil this year for me he thought to himself as he continued singing. "I hope the man upstairs isn't mad at me cuz I have one of his angels and shes here with me. Each time I see her precious smile and she spreads her wings, it takes me to a place were love meets eternity. Oh no, I'm not letting go. I don't want to be alone in this crazy world. Oh Lord. I love her so. And I'll sacrifice it all to have her in my life." Ginny had fallen asleep, and Harry bent down and kissed her forehead. "Sleep my beauty" he whispered as he kissed her. About a half an hour later Ron and Hermione returned to their compartment. "Well there are quite a good amount of people that have come back to Hogwarts and more will just be back tommorow" Ron said. " Malfoy's not coming back till the day after that" he added. "What?" Harry asked surprised, trying not to wake Ginny. They all sat there talking about it til the food cart came by, and Ginny woke up around mid afternoon. She spotted Harry and kissed him, before looking around and seeing Ron and Hermione there. She sat up. "Hey beautiful, have a nice sleep?" Harry asked before kissing her passionately on the lips. "Hey not so much of that in front of me" Ron said smiling. "Sorry mate, can't help it if you sister is the most beautiful thing i've ever seen" Harry said kissing her again. Ginny blushed at these words. They finally arrived at Hogwarts, and got into the carriages. They pulled up to the castle, got out and walked though the big oak front door into the great hall where the four house tables were. To their surprise they saw... "Professor Lupin, what are you doing here?" the four of them asked together. "McGonagall asked me to come and teach DADA again, so I said I would, plus I can keep an eye on you lot" He said. Harry didn't argue that part for they had to take their seats. Only three new people were being sorted. Harry didn't pay much attention to the sorting though, he was looking to see who was there and playing footsies with Ginny under the table. When the sorting was over the food appeared and they ate it, it was good. "I just wanted to say thanks for coming everyone I appreciate it, I hope this year will be good. But with that its off to bed, you all have classes in the morning." McGonagall said. Harry, Ginny, Ron and Hermone all went up to the Gryffindor Common Room. They got to the portrait outside. "Password?" the fat lady asked. "Snorcack" Harry answered. The group entered the common room, warm and inviting as the fire was burning in the hearth. "Well better get to bed. Goodnight Harry" Ginny said. "Aw don't go yet" Harry said grabbing her and kissing her passionately. "I have to go to bed, I can't sleep in the same room as you" she said, a hint of sadness in her voice. "I understand" Harry said kissing her again. "Night Hermione" Ron said, before he kissed her. "Night Ron" Hermione replied before going back for another kiss. Harry couldn't help himself as he grabbed Ginny and took her into a passionate kiss that lasted for a long time, he didn't want to go but knew he had to. "Well see you boys in the morning" Hermione and Ginny said. "Okay, sweet dreams you girls, and remember we are only up in our room if you need us" Ron and Harry said together kinda blushing. The girls left and walked up the stairs to the dormitory. Harry watched Ginny as she went around the corner and disappeared. Harry and Ron then went up to their dormitory where everyone from their year was. "Glad to be back" Ron said. "Sure am" Harry replied as he put on his pyjamas. Everyone got into bed and went to sleep, Harry dreaming about Ginny and their long life together.
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11-07-2006, 05:51 PM
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| Banshee
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| Fortress of Brilliance ღ Mommy Quad Awww!!! that alll sooo sweet!!!
YESSSS i was right it was neville and luna!! YAY! ,
YAY neville and luna are together! i'd say they're perfect for eachother! ,
to bad JKR doesnt think so.. it'd be cool if they actually got to get together in the series, but anyways to cute post amy!
cant wait for another update!
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11-08-2006, 09:49 PM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
Okay all i have the 13 chapter done, my beta reader Kirstie will be reciving it shortly from me. Then I'll have it up when she is done
I so hope they get together and Harry and Ginny and ron and hermione
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11-09-2006, 12:18 AM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity K all heres the next chapter. Sorry its short. I will have more up next week some time. Hope you all enjoy it Chapter 13
Harry woke early the next morning and went down to the Gryffindor Common Room. He spotted a red haired beauty he knew all too well sitting at a table next to the window. She was reading a piece of paper and smiling at the same time. Harry crept down the last two cement stairs, over to her and put his hands over her eyes.
"Guess Who?" he said trying to disguise his voice.
"Mmmm, I don't know who it could be" she said jokingly "But if I had to guess, I'd guess Mr. Potter"
"Why I think you guessed right Miss Weasley" Harry said giving her a peck on the cheek and sitting down next to her at the table. "What you looking at?"
"Oh nothing important. I promise you will get to see it soon" she said trying to put it back, but Harry took the letter and read: Harry,
I wanted to tell you about a journal entry I had written when I saw....
But Harry couldn't finish reading it, as Ginny had taken it back out of his hand.
"Hey, I want to read it" he said.
"You can soon. Now is not the time" Ginny replied.
Harry gave her a look of disappointment, then he tried the puppy dog eyes.
"I promise its nothing bad, I just want it to be the right moment" she said.
Harrry finally gave in, for at that moment Ron and Hermione came down the stairs into the common room. The four of them went down to breakfast, and then headed to their classes. Ginny had potions whereas the Trio had Tranfiguration.
"Good morning class" McGonagall said "Today we will be learing how to transform into animals".
The class got excited and had fun trying it, although it was hard work, so no one got far before the bell rang an hour later. The trio set off to Potions, passing Ginny on the way as she was on her way to Herbology.
"Who is the new potions teacher?" they all asked Ginny in unison.
"Not going to tell, but I think you will like who it is" she said, and with that she dissapeared around a corner.
"Wonder who it is" Ron said.
"Don't know" Hermione said.
As they walked into the classroom they saw the teacher, it was none other than.........
hehehehehe cliffes are fun
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11-09-2006, 01:48 AM
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| Banshee
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| Fortress of Brilliance ღ Mommy Quad UGH evil cliffie! amy! i'm gonna guess and say..
Tonks? Remus? or someone like that?
hopefully? haha, Quote:
I so hope they get together and Harry and Ginny and ron and hermione
Me too! .
Cant wait for your next post!
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11-10-2006, 03:18 AM
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| Billywig
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Another evil cliffie...you really are enjoying this, aren't you? LOL
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11-10-2006, 01:28 PM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
Sure am.
It might be a bit till the next chapter. Going though a hard time. My husbnd and me might not be together anymore. He told me last night that other girls like him and i'm nothing special. All because I couldn't remeber my password to MSN he thinks i'm hidding something and i'm not. Theirs nothing their but friends  So it might be a bit. I'm really sorry everyone  But i will so try for next week  Don't hate me
Amy
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11-10-2006, 03:16 PM
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| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A rainy, rainy place
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels Third Year |
^Oh, no! I hope everything gets worked out.
Hmm, shall I hate you? I just read your last post, and it's quite an evil cliffie. But I don't know whether to hate you or not.
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11-10-2006, 09:52 PM
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| Banshee
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| Fortress of Brilliance ღ Mommy Quad awwww i'm sooooo sorry amy!
dont worry about the story ,
take your time, we all understand,
dont feel sorry, and i dont hate you.
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11-10-2006, 09:58 PM
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| K.O. Tonks' Clumsiness Imp
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Gone
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| hi, i'm louise (grace's friend)
i love your story so far!
and i hope you and your husband sort things out ,
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11-10-2006, 10:36 PM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
Thanks everyone. I have writen about a pharagph today. So hopefully sometime next week  Husband still being a git but oh well what ever happens happens and it just wasn't met to be. Thanks for undersatnding all. But i'm shooting for next week for a new post
Evil me. Cliffe and all
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