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How could you kill her!! It wouldn't be a sequel if Flo wasn't there!! Maybe Flo..... Ignore me I am making weird thoughts at what will make a sequel interesting without Flo. |
Great post. Cant wait for more |
Chapter 17-One Bad Witch “Oh no!” Bellatrix Lestrange cackled sneering evily at Draco, Cho, and Becky. “I heard the news, Draco dear.” said Bellatrix “That sister of yours, dead, and your father as well. Personally I don’t think they were a big loss. She was hanging out with mudbloods and your father was always messing up.” she cackled again. Draco was shaking with anger “Avada...” before he could finish there was a crack and Bellatrix apparated away. Draco stood there glaring at the place she had been. “Draco?” Becky said. Draco turned and walked away. Cho and Becky followed at a distance. When they got back to Hogwarts, Cho and Becky went to look at Flo one last time. When they got there, they looked down at her. The sun was shining through the window and it illuminated her hair. “Goodbye Flo.” Cho whispered and Becky started crying. Draco sulked in a corner. Narcissa was crying in loud sobs that shook her body. |
Chapter 18- A Season for Goodbye It was the end of term, and everyone was parting ways. Draco was going home to no sister, no father, and a mother who cried all the time. Becky and Cho were both going home feeling exhausted from all that had happened and to parents who didn’t really know everything they had been through that year. There was a lot of healing that needed to be done. Next year would be their sixth year and who knew what was in store for them. And so they all said goodbye, and were reminded of the last time they had said goodbye. That goodbye had been forever. The three of them hugged and then slowly went off their separate ways. The End The sequel is called "A New Beginning" the chapters are a bit longer, but i've only written 3 chapters and that took me a long time, so it could be a while before I put it up because I always seem to get writers block, plus I have semester tests coming up and I have to study for those. I hope you like this fanfic and thanks once again for all your nice comments!:sunny: |
I liked it but the ending leaves so much sadness in it. Can't wait for the sequel. Heeather |
That was amazazing! :D Can't wait for the Sequel! :) ~Jess |
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