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08-12-2003, 12:41 AM
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#51 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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Emotions
Sometimes I let my emotions out,mostly they stay in my head jumbled about. Locked away deep inside locked away where no one can find. I keep them in my head so long along each and every wall.
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08-12-2003, 12:54 AM
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#52 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MIDDLE TN
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thats good!
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08-14-2003, 12:38 AM
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#53 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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I wanna post a poem i wrote and it's very close to my heart so i'll post it in a couple of days if you guys want me to.
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08-14-2003, 12:38 AM
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#54 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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hope u guys want me 2
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08-14-2003, 01:28 AM
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#55 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MIDDLE TN
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I do!
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08-14-2003, 02:03 AM
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#56 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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ty ur a head girl i never new that
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08-14-2003, 09:19 PM
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#57 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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im gonna post it even if u dont wanna read it
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08-14-2003, 09:21 PM
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#58 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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well ok this poem is a lot different from my other 1's this 1 is serious and actaully implies an emotion
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08-14-2003, 09:26 PM
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#59 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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Love at first sight
You see a boy how can it be how can you love him at just one glance you see the boy and your in a trance. you look away try to fight but you love him at just a sight how do you talk to him when is the time right. all you can do is stare but you love that boy does he even care? you feel so lost even alone to the boy your unknown. you think about him everyday always at school the thought of him never strays. you love him so much you always cry becaused he can't see me even though I try
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08-15-2003, 01:56 AM
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#60 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MIDDLE TN
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Thats really really good!!!!!
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08-15-2003, 01:59 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: A small under-developed town filled with farmers... great...
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The Last one is REALLY REALLY good!
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08-15-2003, 08:34 PM
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#62 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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ty all of u
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08-17-2003, 12:19 AM
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#63 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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this is a poem i wrote after talking with a good friend it is very short and doesn't have a title.
Lay awake try to sleep every night my heart seems to weep.
Close my eyes dare to dream everythings not as easy as it seems.
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08-17-2003, 01:07 AM
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#64 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
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Thats really good!!!
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08-17-2003, 06:38 PM
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#65 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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ty 4 all of ur replys
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08-17-2003, 06:46 PM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Muggle world :(
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Nice poems. Do you only write with rhyme?
My suggestion is not to be so blunt, especially with that last poem you posted, it would have more affect if you let the reader think some more, just my ideas.
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08-17-2003, 08:21 PM
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#67 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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you guys probly noticed a change in my poems it's cause i'm writing more meaning full stuff now. I dunno why the change but i hope it's a good 1
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08-17-2003, 08:27 PM
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#68 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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Love
love can be a blessing love can be a curse. Everyday love seems to hurt worse and worse. I love you but do you love me? I guess i'll never get to see. My love is secret no one knows how every day my love for you grows and grows.
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08-17-2003, 08:29 PM
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#69 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MIDDLE TN
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I didn't notice it but that probably because I was half asleep.
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08-17-2003, 08:29 PM
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#70 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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no big deal im probly the only 1 who does
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08-24-2003, 06:53 PM
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#71 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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srry its been so long since ive posted
well heres 1
The night light
keeps the little children safe from harm makes them feel like their in a mothers arm. No more checking under the bed all the monsters there are dead. Till one day the bulb burns out, thats when all the kiddies shout. The monsters that they banned come back. to make up for the scares that lack. Until the new bulb goes in that day, all the monsters of the night have gone away.
i got the idea for this 1 after whatching monsters inc.
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08-24-2003, 10:27 PM
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#72 (permalink)
| | Gnome
Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Muggle world :(
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The Night Light: I like it! Funny, too. Good job.  (what IS the cow about anyway??)
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08-26-2003, 10:54 PM
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#73 (permalink)
| | Imp
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09-02-2003, 09:37 PM
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#74 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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Gone
your gone so far away i think about you every day. wish you were here by my side your gone so now i want to hide.you were taken away from me so fast, i didnt know that our friendship would never last. my love for you grows and grows sometimes i hope it shows. your my true love even though you were taken away.
your gone
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09-03-2003, 12:11 AM
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#75 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
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well i got more poems if u wanna hear em
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