I love you FF,so I have to read more of it (I just left this comment so that you know I was here,he he,I'm such an anoying bugger aren't i?)

Ok, here's the next part. Hope you like it! :D

“Professor McGonagall!” I exclaimed. Oliver tumbled off me at once. Nothing was said for a few minutes. Our eyes just kept shooting back and forth between the group.

“Oliver, Grace…” Professor McGonagall began, and then let her voice fade away. She gave us a sly grin. “Oh well. Mind you, it’s Christmas today so you two aren’t in trouble.” As she walked away, she muttered something that frightfully sounded like “Teenage love.”

The moment she closed her door, I slumped against Oliver. “That was kind of weird, wouldn’t you say?”

He nodded and stroked my hair. “She’s strict, but I guess she’s nice in a way.” I only chuckled.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Sweat beaded on the foreheads of the Quidditch players, despite the freezing January weather. Angry stares were passed around and the atmosphere of mistrust was almost unbearable. I was watching quietly on the stands as the Gryffindors meandered around on their brooms.

Oliver had given some dull instructions for practice. No one seemed in the mood. All of the drills were completed, but with the minimum amount on effort and zest. Everyone grumbled more than usual and seemed listless when their captain addressed them. Oliver wasn’t in the greatest disposition either. Not a flicker of a smile was seen on anyone’s face.

“Come on, Gryffindor!” Oliver commanded half-heartedly. “Drive it harder! We’re not going to win the cup this year if we practice like this!”

“We’re not going to win anyway,” Alicia growled to herself, loud enough to be heard by the whole team.

“We are not going to win if you have an attitude like that,” Oliver pointed out angrily. “Just cooperate. We still have a chance since Slytherin has won against Ravenclaw.”

“Maybe we should concentrate on keeping the team together,” Katie interjected. She gave Oliver a look of disgust.

“That’s what you’re trying to say, isn’t it? That our team’s not going to win. That it’s useless.” Oliver paced on the green turf. “Then our practice is over. If we don’t have any hope or even try, there’s no point. We’ll just lose.”

Leaping off their brooms, Alicia and Katie stomped into the change rooms without hesitation. Once again, Angelina shrugged and followed.

“What’s wrong with me?” Oliver snarled. His face was bent in aggravation. “Am I really that bad of a captain?”

Patting him on the back, Fred assured, “You’re great. The girls are just moody. After all, they are girls.” Even as he said that, we noticed that Harry had also left. There was a steely silence.

Throwing his broom down, Oliver punched the wall and sagged onto it. “Thanks for your help, but you can go now. Most of the team has already left anyway.” He closed his eyes tightly.

The twins solemnly left after collecting the bludgers and other equipment. As their red heads disappeared into the change rooms, I headed over to Oliver and squeezed his hand.

“Are you okay?” I asked quietly, knowing that he certainly wasn’t.

McGonagall didn't do anything?? Craziness!

I love the twins! lol, sorry, I just can't resist anything involving them

LOVED IT!

~Amy~

I totally agree

Yeah, I do believe that although she's strict, she really does have a caring soul underneath. And yes, the twins are always there to make things a little better. That's just what they do. :P

Great post!!!! but why is Harry so jelouse of Grace...now that she is not in the team?

I'm glad tt the twins are with Oliver but what about Harry?
Maybe Harry's carrying a torch for Grace!!HAHA!!
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Lol...you got me Cookie. I totally thought McGonagall was going to go off on them.

Another excellent post. Keep up the good work! :)

Good point. I confess I made Harry a bit evil in this fic. Not that he is, of course. :lol:

That's what I wanted...:D Thanks!

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awesome posts. really really good. PAMS

Roshni

POST SOON! The girls are mean! Well, Angelina not so much but Katie and Alicia are----.

harry needs to stop being evil and get over it.

Glad Fred and George are on his side!!!!

POST SOON!

lol, thanks.

I'll post either tomorrow or Saturday. :P

I just realized...I've made like, everyone mean in this story! Oh dear!

As promised, the next post has been written. :)

“I’ve decided to quit the team,” announced Oliver the next day to the whole team on the stadium. A crisp wind nipped at our ears. A look of stubborn determination was etched on his face.

“What?!?” Fred and George exclaimed simultaneously. “You can’t do that! We won’t let you!”

Alicia didn’t say anything for a while, but just sat up straight. “Why are you bailing out now?” She added in a harsh tone with an accusing glance.

Snorting, Oliver asked, “What about all the stuff you said? Do you think it convinced me to stay? To me, it sounded like you wanted me out.”

Staring down at the ground, Alicia’s mouth went into a line. “Well, you were being a git. That’s not how a captain is supposed to act.”

Eyeing her, Oliver retorted, “What proof do you have that I was acting like a git? I think you were acting like a git.”

“I think we were all acting like gits,” Fred commented, then with a flourish, added, “Except for me, of course.” George whacked him on the back of his head.

“Your duties as our captain are to be utmost devoted to the team. You weren’t. Most of the time, you were too smitten with Grace to plan practices or team meetings like you used to,” Katie told Oliver.

He threw up his hands. “Okay, okay, maybe I was too preoccupied. But I’m just a wizard. We all make mistakes.”

“What do you propose we do?” Alicia snorted, narrowing her eyes.

“We can rewind all of the things we said before and start over. That’s the easiest,” George suggested. “That’s the motto of Fred and I. Forgive and forget.”

“That is such a cliché,” Angelina groaned. She rolled her eyes at him.

“It works,” George insisted. “Try it!”

Giving him a sideways glance, Oliver sighted. “Fine. Is everyone okay with that? A new start? Or else I’m quitting the team.”

Murmurs of agreement swept through the team. Everyone apologized to each other and hearts were renewed. Fred and George looked around proudly, muttering that their idea had worked, as usual.

Fred and George saves the day!!
Forgive and forget...
Finally the team is back together.
But where is Harry???
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I LOVE FRED AND GEORGE!!
lol
Fantastic post!
PAMS!

~Amy~

:D yay for the twins!

:lol:

Yesh, they are absolutely amazing!

I agree about everything!!!!

Yep...I love Fred and George to...Forgive and forget always works...What about Harry...Come on Cookie...soften him up...he is not supposed to be cruel!

yay a truce :P
but where was harry? or was he just there and said nothin?
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Roshni

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Yes, I didn't intend to make him evil...it just kinda added more drama to the story, I guess.
Being pensive, I suppose. :P

lol Thanks!

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