Hey there! I'm feeling creative at the moment so I think I'll right some poems!

Here's a little poem its called "One"


We are but one.
One mind
One heart
Yet we all play a part.
In this world thats disrupted
Our hearts are easily corrupted.
But we are bound to our place
By an unseen voice and face.
So we listen and we try without knowing when or why.
Living without care ,without knowing the fates we share.
In this world where we choose, good or evil, whats the use.
For in the end we are all the same.
One body bound by one fate.

Oh, and if you read it, I would grately appreciate your comments!

Here's another one called "Are You Really There?"



Are you really there?
Watching over me.
Covering my eyes so I can't see-
All the evil in this world
Thats just beyond the door
Waiting, watching to pull you in head first.
Are you really there?
Will you catch me if I fall?
Make your voice loud and clear so I can hear your call.
Are you really there?
Right inside my head.
Telling me it'll be okay, tomorrow won't be full of dread.
Are you really there?
Would you save me from damnation and guide me to salvation?
The evil in this world lies just beyond door. Should I pull the knob and perish or be with you forevermore.
Are you really there?
Do you hear me calling? Do u see me falling?
Catch me before its too late.

those were really good! keep writing - you're great at it!

I like them.Post more please.