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Lotus 07-01-2004 02:42 AM

Those are beatuful Leah I can smell the beach now.
I have to say those are 2 of my favorate poems of yours.
Thats an awesome dream house you've got there, I want it too.

firelily 07-06-2004 04:16 AM

kay my love you will live in dat house with me cause you said you will live wit me when your older so w00t anyway you seem to be the only fan i have lefted *sighs* note to self make lighting bolt deeper anyway ive been reall depressed lately hes my journal link if you would like to read

http://journals.aol.com/wildfireleah/leahsthoughts

but ill try to post another later this week if i can

leah mae

phoebe_phoenix 07-11-2004 10:27 PM

Hey Leah--sorry I didn't answer before, I was away. The poems are beautiful, still. I hate to see people sad :( Drink some hot chocolate, and think of all the nice things, or write a poem to get it off your soul. Helps for me every now and then. :/ Don't worry about people not replying, it's the same for us all, I think. The section is just a little...dead.

firelily 07-13-2004 03:41 AM

sorry for the delay but i got into a bit of trouble so i can only come on 2 times aweek so i write one now ok

will the pain ever go away

my tears r running
yet im not moving
i take a second
to glance around
with my eye sight blurred
and the world gone hazy
it feels as if theres nothing
lefted for me here
the pain so intense
all of your thoughts
seem to blend together
making reality something
of the past
your world is spinning
the ground is shaking
but yet i remain still
try as u might
to be happy
something comes over
and brings back your pain
more powerful than ever before
it takes u over
draining you worse than before
making you feel
like a emtpy shell
without a purpose
in this life
so stuck in my pain
i shall remain
never to know
what its like
to feel true happiness
the pain comes and it goes
but still i can feel it
attacted to my heart
never stopping its endless regin
so this being true
i am stuck
in a never ending
circle of pain
that will never go away

leah mae

phoebe_phoenix 07-15-2004 04:58 PM

Quote:

i shall remain
never to know
what its like
to feel true happiness

Oh, that was beautiful. I loved that part ^ Keep writing, Leah!

firelily 07-24-2004 05:34 AM

this sucks but i wasnt in the mood to type one of the poems i aready wrote so i when with what i was thinkin and bam a poem lol well read it already

blowen away


im drained and stuck
i ran short of luck
my brain is filled
my eyes are swiming
words people say
never enter my mind
i try to think
but it makes me blind
i contuine to shake
even though
my whole body aches
im only 20
yet i feel as if
ive lived a hundred years
so short my life is
but my pain is great
making me numb
to the world around
i get hit with blow after blow
but yet im still
lefted standing
waiting for the time
when my thoughts
finally string together
when i sleep
i find myself whole again
but then i awake
and only half of me
is alive
my allusion of life
has finally fell apart
but i still hope for the day
when the fog that surrounds me
is lifted
and i am lefted whole again

leah mae

Lotus 07-30-2004 03:27 PM

Oh those are wonderful twin, you capture emotions so well.
:flowersmile:

firelily 08-18-2004 01:08 AM

im between houses at the moment so i wont be posting a poem for like another week or so im soorry tis what happenes when your poor and have no where to live

potterxfan04 08-18-2004 04:18 AM

was reading some of your poems.. theyre good. i cant do non-rhyming poems, i believe you have to be profound to do that.. and i cant be cuz i wouldnt know what to write lol

firelily 09-16-2004 10:50 PM

well thank you potterxfan04 for that it means alot to me ive been around alot lately with having no set place to live you find yourself not able to get on the computer well here i am i droped everything and moved up to pa with my grandmum so hopely i will be able to post more often well heres another


a fall day

its a sunny fall day
the breeze is crisp and cool
it feels good now that
the long summer days are over
and falls begining
the cool air brushes againist my face
as i walk through a field of great beauty
relaxing and calming surroundings
that let you know fall is here
its the way you feel
as you see the first leaves
of autmun fall to the ground
its the feeling of comfort
that everyone need once in a while
it takes lifes pains away
just long enough for you to calm down
to give your soul a rest
and to take a breath
as colorful leaves dance around your body
falling from every angle
they surround you
letting you know that fall has arrived
at last your at peace with the world
and problems seem so far away
fall makes you see the beauty in life
so enjoy while you can.

leah mae

potterxfan04 10-03-2004 01:43 AM

thats nice..

firelily 10-05-2004 11:37 PM

thanks im up in the wood so that poem seems to fit the mood ya know ill write more soon but what does snitches caught mean??????????

leah

potterxfan04 10-07-2004 12:32 AM

oh i just found this out too lol you go to the announcements and go to the place where it says like "the snitch has been released" and it'll tell you...

firelily 10-07-2004 05:23 PM

thats love im so blonde anyway i can only get on the computer every once in a while so in a day or two ill post another and thanks again for telling me that leah mae

firelily 10-27-2004 12:58 AM

ello
 
so i havent seen people reading but oh well i hope i havent posted this poem
feeling emotions

i feel alot
a little to much
pain love hate hope
all of these things
i always feel
all of the time
never ending emotions
they take me over
leaving me with no rashional thoughts
only feeling
thousands of different feeling
im happy one minute
the next im ****** off
no way to focus
i do think and use reason
but its because of my emotions
im never without feeling
there so strongand abnormal
when im happy
i could srceam to the world
when im im in pain
my whole body quakes with pain
and i want to lie down and die
when im mad
my head burst open
and the rage comes flowin out
hatered makes me mean
and no one is safe
hope gives me a burst of energy
and i feel as if i can do anything
the emotions in me are massive
i feel as if there is no room for anything else
although its alot to take
i like having these kinds of feeling
no one else is like me
it makes me speical in my own way
feeling these emotions

leahmae


phoebe_phoenix 10-29-2004 01:25 PM

Hey leah <3

That was pretty--I can related too that a lot. Mood swings >.< Good work!

lance 10-29-2004 09:25 PM

:horse: so how are u will u help me write a poem

firelily 11-03-2004 04:20 AM

of course i will john ur my cousin

littlemisslupin 11-21-2004 10:16 PM

hello leah! i miss u! gues what i rated your thread thingy as "good" but i meant to pick "excellent" but i guess i missed it! You should rate your thread so it says that there are two votes instead of just one (like mine- i was the only one who rated mine) it's at the top of the page. And everyone else here should also rate this! i love u eah! do you think i should have my own poem thing in here, too? I will enter for it if you will read them and post in them, too :) okay well i miss u and i love u and don't worry eah if you get sad just think about how much me and nick and dimetri love u and how great (and a chick magnet)that dimetri will be when he's older, and you know you'll wanna be there to see him

laina

littlemisslupin 11-28-2004 09:03 PM

Leah Beah where are you? I just submitted a poem thread. Today is Sunday! I hope Charmed is on tonight. I love your poems! Please post more soon! Waht EXACTLY does PAMS mean? I know what it means, but not what it stands for. Like Pugy Alien Mutant Spies or something. I know you are online, so why is you not posting? GUESS WHAT! I saw National Treasure last night and it was awsome! Well, I'm rambling. So, gotta go! Bye! Love ya!
Oh, love ya, too, BUDDY!
See ya!
LittlemissLupin

firelily 12-18-2004 01:12 AM

Hello again
 
its been a long time sorry life has been kickin my *****


Mirror

what do i see
when i look
in a mirror
someone who is
not really standing there
her mind so far
from where her
body lies
i dont see
what others view
beautiful is not
how i feel
a hideous monster
stands where i should be
fat allover
every scar reminding me
about parts of my life
i dont want to remember
how can people
like this person
i see standing here
i cant stand looking at myself
it makes me sick
how did i get this way
i may be 5'4 and weigh 165
but i can see all my fat
no matter what i do
it never goes away
staying there and teasing me
making me feel as if
i will never look good
in my own eyes
i turn away from the mirror
hopeing that next time
that i look into its glassy surface
there will be a beauitful woman standing there
telling me ive been there all long

leahmae

siruisblack18 12-18-2004 02:08 AM

Wow
 
Your poems are really powerful...Your a great poet ((n u didn't even know it!!!)). You should def. Write a book...I know Id buy it!!!

firelily 01-01-2005 07:54 PM

Thank u so much its nice to see a new person read my stuff its been along time ive been writing 8 or 9 years its not that easy sometimes i cant write anything for months but whatever my name is leah and it would be nice to talk to u some time u seem nice if u have aol or aim my screen name is wiccanleah ok um ill relpy soon with another one cause i have to look through my binder to firgue out which one to put up so yea bye for now

lance 01-09-2005 06:19 PM

:sheep: i love ur writing cousin i hope u post more lol

kuru01 01-22-2005 02:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by firelily
tis me again glad yall like them! heres another one!

poetry rhythms

its about time
i write a poem that rhythms
i think about it in my mind
as i try to think what to write on every line
i start to write with pen in hand
as i dream of a faraway land
where theres a prince fair and true
but then he leaves and makes my heart turn blue
than i think ill write about hope
but i throw that idea away with the whip of my rope
so i decide to write about trout
but wait, i dont like fish and what there about
those ideas gos down the drain
as i try to rattle my brain
i write things for people to see
even things about little old me
as i sit and think
i try to make my poetry lines link
i look through all the poems in my book
writing this isnt as easy as it looks
i think about what to write really hard
$hit i cant think i feel like such a retard
i guess this means im done
now im going out to have some fun

leah

WOW!!! i liked it... I think you have talent in writing, why don't you publish your own book of poetry?


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