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Dawn Bloom 05-31-2004 07:29 AM

PAMS

Lotus 05-31-2004 02:29 PM

I loved the tale of Leah for I know she is a great many things. Caring Compassionate and a Gentle Spirit.

Don't let ANYONE get you down. Those bitter envious people are not worthy of your love or attention.
Your doing so well......keep it up Leah! :flowersmile:

littlemisslupin 06-05-2004 10:45 PM

[COLOR=blue]You are a good writer big sis! Yes, I read your poetry all the time, but I usually don't post but I am now. The bi one was....interesting...but you DON'T kiss both....you might...I don't know....now I'm scared! Run Away!


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littlemisslupin 06-05-2004 10:46 PM

You are a good writer big sis! Yes, I read your poetry all the time, but I usually don't post but I am now. The bi one was....interesting...but you DON'T kiss both....you might...I don't know....now I'm scared! Run Away!


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firelily 06-07-2004 05:41 AM

my dear sweet sister laina there are many things that you dont know about me lol just ask me and i will tell you i will post another poem tomorrow butim going to try and get them copyrighted so i dunno i love the sis and da twin bye for now

firelily 06-08-2004 06:21 AM

this poem was just a line my twin gave to me and i wrote a poem about it tis kind of funny

my love for you is like candy

my love for you is like candy so sweet and pure like the heart that is yours it beats for me your heart does telling me that you love me too me and you we fit together like choclate and milk flowing as one me and you r like two lollipops stuck together and i hope that we will always be together the way cotton candy melts in my mouth is the same way you flow over my skin making my insides fill with warmth and happiness when I touch you it feels like whipped cream so soft it almost like touching a piece of heaven here on earth I thank the god and goddess everyday for having someone as sweet as you in my life you’re the a candy bar I cant get enough of the more I taste the more I want making my sugar craving more intense making me long for the candy taste you have I hope that we can always find happiness even if it through candy

leah mae

Lotus 06-08-2004 03:23 PM

Hahaha all I keep thinking is ....mmm candy. :rolleyes:
or .....mmm sugar induced coma.
:lol:

Just great! Now where did i put that chocolate? :shifty:

firelily 06-09-2004 04:05 AM

:lol: lol twin you make me laugh your to cute but i will be gone intill sunday so i will post more than thanks kay love leah mae

lance 06-10-2004 02:40 AM

[FONT=Times][SIZE=1] nice poem cousin :monkey: banana_wtf :dance_banana:

lance 06-10-2004 02:42 AM

love your peoms :monkey: banana_wtf :scarejulie: :cow:

lance 06-10-2004 02:45 AM

i miss u all lots of from your all of us :monkey: off_topic :beer: banana_wtf :yoshi: :kirby: :crack_whip: :oops: :kill_computer: :bye: :music_band: :hide_chair: :cat: :toilet: :dance_banana:

lance 06-10-2004 02:48 AM

hi from buddy and tt :sorcerer: :monkey: banana_wtf :beer: :sorcererdragon: :cow: :afro: :wiltedrose: :lmao: :oops: :dance_banana:

lance 06-10-2004 06:42 PM

hi this is me, Laina! Just wanted to say that I don't want to ask you about anything........I don't want to know that much about you! Bye! Have fun!
Buddy says hi


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firelily 06-14-2004 05:16 AM

john hale this is not your place to post emoticons all over my cousin so bugger off monkey lol j/k but i post a poem tomorrow if i remeber leah mae

phoebe_phoenix 06-14-2004 06:10 PM

Whoa, I loved the Candy-poem! :flowersmile: I'm quite a sweet-lover myself, so that would probably explain it. So sweet (haha). Great work.

lance 06-14-2004 07:19 PM

hi cuz if u are reading this i want to tell to say hi to everyone........




ps.....does your parents know u are on

lance 06-14-2004 08:42 PM

do u like my knew look leah :ermsmile:

firelily 06-15-2004 04:55 AM

omg i glad your still reading my poems phoebe love heres another

your never were

you were mine
once upon a time
but you r gone
you treated me as if i was your pawn
everyday u treated me worse
it felt like i was cursed
so by and by
lie after lie
merlin knows you've caused me so much pain
by doing this what did you stand to gain
y did u deceive me
cant you see
this pain is so intense
it doesnt make any sense
did you love me in the begining
$hit dont you ever stop sining
you never loved me just like i feared
i fight away the love i had for you with every tear
u feed me all your fancy lines
gods how could i have been so blind
i was caught in your web like a fly
with this the moments i spent with you started flashing by
i wasted too much of my time on you
do you feel that way about me too
im glad this realtionships at its end
thank gods its all over amen

leah mae

firelily 06-15-2004 05:08 AM

ill try and post a better poem tomorrow i kinda think the last one sucked leah mae

phoebe_phoenix 06-15-2004 05:08 PM

*smiles* I am quite busy, but I still read your poetry, because it's beautiful. I'm trying to work out why you don't like the last poem...I think the imagery is fine, but the rhymes make it sound too forced, and it keeps it from flowing freely... not sure though >_<

lance 06-15-2004 09:47 PM

:hello: :bye:




miss u lance

firelily 06-17-2004 04:25 AM

its hard for me to ryhme some times thats why i dont write poems like that offen i went to your live journal phoebe let me just say wow your beautiful but thanks for reading cause ive been wicked busy too so i have not been able to post very much i work over 40 hours a week and im beat but tis whateveri check your poems too oh and buddy i miss u too cousin ill post another tomorrow if i can keep my eyes open lol anyway im off once more leah mae

Lotus 06-20-2004 12:49 PM

Come on Leah keep posting, your loyal fans want more. :flowersmile:

firelily 06-21-2004 05:15 AM

lol twin your silly and cute well heres one about the kind of house i want it maybe stuipd to you but its how i would love to live

dream house

i dream of a house
that sits on a hundred acres or more
a place i can call my home
rolling hills
green pastures
beautiful meadows
filled with wild flowers
farer than the eye can see
animals play
on my land all day
without a worry in the world
colorful sunsets
that bathe the sky
in a golden light
the house itself
covered with mystery
pulls you to it
filling you with warmth and excitement
it has 3 stories
with many different rooms
that r filled with whatever
you can imagine
an enclosed pool in the backyard
a green house on its side
and a garage on the other side
with a beautiful fountain in the front
it has a garden
that covers 5 acres
and grows everything possible
theirs a stable on my land
with 12 horses
and many paths to walk on
the driveway leading to the house
has a row of perfectly planted trees
in a row on each side of the driveway
birds sing as they fly over head
and all the animals know
they our safe
when there on my land
people will always want to come over
and visit me and my house
its a place where dreams will happen
this is my dream house

leah mae ps. hope it wasnt to corny

firelily 06-21-2004 06:16 AM

i really love the beach so one day when i was at work i wrote this


the beach

the sun is out
from behind the cloudy blanket
the sweet song of the birds
is all around
filling the air with joy
the clear blue waves
crash one right after the other
sending its foam
onto the sands
the white sands
are hot to the touch
sending its warmth
through your entire body
the beach is like a painting
young and ageless
through the years
its has never changed
laying on its white sand
is something everyone should do
its the greatest feeling in the world
the sun beats down on you
theres a cool breeze
from off the water
that feels good when it hits your skin
people are all over the place
swimming,running,laughing and playing
enjoying there time at the beach
when your at the beach
you have a love for life
everyone is happy
there are no problems
just people enjoying themselfes
having the time of their lifes
the sun birds water and sand
are what make the beach
the beach
its a beautiful place
in which to relax
and to enjoy yourself
if you have never been to the beach
then your missing out
on one of lifes
many gifts to us

leah mae


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