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Lotus 04-18-2004 06:53 AM

Spanks. :evil:

Dawn Bloom 04-18-2004 11:54 AM

lol hugging it hehe :lol: :hello:


PAMS lovely Firelily

stardancer488 04-18-2004 06:14 PM

OMG the last poem was so good! I wish i could write like that! it had so much meaning and emotions in it! AWESOME! great job! you can never stop writing either! keep up the fantastic work!!!! :flowersmile:

btw sorry i haven't responded forever!

angelwings 04-19-2004 10:00 AM

Whoa! I'm amazed. Your poems are awesome. Hail to firelily! :bouncepea: :rose: :hail:

Thanks for replying to my poems by the way.

firelily 04-20-2004 04:19 AM

:hello: thanks everyone and tis no problem angelwings well heres on for da twin goddess

my twin

i have a new best friend
my twin
she is just like me
in alot of ways
its like a sister i never had
her beauty inside
is just as great
as the beauty outside
your my #1 critic
and my biggest fan
you never cease to surprise me
we like Eeyore
and talking about nothing
we share are hearts, souls and thoughts
friends til the end
we both r now
never to part
you insipire me to be
a better person
your spirit is strong
and ur talents are many
you are my goddess
my twin
i love you more than words can describe
we r 2 in the same
you and i
a ocean separtes us
but i feel like you are always with me
standing by my side
guiding me through life
and its many choices
im so glad ive met you
and who would have thought
i owe it all to the internet
but now we have each other
we will never be alone again
i hope one day
i can meet the face
behind the words
thatt has changed my life
in more ways than one

leah mae this is for my kamali!

firelily 04-20-2004 04:45 AM

:hello: here is another


you never were


you were mine
once upon a time
but soon you were gone
you treated me as if i was your pawn
everyday you treated me worse
it felt like i was cursed
so by and by
lie after lie
merlin knows you have caused me so much pain
by doing this what did you stand to gain
why did you decieve me
cant you see
this pain is so intense
it doesnt make any sense
did you love me in the begining
$hit dont you ever stop sining
you never loved me like i feared
but you still linger in my tears
you feed me with all your fancy lines
gods how could i have been so blind
i was caught in your web like a fly
then the moments i spent with you started flashin by
i wasted too much of my time on you
do you think that way about me too
im glad this relationships at its end
thank gods its all over amen

leah mae

Sirus_Black 04-20-2004 04:49 AM

that one is good but very sad. Boo Hoo. i love u baby.and u have the best poems :monkey: :monkey: :wub: :wub: :dance_banana: :sorcererdragon:

Sirus_Black 04-20-2004 04:51 AM

leah is it ok if i write a poem here if it is write ok on the post>

Sirus_Black 04-20-2004 05:06 AM

here is one i made up




i love you always and every way
i think about it every day
i love feel your soft, soft skin
it feels so good it should be a sin
i need you always and forever more
i want to tell you all i love u for
being with you is like smellin roses
i am a jew and you are my moses
i love you deeply with all my heart
i hope that we will never part
but since we will a have to say
ill think about u everyday

Hary C. Heck III

firelily 04-20-2004 05:09 AM

oh my gods i love it *crys* i love you too harry u is too cute awwwww i love it so much!:wub:

Sirus_Black 04-20-2004 05:12 AM

yay leah likes it. any one else like it anyone
any critisism will be highly appretiated

Lotus 04-20-2004 05:12 AM

AWWWWWWWWWWW......Leah you made me cry.
Thankyou so much! :flowersmile:
Although everything you said about me, I could easily say about you....for we are twins and nothing can change that.
*sniffs and gives you a hug*
You are such a wonderfully special person and just talking to you brightens my darkest days.

firelily 04-20-2004 05:20 AM

i love you kay twin!

Sirus_Black 04-20-2004 05:21 AM

what can i say i just love leah
i might do another some day if i get inspired
:snowman: :wub: :wub: banana_wtf

Lotus 04-20-2004 05:22 AM

That is so cute Harry. It made me giggle too.....Moses.
You two are lucky you have each other.
And you should really do more writing of your own.

Sirus_Black 04-20-2004 05:27 AM

i will do more maybe tomorrow ill writ some but i leave soon so it won't be any for a while so be hapy u got one cause i ain't very good at poetry
:evil:

Sirus_Black 04-20-2004 06:10 AM

here another from me

da kay

i met her on snitch seeker
i love her so much i want to keep her
she is me and leah best friend
we talk for hours on end
we love the as much as one can
she deseres the very best man
i love to talk to this fine woman
she likes to talk about different thing
i like the pleasure that she brings
i will miss her when i leave
i hope that leah keeps her pleased

HarryC. Heck III

u guys like :eyebrows: :eyebrows:

Sirus_Black 04-20-2004 06:13 AM

what does everyone think of my works i like them just cause they r very cheery poems i can't judge though there r mine
:hello:

Lotus 04-20-2004 06:16 AM

:lol: Hahahahaha.
I don't know whether to hand you flowers or throw a shoe.

Sirus_Black 04-20-2004 06:21 AM

ifi think up any others ill write them ok folks. to infinityand beyond!!!!!!!!!!!! :wine:

Sirus_Black 04-20-2004 01:56 PM

Thanks kay for your praise and throwing a shoe but me and leah will keep writing more to make everyone happy

firelily 04-21-2004 04:26 AM

:hello: hey sorry everyone but my twin and my boyfriend had a relpy fest in my thread so just skip past it all and i will be posting another poem tomorrow ok thanks! leah mae

Dawn Bloom 04-21-2004 08:19 PM

LOL. I thought all of them were great, from you Leah ^_^, and you Sirus_Black.


The one about the twin was especially lovely. ^_^


PAMS :hello:




:rose:

firelily 04-23-2004 03:42 AM

:hello: thanks dawn love well heres another

getting away

i want to get away from here
to see places ive never seen
as long as i get away
i will be happy once again
to get away from this place
i call jail
it would lift the burden
i hold on my shoulders
to feel the lightness of the air around me
would free me of my pain
and my suffering
the god and goddess
made me realize
i can be free again
through their faith and love
i will set myself free
and i will finally
be away from here leah mae

Lotus 04-23-2004 07:48 AM

Yes Leah thats a good one.
Fly, Fly away. :bouncy:


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