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Firelilys poetry :hello: hello everyone i've been writing poetry for years and now i firgued that others should read them and tell me what they think. no not all of them are going to be works of art to you but to me they are. My heart and soul gos into each one making them different then any others in this poetry section. My name is Leah Mae and im 20 years old i live in Delaware and i love to write poetry. Feel free to pm if you have any questions! well here go's nothing. this first poem is about me. The gifts i have The heart and wisdom of a woman The spirit and imaginationof a child a soul that wants to be free a lover that needs to be caught a fear of falling a love for exploration and adventure a sign from the heavens and a temptation from the devil that wont work on me a need to try new things a fear of being wrong the angel in me who wants to fiy away into the sky the ablity to see the world the fear of losing it all in a second the gifts i have hope yall like it! |
Aww yay! I like it lover :) |
WOW! Leah that was amazing, actually if I had read it without knowing who the author was, I would've thought it reminded me of you. And some of that sounds like me too. Good job Twin! :flowersmile: |
Yah-hah! That was awesome, Leah! You're good :) |
:hello: heres another! thanks lover! my friend when you need a place to go when you need some time to think when you need someone to love you like a sister does come to me i will help you deal with your pains and problems i will be your shoulder to cry on i will always be there for you through thick and thin for you are my friend someone i trust with my secrets someone i will hold close to my heart for the rest of my life my friend tell me what you think! |
Awesome, Leah! Keep it up. Lotus, please check your PM inbox. |
:hello: heres another! Springs Painting the flowers of spring are many beautiful but different colors they arose a sense of warmth in my heart a feeling of welcome flows through my body after a long winters nap a bursting of colors through out the land flowers faRer than the eye can see so delicate and detailed like a painting in a museum young and ageless in that time seems to stand still these precious jewels of the earth grace us with the presence that the god and goddess are still here showing us the beauty of the earth making us see springs painting its their way of showing us a picture that everyone can enjoy so we can see just how beautiful life can be |
Excellent! Keep it up! :D |
heres a funny one i wrote it cause i was sleepy sleep im sitting on the chair and i start to fall asleep i realize that im tired so i head for my room as i enter the door way the bed is calling my name telling me to lay on its cozy surface my body collapses on the mastress i get under the covers making myself warm and relaxed then slowly i drift off to sleep having the sweetest of dreams lol |
tis me again glad yall like them! heres another one! poetry rhythms its about time i write a poem that rhythms i think about it in my mind as i try to think what to write on every line i start to write with pen in hand as i dream of a faraway land where theres a prince fair and true but then he leaves and makes my heart turn blue than i think ill write about hope but i throw that idea away with the whip of my rope so i decide to write about trout but wait, i dont like fish and what there about those ideas gos down the drain as i try to rattle my brain i write things for people to see even things about little old me as i sit and think i try to make my poetry lines link i look through all the poems in my book writing this isnt as easy as it looks i think about what to write really hard $hit i cant think i feel like such a retard i guess this means im done now im going out to have some fun leah |
Wow! Those are really good, they rock. You are a really awesome writer!! I especially like the first one, it was really well done, and the on was really funny :flowersmile: |
Fantastic :D I love them all keep it up Emily xxx |
Yay, Leah! Keep it up :) |
:hello: hi everyone thanks for reading my poems. im glad that everyone likes them i will try to keep posting more daliy but in this up coming week i work 12 hour shifts at work so i dunno but im glad everyone likes them! leah mae |
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WOW these are so unbelivably good!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!! |
:hello: heres another hope you all like it! Under My Tree the way the wind blows through my hair on a crisp autmun day as the leaves fall creating a beautiful aray of colors i feel a sense of freedom as i wonder aimlessly through my thoughts wondering how long i will be at this sweet serenity of this peace and quiet not knowing when it will end hoping that my pains and problems will be at rest it's calm and quiet as i watch the leaves fall from the trees telling me about their history their way of life i sit and hope that i can stay in this sweet serernity forever a voice calls my name and as i get up to leave i will always remember the time i spent under my tree leah mae |
thanks prince for that and thanks stardancer as long as you people like them ill keep posting i have like 100 more so its all good and thanks again everyone! leah mae |
Awesome, Leah, that one was great :) |
:hello: hey all tis me again thanks eveyone heres another nothing i will miss theres is nothing im going to miss not one person not one thing not even the house i grew up in i wont come back not till i have to i dont want to see the muesums or schools i went to ill put it all behind me never to think of it again to clear my mind of what went on in my childhood although i will never forget there isnt anything im gonna miss leah mae |
:hello: and tis another one forgotten a love thats forbidden through the begining of time the love i want but can't find ive longed for this person since i can remember this person should be with me and belongs to no one else why should i suffer why is are love againest the law i can say "its not fair" but where would that get me "nowhere" they try to make us forget but the memorys still linger like a dark cloud that stays with you and ruins your day not me not this day i will step forward and proceed with my life and if i keep my hopes up maybe one day i will forget the love that got away leah mae |
:hello: this one is about the earth our land are you a free spirit like the indians are can you feel the warmth of the wind on your face is nature and the indians talking to you telling you about its land and how precious it is if your a free spirit you can hear there voices telling you about the past and furture of our land voices that say make me proud and preserve our land so furture generations can see its beauty and use it as the indians once did our land is priceless and we are to so listen to the voices of the past and save its land for the children for our furture leah mae |
Thanks for reviewing my poems..."Forgotten" is good, it reminds me of the type I used to write.....no mine aren't all happy and cheerful, if you look closely you can find a deeper angst in them :whisle: ..well, yesh, keep writing! |
dracnyzz love im glad you like my writeing and i meant that you seem like a very happy go lucky person thats all i wrote it wrong my bad anyway thank you for reading my poems! leah mae |
Leah these are fantastic I love them all! :rose: I just dont know how you can write so many. I only write poems when I feel like it. Your really talented. You should get these published as well. :rose: Emily xxx |
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