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10-04-2006, 08:48 PM
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| Griffin
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: eating your bamboo
Posts: 27,315
Hogwarts RPG Name: Seth Moore First Year | Ali's Apprentice | | SuperEvilAwesomePanda! Do I have permission to kiiiilll Draco?!? 
That was brilliant Cat! Even though Draco is eviiiil to mah poor Hermy.
__________________  Ashlie luffs her Brittanda SO much. <333 |
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10-04-2006, 10:37 PM
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| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
Posts: 11,247
| Book Club Babe
^^ dittio (haven't a clue if people say that anymore) PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! Please? please? please?
Jessica
P.S. That is dancerbookl's name J-E-S-S-I-C-A!
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10-05-2006, 06:01 AM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 142
Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted |
meanie poo! <- draco of course 
pams!
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10-05-2006, 08:21 PM
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#154 (permalink)
| Fwooper
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 21,641
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plez post soon
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10-07-2006, 03:47 AM
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#155 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Well, took me forever to get back online, but EXCELLENT news - I have school off until Tuesday which means TONS of time for posts, finally! And since my parents are working tomorrow night, I should have a chance to get online ... I've got a Beta Reader for the next post too anyway so this should all go pretty smoothly!
You guys are the best.
-- Caitlin
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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10-07-2006, 04:10 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2003 Location: NSW, Aussieness
Posts: 1,128
Hogwarts RPG Name: Skade Prezton |
EXCITEMENT yay!!!! HUGS
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10-07-2006, 06:52 AM
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#157 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 142
Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted |
yay |
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10-07-2006, 07:26 PM
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#158 (permalink)
| Shrake
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: (EST)
Posts: 12,976
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacoby Rivers Hufflepuff Sixth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Callista Rivers Gryffindor Second Year | Stealthy Ninja Queen | Snake For Life | waddling baker | binge royalty ♚
Party lol well i can't wait to read the next post.
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10-07-2006, 11:12 PM
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| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sitting........On the rocky coast of Maine.......my nose burried in a novel.
Posts: 903
Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Weasley Second | Quote:
Originally Posted by the.time.is.now You guys are the best. Yeah, we know!  Just kidding! Quote:
Originally Posted by the.time.is.now And since my parents are working tomorrow night, I should have a chance to get online ... I've got a Beta Reader for the next post too anyway so this should all go pretty smoothly! It's tomorrow night! Please post soon *begs*!
__________________ ~Katie and Nathan (The Current Weasley Twins)~ "Families are like fudge... mostly sweet with a few nuts." - unknown. "Piper, this is completely illegal!" -Leo Wyatt, Charmed
"Yeah? Well, so is marrying a dead guy, okay? [She holds up his death certificate] Let's not get technical now!" -Piper Halliwell, Charmed. |
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10-08-2006, 03:50 AM
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#160 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Hey! Well I sent Tara the post earlier today to edit and she's hasn't gotten it back yet, but as soon as she does I'll post it!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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10-08-2006, 04:25 AM
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#161 (permalink)
| Doxy
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 5,922
| Roro Numero Uno Hogwarts Rules!
Hey im a new reader...well not really but anyways i think your story is great ecspecialy since im more of a R/Hr shipper so this is one of the first D/Hr storys im reading so im kinda Happy they broke up...
on a lighter note: i think your fic is amazing(did i already say that?!?!)
anyways, PAMS!
~Rohey
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10-08-2006, 04:52 AM
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#162 (permalink)
| Erumpent
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: The Golden Coast
Posts: 33,761
Hogwarts RPG Name: Bueller B. Betsworth Fifth Year | Jor!Jor! Queen Hermidana Quote:
Ron Weasley paced the corridors of the school, thoughts racing fiercely through his mind. He honestly did not like Hermione like he used to; while he still wanted to pursue a friendship with her, all feelings of physical and dating attraction had escaped him. Now, he only wanted to find a way to have her back in his and Harry’s life.
Yeah...Sure Ronald. *rolls her eyes* You Know you want to pick out China Patterns with her...like tomorrow! Quote:
“Of course I am … she’s with the lowest of the low, and it’s a disgrace. I can’t believe she did that to us …”
Uh...You mean to you. Scar Face over there *gestures to Harry* is worried about other things. Oh, like I don't know, trying to avoid that nose less freak! Quote:
“But it wasn’t intended to hurt us,” Ron sighed. “I'm starting to think like a girl, and it hurts.”
Oh Regina you know you love it! *ruffles your skirt and makes it look pretty* Quote:
“It’s just …” Ron tried to explain, but failed. “It’s just … I try to see things from her perspective; you know … to see what she’s thinking. I'm hoping it will stop some of the fights.”
Yeah he so loves her its pathetic!  *huggles him* Quote:
“Oh, that and … I wanted to tell you that you're amazing, and I love having you in my life … And I wanted to make sure you’d be cheering me on at the game tonight.”
*GAG me with a spoon, broom, licorice wand etc..* Quote:
“You left it by the lake! You never told your father you were coming to my house, did you?”
Someone please give her a Gold Star Sticker. *pokes her EXTRA Hard* Quote:
“You told me that if I told my friends, you’d tell your father,” she reminded him though gritted teeth. “You promised me!”
Yeah he did, and news flash EINSTEIN he is a guy, he's a platinum bottle blond, and he's in Slytherin. Get a Clue Chick! *pokes her fro* Quote:
“I'm sorry … All right? I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry! I didn’t want to tell you, because I didn’t want you to get hurt.”
Say it until your face turns blue...or green whichever comes first. Quote:
“I can’t believe it,” she gasped, crying now. “I can’t believe you lied to me for this long. How am I ever supposed to trust you again? I gave you everything, Draco … I gave up my friends for you! And for what? For you to go behind my back, lie to me, and hurt my friend. I can’t deal with this. I can’t deal with you. We’re over.”
Believe it sista' he did it and you got played! She is annoying me. Quote:
He wrapped a towel around his neck, sat back, and smiled, satisfied with his work.
Oh how I'd so like to wrap that towel around his neck tighter, and tighter, and tighter and tighter...  Malfoy sucks! He is a jerk! I hope he goes bald.
I'm late again but I'm glad I finally came before I got too behind.
Caitlin I loved it!  It was great! Finally she is seeing his true colors!  I can't wait to see what happens next!
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10-08-2006, 05:04 AM
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|  SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Maxschie ish back. =]
Four words: I'm glad they're over. 
At long last, she's seeing his true colours. Even though I ship both D/ Hr and R/ Hr, Malfoy was being such a bad boy up there, I couldn't help hating him. =[
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10-08-2006, 04:56 PM
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#164 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Hi Rohey! Welcome to Fate! I'm really glad that you've gotten to stop by! Quote:
Oh Regina you know you love it! *ruffles your skirt and makes it look pretty*
Hahahaha omg! That's hilarious! It's a pink skirt, isn't it? Isn't it? Quote:
Someone please give her a Gold Star Sticker. *pokes her EXTRA Hard*
Omg. If you were a boy, I'd have to marry you 'coz you're so funny. JEEZ. I'm dying over here!
*loves on Maxie, too*
All right, if Tara can't get around to editing this before six o'clock my time I'll just post in un-edited, mmmkay?
LOVE YOU ALL! <3
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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10-08-2006, 07:13 PM
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#165 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
HEYY KIDZZ! I got the post back, so guess what?
I'M POSTING!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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10-08-2006, 07:15 PM
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#166 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
“I thought you were going to get physical with her?” Goyle asked, his nose twitching in a rather peculiar way.
“I got bored with it,” Draco sniggered, dropping shredded fairy livers into his potion. “It doesn’t smell that bad.”
“Yes, it does,” he replied, backing away from his potion. “Where is she today, anyway? Shouldn’t see be here?”
He shrugged. “I don’t know, and I don’t care.”
It wasn’t a lie. While he did feel a small twinge of pity for her, he liked it better when Hermione wasn’t around. He’d had his months with her, and he had already moved on.
“School is almost over,” Goyle pointed out.
“Congratulations,” replied Draco. “You finally discovered the purpose of a calendar.”
….
Hermione laid on her bed, her mind racing and her head aching. Draco had broken up with her a week ago, and no one had noticed. No one cared.
She sighed; knowing that everything she’d done was a mistake was too much for her. She let things get out of control. She’d never let things get so messy before, and now that she was at rock bottom she didn’t know what to do. Finally, she sat up and crept down the stairs, her head pounding.
Ron and Harry were sitting in the Common Room, whispering silently about things Hermione didn’t know. The fact that she’d had them out of her life for so long hit her all over again and she became slightly nauseated with herself.
After waiting a couple of minutes for the overwhelming sense of sickness to pass, she silently walked over to the two boys, and sat down.
“I'm sorry,” she began. “I let… I let a boy come between our friendships, and now that we’re over, I realize everyone that I’d hurt in the process.”
“You broke up with him?” Ron asked, his surprised eyes meeting hers.
She nodded. “Yeah, but that’s not important. I miss you both, and honestly … I'm dying with out you. I'm really sorry.”
“Okay,” Harry nodded. “You’re forgiven.”
“That’s it?” Hermione asked, flabbergasted. “You’re going to forgive me so easily?”
“Yep,” Ron smiled. “It’s what good friends do.”
She could only smile and hug them.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
Last edited by the.time.is.now; 10-09-2006 at 02:59 AM.
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10-08-2006, 07:26 PM
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#167 (permalink)
| Fwooper
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 21,641
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sorry it took so long to get the post back but my dad wouldn't let me get on the computer, so I dropped by to say SORRY!!! but anywayz, awesome post, luffed it, PAMS!!! PAMSOID!!! |
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10-08-2006, 07:57 PM
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#168 (permalink)
| Ramora
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Avvie by... Well, ac
Posts: 5,366
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lia Taylor | Draco's Director Dramione=OTP
PAMS!!!! I loved it!
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10-08-2006, 09:38 PM
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#169 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
So uhm can I post again?
Just wondering ... because, you know ... I bet SOMEONE out there wants to read!
Well. I'll post anyway, even though no one seems as excited as I do ...
I just wanted to let y'all know, Fate is close to being over. In Microsoft Word, it's already reache dlike forty pages. I will let you know, though ... my next story is going to be TOTALLY different than this one. NO love triangle! [I think] YAY!
Sorry if this post has mistakes - I can't find a Beta Reader.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
Last edited by the.time.is.now; 10-08-2006 at 10:23 PM.
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10-08-2006, 10:32 PM
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#170 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
And the school year went on. Final exams approached and Hermione found herself more relieved than ever that she had Harry and Ron once again at her side. The taunting came once again as people slowly began to realize that Hermione and Draco were over. She heard more than one person say “I told you so,” but luckily, Ron and Harry were smart and didn’t rub it in her face.
As Hermione walked out of her last exam – Transfiguration – Ron jogged to her side.
“So…” he began nervously, not sure of her mood. “How’d you do?”
“I actually think it went all right … I might’ve missed number twenty-eight, about the Bynkas, because I don’t think I gave enough detail … but …”
Ron turned around and yelled to Harry. “It’s all right, mate! Come on!”
Harry smiled, nodding, and came to Hermione’s other side.
“What’s all right?” she asked sharply, looking back and forth between the two.
“Well, you know how you sometimes are after exams …” Ron began slowly, trying to pick his words carefully. “You sometime want to go over them and all … and sometimes, if you think you did a bad job … you’re sort of not fun to be around.”
Her jaw dropped open at how he tried to end the sentence simply.
Ron’s eyes got round in fear as she stepped towards him, an angry expression etched into her face. As he backed away, she broke out in laughter.
“You guys are fun. I'm glad you’re scared of me.”
“We’re not scared of you!” Harry protested.
Hermione raised her eyebrows, and then crackled with laughter again.
….
“This may be an ending for some of us,” Hermione said into the microphone placed at the head of the Great Hall. “But leaving Hogwarts is a beginning for me. We’ve all grown up here, and as I look around at my fellow peers, the others my age … older or younger … I realize we’re all going somewhere. I came to this school, insecure, my nose constantly stuck in a book … but I'm leaving with the best friends anyone could ever ask for, and the knowledge of what it really takes to survive. Hogwarts has always been my home and probably always will be … Maybe one day I’ll come back and teach, maybe I won’t … but everything I’ve taken from this place will stay with me for the rest of my life. I know my friends can say the same thing, and I hope, one day, that you’ll also be able to.”
She stepped down and returned to the Gryffindor table, applause erupting around her.
“Once again, that was Valedictorian Hermione Granger,” Dumbledore smiled, nodding in her direction. “We’d like to wish a farewell to the leaving Seventh Years, and for everyone else … I’ll see you next year!”
People clapped once more, and the tables filled with food.
“That was an ‘xellent speech, ‘Ermine,” Ron said through a mouthful of chicken.
“I'm going to miss this place,” Harry sighed, sitting back and looking up at the ceiling. A starry night met his eyes and he shook his head. “It’s just sad to leave, you know? Where am I going to go now when I get in trouble?”
“You’ll always be welcome at my place,” Ron offered. “Speaking of … you told your Uncle you’re coming, right?”
“Yeah.” Harry sat back up straight and reached for a roll. “Like he cares. He’s probably dancing at the thought.”
Ron snorted. “I don’t even want to think of your Uncle dancing. The house might fall down if he did.”
Hermione coughed into her goblet, juice spilling down her front. “Oh, Ron, that’s awful!”
“So is the idea of that madman!”
“You have no idea,” Harry replied, watching the two, amused.
….
“Mum, we’re here!” Ron called into the door of the house. They decided not to ride home on the Hogwarts Express; instead, they had journeyed into Hogsmeade to celebrate with the other graduated Seventh Years.
She raced into the foyer, wrapping two of the three of them into a hug. “Harry – Hermione – it’s so good to see the two of you again!”
Ron stepped back, clearing his throat.
“Oh, and you, Ron!” she smiled, hugging him also. “Dinner’s fixing to come to the table. I hope you’re all hungry.”
“We always are, Mrs. Weasley!” Harry grinned, and they went upstairs to drop off their things. After they left Hermione at Ginny’s door, Harry followed Ron to his shockingly bright orange room. Posters of the Chudley Cannons were distributed unevenly over the neon walls and a full size bed sat in the middle of the room.
“Do you still like her?” Harry asked, finally letting go of his trunk. He had to stretch out his hands; they were sore from carrying such a heavy item up so many stairs without much of a break.
Ron did the same thing, then turned and shrugged. “No, I don’t.”
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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10-09-2006, 12:29 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2003 Location: NSW, Aussieness
Posts: 1,128
Hogwarts RPG Name: Skade Prezton |
aaaaahhhhhhhh is that the end? grr draco but its practical he's a bit mean!!
that was very well written!!! top stuff! |
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10-09-2006, 12:32 AM
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| Murtlap
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ♪listening 2 mi rockin moozic♪<> siggy by moi! check out the story...
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awesome post!!! Im sad now. it cant end!! NOOOO! ok im done now. BAD DRACO!!! ok now im really done.
__________________  Our favourite Gryffindor Princess starts going out with one of our favourite Gryffindor Guys. ♥But she secretly falls in love with someone she's not supposed to.♥ ♥♥What will she do? A Forbidden Change Sa13+♥♥
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10-09-2006, 12:33 AM
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| SoTS Royalty
Norwegian Ridgeback
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: ♥ TP ♥
Posts: 45,053
Hogwarts RPG Name: Klaudette Genevra Oddkoule Sixth Year | Rupert = *swoon* "You know I'm right..."
wait no more draco? he cant leave!!!!!!!
PAMSOIDS!
__________________ Against the grain should be a way of life ;Klaudette Genevra Oddkoule: Slytherin's oddball is back;  RGFC;Tigger lovers her Pickles;PICKLEPIE <33 THE WAL'R'US;TFFC ♥ Siggy by the totally SPANKERS Lissy! ♥ |
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10-09-2006, 12:54 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In California!
Posts: 1,394
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I can't wait for the next and I happy that Hermione broke up with Draco  but I want to now what happens next, how come Ron is saying he doesn't likes Hermione? or is he lying?
PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID! PAMSOID!
~Victoria
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10-09-2006, 12:55 AM
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| Forest Troll
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: oh, canada...
Posts: 27,667
Hogwarts RPG Name: Blake Rouyn Second Year | you live your life just once, so don't forget about a thing called love.
awww...is it over??   *prays for more while burning history project  * lovely work  im glad i came. i can't wait for the new story *thinks about burning civics project while waiting*
__________________ Guess who just got back today. Them wild-eyed boys that had been away.
Haven't changed that much to say. But man, I still think them cats are crazy.
They were askin' if you were around. How you was, where you could be found....
Tailz is back in town, Tailz is back in town. =) |
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