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Believe 09-15-2006 12:04 AM

Oooh! Cai wants to Beta!!!

dfcrush 09-15-2006 12:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by the.time.is.now
All right, Hagrid being hurt = Hermione wanting to return to Hogwarts to see him. Therefore, Draco goes too, and gets out of trouble.

All right, you guys, we're going to mix it up in here. Since these three page posts are killing me and making me suffer from MAJOR writer's block, I'm going to make the posts smaller - about the size that they were on The Flavor of the Week. That way, I can post MORE. Is that okay?

If so, I'm posting - TONIGHT! Who wants to beta? ^_^


Ohhhhhhh... i see.
fine with me!! just POST!! YAY!!

the.time.is.now 09-15-2006 12:10 AM

Haha Cai. All right. I'll PM you when I'm done with it!

luv16 09-15-2006 12:14 AM

There's 4 of us here besides Caitlin waiting for her to post... :lol:

PAMS Caitlin! :D

Believe 09-15-2006 12:26 AM

Yay! I win... can't wait for the post...

Agos* 09-15-2006 12:30 AM

Please post soon! I loved the story so far you kno that!

Believe 09-15-2006 12:46 AM

Actually Caitlin, I have to go now... :(... I'm sorry, but someone else is going to have to beta read it... ugh! Maybe next time I could... *hopes Caitlin will pick me next time* Well, goodnight! And post soon so I could read it before school tomorrow...

<3 Cai

the.time.is.now 09-15-2006 12:56 AM

Aww Cai. 8( All right, no worries. You can have dibs on the next one. 8)

Niky is on it, then I'm posting!!

the.time.is.now 09-15-2006 01:19 AM

I'M POSTING!

Please remember that these posts are smaller so I can post more frequently!

the.time.is.now 09-15-2006 01:23 AM

They were back at school by the next afternoon and it was one of the worst Christmas’s Hermione had ever experienced. She tried to be cheerful while opening presents, but nothing could make her smile.

“I don’t understand,” Hermione groaned as she and Draco lugged their belongings up the path to Hogwarts. “He’s been hit by multiple stunning spells before and it didn’t faze him. Now, he’s hurt while in his own house! Wouldn’t Fang notice if someone else had come in?”

Draco shrugged. “I'm not sure. It is a bit weird. What all did the letter say?”

“Well, it was Ron who wrote it. He didn’t give very many details, which isn’t surprising. I'm astonished the he wrote at all. All he said was that Hagrid had been sent to St. Mungo’s for an attack that had occurred in the middle of the night and that he should be able to come to our Hospital Wing shortly.”

….

The next day Draco’s owl, Orpheus, arrived in the Great Hall at breakfast.

Draco,

You were smart to return. I do not want to know where you were, and do not tell your mother you were gone. We’ve sent you your presents by owl. I’ll see you at the end of the year.

- Lucius


He ripped it up, past the point of frustrated.

“Damn it,” he swore to Goyle. “Why does he have to ruin everything, eh?”

“It’s what parents do,” he replied, taking a sip out of his goblet. He sighed and set it down with such force that the cup tipped over and spilled over the edges of the table. “Er …”

Draco rolled his eyes and left the table. Goyle was the clumsiest Slytherin he’d ever met. He set out for the library to find Hermione. It had been her hiding place since before the Christmas holidays. She always went there when something was wrong.

“Anything new?” he asked softly as he sat down next to her.

She had her nose buried in a thick novel with pages that were ripped and frayed on the corners. It had seen it’s better days.

“No.”

“Oh.”

“It’s not a good time, all right, Draco? Everyone hates me, Hagrid is hurt, and I just can’t deal with it all right now.”

He nodded, and left.

….

Two days later they were allowed to go see Hagrid in the Hospital where he’d been admitted not long before. Draco left Hermione in by herself; he knew Hagrid wouldn’t want to see him.

As he sat outside, Goyle walked by, snickering a little. “You know, I would’ve thought you’d had a problem with doing this. I knew you hadn’t changed. I'm just surprised she didn’t see it. You’re a pure Slytherin at heart.”

Draco’s heart sank. He knew it was the truth. “She thinks she loves me.”

“You don’t love her.” It was a statement, not a question.

“I don’t,” Draco admitted. “I loved the chase. I loved seeing how much we could get away with. But … All of her friends hate her. I can’t just leave her now.”

Goyle shrugged. At this point, Draco was hoping for reassurance that he was smart to stick with Hermione, that it’d be better to give it time, but he got none.

As Goyle left, Draco leaned up against the wall, not knowing who had been listening in on their conversation.

argentinaz_angel 09-15-2006 01:34 AM

and here we go again *giggles*
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Kitty Cat
He ripped it up, past the point of frustrated.
“Damn it,” he swore to Goyle. “Why does he have to ruin everything, eh?”

‘cause you’re a malfoy. ‘nuff said.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mah Kitty
“It’s not a good time, all right, Draco? Everyone hates me, Hagrid is hurt, and I just can’t deal with it all right now.”
He nodded, and left.

You just leave her??? Honestly??? u did that to her!!!

Quote:

Originally Posted by MEOW
“You know, I would’ve thought you’d had a problem with doing this. I knew you hadn’t changed. I'm just surprised she didn’t see it. You’re a pure Slytherin at heart.”

SOMEONE THAT AGREES WITH ME!!! *celebrates* :evil:

Quote:

Originally Posted by my darling orange tabby cat
“You don’t love her.” It was a statement, not a question.
“I don’t,” Draco admitted. “I loved the chase. I loved seeing how much we could get away with. But … All of her friends hate her. I can’t just leave her now.”
Goyle shrugged. At this point, Draco was hoping for reassurance that he was smart to stick with Hermione, that it’d be better to give it time, but he got none.

You are one evil writer. Evil I tell you. Evil!!!!! I can’t believe you Cat!!!!! Actually I can:evil::shifty:

Quote:

Originally Posted by The very evil kitty
As Goyle left, Draco leaned up against the wall, not knowing who had been listening in on their conversation.

I bet you everything that was foreshadow:lol:


I KNEW IT!!! I knew you would never be a Dramione fan!! I knew it I knew it!! *is very proud* And why did I know? ‘cause you said over a million times that we wouldn’t know who she ended up with :P


Onto other things; Newsletter and Harrylicious BBQ canceled. Why? ‘cause I limited myself to only post once and once only after every post :P I did a major contribution to the spamming when we had all those posts before, I will not do it again *giggles mysteriously* But! No worries, the readers list and graphics will still be posted, to reach our goal of the 100 readers ;)

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This was made by me a little while ago, it was supposed to be posted on Saturday morning at 12am :P forget that :P but I got it anyways ;)



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So, until next chapter;

Your very faithful dog friend;

Niky

Marjerie Bluton 09-15-2006 01:37 AM

Oh My Gar. Wowsers. So, Draco doesn't love Hermy?! Why not?! Gahh, I was just starting to really like him, and then he had to go and ruin things! :mad: Bad, bad Draco! Me no likey him anymore.

I wonder who Hermy's going to end up with now...:shifty:

PAMS PAMS PAMS! ^_^

-Gracie :glomp:

gem 09-15-2006 01:42 AM

Quote:

“It’s what parents do,” he replied, taking a sip out of his goblet
:faint: It is different from the books cuz he speaks! and he makes sense O.o :lol:

Quote:

As he sat outside, Goyle walked by, snickering a little. “You know, I would’ve thought you’d had a problem with doing this. I knew you hadn’t changed. I'm just surprised she didn’t see it. You’re a pure Slytherin at heart.”

Draco’s heart sank. He knew it was the truth. “She thinks she loves me.”

“You don’t love her.” It was a statement, not a question.

“I don’t,” Draco admitted. “I loved the chase. I loved seeing how much we could get away with. But … All of her friends hate her. I can’t just leave her now.”
OMG!!! THAT!!! that!!! ugh! what a....*kills him* *kills AGAIN*
Caitlin awesome post but now you seriously have to Post reallyyy SOON!!! wow! I mean i knew she probably wouldn't stay with Draco, but you really tricked me with him :shifty: PAMS!!!!
~Kalaya

there should be a Draco BBQ?..<_< :shifty:

pgspickles 09-15-2006 01:43 AM

omg is draco going to leave her PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luv16 09-15-2006 01:54 AM

Quote:

“He’s been hit by multiple stunning spells before and it didn’t faze him. Now, he’s hurt while in his own house! Wouldn’t Fang notice if someone else had come in?”
:hmm: good question Hermione...
Quote:

“Well, it was Ron who wrote it. He didn’t give very many details, which isn’t surprising. I'm astonished the he wrote at all.
Are you sure it was Ron who wrote that letter? :shifty:
Quote:

Draco,

You were smart to return. I do not want to know where you were, and do not tell your mother you were gone. We’ve sent you your presents by owl. I’ll see you at the end of the year.

- Lucius

Oh isn't he a nice loving father.... *rolls eyes*
Cold man...
Quote:

“It’s what parents do,” he replied, taking a sip out of his goblet. He sighed and set it down with such force that the cup tipped over and spilled over the edges of the table. “Er …”
:lol: stupid Goyle...
Quote:

“It’s not a good time, all right, Draco? Everyone hates me, Hagrid is hurt, and I just can’t deal with it all right now.”

He nodded, and left.
Well, there isn't much he could've said... if he had contradicted her, the only thing he would've done was get himself a fight... wise Draco. *huggles Draco :loved:*
Quote:

As he sat outside, Goyle walked by, snickering a little. “You know, I would’ve thought you’d had a problem with doing this. I knew you hadn’t changed. I'm just surprised she didn’t see it. You’re a pure Slytherin at heart.”
:hmm: Hmmm... interesting, very interesting indeed... :evil:
Quote:

“I don’t,” Draco admitted. “I loved the chase. I loved seeing how much we could get away with. But … All of her friends hate her. I can’t just leave her now.”
:gasp: What?! I don't tend to like Hermione, ever, but this is just mean! Bad Draco, bad boy... *still wuvs Draco*
Poor Hermione :console:
Quote:

Goyle shrugged. At this point, Draco was hoping for reassurance that he was smart to stick with Hermione, that it’d be better to give it time, but he got none.
Oh come on! From Goyle? I ask you, the guy can't tell a fork from his quill... *pokes Goyle*
Quote:

As Goyle left, Draco leaned up against the wall, not knowing who had been listening in on their conversation.
Oh oh, that can't be good.... What are you telling us Caitlin? Who was listening in to their conversation...? *intrigued*

Great post Caitlin! I love it!!!
PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS! PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS! PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS! PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS! PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS! PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!

-Emma

halfbloodprincess92 09-15-2006 02:00 AM

Superawesometotallyschweetcoolgreatfantasticextrem elyintriguing POST!!!!! If Draco breaks up with Hermione, can I have him? :shifty: No, not to eat! I only eat Harry! I'm a Haretarian! DUH! Anyhoo! Fabulous post! Please post again soon!!! PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS

LOVE the BBQ graphic Niky!!!!!!! *brings her spatula* Love ya!

*is on SPAM patrol* I am a nice SSer! Not a mindless spam poster!

PAMS!!!!!

~Rose

tomfeltonsgf 09-15-2006 02:08 AM

This is heart-breaking! Draco has to love Hermione! I' so upset right now! Oh, wow, that was such a twist!

XxHPaddict17xX 09-15-2006 02:26 AM

Eeeeeeek! OMG, I need to know what happens! I bet you anything it was Hermione listening! Ah, I must know! You're so talented! Post more soon!

That_one_girl 09-15-2006 04:33 AM

OMG I loved the post Cat!!! I can't wait to see want happens!! I hope Hermione is ok!... and of course Hagrid! lol

audieval 09-15-2006 06:15 AM

good post aww but draco doesnt love her? at least he's being responsible and sticking by her except lying is badness

oh i saw your list my name is Audrey or audi so yeah HI

the.time.is.now 09-15-2006 03:25 PM

Tee hee, Hi Audrey. It's greatr to have you here.

I really like this shorter post thing. When I posted such long posts I felt my brain turning into mush while trying to think of things. I should be able to post a lot more now.

And I'm writing, now, of course, because I can think again!

I love my Fate-ers! <3

Egyptian_Blue 09-15-2006 11:03 PM

Grrr...Draco makes me mad...as Gracie said, I was getting to really like him!

I finally got around to reading this...and I read it all in about an hour! I love, love, love it!

~Alanna

smart_hermione 09-16-2006 03:23 AM

I love your last post Caitlin I can't wait for the next post!:loved:
I'm so happy that this ff is not going to end up being a Dramione story:woot:
~Victoria

Oya 09-16-2006 11:53 AM

Awesome Post!!!! Pams!!!!!!!!

siriusblackliveson 09-16-2006 12:56 PM

I loved that post but so mean i hate that part how he dosn't love her he just wanted to see ho much he could get away with. that stinks.
-sarah


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