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oo I'd love out lake up here to be like that...it's freezing oooooooooo kissy kissy Hermy lol PAMS must see what becomes of this -loves it to bits- |
You guys are amazing. I'm writing now! :D |
Writewritewritewritewrite PAMS! |
Tee hee, I'm writing with all of my heart. <3 |
AHH! IT'S FINISHED. This is the FINAL, LAST post of Fate. Thank you all for reading. Every single one of you are amazing for sticking through with me through all of my ups and downs, and staying dedicated each time I couldn't post. I appreciate you all so much ... and even though we had all of those pages deleted, I promise I will never forget all of the fun times we had. So, finally, here is is. Enjoy! I can't wait to see you all at my next FF. :glomp: |
Finished. On the walk home, they were quiet. Hermione looked at the ground, the events at the lake racing though her mind. The taste of his lips wouldn’t escape her mouth. When he had pulled back from her, his shocked eyes hastened to meet hers. Hermione didn’t know what to say, and either did Viktor. They found themselves scrambling out of the lake. Hermione had rushed for her towel, quickly drying herself off and slipping back on the oversized tee shirt. Viktor just watched her and grabbed his shirt as she raced out of the gate. Finally, he spoke up. “You’re mad vith me.” “I'm not mad,” Hermione sighed. “Just … surprised, I guess. I came here knowing that something … something would happen. I just don’t know if I'm ready for it yet, Viktor. Our breakup wasn’t pretty – it was through a letter, for Heaven’s sake. And after everything that happened to me last year, with Draco and Ron … I just don’t know if I can trust boys again.” “Listen to me,” he said, stepping in front of her and placing his hands on her shoulders. “I don’t know vot all they put you through, but I can promise you this. I will never, ever hurt you like they did, and ve vill not have a repeat of vot it vas like vhen ve first dated. You’re special to me, Herm-own-ninny, and I don’t vant to loose you over this.” Hermione sat down in the middle of the dirt road, resting her chin on her hands. Viktor kneeled next to her. “I vill give you time – as much as you need.” She smiled weakly, and slipped her hand into his. “Promise?” “Promise,” he grinned back, leaning over and kissing her on the forehead. “It’s weird, you know?” she asked. “Vot?” “How we ended up back together, and how quickly it happened. I never really got over you.” “It is sort ov like fate, I am guessing,” Viktor said, helping her back up. Hermione hugged him. “Yeah, fate,” she nodded. “It is a lot like fate.” THE END. |
OMG, OMG, OMG, I loved it!!!! I can't believe it's over!! How will I ever go on? I know. I'll read your next story :yes: |
It's OVER??????????? :faint: x200 Poor Ron.. *huggles him* :loved: And it was a very sweet ending... despite she ended up with Viktor.. ^_^ Nice job Caitlin :D Is there a new FF coming? |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww its over!!!!!! :cry: so sweet :loved: *pokes fate* how about giving me a guy? huh huh? *poks it again* *giggles and flees* :glomp: awesome ending sweetie :loved: ~Dog |
WOW!!!! *shock* *gasp* *faint* *die* *surprise* *cough* I don't know why I added cough... That was absolutely amazing! I loved it!!!!! *cries* It's over! But I can't wait for the next FF!!! WOOT!!! Excellent job Caitlin... I must say, you fooled me. In the beginning, you told us that once we figured out who Hermione was with, we would probably be wrong. At first, I thought Draco, but then when you put them together... I thought Ron. But then VIKTOR showed up... :rotfl: Brava! <3 Cai |
I can't believe it's over!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How did this go by so fast?!?!!? That was a really great post! I'm definatly gonna read your next one! -Kaydia- ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ |
Ahhhh, it's over! That was amazing! I actually kinda like Viktor now :lol: Great job, it was an amazing fic! I can't wait for the next one :D :glomp: Oh! Did we ever reach 100 readers? |
NO!!!!!!!Fate's over!*crys*But it was good!I can't believe the Hermione and Viktor got back together!OMG though!That was a fantastic ending! I can't believe its over though! I don't want it to be over!!!Ahh!I'm so confused!Anyways, that was such a good ending! |
it cant be over!!!!!!!!!! its like the best!!!!!!!!!! now im sad... but it was really good n fantabulous so im happy again... luffs on evryone... ttfn! _-alex-_ |
Hey haven't been here in a while!!! Oh Sophia's lanta, that was amazing!! Congratulations on writing a brilliant story...even if Draco didn't get the girl =) Love adrienne |
Cries then faints oh my gosh that was beautiful. wow i can't believe that's the end, well it's beautiful i loved it and i wish there was more but there's not. but for now (because i'm in school) i say goodbye -sarah |
What an amazing ending to an awesome story! Good job! I loved it, an I look forward to your next FF! |
VIKTOR?! NO!!! HOW COULD SHE END UP WITH HIM?! HOW COULD THAT BE THE END AT ALL?!!!! Awwwwwwww, ah-mazing. |
:violin: I am in shock. I cannot accept that it's over! Great ending, and I like Victor much more now, even though I'm a huge R/Hr shipper. :D |
I was so happy that the first thing that I did after THREE WEEKS of no SS was to catch up on this ff and it is over. The whole time I was thinking this is so good and then....THE END....I wanted so much more, this was such a good FF!!! *sigh* Kinda makes me wish I hadn't read it so fast so as to be able to enjoy it more.... Leslie |
AAAAAwwwwwwwww....... Lovely! :loved: Thanks so much Caitlin! I will definetly be reading your next FF ;) |
Viktor!? :faint:.....Viktor!? :faint:.....Viktor!??? :faint:!!!! Ugh! The Bulgarian Bon Bon won!? I can't believe this! :lol: Man...My poor Ron, I need to go :console: him. :loved: :xd: Great ending Caitlin! I can't wait until your next FF. I'm sure it will be just as good if not better than Fate...Although I'm not sure if that is possible. :loved: |
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! tht was the end? no way she ended up with victor! ahh no no no it was suppose to be draco! oh my god! anyway good ending |
Beautiful ending, my dear. I will most definitely be reading more of your works! *cheers* Love always, Shan XoXo |
I can't believe it's the end of FATE! Victorr??? :( Okay...I loved it. I didn\'t like the fact she ended up with Victor but I loved the story girl! Love you sweetie piee! |
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